#but like sometimes you just gotta delete those from the summary because they arent flowing right hhhhhh

[curedeity]

Hello hello and a nice Fanfic Friday to you all! Today’s art is inspired by “Leaving Your Tower is Easier in Fairytales” by @starfishes-and-watercolors and boy do I got a lot to say about this fic. I’m struggling so much to explain.

Okay rewrite time number 5:

This fic is amazing. This fic is amazing at building up a relationship, at characterizing two underutilized characters, and at just being a ship fic. The focus of this fic is on Yuki and Motti’s relationship, and a lot of work is put into making this the best part of the fic. Val puts a lot of work into making all their conversations fun and dynamic. The most impressive thing to me, though, is how it the fic shows us the specific moments and things the two characters like about the other. I can specifically see that Yuki likes Motti because of her confidence, and there are other moments like that where you can just see the reason these two are falling in love in this fic. That clarity on selling the dynamic? On making those reasons explicit? That is so impressive to me.

The fic is about Yuki getting captured by the Nemesis Cult, and Motti is kind of a reluctant member there who hangs out with Yuki and tries to help in. I don’t know if these aspects of the plot will become more prevalent over time, but right now that plot serves more as setting to facilitate interesting conversations between Motti and Yuki, who are the focus of this fic. It’s a worthwhile read for anyone, in my opinion.