#but the whole reason im writing a prose chapter is bc these scene wouldnt be done justice just w dialogue action dialogue action
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me when ive tried writing the same chapter 3 times but i hate all of them 😃😃😃
(not you wgoin 6 take 2, ur a queen 😌😌😌)
#yeah thats a teaser at the start but im scrapping it anyway#god when i was writing the 3rd attempt at the bad bitch lessons chapter i thought i was rly doing smth#reading it back over later like 😐😐😐 what is this. GARBAGE#i know this is a borderline gary stu of an mc so im trying So Hard for it not to read like....#like... like a fuck wattpad reader insert by a highschooler yk#like thats exactly what this is giving its reminding me of wattpad fic i read like 8 years ago stop that#i think ive finally identified the problem tho im too used to writing this fic and these characters in dialogue#so everything i write with them is very. dialogue action dialogue action dialogue action#like a script as compared to proper prose#which is my strength and exactly why i made it a social media au at first#but the whole reason im writing a prose chapter is bc these scene wouldnt be done justice just w dialogue action dialogue action#i gotta do my baby RIGHT!!!!#if youre wondering why it seems like gbgb just dieded. this is why.#i have been stuck rewriting this chapter and hitting block after block since the last update.#mischiefing time
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