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[elizabethmorozpoet]

Facial Recognition Blues

Physicists speculating about a cosmic hologram 

Anarchists debating about the next message from Uncle Sam

The archaic ageing of the technology of the Telegram

An innocent waiting for an answer from an Annogram

Images of scientific breakthrough projected onto a screen 

Lineages of ancient history documented by a well structured meme

Silhouettes of a symphony expressed in classical themes 

Pirouettes of a dancer expressing her physical dream 

Instant facial recognition at the local petroleum station 

Distant ignition of a motor designed for mechanical elation 

Vincent Van Goh without his human ear awaiting non-contamination

Stringent processes for fiscal accountability awaiting mass configuration 

An ominous sound bellowing out from a lonely cello

A omnivorous hound yelling out the sound of “hello”

A discourteous round shot out of the mouth of the mellow

That song by Coldplay -you know the one that they called “Yellow”?

Can you see the beauty of your most recent failure forming?

Do you feel the energy shift when dawn turns into morning?

Have you seen the tired child overworked from labour yawning?

Did you hear the broken poet howling sadness out as her calling?

Fundamentalist extremists theorising about their obsessions

Confrontationalist activists eschewing material possessions

An environmentalist prophesising scientifically based confessions 

A conversationalist espousing verbal directives and regressions

Would you exchange your ideology for the sake of monetary gain?

Could you pertain to philosophically abandon your perception of pain?

Or would you abstain from phenomenologically documenting the acid rain?

Or could you categorically state that you’d like to decide before you refrain?

Precision elements of reflective detail in recollection 

Decisions and components of defective mobilisation in your direction

Narcissus falling in love with himself, staring at his own reflection 

Self-confidence that is so pure and strong that it is beyond external correction. 

Humanitarian aid distributed fairly with efficiency and action

Egalitarian ways ignited by early proficiency and dissatisfaction

A Libretarian on display as surely as a well defined mathematical protraction 

A maternity ward without a doctor waiting for the next contraction 

Remember what the cost was when you held corruption to account ?

Dismember all that’s been lost when you want to make it count ,

Engender memories of the Holocaust as you view Auschwitz from a mount 

Contender for the Nobel Peace Prize focusing on all that’s paramount 

By Elizabeth Moroz Copywrite 2023

External Review

"Facial Recognition Blues" is a thought-provoking and intricate poem that navigates through a diverse array of themes, emotions, and societal observations. The structure of the poem is composed of succinct stanzas, each exploring a distinct facet of contemporary life and human experience. The poet adeptly weaves together seemingly disparate subjects into a cohesive tapestry, inviting readers to engage with a spectrum of thoughts and reflections.

The poem opens with a series of contrasting images, immediately setting the tone for a contemplative exploration of technology, politics, history, art, and human behavior. The poet's use of rhyme and rhythm provides a musical quality to the verses, enhancing the flow and engagement of the reader.

The poem deftly captures the complexities and contradictions of modern life. It delves into the interplay between technological advancement and societal consequences, as well as the tension between personal expression and external forces. The inclusion of figures like Vincent van Gogh and references to popular culture (Coldplay's "Yellow") adds layers of depth and relatability to the narrative.

The poet employs a rich vocabulary and vivid imagery to evoke emotion and create sensory experiences. This is particularly evident in lines like "An ominous sound bellowing out from a lonely cello" and "Pirouettes of a dancer expressing her physical dream." These descriptions anchor the reader in the sensory world, enhancing the immersive quality of the poem.

One of the poem's strengths lies in its ability to pose profound questions that challenge the reader's perspective and provoke introspection. Lines such as "Would you exchange your ideology for the sake of monetary gain?" and "Could you pertain to philosophically abandon your perception of pain?" compel the reader to confront their beliefs and values, encouraging a deeper examination of personal motives and convictions.

Furthermore, the poem navigates seamlessly between the personal and the universal, touching on topics ranging from individual struggles to global crises. This breadth of scope enables the poem to resonate with a wide audience, as readers can connect with different aspects of the narrative based on their own experiences and perspectives.

"Facial Recognition Blues" culminates in a series of lines that encapsulate the themes of resilience, activism, and social responsibility. The poem ultimately portrays a world of complexities, challenges, and contradictions, yet it also hints at the potential for positive change and human connection.

In summary, Elizabeth Moroz's "Facial Recognition Blues" is an intricately crafted poem that invites readers to engage with a diverse array of themes through its vivid imagery, thoughtful reflections, and probing questions. The poem's musical language and ability to traverse multiple subjects make it a compelling read that resonates on both an intellectual and emotional level.