#i blame locke for my feitan + chrollo x reader fascination.

[after-witch]

the audacity to write one of the greatest pieces of fiction ever grace this country ✋

seriously though, how you described the reader, the reader’s history and the culture of quaint tourist towns really immersed me, and how that lends itself to a seemingly innocent summer’s fling with Chrollo. but you just know SOMETHING is wrong and that’s proven correct by the increasing number of murders between a couple of days until it culminates in the climax which is even MORE terrifying, gory, and kind of sexy(?) that’s everything I want in fanfiction!!!!

I just loveee the inner-conflict the reader has between the recent tragedies and Chrollo, the fear and confusion during the concert, THE CHASE SCENE, , the betrayal that Chrollo’s been apart of it this whole time, And ofc Chrollo’s condescending /selfish/manipulative personality really shows itself by the end which just twists the knife.

I do wonder though, Fetian kinda felt like he was a little transfixed on the reader. Initially I thought he was just looking for another victim, b u t he continued to casually stalk the reader a little(?) It seemed personal to me when he broke the reader’s hand. Is that just because he was curious why Chrollo was attached to the reader? I would love to know!!!

Ohhh what a lovely message, going on my metaphorical fridge.

I'm glad you liked it! WAS THE CLIMAX SEXY…. maybe, maybe.

Poor reader. They just wanted a hot summer fling, maybe a whirlwind romance, and look at what they got.

I do wonder though, Fetian kinda felt like he was a little transfixed on the reader. Initially I thought he was just looking for another victim, b u t he continued to casually stalk the reader a little(?) It seemed personal to me when he broke the reader’s hand. Is that just because he was curious why Chrollo was attached to the reader? I would love to know!!!

IMO, Feitan was interested in reader as entertaining food. Although I do think, given what happens to reader, it's not impossible that he might become a little attached to them in another way after all, down the line. ;)