#i might post my og outline for these chapters and then do a compare-contrast analysis...thatd be fun i think | Explore Tumblr Posts and Blogs

dangans-ur-ronpas · 5 months

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now that the trial 2 arc is done there's a lot i want to go back and revise. like the murder hints could've been presented a lot more coherently, i feel like there are some places where things got convoluted, and looking back at my outline there are some things that i never added in at all and other things that i had to cut for clarity's sake. i might make a post analyzing it all sometime

#thpff #i had a lot of fun when i was writing the chapters but there is smth about being able to read them all at once #and then going back and revising with the whole picture #i might post my og outline for these chapters and then do a compare-contrast analysis...thatd be fun i think #mostly saying this bc looking back i couldve made toko's motive more clear #like i dont want to do this girl wrong. yes she's not a good person here but i need her to be understandable not sympathetic #<- guy who has been pissed off one too many times by shite writing (thanks chunsoft)

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