#i submitted this to my school's art zine for extra credit in my creative writing class so i hope that no one actually reads said zine
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this is the first poem i've written in a while, and although it's not perfect, it's very dear to me. titled revision of the fourth of july.
#my writing#first post? lol#admittedly i sat on this one for a long time and despite having read it over many a time and knowing there's still something it's lacking#i can't bring myself to make any changes. this is 'revision' and she's said all she has had to say. maybe the lack is just an inherent part#of this poem. that i can't make this complete because the poem dictates that i'm not. that i lie and lack...haha#original poem#original poetry#sapphic poetry#wlw poetry#okay. that's enough exposure tags i think.#i submitted this to my school's art zine for extra credit in my creative writing class so i hope that no one actually reads said zine#or that this doesn't reach any of my schoolmates who also happen to be on here. lol
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