#i'm genuenely asking this to myself for months atp i think

[llepto]

who wants to be my beta reader for my legion backstory /hj

on a more serious note, find more infos under the 'read more'.

I'm genuinely hesitating about which one of my Legion version I should post/choose. There's no really physical changes, just either it's

Close to canon : bringed to life by Olly

Backstory version : all coming from different place

long txt.com [i'm sobbing the whole text make it sound like i did something bad such as smashed three bats to death with a baseball bat and making apologies]

If i choose the second version it'll take me time because i still have a lot of researches to do about some part. Like trauma responses or gender/sexuality or chill stuff like ASL or flower language. Moreover, the second version is the main one I have in my mind whenever I talk abt them to my irl friend. So idk.

I'm asking because idk if you remember but i planned to do more detailed infos posts on my legion. However i'd rather have another pov on the backstory than my irl bro pov [who said it's fine [fine in a way: "you do researches and don't fall into clichés so… that's fine" - @bbg-com 2023]. If I post the detailed refs and people are uncomfortable/uneasy/triggered, it is abolutely not my goal so that's why i'd like a feedback on this from pmtok ppl following me [if you'e not following and I follow u, that's fine too].

i'm pretty afraid some ppl will think it's too much problematic. and i don't want to it to happen so that's why i'm asking. if i have to change everything, i need to find other backstory/way for Olly to have an impact on the young adult. [kemm's droping info woo] like if i remember correctly, only my Copen and Rubber Bands' backstories were created half to be linked with Olly and half linked with headcannon I have for these two. Also if you want a number I'd say 3/6 [/7 if you count handaconda] have very rough backstory.

All the backstroy were made to answer to this: How the hell Young Adults between 21 and 25 would obey to a 12-14/15 y.o ?

idk if i'm clear or not afnje genuinely sometimes i explain stuff badly :,)

also if i decide to stick to the second version, i'll will do a lot of prevention like the backstory part will be warned with all the potential trigger warning, and also all the infos would be written under an eyestrain drawing so double prevention. i don't want to make ppl uncomfortable so i still don't know what to do aafnej

Genuinely, if you want to know, i have all their backstory written in a doc so if you want me to send it to you, feel free to ask. If you think it's way too harsh, tell me [maybe with what I said you'll think it's not that harsh but idk]

I have a summarised version of their backstory but if you want the very detailed one, tell me.

BTW please note that I probably won't go in a lot of details like trauma answer/other because I just want to mainly post dubasses stuff but if I decided to do animation/comic linked to their backstory, maybe I'll need to go into more details.

SO yeah. Also idk if someone will be reading this and propose to be a 'beta' reader but just in case knows i'm really open to any type of commentary/return on this. And also will be available if you have question.

thank you a lot if you decided to read this, even if you doesn't interract/answer.

also by saying a beta reader, if more than one ppl want to read it, it's really good. [but like if you have any tw, pls warn me because my goal is not to trigger warning you]