#last post for today before i fucking faint/hj

[head---ache]

Checking up with the gf

If you're not aware by now Silhouette is @galacticghoste's oc. But like, I've been posting about her and Emmie a lot so you most likely do know lol

@sonic-fankid-showdown

[lunaryuwu]

Opening line patterns tag game!!

Thought this was pretty fun so i wanted to hop on :)

Rules: List the first line of your last 10 (or however many you have) posted fics and see if there's a pattern!

(I have exactly ten fics so good for me!)

In order of oldest to newest:

1. The Magical Feeling of Falling in Love(i kinda fucked up the fic with this title tbh i do not like it)

“It was a weird feeling for Jack Sullivan.”

2. The Best Christmas Gift

“Today is Christmas.”

3. It’s Always Truth Or Dare That Screws People Over

“Wanna play truth or dare?”

4. What Do You Do When Your Classmate Faints?

“Jack was worried.”

(I am starting to see the trend here)

5. I Don’t Wanna Be Special

“Jeremy Heere is pretty attractive.”

(Okay the trend is broken nvm)

6. The Genius Is Heere

“Jeremy and Michael were inseparable, keyword: ‘were’.”

7. Shit.

“Seasonal depression or seasonal affective disorder (SAD) is a type of depression that comes and goes in a seasonal pattern.”

(Tbh i have no idea what i was trying to do with the opening of this fic i literally copied and pasted the definition of seasonal depression here)

8. Memory Leak

“Michael found himself switching monitors from radio static to more radio static.”

9. Remembering the ones who can’t be here

“Jake disliked Christmas.”

10. Finding Love On Valentine’s Day

“A week before Valentine’s, Rich started discovering these obnoxiously pink letters, accompanied by a different flower every day in his locker.”

Conclusion

For my tlkoe fics it’s pretty obvious that i went for a shorter one liner kind of opening which is something i did not expect tbh. Kind of a straight to the deal, instant hook(?) kind of thing. For my bmc fics i started using longer sentences? And it’s funny because there’s kind of a transition there lol. For ml i tried to do the “start with action scenes” thing which ultimately fucked me up/hj I think the main pattern here is that i either use short one liners that cut to the chase or a longer sentence that also cuts to the chase but gives less of a “ooh what’s happening” kind of feeling. Yeah i like short one liners more they have this weird impact

Tags! (No pressure <3)

@theabyssgazesalsointoyou @h0n3yk1tt3n @rebuke-me