#like obviously do what you want
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y'all gotta stop opening your fanfics with descriptions of the weather
#like obviously do what you want#but like it's not purposeful most of them time#you're not setting the moon you sound like the narrator at the beginning of an early 2000s movie#which isn't the tone you want to set like a hurt no comfort fic#like ask yourself does the story still make sense if I remove this#if the answer is yes then ask yourself#does the story still work emotionally#are you foreshadowing the tone of the fic#or are you fucking describing new york city#tell me new information or at least frame old information in a new way#describe the city when it is emotional or thematically relevant#describing the streets of nyc at the start of fic? not great#describing the streets when x character is swinging through the sky with spider-man? much better#descriptions are good for letting the reader feel the world#but guess what it's fanfic i'm a spider man fan I now what NYC looks like#it's busy it's dirty it's cold in the winter#nothing new or particularly interesting#like i get it i've done these things too#but i believe in us#we can improve our craft#and like even if you do describe the weather for no reason if it brings you joy fine#but i'm already clicking out of it
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