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uswcompetitonsbrief · 6 years

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Pitch Feedback

So with my pitches i like to keep them minimal. I would rather have no text on the screen so that nobody reads a read because then they will not listen to me.

Here are my slides i presented:

1) Of course, just the title page. Found this photo online which i thoguht suited the theme of the presentation and just looked good.

2) Choosen Brief. Like said above, i did not want to put bullet points on this slide because i feel as if i can describe the brief better then somebody reading it.

3) It is important to show what work i have done before because it shows my audience that i am more then capable to produce what i am pitching. (Espeically since we had Chris Thomas in the class writting notes aswell, and he hasnt seen any of our work really - good to show him what i can do)

4) Mind map for my first ideas. Need to show development within the pitch to make sure that they know that i have looked into other ideas and have done a bit of research. My mind map here basically looks into what dreams and nightmares are and other related things such as deja vu. Also looking into different ways to store the dreams.

5) My first ideas that were actaully thought out. Idea 1 was to have dream boxes. the dream box could look really beuatiful and girly, whereas the nightmare box could be locked up with chains and locks.

Idea 2 was a dream journal. Having one bit book that somebody writes their dreams and nightmares in every morning before they wake up.

My last idea was actually an idea Joe gave me. Having jars with fairy dust and magic inside on a shelf. The dream ones will look magical, alive and just fairy like whereas the nightmare ones will have dense dust on the floor which is grey and like fairy dust will be little skulls or something.

6) My final idea. I wantted to live it blank like this so that the audience i presenting to is intrigued and listens to me.

7) Just some pictures to go along with me talking about my final idea.

I spoke about why i decided to go for this idea. I choose this idea just because there is so much more research out there for me to make it look believabilty (which is kinda my theme?).

8) My colour scheme. I really enjoy portraying a different palette for my colour scheme - not just colours. I love these because of the contrast between the bright lights and the darkness. Looking at the middle picture, i can really imagine the purply blue colours to be my clouds in the unicorn dream and maybe the light blur / white for th eunicorn.

9) Just basically exampling how important particals are in my project. Just to give it some depth and show that it isnt just 2D, it is in the reeal world.

10) Nightmares. Just some images i found about nightmares

11) Photos i found when i typed in dreams to google. pointing out the reaccuring images of flaoting stuff and unicorns.

12) Dream journals, just showing them what sort of journals i will be looking at and explaining that the one with the gem in, I could play with having particals and magic in it.

13) my first dream idea

14) So i didn’t really have time to draw a proper storyboard + i didnt have the other ideas so i quickly drew a sketch of my idea in order to kinda give them a bit of an idea. Once again i did not want to give too much imformation away otherwsie the audience will not listen to what i have to say.

15) My inspiration, the kinda look i wanna go for.

16) Because i am not a 3D person, i wantted to show them that i have actually already done some of the 3D work, making the unicorn its self.

17) My mind map for my uni dream ideas.

18) Little pictures of how i am going to acheive my ideas. The LED lights to put inside the book to get the nice glow on the face, Volume / god days to crwte the light projection and nuke particals.

19) First part of my schedule

20) second part of my schedule

21) Because my bref specifies that i must use clean up, here are some things that i may need to do clean up on.

22) Predicited Budget

23) Questions

THE FEEDBACK:

The feedback I got given from Jason and Chris was so helpful. They were not happy that I didn’t have a storyboard, however because i explained what i was doing and the shots, they were not too mad.

They also said not to do the other 2 dreams, just focus on the 1 unicorn on. Quailty over Quanity. This just makes my life so much easier because i can focus so much more on the one dream and make it perfect. Its super important that i focus on the small details aswell.

They also said that i need to have a really girly location. They doubt that my bedroom will not good enough, so i need to make sure that i decorate it enough to be girly.

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So Jason has sent out an email explaining that he will give us another week to get our pitches better and resubmitt.

What i did was add in addition slides which i did explain in my pitch, but since i will not presenting this new pitch, i neeed all my information written down.

Adding in some more research screenshots