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#regaining her memories and choosing to save dayo despite everything or at some point after the even im currently reading abt
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yea actually i think the author of raybearer is bent on messing with me specifically
#redemptors are sent every year or every hundred years which is it. how is yui alive if this was 100 years ago. organ death and poisoning
#are the same cause of death. on the other hand death from falling isn't specified despite it being distinct from the others and the prince
#claiming he is immune to it
#CONSTANT TIME SKIPS. WHY
#worst offender of show don't tell I've seen in a while. please let us see sanjeet nighmares instead of simply telling us about him
#tell me more about maya she's the best character and only had 2 lines so far which is a crims
#the entire bit of mc erasing her own memories was so not thought out. you immediately know what's going to happen there's 0 stakes here
#how come everyone acts normal after she does this despite them calling medics just seconds earlier? how come she doesn't get her memories
#back when she touches sanjeet?
#raybearer has SUCH good worldbuilding concepts it's a shame they're so crudely explored
#there's not a single character which talks normally. ifueko i promise you you can do foreshadowing without shoving it in oops didn't mean
#to say that style dialogue
#this book would be so much better if it was 2 or 3 books instead. tarisai growing up and her travel to the capital. exploring places she
#was walled off from in her isolation. meeting kirah before and bonding with her. exploration of lodestones and magic systems
#more kathleen and the redemptor. the author actually has no excuse to simply not have done this
#because we KNOW tarisah can erase her own memories and would pass the test
#AND THEN the second book about the trials living with dayo meeting sanjeet and fleshing out other anointed. perhaps finishing in her
#regaining her memories and choosing to save dayo despite everything or at some point after the even im currently reading abt
#which is abi demons escaping the temple
#anyway! sorry for the long tags but i was so hyped about this book when i heard abt the main character being able to steal memories and
#a plot point that happens later on
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