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#there's a reason I'm rewriting this book and bramble entirely
exocynraku · 1 month
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For your rewrite! Are there any Big Changes you’re thinking about including?
yep! one important thing that still happens is the loss of skyclan, in this case the cats of sixty-seventh longway. this time, their close-ness to humans bit them in the ass and had them captured & taken to be kittypets. but, keep reading and you'll figure out what happens with them!!! - tpb will stay mostly the same in the grand scheme of things. tigerclaw is trying to take over the clans and firestar is destined to stop him. also, scourge still exists. there's a somewhat large timeskip between tpb and tnp in my rewrite, though. about 5-6 years in the world. i imagine if my rewrite were actually books there's be SE's and novellas and graphic novels to explain the things that happen inbetween. i'll also still develop those years, but there wouldn't be some sort of threat to the whole park (like tigerclaw & brokenstar), instead more personal & grounded spats & issues & whatnot. - tnp is almost entirely different. in the beginning, a second famine hits the park after a long time of peace, with a prophecy being sent out to a collection of cats across the park saying they need to find the remnants of the cats of trawsfynydd lake. they will, supposedly, be able to help them. the park cats chosen go out, find the remnants of trawsfynydd lake's cats (2 cats), and bring them home. trawsfynydd lake becomes a true memory, with the cats who lived there after the group split into two finally being able to live in death at peace. the trawsfynydd lake cats come to the park and use their knowledge to dispel most of the famine. but, the cats of trawsfynydd lake don't go back to the lake; they stay in the park. and they settle, they settle near the A4067 road. and then, something else comes to the chosen park cats. not a prophecy; this isn't set in stone, but an opportunity. rebuild the cats of sixty-seventh longway. and so, housecats & strays from nearby twolegplaces & cats from the other groups who want a fresh beginning set themselves down in a new camp. still near sixty-seventh way, but far enough that the humans who travel down it won't be able to discover them again. tnp ends with firestar dying. i'm not sure who i want to take up his role (it wouldn't be bramble) (not just because i dont like him its a bunch of reasons) and i don't have any plans yet for po3/oots/avos/tbc/asc. all i know is i want another timeskip after oots. but i'll get around to figuring it all out!
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