#Helluva boss rewrite
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Ok ok i'm a liar oops. Saw the Millie short (I have thoughts) and the season 2 trailer and i had to do my poor sweet underdeveloped bird girls justice.
Octavia is virtually the same personality wise, except she has hobbies that Stolas is completely unaware of but Stella supports fully. Specifically taxidermy, which Stella finds fascinating. I don't vibe with the design after staring at it for a while, but this was just a doodle and potential colors, i'll have to draw Stolas and then figure out her colors.
In demon lore, Andrealphus teaches lots of things, but he is said to teach astronomy, so i decided Stella (as her name would suggest) is very knowledgable on the subject and star gazes. I gave her a galaxy esc dress similar to Stolas's s1 ep7 outfit and changed her colors a bit.
They have a good mother/daughter bond in this because if Viv can't write a good mother figure then I'll do it myself dammit.
Stella is basically now all the fan theories before she was boiled down into a shitty one dimensional abuser to make the uwu gay bird sympathetic with a bit of my input.
She is the younger sister of Andrealphus, who married her to Stolas as a way of moving up in the world - as Stolas is a Prince and Andrealphus is a rank below him as a Marquis. Stella initially was distraught but tried to be good. She tried to find common ground, seeing as both her and Stolas liked stars, but they never clicked fully. When Octavia was born, Stella shifted her attention to her and started being passive aggressive to Stolas, letting her years of anger out on him in little jabs. Things along the line of her throwing a not divorced party but she doesn't loudly insult him in front of her guests.
When Stolas cheats on her with an imp, she's fucking furious. She's given up her entire life to this man, to bring her family name higher and her husband cheats on her with an IMP. The lowest of the lower class, and now her gossipy high society friends she's spent years getting into the good graces of will know. So she's a mix of fucking furious and just a tinge hurt. She's not justified btw, i just want to show her side of things for once because Viv is allergic to developing female characters.
She adores Octavia in my version. Utterly adores her. So of course she takes Octavia and tries to keep her away from Stolas as much as possible. She loves her daughter and wants to raise her better than she was raised.
That's all I might do a Sallie May and Millie redesign again who knows
#anti vivziepop#vivziepop critical#helluva boss critical#helluva boss rewrite#helluva boss redesign#helluva rewrite#helluva boss octavia#helluva boss stella
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Current ideas for my re-writes of the Hazbin Hotel cast:
Charlie - grownass adult. More background in civil service. Brought her imp servants from the castle to help at the hotel (they like her well enough)
Vaggie - in the air. Might make her an angelic terminator character that gets recruited after failing her mission. Idk.
Alastor - overhauled into a whole new character - Adonis Crowley. Same role at the Hotel, but is more gentlemanly and seems genuinely invested in the success of the hotel, but his motivations remain unknown.
Sir P - does not join at first. Reoccurring useless antagonist.
Angel - employee (Bellhop) who is invited to utilize hotel services. Ptsd from the War.
Cherri/Rosie - fused into one character that I'm calling Roxanne. Overlord who owns a popular bar. Employs Mimzy.
Mimzy - works for Roxanne. Died before Adonis in the late 20s. Adonis is trying to recruit her for the hotel (he misses her 😿)
Husk - man of few words. Resigned to his fate. Draft dodger. Grumpy old cat grandpa.
Niffty - Adonis's little helper/spy. Will do anything for him, despite him not owning her soul. She does Not pass the Bechdel test.
Baxter - #1 fucked up little science man and negative Nancy. Transmasc
Vox - ambassador of Sloth for the Greed ring. Has a bunch of complicated relationships. His brain is in a jar.
Val - movie producer. Idk if I want to do the porn studio thing.
Vel - manipulates things behind the scenes #girlboss
new:
Glitz & Glam - sinners that take Angel's original role as Famous Performers, only Glitz comes to the hotel and Glam wants to stay in showbiz. Their dynamic is similar to Angel and Cherri in canon, only closer as they are twin sisters. Drama ensues.
The Gambler - Adonis's mysterious patron that only he knows about
#hazbin hotel rewrite#husk hazbin hotel#vivziepop critical#hazbin hotel reimagined#hazbin hotel critical#hazbin hotel redesign#hazbin hotel au#vivziepop criticism#hazbin hotel stairways au#hazbin charlie#charlie hazbin hotel#vaggie hazbin hotel#hazbin alastor#glitz and glam#helluva boss rewrite#hazbin hotel#writers of tumblr#hazbin baxter
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New sin designs are. Okay
Levi doesn't stand out as much as I'd like (I think all the rest of the sins stand out from their citizens except lucifer and levi lmao. Glitz and Glam were not great to show before Levi, they look so similar) but I'm so so happy she's two headed oh my GOD hallelujah I would've just rathered both heads be eel like OR two halves of a whole face. Also nit-pick but why are both of her fringes going the same way 🤨🔍okay visual clutter
Belphagor, i. I have a feeling I won't like her full design just cus I see salmon pink and I don't fw mixing different hued pinks
Also the eyes feel more like an envy thing than a sloth thing, also this is last minute as I type this but I'd give Bel a snail shell cus they represent sloth and also. Slow. I'd want her shapes to not be eyes but maybe spirals, crescents, or even just the movement of melting, like her fluff and the candle wax could be one in the same
I think Bel should be GNC also, since goats have beards she'd have stubble cus she's too lazy to shave. Her and Mammon are best friends and they adventure together
#vivziepop helluva boss#hellava boss#hellaverse#helluva fanart#helluva boss#helluva boss spoilers#helluva boss belphegor#helluva boss leviathan#vivziepop hazbin hotel#helluva boss redesign#helluva boss rewrite
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#helluva boss rewrite#helluva boss reimagined au#hellaverse rewrite#hellaverse redesign#helluva boss redesign#(kinda) helluva boss critical#(kinda) hellaverse critical
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Beezelebub
Holy nightmare of all Nightmares, here's Beezlebub, the most scariest Sin of them all, a fun fact about Bee. She's supposedly the mother of hellhounds, and a mother of hellhounds often should encourage her kids to feed her. Sooo.
Beezlebub had cultivated a hellhound hive dedicated to indulgence and whim. Beezlebub wanted her Hellhounds to feed her, and if they don't they are considered dead to her and are sent to Pounds. What kind of pounds is up to you. Because of Beelzebub's rapid hunger it led to the mere destruction of others, and she feeds on weakness and other people's bad decisions (BeezleJuice)
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I rewrote the scene in Sinsmas where Stella and Andre were reacting to Stolas trying to call Via cuz I thought the original was dumb . . . I also got inspired by people who did the same thing.
The room is quiet, sunlight casting long shadows over velvet furniture. Octavia sits curled in a window seat, thumbing through her Dantalion 6. A soft chime breaks the silence—her phone lights up. “Dad.” Her eyes soften.
Octavia (quietly) ...Dad?
She reaches for the phone—until a pale hand snatches it from her grip.
Stella (her voice sharp)
What are you doing, Octavia?
Octavia reaches for her phone back only for Stella to pull away
Octavia
It’s dad. He’s calling me.
Stella (cool, clipped) No. I won’t have you indulging that disgrace.
Octavia blinks, lips parting in quiet protest. She clutches a pillow to her chest.
Octavia He just wants to talk...
Stella (still calm, with edge) And what do you want from him, hm?
Octavia hesitates. Her voice is barely above a whisper.
Octavia ...I want to talk to him because I miss him.
Stella turns, eyes narrowing ever so slightly. For a moment, silence hangs between them.
Stella (icily composed) He forfeited the right to be missed when he betrayed his title, his bloodline, and his own daughter... all for a pathetic, lowborn imp.
She tosses the phone onto a nearby table like it’s trash. Andrealphus looks up from his book, swirling a glass of wine.
Andrealphus (dryly amused) Oh? Took him this long to crawl back? How touching~.
Stella doesn’t laugh—she paces slowly toward the window, voice dropping into something venomous and elegant.
Stella He didn’t just cheat. He humiliated our house and this family. And now, he thinks he can reappear and play doting father?
Octavia quietly rises.
Octavia He didn’t forget me...
Stella (without turning) No, darling. He simply replaced you—with someone easier.
Octavia doesn’t respond. Her eyes glisten slightly. Without a response, she runs out the room, past two butlers, who silently hang a pristine portrait of Andrealphus where a painting of her and Stolas once hung.
[CAMERA lingers on the portrait. The soft sound of footsteps fades as the door closes.]
#helluva boss criticism#helluva boss#helluva boss critique#helluva boss critical#anti helluva boss#critique#helluva boss rewrite#stella rewrite
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The Circus
(season 2!!!!!!)
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How much does an arranged marriage hurt? For the bride and groom? The bride doesn't know on the groom's side, and the groom doesn't know on the bride's side, they don't know each other and don't care, they don't like each other, nothing.
But for a family that's crazy about more, it doesn't matter either, what matters is their daughter, beautiful, educated, fertile, everything. All the best to the groom, who cares about the bride? She doesn't even care about herself, she smiles, in her cute light blue dress, her horns opposite each other, two beautiful eyes in place... the perfect bride.
Who would be the lucky one to have such beauty like her, such kindness, such a feat of giving him children?
She wondered, and hoped he would die.
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#helluva boss#helluva boss rewrite#helluva rewrite#helluva boss redesign#helluva redesign#stella x blitzo#blitzo x stella#ship#fanfic
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My interpretation of the seven deadly sins that i am working on a rewrite of hellaverse with my friends (the name of the rewrite is "peccatum innocentis" it was kinda fun but also stressful, ngl, but i am kinda happy with the results.
Also all of them uses any pronouns, as i see all of them don't have really a "gender" they are just, well, sins, sins can be committed by anyone, at any gender.
And just some facts!! Satan back can get on fire when he is REALLY angry, belpehor have an "forever insomnia" they can actually NEVER sleep, they are awaken 24 hours, and there's much other stuff but i am not so sure what much i can tell, as i have this more as a "project" between me and my friends, as we don't use it just to well, just being haters, we actually are using for both me and my friends just to have some fun and trying to get better on writing!! and well, me on my drawings skills, i just don't talk much about them here because the critical community is getting kinda uncomfy, so yeah!! just showing what i want!!
feel free to make questions!!
#loulowruschel art#peccatum innocentis#hazbin hotel critical#helluva boss critical#hellaverse redesign#helluva boss redesign#helluva boss rewrite#hazbin hotel redesign#hazbin hotel rewrite
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LEVIATHAN — FULL FORMS PT. 2

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They have a lot of eyes I guess. So, Leviathan’s mouth is sort of the gate but not really. Instead, he has a fire that can transport a soul to Hell if she so pleases. If they do use it to a being already in Hell, they will just be sent to a random/native ring. I did this so there isn’t some weird ‘Leviathan is in Hell while also being Hell itself’ thing. They are also VERY large—Lucifer is about the size of two and a half of her eyes (he’s ~5’8). Make of that what you will. *I’ll probably make more notes about this when I’m done with all of them.
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HB Rewrite Idea: Stolas finally fucking dies, Stella realizes she’s a lesbian, Stella marries Verosika and they raise Octavia in a actually loving environment
#vivziepop critical#anti vivziepop#vivziepop criticism#anti helluva boss#vivziepop critique#helluva boss critical#helluva boss critique#helluva boss criticism#helluva boss rewrite#Anti stolas#fuck stolas
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redesign trivia: Fizzarolli
froge face
looks a lot like Mammon: similar eyes, facial spots, gap in teeth
medieval jester vibe
bright clothes made of colored scraps, very simple and comfortable to do tricks, + soft leather shoes and gloves
chaperon with three "horns" (historically symbolizing donkey ears and tail)
golden bells
often carries an old wolf fur cape to mimic Mammon and serve as king's reflection
always with marotte, fool's scepter, traditional attribute of a jester; Fizz uses it as a walking stick because he limps after breaking hip bone
CHARLIE'S GANG: Charlie, Vaggie, Angel Dust, Niffty, sir Pentious (and egg boiz), Cherri Bomb, Husk, Alastor (+ gang as humans)
HEAVEN: Adam, Eve, Lute, Emily, Sera
ADAM AND EVE'S CHILDREN: Cain, Abel, Seth, Awan, Azura
HELL: Lilith, Lucifer, Seviathan, Helsa, Razzle and Dazzle, Baxter
SINS: Asmodeus [Lust], Beelzebub [Gluttony], Satan [Wrath], Mammon [Greed], Belphegor [Sloth]
LUCIFER'S WIVES: Eisheth Zenunim, Naamah, Agrat bat Mahlat
VEES: Vox, Valentino, Velvette
OVERLORDS: Zestial, Rosie, Carmilla Carmine (and her daughters, Odette and Clara), Flaming Skull Guy
FRIENDS AND RELATIVES: Mimzy, Arackniss, Molly, Alastor's mom, Alastor's father
#hazbin hotel#hazbin hotel: asileverse au#hazbin hotel au#asileverse#fizzarolli#fizzarolli redesign#helluva boss fizzarolli#helluva boss rewrite#helluva boss redesign#a bit#hazbin hotel rewrite#hazbin hotel redesign#hazbin hotel critical
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Helluva Mess
Now, Sinmas was just... Something.
Alright, now for some reason Blitz and the others hesitate to kill their target? So all of the sudden because it's gay it's an issue, when they did the exact same job in the first episode with no qualms? This show is so obnoxious.
I also hate how spoiled Stolas is, because it's not really funny. I think if I didn't hate him so much, i'd actually find some of his antics humorous, but... uh, nope. I just hate his guts. I hate how he's just some woobie at this point. The narrative is acting like he's done all these things to earn all the sympathy in the world, but he hasn't. Am I supposed to like him because of Mastermind? Well, that's not happening.
Millie being pregnant is fine, I don't care. At all. Which is just more proof of how little character she has to the point that I was just meh to the reveal. Now, the reaction to this development is more interesting than the actual plot point - Why in the name of god do people think it's SALLIE'S??? It makes my brain melt out of my ears just thinking about it.
Loona's hellhound form is just a wolf with a furry face and I hate it. She should've looked actually cool, but that's more of a subjective opinion rather than an actual criticism.
Now, the main point I want to rant about: Stella and Octavia.
First off. The way Octavia is treated as some sort of villain or in the wrong for cutting Stolas out of her life after he repeatedly hurt and chose Blitzo after her, her after the many chances she gave him to do better is just terrible. She's completely within her rights to cut him out, speaking from someone with similar experience with cutting out terrible family. Stolas is in the wrong, no matter how much the narrative tries to say otherwise or tries to act like he's taking responsibility. Her rant at Stolas is one hundred percent correct, she was absolutely in the right, Stolas is a selfish asshole and he chose Blitzo over her. She doesn't need to listen to him, she doesn't owe him anything. And I know the narrative is going to make her 'come around' like Blitzo said, but I really wish she wouldn't.
Second. Stella, sweet, poor Stella god why have they done this to you? She's so one dimensional and has no relationship with Octavia. Are Viv and the crew just allergic to Stella having any potential redeeming qualities? I think if she genuinely cared about Octavia and was irritated by Andrealphus taking her divorce and using it to further his agenda, then that would instantly give her the tiniest bit of depth. But we can't have good things in the Hellaverse.
In my rewrite, Stella's scorned and just wants to take her daughter and be happy and hates Stolas and her brother in equal measure. Enjoy a drawing I did of my rewrite versions.

#anti vivziepop#vivziepop critical#helluva boss critical#anti helluva boss#helluva boss rewrite#helluva boss critique#helluva boss criticism#helluva rewrite#helluva boss redesign
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Chat come here I gotta tell you something important
And it's about Millie :0
So you know how Millie has that whole being important insecurity that's only brought up once in worst Helluva episode so it looks like Vivzie cares about women?

Well how about she's the middle child of her family and that's where the insecurity came from? The guy drinking the slushie (???) and Sallie May are the eldests while the guy on the floor and the baby are her younger siblings? I mean of course a baby is going to be the little sibling but yeah
And boom. That's why she wants to feel important because she's the middle child
#this might not be very groundbreaking but i'm very proud of myself for having a reason for that insecurity#also lowkey developing a crush for that guy lying on the floor#anyways if any of you guys have names for millie's family pls tell me i want to make them important#anti spindlehorse#anti vivziepop#vivziepop critical#vivziepop criticism#vivziepop critique#spindlehorse criticism#spindlehorse critique#helluva boss critical#helluva boss criticism#helluva boss critique#helluva boss rewrite
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Second try after sketching her more on my government final (don't ask ill kill myself) also I don't care abt viv pls don't flame me for hating or liking her when I don't do either 🙏
ANYWAY so I saw an old/chubby version of Bel (idk by whom I'm sorry 😭) and it inspired me to give my redesign wayyy more shape, and I do imagine her as older I didn't make that as clear as I shpuldve
The sin of sloth is associated w/ donkeys, goats, and snails so I. Took snails and ran LMAO so she's literally like half snail half donkey/goat/hooved animal but lowk also kinda sea slug (also some tummy scales bc the baphomets in the show have scales)
I went with the biblical light blue for her with bits of NOT purple but a pink-blue pls do not get it wrong 🙌 I also made her a mostly dark pallete bc. Darkness is easier to sleep in 🧚♀️
I think that the candle on her head/hair/also her ears is like a melty texture, it drips and flows fr its also meant to resemble like a wooly blanket over yhe shoulders
And NO she shan't have arms, she can pick stuff up telepathically (the swirls on her sides glow when she does) but she's too lazy to even do that most times
I don't exactly vibe with her ring being medical things since. Yk hospitals are filled with hard workers that work 12 hour shifts and such. I'd rather it have been more techy OR snowy but I have no ideas past that so yk (also I think Kathy Bates should voice her. Or Morgan freeman. Calm voice) she's also def a drug dealer 100%
#vivziepop hazbin hotel#vivziepop helluva boss#hellava boss#hellaverse#helluva boss spoilers#helluvaverse#helluva fanart#helluva boss#helluva boss belphegor#helluva boss redesign#helluva boss rewrite#helluva boss mastermind
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