#and the DIALOGUE
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Concord is the best thing I've ever written (so far) and it is supported by the time honoured science/tradition of forgetting how I wrote it and rereading it again during the same emotional distress that I wrote it in and finding hurt/comfort that was tailor made for my bleeding heart.
If you've ever left a kind comment on the fic, you've literally added writings on the wall of my cave of comfort. I love you <3
#barcus my beloved#truly blorbo to me#i impress myself by how hard the dialogues go in that fic#and the DIALOGUE#god i love writing#and forgetting#because it means free fresh-ish read!#such a good time to feel bad#overall I'm better now#good cry and stuff#barcus wroot#bg3#concord
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Quick thought about Lae'zel and Vlaakith (Contains minor spoilers for Lae'zel's arc and the whole monastery thing lol)
During the conversation you have with Vlaakith in the ruins of the monastery, Lae'zel says "You know me" to Vlaakith.
If you tell Vlaakith that you are neither friend nor thief and that the prism is rightfully yours, she will tell you that "to own something is to know it".
Vlaakith knows Lae'zel, therefore she owns Lae'zel.
I just thought that was a really cool detail and I keep on finding these little, thoughtful things in the game and especially the way the dialogue is written that makes me love it even more.
#baldur's gate 3#baldur's gate#lae'zel#minor spoilers#fuck vlaakith#vlaakith#oh how i love this game#the details in this game#and the dialogue#gods I love it
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sometimes you need dialogue tags and don't want to use the same four
#they're like synonyms and adjacent words and some of them only loosely fall into the category shown i just needed to stick them somewhere#fanfic writing#writing#creative writing#writers on tumblr#writing dialogue#writing reference#writing tips#synonyms#writing resources#for future reference
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so hard not to become the most annoying person on earth if you're a little excitable and just learned a little about a topic literally no one around you has any interest in
#unforch ive been laserfocused on the composition of toilet cleanibg products and (unrelated) international fishing politics this week so far#i want to talk about anti limescale chemicals 😫 and chinese ships off the coast of west africa 😐#TO EVERYONE IN THE NOTES: don't worry i am not particularly wounded by the awareness that my coworkers would not appreciate a rant#it is a good idea to make sure your conversations remain dialogue and not uninvited monologue for an uninterested captive audience#there is a time and place for excited half-informed monologues.
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"You don't know me. I'm not the same person anymore."
"That's okay. I'll get to know you again."
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"I have depression." - character who has been through extensive therapy.
"I feel dead inside all the time and nothing helps!" - character who does like, regular introspective thinking and is aware of the concept of mental health.
"Leave me the fuck alone I'll be fine once I get over my stupid shit." - repressed character.
"It's fine I'm just having an Empty Time. What? Yeah, empty times, you know, when everything is like bzzzzzz in your brain and you don't shower for two weeks. Why, what do you call it?" - ooooughhh now we're talkin
#anyway. tones should match the character and I rewrite dialogue 3 times to add layers of stunted communication and trust issues#for the characters who have that obviously
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we share a warriors bond (we were both in the same fandom at the same time and now neither of us are in that fandom anymore but we’re still beloved mutuals)
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I haven’t seen anyone post about this but here’s jerry’s original dialogue vs the remake!
#ITS GROWTH!!#my edit#my screenshots#smb#pm#ttyd remake#mario#goombella#luigi#jerry#dialogue#image#switch#gcn#ttyd#supet mario bros#the thousand year door#pmttyd#paper mario#jerry ttyd#jerry paper mario
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I’ve always wanted to draw what I think the various Deltarune weapons look like, and I figure why not start with the swords!
The Twisted Sword - The Axes - The Scarfs - The Rings
#these were made based on the item descriptions as well as the dialogue from attempting to equip them to other characters#(which is why the the wood blade has a giant bite mark shsjsjdjdjdkd)#also each one was based on a different style of sword#the wood blade is a short sword; the spookysword is a long sword; the trefoil is rapier; and both the mecha saber and bounceblade are saber#utdr#deltarune#deltarune weapons#wood blade#spooky sword#trefoil#mecha saber#bounce blade#the dork doodles
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I hope they meet each other one day
#deltarune#deltarune fanart#susie deltarune#kris dreemurr#comic#krusie#I know this dialogue is a bit corny I just wanted to draw them-_-
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toby when i get you toby
#deltarune#deltarune spoilers#that's gerson's no mercy dialogue#edit: NO MERCY IN UNDERTALE#and that deltarune dialogue is only if you keep defending instead of attacking#i didnt think this would get notes sorry for not being specific
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reading house of sky and breath and this book is so…………….
#fucking cringey#i really want to like it but the sex between the main characters is gross and nasty not in a good way#all the characters talk the same#like no real individuality#and the dialogue#what the hell#ALSO so cringey#it’s like take a teen drama and add fantasy elements and age everyone up by 10 years#and even tho the main ML is over 200 years old and apparently fought in 2 wars he is still impulsive#and what civilization REALLY has records from 15000 years ago#even if characters live to 1000 years that’s still 15 generations back#OR MORE#I want to finish this book and like it but it’s so????#and what is with all the swearing
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Patching him up
Edit: Added ID thanks to @anistarrose !!
Edit: Also wanna take this chance to say in the original post, I already realised susie meant she patched tenna in the lightworld, not in the darkworld. Still, I liked envisioning how this would look like anyway :]
#Deltarune#deltarune spoilers#deltarune chapter 3#Tenna#Mr. Ant Tenna#Ant Tenna#i trust anyone not wanting to see deltarune spoilers have already muted the deltarune and deltarune spoilers tag#I am a little sad he was fixed up off screen#i would love to see just a shot of susie and the others patching him up#and greatful dialogue from tenna#susie#susie deltarune#pippins#shadow guys#Ive already completed both chapters im still just#sitting here thinking about chapter 3#even though its mostly the goofy kind of chapter#theres still. alot#lavdoods_vb
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Okay guys
INPRNT!!
#i don't wanna work a minute longer on this one i honestly started to hate it so im getting it out of my system as soon as possible#i have other Bilbo Baggins fanarts planned;)#also i dont care what anyone says Bilbo likes kids#hes a story teller he wrote the book for Frodo#maybe he got the idea from the young hobbits who have been a constant pesterers of his life asking him to tell stories about his adventure#i dont know i have a lot of thoughts on this but i cant write it down#not the best with words i am (as you can see from the dialogue lol)#anywaaaayss eat up Bilbo enjoyers#the hobbit#hobbit#bilbo baggins#tolkien#bilbo my beloved
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