#springtrap and Deliah rewrite

[mechanicalinfection]

redraw wip ive been gatekeeping sorriezzz

[springtrapanddeliah-rebooted]

Hey there friends!!

Welcome to the SpringTrap and Deliah Rebooted tumblr!! This is where I’ll be posting my rewritten version of GraWolfQuinn’s SpringTrap and Deliah :]

(*Not at all affiliated with the other SaD rewritten blog I’ve seen on here; I do not know them or what they have planned for their rewriting but I wish them luck and look forward to see what they have in store ^^)

This comic is being made purely for fun and is currently in the process of being written :]

Thankfully, I already have a lot thought of and done and suspect I shall be able to move onto concept art and paneling very soon!

Another small disclaimer: this rewriting is quite different from the original. I expect it will be longer and with new characters too,, so all I ask is for kindness and to be understanding that quite a bit will be different!!

Now that all of that’s out of the way, I hope you’ll enjoy what I’ve come up with and will stick by to see what I have in store.

Thank you!! :]

[a-deceptive-calling]

Vanity “Vannie” Valentine

1/2 Bad Endings in ADC. This route is where Springtrap’s manipulation is fully successful, not only cutting off Delz completely from her friends and family, but she becomes a serial killer herself. In other words, she became inspired by William’s murders and harvests Remnant along side him. Her suit is one she stole from Harry’s brother, Matt, who is a fur suit builder. This one, was supposed to be an online commission ready to be shipped out before his death. After everyone in the central cast was killed, Delz went after the people who bullied her at school to extract her revenge and their Remnant. While Springtrap did spare her life, he’s only using her as a tool to collect more Remnant for himself. Once she outlives this purpose, he plans to dispose of her. Be careful who you call ugly in Middle School, they might turn out to be a serial killer.

[aviaryartist1800]

So i remember watching this video:

And yikes...

(nobody deserves harassment btw, just saying this just in case)

The comic has a lot of problematic stuff and Springtrap is sorta woobified here..

So, i was planning to rewrite some stuff, like i am going to make it clear that Springtrap is clearly evil and what he is doing is portrayed as bad as he is planning to isolate Deliah so that he is able to kill her without anyone noticing(thoughts on this?)

Also i might rewrite the backstory stuff(in regards to Springtrap's motives)

I am not sure if this is a vent comic or not, lemme know if it is, idk if its like Muffins or not

So yeah, i got some help from my brother(who is a bit of a fnaf expert) with the rewrites

So yeah, i just remembered this video and i might treat it like the Muffins saga(in terms of redesigns and rewrites)

[t-w-n]

SaD: THE WORST NIGHTMARE Amy White Alcohol and death mention!

Amy is a mother of child, who's soul in Golden Freddy - Gabriel White. One nice day Gabriel ran away from Amy to "Freddy Fazbear's Pizza" and with other 4 kids by William Afton.

After her kid's death she started to blame herself for this loss. She started to skip her work and after some time she was fired. She wasted all of her money for alcohol and bread. She didn't clean her house, she didn't care about her appearance.

Amy White passed away on her son''s grave, due to the alcohol that was slowly killing her. It was the first time she visited Gabriel's grave.

After her death and became a ghost Amy went to "Freddy Fazbear's Pizza". She reunited with her son and became "The Puppet".

[drinkinboilingcoffee]

This is amazing, definitely going to follow this project closely

I and my boyfriend are making a new version of Springtrap and Deliah. We are doing this, I am literally working on it as we speak.

We're revising the main two characters mostly, but VERY heavy on fixing William, as well as Springtrap's uncomfortable dynamic with Deliah in general. The plan is to give Springtrap an ACTUAL redemption arc, fix some of the major weirdness and ways he acts towards Deliah, and make him less "creepy pred" in general.

We plan to take a different approach to "William Afton was just upset he couldn't get a family" that re-introduces his FNAF canon children, as well as possibly Clara, and to do some redesigning and recharacterization to fix the souls.

This is partially influenced by the current outing of Quinn's past behaviour, but NOT meant to be a direct attack to them, nor their fan base, if such a thing remains. It is simply due to the fact that I personally was affected by this comic.

I first read it at a young age. Springtrap's treatment of Deliah, a child near my age, influenced how I viewed those close to me. It made me complacent in an abusive relationship with someone very similar to him.

Despite this, I and many others have fond memories of this comic, and the fanworks that followed it. I'd like to remake it for the newer generations of fnaf fans, whom I adore very much, and fix the messaging to hopefully teach younger fans that his behaviour is not normal or okay, or to be justified because "he is struggling too."

Anyways. Feel free to follow if you'd like to see this. Work starts now. :]

[clartidk123]

Kind of a Vent?

TW: Mentions of Pedophilia

Ok

@takaio-sdr 's Springtrap and Deliah Rebuild.

It seems like a great au, and remake in general. Like a more canonic approach to the original series

But i have to say, its just not my vibe.

Im actually crying right now.

Im going to make my own rewrite, because this one portrays Springtrap as JUST a heartless killer. And that's fine. But what attracted me to the original comic was the fact Springtrap WASNT heartless. Which i have to say, is pretty bad considering the original pedophilic subtext.

But something just. Attracts me to it? The concept of Springtrap not being just a heartless monster.

But anyways, i just needed to vent, please see their au, it actually looks really nice

[alilweirddragon]

This is from one of my Ocs from a book series I finished this year (called Dragon Spirits). It involves FNAF and HTTYD. The first design is for the 1st book, while the bunny design is from the end of book 1 to 2. Dragon Spirits Bk 1 (if it works): https://www.wattpad.com/story/198224888-dragon-spirits Sorry I haven't done a description yet (i really need to do one…) It kinda involves another FNAF Au called Springtrap and Deliah from AberrantPaint (formerly GraWolfQuinn) (on Deviantart) since I love it and they (and my bestie's) were the main reason why I joined the FNAF Fandom in the first place (and their au is f*cking awesome i'm so sorry if you see this. I might rewrite it in the future and take out Springtrap and Deliah). i respect all decisions they make and I won't harass them And ye Cottontail is just an old Springbonnie suit.

[mechanicalinfection]

All brand new

[a-deceptive-calling]

BIG Remnant Lore dump ahead Remnant in this AU is a conspiracy theory that gained traction during the Alien craze of the 50’s, but is rumored to have been the reason why ancient cultures performed human sacrifices. Remnant is said to grant eternal life, but is highly addictive and contains similar degenerative properties to the body akin to radiation exposure—To explain Michael’s condition. It is a mystical substance that can only be extracted post-mortem for a brief period, and is most ripe when the subject is under distress before their death. NOTE; Agony does not exist in this AU. Remnant DOES NOT cause the spiritual possession of the animatronics. The ghosts being vengeful is just his skill issue of being a serial killer. William’s body reacted HORRIBLY to his first dose of Remnant. Probably because he drank a cup of it instead of using a syringe, but he felt like his body was being torn apart from the inside. As his addiction grew stronger, so did the dosage and the pain that came along with it, leading his body to age faster than normal.

At first, William’s consumption of Remnant was hardly noticable. Most assumed that his line of work of constantly being indoors was causing his skin to pale, and the stress of everything going on with Fazbears at the time was doing a number upkeeping his hair. Overtime however, his deterioration became increasingly obvious, especially before he was Springlocked again. Folks assumed Mr. Raglan was an elderly man on his last job and really needed to retire but was too stuborn or broke to do so, but looks can be quite… Deceptive. Get it chat In the end, his Remnant consumption allowed him to become Springtrap. Despite being a skeleton merged with a metal frame, he was still technically alive, better yet, undead. A big reason as to why he hibernated for 30 years is because of his own body needing to rot away so he can move the suit again.

[a-deceptive-calling]

HENRY EMILY ADC REAL‼️‼️‼️ Listen I NEEDED to give him a matching clip tie. As for some actual lore, William partnered with Henry on behalf of Afton Robotics to create animatronics for Fredbears’, becoming a co-founder after working with him to create the Springlock suits. Now, William is much more used to working in a professional environment, being stuck in workshops and boardrooms. You can imagine his surprise when Henry invited him to be a performer for the very suit William himself designed.

This will surely not develop into an extreme obsession that results in dead children 👍

[a-deceptive-calling]

The brainrot is taking over

On a serious note, I have a more concrete example of Goth Wife Clara and tried to stick with more 80’s fashion. I like to imagine she used to have super crazy spiky hair before she settled down with William, as a bonus.

Speaking of the Aftons, I have a confession; I AM A BALD MICHAEL TRUTHER🗣️‼️‼️🔥🔥 Had this funny joke of him dressing up for when he traps himself and Springtrap into Fazbear’s Fright at the end, because “first impressions matter” when meeting The Devil™️.

Okay, that should fulfill my drawing quota under Management. Hopefully this’ll get me a raise!

[a-deceptive-calling]

Something possessed me to paint last night. Not typically the style showcased on this blog as there is a DEFINITE preference for a comic style, but hey it helps to branch out and try new things, right? Also, produced another comic page and experimented with colored lighting this time around. There’s those pages where Deliah is tucked in by Springtrap, so here’s the ADC rendition.

[a-deceptive-calling]

Springtrap is able to use his FNAF 3 Ambiance sound as a form of echolocation. This is particularly effective within indoor spaces, and great for cheating at Hide and Seek. After all, he’s only playing the game to study where Delz can possibly hide when he finally enacts his attack…

[a-deceptive-calling]

An important piece of my rework is showing more of how Delz was affected by her mother leaving, and how that contributed to her attachment to Springtrap. William somewhat empathizes what Delz is going through based on what he’s seen in his own children, and in the tall panel at the bottom, also displays how far removed he was from that side of himself. …You know, through killing children and all that. I love writing sinister undertones to wholesome dialog. You could even say it’s A Deceptive Calling.

[a-deceptive-calling]

COMIC REDRAW + ADC LORE

The story of Freddy Fazbear’s in ADC is seen as an urban legend. The growth of the internet allowed for the case to gain a devoted following across the country, and through what users discovered, allowed for Henry Emily’s case to be re-opened and finally, have the innocent man acquitted. Delz and Harry of course, saw the chance with Fazbear’s Fright opening soon to ride the trending wave and make it big, maybe even solving the mystery of who the real Fazbear Killer was; William managed to be 10 steps ahead by wiping any trace/evidence of him from the business when he took power after Henry’s arrest, leaving sources online just as conflicted. Unknowingly, Delz made a completely correct guess about the animatronic standing in front of her.