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15 year old me is THROWING UP and CRYING

what if the rebrand comes NEXT year, okay but seriously imagine it, youre watching my chemical romance perform at Wembley, their surprise opening act comes out... It's fall out boy, and who's there with them? You suddenly hear Brendon Urie begin to sing, its P!ATD they're singing this is gospel, the crowd suddenly begins to cheer louder, Dan and phil come on stage, theyre holding hands, wrapped in a pride flag, they turn, like theyre about to kiss, they stop and announce they're actually doing a podcast

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AGAIN I love them sm please

summer mornings, borrowing your boyfriend's hoodie, healed scars, loving touches

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I love them sm I’m sobbing

Bakugo is so whipped man

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I love aus so much I’m gonna go feral

Soft physiotherapist and surgical resident Kiribaku for @/ranathearanara on the bird app ❤️🧡 Another illu for @myheroacademia-action ✨✨

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Based on this post:

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Gonna be a part time krbk, part time shark, part time vagueblogging blog just watch me

this picture is taking me out they're so fuckin cute

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hey man everyone loved how convenient and easily forgettable you were on earth. u were the least inconvenient person out there. my buddy told me you were super helpful and nice and didn't take up any space and just slid away from their mind as soon as they stopped looking at you. it was really impressive how little of an impression you made on anyone. sucks that it didn't save you man.

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The urge… it calls to me… the urge to vaguepost on tumblr dot com…

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Cells At Work: Code Black

i heard there's a guy who lives in my blood called michael plastics and hes going to kill everyone?

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On a mission to demystify bottom surgery for girls like

no the risk of complications is not as high as you think

no you dont need to only go to one of two expensive surgeons, you can get good results in tons of places that your insurance will cover

no you wont lose ur trans status or be exiled from the community

yes you will get wet and cum and have a cute vulva and never need to tuck again

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I’m looking at him *respectfully*

Save a what

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Questions to ask beta readers

General:

Were you confused at any point of the story?

What genre would you say this book is?

When did you put the story down?

Is the ending satisfying?

If you had to cut 3 scenes what would they be?

When did you feel like the story really began?

What was the last book you read before this story?

Characters:

Do you get any of the characters names confused?

Which character is your favorite?

If you had to remove a character who would you and why? (you don't have to remove the character, just make sure their role is meaningful)

Which character do you relate to the most?

Which character do you relate to the least?

Do the characters feel real?

Are character relationships believable?

Are the goals clear and influence the plot?

Are the characters distinct (voice, motivations, etc)

Setting:

Which setting was clearest to you?

Which setting was the most memorable?

Am including enough/too much detail?

Plot and conflict:

Are the internal and external conflicts well defined for the main characters?

Are the internal conflicts and the external conflicts organic and believable?

Are there enough stakes?

Are the plot twists believable but still unexpected?