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Without reading the menu, Steph ordered something called a “grande hot white mocha, three pumps, with sweet cream foam and low-calorie caramel drizzle.”
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She took a sip of her thick drink. It got stuck in the straw before making a loud slurp.
Death in the Downline by Maria Abrams, p. 27 and p. 28
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