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Spoilers for Ge!Chapter 69 and 70

The roller coaster of emotions I went on reading the past couple chapters!

I've been busy so I haven't really gotten the chance to read and think about things during my finals month! LMAO. But I hope you're doing well Mr. Moosh! Your writing is impeccable!

Honestly, reading chapter 69 and 70 back to back was really like idk how to explain it but, similar to watching a thread unravel.

In a good way!

In chapter 69 we not only figure out about Ranboo's blackouts, which I know will be more prominent or more of a problem in the future.

And we also see Tubbo accept that he's not really okay? Like he's pushing it off because he feels obliged to, but venting to Ranboo he was allowed to really explore his feelings.

Which I think leads to one of the biggest points of that chapter, he doesn't want to wait for an opportunity because there isn't one. When is there going to be an opportunity to break into a highly protected facility?

Literally never.

And then chapter 70 was a wave of emotions to read. I don't know why I didn't fully expect Dream to just pull a fast one on Tommy and just not do a party at all? It seems really obvious that he'd do that, and he did.

But it was the best outcome from a bad situation. There's tons of ways Tommy could have perceived that information, and he saw it as Dream is lying, and he has people that care about him.

People that aren't Dream, which is amazing! Also he remembered "Wi" and when I tell you I screamed when I saw that LMAO

Okay but let's talk about the powers he's gained. He's got the Miles Morales powers! Which is invisibility/camouflage and electricity.

The icon himself! He's fully realized that Dream is his enemy, and not his brother. Also the fact that he's got his spark back is so refreshing!

Like watching his little rebellion had me smiling so much. I was really sitting there like "Go bestie you tell him!" lol

He's got a plan and I'm happy about it. I know there were other spiders so does that mean Tommy has more than just electricity and camoflauge?

Just a question I've been wondering. I hope Tommy remembers his name and that it isn't Theseus. I hope Tommy doesn't end up getting manipulated again. He's gotten so far.

This is baby steps, he isn't breaking out or anything, but he is doing simple lies. Which is good.

Also does Dream plan on using Tommy as a biological weapon? Like a superhuman machine? I mean Dream literally stated it himself Tommy can't die, he heals so quickly.

Like I'm now just curious for his future plans and how he plans on using Tommy. Like what's the point of creating all of these things if you aren't going to use it?

Also! I do think the revival machine brings him back to life with altered memory just a bit. Maybe he's easier to manipulate or mold? Idk! It's probably because Tommy forgets most things right after his revival.

So it's easy to lie to him? Idk! I think that's how it works! I think if Dream were to have killed Tommy and revived him again we would have a very different situation.

I cannot wait for everything to go wrong for Dream specifically. I don't think Tommy's going to have to lie around Dream much longer, stay safe king your family's coming soon!

Good chapters I cried, screamed, laughed, and screamed more. I really love this fic!

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Guided Evolution Chapter 68 spoilers

Okay that chapter was both sad but also pretty hopeful to say the least!

It's interesting to see how quickly Tommy has caught onto things. Well, he hasn't caught on persay, but he's questioning things.

Not outwardly to Dream of course. He remembered all the family members, Wilbur with his smoking, he remembered W! It's the start of a name!

Honestly I cannot be more ecstatic that things related to Wilbur was the first thing that jogged his memory. Although they weren't as close throughout the story because of the Spider-Man thing, it really goes to show how close he still is to him, and how close they were throughout their childhood.

He also remembered Phil's favorite cake being strawberry (pretty sure it was Phil) and Kristen's ways to reassure him and make him feel better. He remembered her doing it in the hospital too! And he remembered Techno and the hair dye!!

I don't think Tommy's gonna get his memory back in full any time soon, but it's a start. Hopefully, if he keeps being skeptical of Dream and continues to be pretty good at keeping secrets— I feel like the secret thing is gonna backfire, got this nagging feeling that Dream is going to catch on that Tommy's not telling him the full truth— he'll be able to remember enough to realize that Dream has been lying to him.

He's already being skeptical of Dream lying to him already because of his contradictories. "You're fragile but also forget your strength" kind of ordeal. Really doesn't make any sense does it?

And it DEFINITELY has not been 6 months, let alone enough time for his birthday. It seems like it's only been a two weeks/two and a half weeks at the most from when Tommy went missing.

So Dream's lying about that.

I wonder if Dream does go through with the whole strawberry cake thing and party thing if it'll jog more of Tommy's memories.

Maybe a memory of a birthday party perhaps? Maybe a party we've seen before? That's stretching a little...but hey it could happen! Will Tommy remember the Purpled party incident? Who knows! It'd be interesting to see if I'm right about that to say the least.

Also I really hope Puffy and Tommy can keep that double meaning talk going. It seemed to work really well! Or well as well as the story made it out to be.

I've realized that staying hopeful is keeping my sanity up but letting me down every time I read a new chapter LMAO

Sadly Tommy doesn't look like he's getting out of this situation any time soon. I do wonder if Tommy is revived again if his memories will reset...or is that just a first time thing?

I wanna know how that magic box works give the answers to me!! Lol

Anyways, the only way I see Tommy vaguely getting out of this is for him to remember enough that he can learn to not trust Dream...or at least close to it.

Sadly he can't use his vision to figure out where the hell he is or even scan his surroundings for an exit. But if he has a memory maybe he can try to convince others for an escape plan? Or when *if* his family comes to save him, he'll remember enough to know they're trustworthy. That's all we can ask for right?

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Guided Evolution Chapter 67 Spoilers

Just want to say right off the bat. Hope you had a good break Moosh! And hopefully your exams went well!

On another note, ge!Dream count needs to start counting his days. Count your days creepy jaw man.

With that out of the way just wanna say how proud I am of Kristen.

Like she's going through so much, yet she's able to push through it and put on a brave face. Albeit, it isn't healthy for her to bottle her emotions inside. But she kinda has to do that doesn't she?

She's got two of her kids paranoid as all hell. An actual kid who is her son's best friend, and is putting all his efforts into saving Tommy. And she's got Foolish, who's grieving with the fact that his mother has been taken by his brother, who previously has tried to kill him on multiple occasions.

Needless to say, Kristen has to stay calm. Because honestly if she's not calm then she's failing. Besides, she does have Phil to help her when she needs a shoulder to cry on. She has Phil when nights are rough. And despite trying to be brave for her kids, she has them as well.

On another note, can't believe Charlie's been revived before. I breifely thought that he might've been revived, but I brushed it off. Because it just created a new question that didn't make sense to me. Why did it take so long for Dream to use the device on Tommy?

If the revival device has been used before, it existed before, why was Dream so adamant about taking Tommy in alive?

There's a couple ideas that I have, maybe it was a one time use device at first. But that seems too impractical to create. A device that can only ressurect people once? That device is probably so expensive to make, so at that point the device would be useless. Sure it can revive somebody from death, but only one time. The cost of that would be too great.

Another one is maybe Dream didn't know how to get the device to work on Tommy without his family interfering. Which is a higher likely-hood. Which is interesting in of itself. Dream couldn't just kill Tommy without somebody interfering when he takes the body. (Kinda distributing ngl)

I think Dream knew Tommy wasn't going to stick around with his family when he passed because of the poison he injected into him. So he knew it would be an easy nab. And if Tommy didn't leave, and stayed with his family. Dream would still have been able to get Tommy.

Because despite his family's best efforts, they wouldn't be able to catch Dream. He can just do some bullshit tech thing.

Also, I don't think Dream wanted people to know that he killed the famous Spider-Man. And took his body. Then it'd be obvious to everyone that Spider-Man is somewhere else other than his family—or what people assume of his family—killing Spider-Man where everyone can see would just put a target on Automata's back.

And also who's to say that Quackity, or Charlie, or even Sapnap, wouldn't stop Dream from taking Tommy's body? If they don't know about the device, but know he's dead and they're fighting side by side. Chances are they're probably not going to let Dream take Spider-Man like that. But that's just a chance.

There's probably some wacky answer as to why he waited so long to use the device. Maybe he underestimated Tommy, maybe he just wanted to mess with Tommy a little bit cos he's insane, honestly who knows!

But I think it's because Dream didn't want people knowing Automata had Spider-Man, and he didn't want to risk being stopped when he trying to take his body. He has a time limit yknow? Forgot how long the time limit was. (Too lazy to go and check through the chapters, but I remember Dream saying something about it). But it's not that long. So he'd have to do it quickly.

If he was ever stopped then probably means no more Tommy. But that's just a theory I've got. Honestly, really do love Guided Evolution. Glad you're back Moosh! Hope you're doing well!!

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Me reading Chapter 66

Let me tell you my heart? Absolutely shattered, it's just so painful to see this happen.

It's just pure pain. Yk I predicted it would be bad but like not THIS bad.

However, gonna try to focus on the positives here!! How do we do that? Well we're gonna hope the arrogant prick (Dream) holds up to his PROMISE.

I will be so upset if he doesn't like---- I think at that point I can and will start a petition to put down ge!Dream

Anyways Dream mentioned he'd go on a tour of the office. Assuming it's the same office Kristen works at? There's a chance she could see Tommy. If she even recognizes him.

See I have so many doubts that would happen. As I assume Dream wouldn't even take the risk of Kristen being in the office or anyone for that matter in the office when he gives a "tour".

But I'm trying to stay positive okay? Give me a break. At the very least I could also assume that someone, maybe not Kristen, but perhaps Eret?

That's a chance, if it is exploring the office and Eret is working with Dream's company like I've assumed but never really considered until now.

Looking back at Chapter 57 "eye of the storm", Eret mentions she's working on a project that she cannot get into specifics about. All we know is that it entails genetic engineering and they're about to get the main part of their project. Something around those lines.

I assume that Eret wouldn't be working on the trials themselves, but analyzing them and looking into the scientific aspects and breakthroughs that have been found through the experiments? Very likely.

So, I hope that Dream is dumb enough to let some people see Tommy in his main place of office. And PRAYING it's someone who might notice it's Tommy.

Someone who can do something. For the love of all that is holy I mean please let Dream mess up. Like he wears a TV for a head in his villain gettup. He can't be that good at disguises.

And I doubt he'd be able to hide Tommy's eyes. If he is going to give Tommy a tour he'd have to take the blindfold off right? A tour means being able to see. And Tommy's eyes are like pretty noticeable?

Feel like I'm reaching for that one but like I'm just hoping Dream makes a huge slip up in letting Tommy on a tour. Please I need this for my sanity lmao

Anyways great chapter. Broke me into pieces but great chapter. No pain no gain yk?

Please tell me Tommy gets out of there soon, he doesn't deserve this abuse oh my god.

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Mentally after that chapter I am not good

I HATE that I was right about the Puffy theory that I made a while back. ge!Dream /NEG

I hate that little eye crinkling bastard with my whole heart

But instead of focusing on the negatives I'm going to TRY to figure out what makes our Tommy different from Eight(498)

Okay so assuming everything went the same for our Tommy and Eight—well not everything there is probably differences we just don't know them—Im going to talk about the differences in personality.

Because there is a starking difference in Tommy and Eight's personality. When Eight first entered the In-between after his traumatic passing he was pretty reserved. I mean he understood where he was pretty quickly, but he wasn't quick to make jokes or try to say a witty comment.

On the other hand, Tommy, when he first was seen at number 500 in the In-between was instantly cracking jokes. Like he remembered he died, albeit for a second, but he was okay with that fact. Tommy lived to lighten the mood.

In all fairness our Tommy wasn't fully like traumatized like Right was but besides the point.

That's always been our Tommy. He's never shyed away to make people smile, or save people, or do anything to make sure that everyone was safe. Even if that meant he would get severely hurt in the process. Tommy is just a good person. And I think with the added therapy that Tommy went through, he's able to believe that.

We know he dealt with struggles as he started lashing out at people and really couldn't decipher if he was a good or a bad person. But at the end of the day he was constantly reassured by Tubbo, Bad, even Techno, that he was and is a good person.

And I think the difference between Eight and Tommy is that therapy. Being able to talk about his problems as he deals with the immense pressure of being SpiderMan while also being your local teenager who needs to pass his tests.

I feel like the therapy Tommy went through is even more promising since he went through that therapy as SpiderMan. Albeit he really shouldn't have separated his civillian identity from his hero identity but beggers can't be choosers that's what he did yk. He specifically went through SpiderMan therapy with Puffy. He's hung out with her a lot more than Eight did.

So there's one difference.

Another difference I think I got is that Tommy is remembering things quicker than Eight did. In this chapter Tommy was practically accusing Dream of lying to him. He never said it outright, but he did say that he wasn't dreaming. He knew he wasn't.

Eight said in Ch. 60, 500(?), that when he started remembering Dream had told him he still needed to perfect the device. Because it's not erasing his memory every time or what Dream wants to erase of his memories. Or so that's what I assume.

I think Tommy is more inclined to fight back and figure out what's actually going on. Tommy's only been there a week and he's already questioning Dream. Eight said he was there for 6 months to a year. Which again really shouldn't trust an unreliable narrator's timeline but it seemed like Eight understood the days were way to short. So I think our best bet is saying at most 6 months, I don't think it would be a year that Tommy was trapped there.

I think the true difference in our Tommy is that he's inclined to believe what he sees rather than what he hears. He might not say it out loud but he seems to be leaning towards that. Another thing is that Tommy does listen to his sense. Puffy mentioned how Tommy somehow knew where Dream was despite not being able to see.

He might not be listening to it fully, but he trusts it enough to tell him where things are. To be fair this could 100% be everything Eight did and I'm entirely wrong. But I think it's nice to try and find a positive light for our Tommy because that last chapter was pure pain. Just want the guy to escape.

Free Tommy the shining star!! Also Puffy free em both!!

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Guided Evolution Chapter 64 brainrot lmao

I'm gonna cry ge!Tubbo doesn't deserve this oh my god

Anyways let's talk about ge!Tubbo

Honestly, Tubbo I think is getting hit the hardest. He's the only one who knows enough about SpiderMan to pretend to be him. And on top of that Tubbo knows he has to be SpiderMan to not worry the public. (Wonder if this decision will backfire on him)

On top of all that Tubbo's trusting Quackity despite knowing he's Boss because he doesn't have any other choice. Quackity is the only person who he knows enough about to have a read on him. And he needs someone who's kind of on the inside if he has any chance of finding Tommy. And also we figure out he'd been researching Quackity and what he does with the money he's gained from doing his illegal business things. And he didn't tell Tommy, which is surprising. Wonder why?

Needless to say, Tubbo has so much on his shoulders right now. It's practically up to par with Tommy's weight he had.

He has to pretend to be SpiderMan to make the public not worry. He has to figure out who's working on the Guided Evolution project. And he's also got to worry about Automata taking two of the closest people in his life.

He has so much to burden. Yet he still has to go to school and most likely lie to Ranboo and act like everything is okay. Lie to his friends.

And he's not okay. In a way since Tommy's been taken Tubbo has to take on all the same stressed Tommy had, if not more.

And to add onto that he's the youngest of the "Spidey-Crew", or the people that know about Tommy's predicament.

He literally has to carry everything SpiderMan related and it's unfair to him. But he's not going to see that. He's blinded by the same thing Tommy was. He has an obligation to fix things.

He has to make sure the public doesn't worry about SpiderMan because he's the only one who fits his physique, he's the only one who would know his quips, the only person who knows how SpiderMan acts. He has to find everything about Guided Evolution because he's the one who's been researching it behind the scenes. He's the one who knows how to hack into top secret files to find information.

He's practically being targeted at this point. Everything being taken away from him and every burden being pushed onto him at once. It's unfair.

Somebody give my boy a break ge!Tubbo doesn't deserve this.

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Literally just me analyzing things in Guided Evolution LOL

Okay, so I've gotten coherent thoughts together after reading chapter 62 and because I'm hyperfixated on this fic I need to write them out.

I really find Hannah's perspective intriguing. The problems that Hannah sees or notices she actively ignores or gives an excuse as to why the problem is occurring.

From Hannah's point of view she has no reason to believe Dream has ill intent. Why should she? He's never mistreated her, and from her knowledge Theseus (Tommy) is sick and she's helping him while actively doing research to help others. And on another note Theseus signed those papers. He agreed to the experiments to help him. Even if he was not aware of what he was signing Hannah doesn't know that. She thinks he signed that paper willingly.

Hannah has no reason to believe anything. Even if things seem suspicious. It's similar to the "out of sight, out of mind" ideology. Hannah hasn't fully seen Dream do anything particularly bad when she's been working for him, so the idea that Theseus is being mistreated is out of her mindset. Because it wouldn't make sense to her from what she's seen of Dream.

I think a lot of people relate to Hannah's mindset throughout the series. One of those characters being Ranboo. Ranboo was not fond of Spider-Man and knew nothing of his predicament. He didn't trust Spider-Man and had no reason to. Whatever Spider-Man's struggles or challenges he faced Ranboo didn't know about them. And from what he saw through the news is just somebody playing hero.

Later on in the Ranboo's story though he meets Spider-Man, finds out what he does. That he's the same age as him, Ranboo figures out he's just trying to do good and that he never wanted villains to happen. That Spider-Man just wanted to lower crime rates and make people feel safe. And that's when Ranboo started supporting Spider-Man because he was aware of his motivations and problems.

The issues were presented in front of him, and with that he felt empathetic towards Spider-Man's daily challenges.

We also see it in Techno as well, when Techno sees Tommy fight as Spider-Man for the first time. And then becomes more worried after that for Tommy's well being. Not only was that fight one of the most brutal Tommy's been in, it was also eye-opening for Techno. That he can't always save Tommy and there is always an underlying chance of Tommy not coming back after a battle.

Techno wanted to ignore how Tommy's injuries happened and the story behind him. There is no reason for him to know how something happened, only the idea that he has to clean and heal it. Techno soon realizes after that battle that knowing what happens in those fights can help his brother and becomes aware of how extremely traumatizing the fights must be for Tommy.

When people are not introduced to an idea they tend to ignore it. Which is precisely what Hannah is doing. Don't think about "what ifs" focus on what is in front of them and what they've been told. It's what Ranboo did, what Techno has done. And so many other characters within the series as doing as well.

They aren't aware of an idea, and despite noticing signs, or becoming increasingly worried about the actions they see...They ignore it because it's not their business. And if someone doesn't want to tell them about a problem or they can't see the problem clear as day then what's the point on dwelling on the possibility?

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Okay so chapter 62 no biggie yk!

NO HUGE BIGGIE IM DISTRAUGHT

This is basically just me dumping my thoughts on the recent chapter LMAO

okay so like I'm pretty sure now my theory about Puffy being taken and forced to play "family" is right and for that I am upset and not okay. But also like a theory I have over this being right?? Maybe?? Let's go??? Lol

ALSO HANNAH??

Like her stating "oh it's okay" and "Dream cares"NO HE DOESN'T HANNAH, HE DOESNT CARE, HANNAH PLEASE

every bone in my body makes me want to fight ge!Dream and if I'm ever given the chance I can and will drop kick him.

I am not okay after that last chapter LMAO

Also something else I want to talk about is what in the world does that spider do?? Wait...is it possible that Dream made multiple spiders with different sets of powers and is planning to inject them all into Tommy?

I wonder if those chemicals or whatever was injected into Tommy that Tommy's metabolism just kept flushing out quickly was like Charlie's? Because remember Charlie's symbiote and power was injected into him. So I wonder if Dream was trying to do the same to Tommy but had the spider if things didn't go according to plan.

ge!Dream you are my enemy and I hate you with my whole heart

Also it actually gives me hope because Tommy seems like he's listening to his sense. Or well he isn't trying to ignore the sense and the growing feeling in the back of his head that something is wrong. I wonder if that will be his saving grace.

Also ge!Dream don't you lay a hand on Tommy or I'll throw hands with you

This chapter is the main reason for my emotional turmoil /hj lol

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At this point this is just Guided Evolution fan account LMAO

But seriously the most recent chapter was so phenomenal and so SO intriguing!

From my understanding of The Catalyst and The Atrocity is that the Atrocity can pick just about anyone in the universe as a host while The Catalyst can only pick Tommy, or well, the only soul compatible which so happens to be Tommy's soul.

I feel like my brain is equivalent to one of those cork boards with the different colored strings and small pieces of information attached to it when it comes to figuring out The Atrocity and The Catalyst. But I now know they're not people they're cosmic beings, which is really interesting. The Atrocity and The Catalyst are truly an interesting concept. Can't wait to see the development of that.

Okay! But let's talk about Eight's revelation about what happened to him when he was alive (I prefer calling 498, Eight, because I feel like it suits him more)

Eight explains that he doesn't remember things. Like when he came back his memory was gone. So I'm assuming when our Tommy is revived his memory will be wiped. (Which is completely messed up btw Dream). And I assume our Tommy is revived because the only way to leave the In Between is if you come back to life. As Karl explains. So theoretically if our Tommy can't remember anything then we're all doomed. Because then he won't remember his powers, nor his family, nor who he is. All in all that's just a distaster and I don't like it.

Eight also explains that if "Mum is disobedient" then it equals punishment. Which makes me wonder if that relates to Kristen? Maybe Puffy? Because Eight explains how the rules don't make sense.

If it's Kristen then he wouldn't remember Kristen being his mom right? Because his memory is wiped, or well that's what I assume from what Eight has explained. And if Kristen is working with Dream's company and she's trying to figure out where her son is. Then if she connects the dots and pushes too far then that means Tommy has a bad time. So if Dream says blame your mom for a punishment it wouldn't make sense cos like he doesn't remember her.

If it's Puffy then I assume it can be related to the "let's play family" and forces everyone to be one big happy family. And if Puffy knows who Tommy is and tries to help him, or even just tries to escape, or do anything. Then Dream just goes "well you've just doomed Tommy lol." Which also wouldn't make sense to Tommy because he literally didn't do anything.

(Which is disturbing and I hope that is not the case. Actually I hope neither of my theories of who "mum" is are even somewhat accurate cos I'll cry LMAO. But I'll also get dopamine rush if I'm somewhat accurate. So--)

And the idea that "The doctors" make the rules change. I'm so curious as to how that works.

Also I wonder if The Sense could be related to The Catalyst talking to Tommy. Because any time Tommy tries to think of The Sense as like just in his head it gets kinda ticked off. I could be 100% off on that just food for thought.

I adore this fic like I think it's in my top 3 fanfics of all time that I've read and I've read a LOT of them. And that's not just including mcyt fanfics lol. Moosh if you're reading this you're literally so talented with writing. Amazing work I think about this story on a daily basis and I love it with my whole heart.

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Okay so spoilers for recent chapter of Guided Evolution

Okay first off I guess I was wrong or right? No idea anymore, but as of my last post I assumed Dream didn't know Tommy was Spiderman. I GUESS HE DID?? HOW LONG HAS HE KNOWN? IDK

Okay but Sapnap seemed upset for what Dream did?? What changed??? I remember in another chapter Sapnap was perfectly fine with ending Spiderman before. I wonder what might have caused him to start caring about his life?

Like it's also mentioned he's struggling against Automata's grasp when they're leaving. Why would he struggle? Why does Sapnap all of the sudden care if Tommy lives or not? He was literally fighting him before, so why is Sapnap concerned.

Also I feel so so so bad for Karl right now because that means he failed again. And so I'm REALLY hoping that's not the case cos I feel so bad he's not been able to save Tommy 499 times I don't want ours to be number 500 I'll cry

Okay onto my theories. I don't think Tommy's gone. Might just be grief but who cares! It really doesn't add up that Dream would want his body if he's dead right? If Tommy is gone then how's he gonna be able to do his little experiments correctly.

I'm assuming Dream has either figured out a way to cheat death OR he's just straight up bluffed and tricked everyone into thinking Tommy is going to die.

On top of that I always did find it odd that despite Dream being so adamant on taking Spiderman in alive and then all of the sudden decides "Yeah, don't really care about that now. Drop a building on him." That doesn't add up with anything, and I'm assuming Dream had the intent for him to pass. The police were literally informed not to let the ambulance through.

So what in the world changed to where he's okay with taking in Spiderman dead? He has to have a way to make him come back right? This might just be me begging for Tommy to come back but I've got hopes okay cos my reasoning makes sense.

Anyways love this story you're literally so talented Moosh, and I did indeed cry 5 different times while reading this chapter LMAO

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Alright I absolutely adore this fic. It's just so so so so so amazing!!! So much so that I literally made a Tumblr to follow updates + see what others have to say about it. I finished it in like 3 days and I literally jump with joy every time it updates.

That being said I'm going to dump all of the theories I have so far LMAO

Okay first off...At first I assumed Dream (Automata) knew Tommy was Spiderman. But as of Chapter 57 it seems like that's not the case.

So I went back to Chapter 25 (The In-between chapter)

And specifically paid attention to "The Atrocity" and "The Catalyst", now from assumption I assume "The Catalyst" is Tommy and "The Atrocity" is Dream.

It's interesting to see "The Keeper" aka Karl, explain his problems with preventing? Something from happening in the timelines. I assume it has to be preventing something because Tommy is called "The Catalyst" which means he's the cause of an event, and I can only assume it's because of his passing that that event happens. (Could be wrong though who knows!)

This chapter also states that "The Atrocity" will stop at nothing to enact his "revenge" on "The Catalyst", which is something I looked over before. If my theory is correct about who "The Atrocity" and who "The Catalyst" is then...

What revenge arc does Dream need on Tommy? Why is he obsessed with him, is there something that we're not seeing. Even when Karl mentions Dream seeking help he ends up just yk ending Tommy at 8

Which makes no sense because Tommy couldn't have gotten the power yet, so his demise isn't based on if he's Spider-Man or not it's something else.

I've got no follows on what Dream's plans are or why he's a constant for Tommy's demise practically every time. It's just a thing I've been thinking about for a while.

I also assume Dream is subject 1. Reasons being he's always worn the mask and subject 1 is a jawless LOSER (full offense for that one cos I'm pretty sure it's Dream).

In chapter 23 (Detrimental Experiments) we learn the fate of subject 1. And there's an journal entry by who I assume to be Subject 1 because it's talking in first person. "She was right. I shouldn't have tried to fix it myself." First off if it's Dream then I'm assuming the "she" is Puffy. But what did Dream need to fix that warrants the need for super strength, enhanced senses, and the need to heal faster? And the fact that he's aware he's messed up and he shouldn't have done it YET STILL says he has to do everything in his power to fix his mistake

Like bestie you caused that to happen?? I don't think doing more things like this will fix it omg

I have so many questions regarding Dream like just what's his goal??? But I guess that's the whole plot of the story isn't it?

This story makes me so happy. I literally could go on and on about Tommy's character and how it's changed (I honestly probably will in another post)

Or how Techno's changed because of this ordeal, how Tubbo and Ranboo have changed. And THEN how that fits into Tommy changing even more.

This fic makes me think so much and I absolutely adore it. You're literally so talented.

Brain go brrr at this fic that's the dump for today, expect this account to be just putting my thoughts out about this fic lol