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[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

Is it Mary Sue to have a ninja that moved from their village to escape war and doesn't trust medic ninjas as they couldn't save her premature newborn brother (she was a child when both happened)

not necessarily. that sounds interesting to me. take a look at her other personality traits and her appearance, as well as how she interacts with others.

-J

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

Can you link me to the critique OC blog? When I click on it in mobile it just shows a blank page. Once I get my page formatted correctly - I'd like to be critiqued as I feel parts of Amaya tend to fall under a Sue and I'd like advice on how to change them. Please and Thank You

http://naruto-oc-critiques.tumblr.com/

-J

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

[Same Anon] Sorry, I don't seem to see it. Assuming the sidebar is where all the other blogs and a couple of the rules are posted, there's nothing under that but like a quarter of an inch of space.

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

Is there any way that you could install a 'next' and 'previous/past' button on your blog? It would probably be for the best, or do you already have one and I just can't see it?

theres little page numbers underneath the sidebar, love!

-J

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

Character name: Kaleinie Ali Rodohauna Gender: Female Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Light Blue Age: 12 Show: Naruto Theme Song: "Sexy Vampire" Race: Ninja (Human) Relations: Cousin to Kakashi, dating Chi Weapon(s): Kunai and Shreikan and special powers she's unaware of Weapon Description: Standard kunai and shreikan... special powers include: healing and light related power Personality:Sweet, a bit shy, and innocent Side: Good Crush(es): Unknown (Chi) Biography:She grew up with her cousin as a guardian due to her parents' death and she hid behind him often. She met Chi when she was 6. He was carefully perching on the roof(which is where she goes when she can't sleep) When she went up to the roof she saw him and asked him who he was and they met there every night and talked. Over time she grew a bit less timid. She and Chi kept their relationship secret because she didn't want him to get hurt.

sn: art is stolen btw......

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

(note...the artist / author is not 5...she is 17.....)(chi is the oc dating kaleinie...)

Character name: Chi LunaSange Gender: Male Hair Color: Gray Eye Color: Red Age: 14 (1400) Show: Naruto/Diabolik Lovers Theme Song: "Guardian Angel" by Red Jumpsuit Apparatus Race: Vampire Relations: Courting Kaleinie, cousin to the 6 Vampire Brothers* Weapon(s): Fangs, poison, dagger Weapon Description: The poison is black and poisonous, the dagger is gem encrusted Personality: Calm, Trustworthy, Loyal, and Protective Side: Good Crush(es): Kaleinie Biography: He grew up in a rich household but liked to spend his time helping the poor. One day when he was walking home he was pinned to a wall and turned into a vampire. Since then he has lived with his cousins and wandered. When he was in the Leaf Village he stopped to take a rest on Kaleinie's roof he did not want to wake anyone so he was very quiet. When the girl came out he was afraid that she would fear him but when she wouldn't go even when he warned her and she said "If you were really going to hurt me you wouldn't be warning me". Then they got to know each other and he said they shouldn't be together because he wanted what's best for her but she still wanted to be together so... they were.

(i have done everything i could to keep their id secret......it just...they forced these into a pokemon crossover.......)

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

They didn't include much of a bio for this one, other than what was on the picture, but her blue eyes are a dojutsu that gives her night vision like a cat and the red eyes are because the "12 Tailed Pheonix,: Nagori".  She also was in the Akatsuki and left.

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

Can you guys PLEASE remove my art/OCs from here? Also why the hell do you guys think my OCs are sues when I havent even written a thing about them yet????? is it because they look too much like their parents? (Hypocritical tho cuz fucking boruto and himawari do too, I mean hima just looks like a female naruto wearing a hinata wig and boruto looks like a sasunaru child sometimes) PLEASE remove my narusaku ocs from this blog im tired of asking jerks =_= you have absolutely no right to do this

i said i’d do it when i got back on my computer and i’m still holding up to that. i haven’t been able to due to extreme file backups in prep for a full reformat. it takes a lot of time. chill. if you need to talk to me directly, come off anon or message me. other wise please stop sending me asks. also, please refer to our policy of being polite before proceeding. it's in the sidebar.

-J

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

oh man I'm glad this post is still alive

i literally haven't been at my computer today, i'll have it taken down when i can

-J

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

Can you guys please take down this post ? /post/149036423641 I don't want my OC on this blog.

i removed it. if there’s any more you want taken down, please include the post number.

-J

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

Okay so there been some shit going on in one of my groups- can you tell me where you found /post/117094756219/ ?

i’m not sure, that was posted over a year ago.

- sage

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

(Sorry for the messy edit. Note: This author/creator takes other artists' pictures and edits over them without giving the artists credit, so that isn't really cool.)

Konichiwa, my name is Calienia Moonsilver. I come from the land of color in the hidden mystery. It's a land hidden from others so it's not on any map. My village was formed of hidden leaf villagers that broke away when the hidden leaf was first founded. My country believes in peace and I do as well. I have a kekkei genkai known as the dark eye. I can't say it competes with the byakugan, sharingan, or rinnegan but it's powerful enough. I also bare the celestial heart which is a blessing and a curse. I had left my village once before and was experimented on by Orochimaru. If you wish to know more about me you can read my stories. Starting here. (Gaara Romance story which is removed as it is traceable to the author). Relationship status: Gaara Other things about me: I love to sing and dance My favorite food is dango My favorite colors are purple, blue, and pink Name pronounced: (Suh*Lane*E*Uh) DOB: June 14th (Gemini) Rank: Jounin Ninja Registration: 34675303 Clan: Moonsilver Blood Type: O Nicknames: Cali-Chan (カリ-チャンネル) The Tides of the Mystery (謎の潮 ) Team: Team Mist Academy Grade Age: 7 Chunin Promotion: 12 Jounin Promotion: 14 329 D-rank 107 C-rank 109 B-rank 59 A-rank 189 S-rank Location: Either in the Hidden Sand Village or the Akatsuki base (member)

Personality: Kind, friendly, quiet, shy-ish, cocky in battle, stubborn, can be serious, random and silly at times, loving, caring. Looks: Long deep cherry red hair that goes in a braid at the shoulders and has a knife at the end. Ocean blue eyes, moonlit pale skin, 5'4.

My family: Mynn mother Hisoka father Ankara sister

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

Your blog is officially my new favourite thing. It honestly cheers me up.

thanks!!- Sage

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

General   Name: Yoshimi "Sango" Aya   Age: 12 Species:Human   Gender: Female  Sexual Orientation: Bisexual  Blood Type: B  Birthday: 9/22   Personality: Curious to a fault, playful, innocent  Good Trait(s): Always willing to learn new things, empathetic    Bad Trait(s): Worries too much, too sarcastic, prideful, gets jealous easy, competitive by nature  Like(s): Most animals, dumplings, reading  Dislike(s): deer, cold weather, leeks  Hobby(ies): reading and dancing  Fear(s): Deer, fire  Strength(s):  Able to relate to people on a personal level, genjutsu  Weakness(es): Anything dealing with fire, Kinoe/Tenzou History:   Clan Info  Clan Name:Yoshimi   Symbol: ?  History: There isn't much to know about the klan since most of them died. After the war, she married Tenzou and had 4 kids  Specialty: Genjutsu   Jutsus/Techniques:  Kekkei Genkai: N/A  Status: Alive Clan Appearance  -Skin Tone: Dark   -Markings: freckles in random places  -Hair color(s): Brown   -Eye color(s): Differs from red to brown  Looks and Appearance  Body Type/Looks: Voluptious     Height: Varies from 91cm as a kid to 160cm as an adult  Weight:  46.4 kg Makeup/Facepaint: none  Hairstyle(s): Brown fro throughout main story, flattened at top with poof at the bottom after marriage         Accessories: Wraps on her left arm at times Scent: hibiscus and pine Scars or Tattoos: Big scar on right arm from fire  Jewelry and/or Piercings: Ears   Relationships  Parent(s): Dead  Sibling(s): Yoshimi Yuu  Relative(s): Husband- Tenzou, Children- Yoshimi Jin, Yoshimi Yuudai, Yoshimi Kenji and Yoshimi Eiji.  Best Friend(s): "Aki"  Mitrashi Anko, Kinoe/Tenzou/Yamato Friend(s): Hatake Kakashi, Yuhi Kurenai,   Sensei(s): Danzo  Student(s):Sui  Crush(es)/Spouse/Bf/Gf: Crush- Kinoe  Rival(s): Kinoe/Tenzou Enemy(ies): Kinoe/Tenzou (it's a love hate relationship through her life) Pet(s): Her moths, Has a random cat after the war Favorites/Least Favorites  Food(s): Dumplings/ Anything spicy   Drink(s): Most pop/ tea   Color(s): Purple/ pink   Season(s): Fall/ summer   Time of Day: Twilight  Weather: clear- nothing above 70 degrees/ anything below 70 degrees  Flower: Hibiscus  Animal: Moths  Ninja Information  Birth Village: ?  Current Village: Konoha  Academy Graduation Age: N/A   Chūnin Promotion Age: N/A  Rank: ANBU  Ninja Status: [Villager or Missing nin?] Villager (refugee)  Are you in the Akatsuki?: No  Bijuu [Tailed Beast]?: She wishes because she likes animals, but no.  Teammates:  She usually gets solo missions Sensei: Danzo   Nindo:    Chakra Element: Water, ground, Lightening Weapon(s): Kunai, shuriken, tanto, daggers at times  Jutsu's  Water, ground and lightening jutsu  She also controls moths, but I don't think that's a jutsu really. Tries her hand at Mokuton but, of course, can't get close. She feels left out sometimes since her children inherited the trait NINJA STATS  [*Remember not to Overpower your OC or they will be considered mary-sue*]  1 - 5: Horrible  6 - 8: Below average  9 - 10: Average  11 - 13: Above average  14 - 16: Talented  17 - 18: Gifted [This is Sannin level]  Strength in Jutsu  Ninjutsu [ninja techniques]: 10  Genjutsu [illusion techniques]: 15   Taijutsu [martial arts techniques]: 12  Kekkei Genkai [bloodline traits]: N/A   Doujutsu [eye techniques]:N/A   Kinjutsu [forbidden techniques]: N/A   Fuuinjutsu [sealing techniques]: 10  Strength in Missions  Intelligence: 12  Wisdom [It comes with age;Jiraiya would be at least 17]: 6  Strength [Measure of your body's muscles;Kisame would be 17-18]: 12  Agility [How well you can move, dodge, etc.]: 16  Dexterity [How well you can aim/form seals]: 15  Stamina [Chakra amount;Kisame is a 18]: 14  Constitution [How well you can take a hit;Would you be a 1 hit K.O?]: 11   Charisma [How social you are;Naruto is a 18]: 9  Comeliness [Your attractiveness, it has to fit with your looks above]: 10  Chakra Control [Important for medical ninja; Tsunade is a 18]: 16  Cooperation [How well you work with other people/comrades]: 3

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

I have a question for you. ^^ I'm working on my Uchiha OC and I wanted to give her the Mangekyo Sharingan, but she doesn't awaken it until the age of 21. Would that be all right?

Other than “how is she not dead because massacre,” you seem fine. Just remember she’s gotta kill her best friend/closest loved one.

-Tema

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now I feel stupid cuz sometimes the theme is blue/purple then it goes back to yellow/orange. It might just be my computer but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ looks nice either way

It shouldn’t be blue/purple but that’s not your fault. You’re not stupid. It could be your monitor or the code. IDK.

-Tema

[fuckyeahterriblenarutoocs]

Hi. My friend doesn't have tumblr, and don't have an opportunity to get one at the moment, but she would like to get this post taken down, so she asked me if I could pass that message on to you? /post/148889245160/name-hiroko-kyougoku-nicknames-hiro-snow

Diddly-done~

-Tema