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FINAL ANIMATION !!!

Same as last iteration, but now when “people in crisis” drops on “a system in crisis” they fall through.

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FINAL PITCHDECK

RAHHHHHHHHHHHH

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FINAL POSTERS

I made sure the colours were vibrant and added even more halftone to emphasise the distressed feeling. Red was used to evoke emotion, with alarming, dangerous connotations. Chaos is enforced by the haphazard orientation of elements, and brokenness with the main type being skimmed and sliced into shards. The boxes are a prominent motif, appealing to the notion of sorting things into boxes / organising them. I thought this was also reminiscent of error boxes and malfunctions with technology which was a visual cue for the audience’s understanding, but also contrasted nicely with the humanity of the message. They’re quite harsh, cut and dry shapes; no nonsense. «Sort it out. »

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ON THE WALL !!

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pitch deck v2 :0

+ dev pages + reflective statement

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added more chaos 😈

The “by” box now flickers and disappears, sending the text resting on it flying. Furthermore, this is a catalyst to the “how”, “can” and “in” boxes flickering as they come in contact with the flying text. This will help lead into the second poster animation.

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HAVE TO FIX THE JITTER IT SLIDES WEIRD

more efficient layers + naming my squares so i can identify them - i never want to name another layer again (i will if i must)

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1-on-1 FEEDBACK

fix composition on poster 2 - so close but not there yet - triangular layout with elements getting larger/closer to viewer as we follow along

don't have to make poster 2 much quieter than poster 1

if I make halftone on poster 1 more prominent, may not need outline !

manually added shake to text, but can use jitter effect

TOO MANY LAYERS

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you'll have to pry the halftone out of my hands bc i love using it so much

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it's more vibrant on indesign - some colours are lil muddy here ew can touch up so they're brighter anyway

it's more vibrant on indesign - some colours are lil muddy here ew can touch up so they're brighter anyway

let's try put into illustrator shall we

a little better

still dull but it's this website

I like the green but I don't love the green. I think it has great visual impact and it's pretty clean. It helps to brings about connotations to money and how our funds should be properly managed as to provide sufficient (mental) healthcare for kiwis. Kind of four square adjacent though.. And think the red colour scheme would be effective too, especially on some nice paper. Seems a bit corporate ?

visual pun with the "out" breaking down and veering away but mayb not worth sacrificing a legible statement.

warm red is giving lego aw man

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refinement ? red for urgency !

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just a little more ideation

texture bitmap within the letters

repetition of elements

are outlines needed ?

how can designs across diptych flow together ?

EASING DEMO - some silly squares

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kerning game, typographic crafting, and easing (AE)

we 8

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how to execute idea ? - precariousness, imbalance

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Notes from Peer + Formative Feedback + 1-1

cut up text + halftone makes the pair look cohesive

stretched text should be removed or exaggerated

cut up text in the second poster is working well - more cut up text in first poster

more texture in second poster to connect to the first poster

check margins

more colour exploration

my own critiques:

yeah check margins + aligning elements

explore more options outside of default typefaces ?

i like colour and i like illustration so let's look at that more.

1-1 feedback

we have the problem, but what's the solution ? could include a call to action - i.e "sort it out", "manage our funds", "do something about it"

research on how to address the broken/under-pressure (mental) health system

experiment with going back to solid type - half-tone may be unneeded.

more visual rest for the second poster ?

emphasis on "CRISIS"

better cropping ?

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✧˖°. a r t i s t m o d e l s ✧˖°.

A lot of super cool effects here and effective use of planes/panels/lines. At times, the visuals look 3D, successfully suggesting they exist in beyond the screen - even with the pixel visuals.