Body editing has two modes:
"Re-structure this paragraph. Fiddle with that adjective. Cut the adverb and make the verb punicher. Chapter done! Damn, officially two-thirds of the way through! I'm on a roll!"
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"'Blah drags the air from her lungs.' Mmm. How bout, 'Blah blah, the air dragged from her lungs.' '...was dragged...'? '...is dragged...'? 'Blank, DRAGGING the air from her lungs'? '...drug..'? Wait, how about, 'Blah DRAGS the air from her lungs'? Mmm...how bout--" for 34 hours straight.
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There was a moment this year where I felt completely broken, when I regretted a choice that changed my life. And then you forced your way into my home, wrapped your arms around me, and you said “I’m proud of you”. Didn’t make me feel any better at the time, but… it was something to hold onto. I am so proud of you.
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♪ Danvers sisters ♪
♪ Yes, we can ♪
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