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Learning aims: did I achieve them?
My learnings aims + if I achieved them:
1. Focus on something totally different then writing fiction. How? I’m going to write/do the graduation interviews for the website.
Achieved! I tried something else besides the fiction stories: I focused on writing the interviews for the website. I really loved to do the interviews and I noticed that I’m good at it, especially continuing to ask questions to dive deeper into the subject/ conversation.
2. Be more critical on the work of my teammates, not only give compliments, but take a more critical look on their work. & set deadlines for my production team, so everyone knows when something will be done and what’s going on.
Achieved! Every time someone asked for feedback I would always take a look at it. I gave tips what would work better or add some extra ideas. I set deadlines for my online productions. Everyone knew what was going on and everything was delivered on time.
3. Learning more about writing fiction and use it when writing the ‘bts’ story for the website.
Achieved! I looked for a lot of small stories online and how they were build up, but also how to write from someone’s perspective and how to build the tention. All these tips and ticks I took with me when writing the stories.
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360 forms for final assessment + conclusion
Milembe, Lisa, Shannon, Karenita & Sia filled in my 360form.
Conclusion all forms: (similarities)
positive:
Delivers in time
Good team player: puts the biggest problems into perspective, always positive, good advisor
focus on making your work the best possible
dedicated with your productions
communicates clearly, direct & quickly
come up with easy solutions
Points to improve:
You don’t always show the things you can do
Be more involved in making important decisions
Go look for your own limits
Try more different styles in writing like a ‘report’ for example
speak up more in bigger groups
Keep experimenting





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Rewriting dutch press release
Carlijn wrote the English pressrelease but she had some trouble translating it to dutch in the same ‘funny’ ‘clear’ language, so I helped her with that.
How we made it better: made sentences shorter, removed unnecessary information, use of more ‘funny/daring’ words.
THE FINAL PRESS RELEASE:



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Launch: Tell sell booth

We are going to make a ‘counter’ where everyone can buy the magazine.

The posters we made are very ‘pulling you in’, because of the quotes and the 15,01 -> 15,00.

This is how it’s going to look like. Maaike her boyfriend is going to make the frame. We are going to glue the posters on carton.
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BTS ONLINE: on the website
I’m very happy how the stories turned out!
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BTS ONLINE: images
images for PART 1:
Images by Chiara
-> Image 1: In the story I’m talking about a wall full of paintings of man with bearded faces. They are all wearing the same grey scarf.
-> Image 2: In the story Camilla opens the castle, when she opens it bats are flying out the door.
-> Image 3: Greta aka the red scarf is afraid of bats.
images for PART 2:
For part 2 we decided too work with the images we had but then change the little details.
-> Image 1: In the story the grey scarf got replaced by the red scarf on the painting.
-> Image 2: When Georgia is walking on top of the mountain she is hearing some whispers, the whispering is from the red scarf.
-> Image 2: The red scarf gets attacked by the grey scarf.
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BTS ONLINE: new version feedback
I made the story more exciting and made the story line a bit better than the first version.
Bregje added her feedback in the document and also gave an important tip:
‘ Ik heb alle comments in je document gezet. Sommige stukken kunnen wat ingekort en dan kun je op andere plekken uitbreiden. Wat ik mis, is het karakter van de sjaals. Dat zijn de hoofdrolspelers in je verhaal, die mag je wel iets meer uitlichten. Bewegen ze langzaam of snel? Hoe voelen ze zich? Probeer ze als op sommige plekken wat meer menselijke karaktereigenschappen toe te dichten, dan gaan ze meer ‘leven’ voor de lezer. ‘
MY CONCLUSION: -> So a thing I need to add, which I definitely agree on is: give the scarves more character and let them come to life even more.




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Social: graduation post
For the interviews I did, social wanted to make an Instagram post. I took 2 quotes out of the two interviews, which will pull the reader in.
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Graduation: Final interview Rachelle + website




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Graduation: Final interview Marijn + website
My interview is up on the website!! It turned out really nice with the ‘gif’ polaroids.
THE FINAL TEXT (proofread)




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Social: Teaser instagram TEXT
I came up with a few ‘fake’ reviews for the teaser
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