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#as well as double checking to make sure there arent any OTHER glaring mistakes
orcelito · 8 months
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OKAY i fixed the most glaring canon inconsistency for ITNL that i discovered last night
which is. the fact that i fully thought the final battle happened in December. but turns out it happened in Octovern!
idr if they mentioned it outright that they were heading there, but they mentioned "humanity's last stand" in December so. i just. fully thought that's where everything happened. but then Meryl mentions Octovern at the end & i double checked and. yea it sure says Octovern on the wiki lmfao.
i'll have to read thru it more carefully (i wasn't exactly reading too closely for details yesterday) to figure out Exactly what the fuck is going on with the locations here. but for now, every reference to the final battle in ITNL has been changed to Octovern
sigh.
#speculation nation#itnl shit#the Sigh is bc it is so very exhausting to be writing for a thing that is so flippant about details#so you misread One Thing and suddenly you have a glaring inconsistency in ur writing that's evident in the very first paragraph#like i know vash traveled from the orphanage to the final battle. but i THOUGHT that was bc the orphanage was very outside of december#like in the 98 anime it mentions the orphanage being 300 iles from december. so i thought that was true for the manga as well#but wolfwood does enter some city gates in order to access the orphanage... i guess it'd make sense for it to be closer to december#and they had to travel a while between the orphanage and the final battle site. which was. apparently! octovern.#Oh Well........... at least it's fixed now...............#and it's marginally less embarrassing of a mistake as accidentally putting 'arc' instead of 'ark' for the Full Fic#bc the december vs octovern thing was me missing a small detail in a whole big Thing#but the 'arc' was just me being bad at spelling sldkjfsldkjf#Oh Well this is why it's good to revisit old chapters every so often#lets me review things and keep things as consistent as possible.#both between canon and within my work itself.#my biggest goal in ITNL edits is going to be internal consistency.#as well as double checking to make sure there arent any OTHER glaring mistakes#once i finally finish. ITNL will be born anew. and i will be more than ready to tackle what comes next.#hope u guys dont mind being patient. & i hope my effort will make ITNL 15 worth the wait.
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onlyjihoons · 6 years
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figureskater!jihoon
a/n: based off this picture!
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you and jihoon had this unspoken rivalry that till this day, no one knows why
except your coach and jihoon
essentially, you and jihoon trained under the same coach when the two of you were younger
one day your coach praised you for nailing a camel spin and jihoon was jealous
not because he didnt have the ability to do so, but your coach rarely compliments the both of you
so from then on he started to lowkey hate you bc you were the "first" skater to break the "no compliment" facąde of your coach
and then it just got worse when the both of you started to enter competitions
the both of you do top your catergories and your coach praised the both of you nonetheless
but jihoon cant seem to let the hatred go,, despite being older than you
your coach found it funny how jihoon couldnt let his childhood jealousy go after so many years of training together
like,,, youve matured in your looks but not your jealousy??
you on the other hand had no idea why jihoon hated you sm
so you just hated him back LOL
during training, the both of you would be uber competetive
oh jihoon did a double axel? you would do a triple axel and double toe combination
oh you did a biellman spin?? jihoon would do a biellman spin and then an I spin right after
thank you wikipedia and yuzuru hanyu
its just hella competetive between the both of you its just so funny
your fellow best friend, also figure skater!daehwi would lowkey be worried for you
bc all those spins and jumps?? like wont you fall or smth
you just huffed, "yah, lee daehwi, are you underestimating me rn??"
"no, im just afraid that you will get hurt:(("
on the other hand, fellow figure skater!guanlin tries to salvage a friendship
"but hyung, she did nothing wrong to--"
"shut up guanlin you know no shit"
you do have friends you meet outside of korea during competitions
like,, wakaba higuchi(yall i love her ksndksksm)
and they always tease you about jihoon
but you always shake your head and threaten to loosen the laces in their skates if they uttered the word "Jihoon" one more time
during competition season it was always common for fellow skaters to evaluate between themselves
and this time, ice prince baejin was your mentor
(also do check out iris' figure skater!baejin)
he was like the yuzuru hanyu of your team
there was this certain element in your routine which was pretty difficult to nail
which is a triple axel and a triple loop
you asked your coach to cut it down to a double loop instead but he told you he had faith in you so you felt bad and just tried to nail it from scratch
and of course, baejin was worried but neither was he in any position to change your routine
so he had to help you and guide you through
he was patient in every step and made sure your landing does not compromise on your ankle
meanwhile, as jihoon watched the both of you interact he cant help but to feel a certain feeling bubbling at the put of his stomach
was it jealousy? was it anger?
he could only watch afar when baejin pulled you up from your fall as the both of you exchanged giggles
so jihoon just skated around the rink, trying to show off a few jumps and spins as perfect as possible
baejin saw it, and smirked, "why dont your coach get Jihoon-hyung to help you? hes the best at jumps though,"
you could only smile sheepishly, "we arent really close enough to do that"
"ah..." it all clicked in baejin's head already, "not close enough--ow!"
"youre supposed to coach me, not play cupid."
on the competition day, as you practiced the dreaded combination on flat ground, you did exactly as what baejin told you to do and your coach was proud
until... you went on ice
you were not the type to make any mistakes on ice, but the combination failed you as you landed quite roughly and fell
you heard multiple gasps from the audience and could already visualise yourself getting cut out of the team
nonetheless, you continued on and finished the routine nicely
as you exited the rink, tears were already forming when your coach tried to comfort you, and you quickly shrugged on your jacket
in the end, you were placed as a runner up, which wasnt bad but not up to your expectations
when you walked back to the locker room, you walked past jihoon and his friends who were seemingly laughing about something
"yah, did you see her fall? it was tragic" you heard one of his friends snicker
"i know right, shes gonna get cut off."
you glared at jihoon, whilst he was still smiling at their joke
and that made you hate jihoon even more
having the audacity to hate you for no reason and now laughing at your fall? he was being such a blatant bitch about it and wasnt even sorry
you stormed off, exiting the gymnasium to get some fresh air
then settling on a park bench and sighing into your slouch
your brain took over the rest of your feelings as your tears stained your face again, makeup long erased from your previous tears
just then, you felt a presence beside you and looked up, it was jihoon, carrying a plastic bag
your rolled your eyes as you got ready to stand up, an arm pulling you back into your seat
"what? are you gonna laugh at me more for my fall? mr perfect jumps?" you sniffed
"you idiot," jihoon shook his head as he took out a bandage and some dettol,"you dont even notice that youre bleeding"
you looked at your left shin, and heck, it was, blood cascading down your legs and staining your white nikes
"give me your leg," jihoon patted his tigh as he shrugged off his jacket and placed it on your tighs
you obediently complied, as jihoon gently dressed your wound and occasionally asking you if the dettol was stinging
you were genuinely touched that jihoon would actually care for you though, since he has been hating you for so long
after he bandaged your wound, he cleared his throat awkwardly,
"if you want me to i can beat up those bastards for you, they got a scolding from me already--"
you were surprised that jihoon actually wasnt laughing with them, as you giggled
"its fine, they wont even be able to make it to the team anyways"
jihoon raised his eyebrows, as he cleared his throat again, "do you want to watch my routine later? coach choi said that it was my personal best"
you scoffed as you rolled your eyes, he was using your coach to make you jealous
"yeah sure, i'll see if coach choi's right"
"then i'll--"
just then, jihoon's phone rang, and he pulled his phone away from his ear as soon as he picked it up
"i'm sorry, i gotta go now"
before you could return jihoon his jacket, he disappeared into the gymnasium already
you begrudgingly sat beside your coach as you watch jihoon prepare himself on ice
no doubt, he looked hella good in his costume, a white button up and black pants
what made you more surprised was the song he was skating to
it was Spring Day by BTS
you remember yourself always playing Spring Day in the background when you warmed up in the rink during practice
it was your favourite song
when the song was reaching its climax, jihoon did a series of triple axels and quads, which was honestly really pretty and he landed perfectly
during the chorus he actually danced on the ice?? like wOaH
you were throughly impressed honestly, it takes alot of effort and skill to be able to dance on ice
with stray parts of his blonde hair flying wind, he looked ethereal
you getting snatched was an understatement
during the bridge, he did a quad lutz which was, really mind blowing
in the end, jihoon did clinch that champion title
you swore if he didnt get that you would physically fight the judges
you thought jihoon would saunter to you just to show off that he was the champion,, but no
he gave you the flowers he was gifted with one of his knees on the floor
“y/n... i know we have been hating on each other for the longest time, i really dont want to keep up with this honestly, will you be my girlfriend?”
before you could turn to your coach, he was already filming the whole ordeal on his mobile phone
you shyly nodded, as jihoon picked you up and spun you around aaa
the next thing you saw trending on the internet was you and jihoon’s relationship LOL
dating jihoon didn’t make the competetiveness go away tbh
except that jihoon would actually stop when he thinks its too dangerous for you to attempt
warm up is no longer you warming up alone
jihoon warms up with you with cheeky rounds of tag on ice
you have never fell on ice thanks to jihoon
because that boy would blast to your side just to catch you
“i told you to be careful babe, im not always here to catch you when you fall”
the type who will actually send a video of himself doing aegyo before you go in for competitions just to make you laugh and relax
its not that you hate it, you just find it funny
he is now your unofficial coach as well, aiding in your jumps and spins
“i love figure skating, and thanks to it i met the girl i love.”
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