#sorry this took forever to write back to 💀 i really enjoyed the idea of writing a scene for this

[kalied0skull]

Just started your Soda playlist, and oh my GODS first song on is come on Eileen and it’s SUCH a song Soda would bop to, you need a have an opening scene or a more rp-ish scene with Steve or Cola or some with him listening to it and dancing. ITS SO HIM. It might clash with the timelines a bit but there’s also Aliens so.

AHAHAAH I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKE IT !!! it's one of my favorite "soda would dance to this" songs i have in there ! :D

since I'm taking a momentary break from the soda blog (just woke up too so y'know) I'll write something down here just as a little snippet like their typical clips!

@sodapopcurtis-dx-asks

Soda wandered outside of the DX into the autoshop to find Steve working roughly on a car.

The noise from Soda's stereo radio was enough to get Steve to slowly roll out from under the car with a firm frown.

He held a stereo radio to his head with a firm hand, blaring the song. Soda was cheesing hard as he swayed side to side. “Hiya, Stevie!” He placed the stereo down on a work table, now giving himself more freedom to dance with both arms and legs.

“Soda, what're you up to? I'm tryna work her—” He was cut off as he was snatched up off of the creeper by Soda, getting dragged up and onto his feet to dance with him.

“Dance with me!” Soda laughs, holding their hands close to him as he tilted Steve side to side with each extended arm.

Steve grumbled trying to pull away and sit back down, only to end up accidentally kicking the creeper back under the car. “Soda– hehe– quit!”

“Poor ol' Johnny Ray! ” Soda sang in his face, twirling Steve around and pulling him back in.

It took Steve's breath away for a second, being spun around and pulled back close. His face was close to Soda's for just a moment, the words being sung to him at a loud volume at close proximity made Steve laugh.

Sounded sad upon the radio,

But he moved a million hearts in mono!

Our mothers cried!

Sang along

Who'd blame them?

Soda swayed them both side to side, rocking on their feet and swishing to the beat. He giggled, focusing on the floor as to not stare at Steve much. “ Too-ra-loo-ra, too-ra-loo-rye, aye... And we can sing just like our fathers! ”

Steve groaned, he wasn't truly annoyed but he did want to get back to his work... unfortunately for him though, Soda's dancing powers were too hard for him to overcome. So, he gave in finally.

They danced together until the end of the song, spinning in circles and pulling each other in and out, dancing until their legs hurt and the song changed to the next one.

At the end, they both plopped down straight onto the floor, giggling and shaking their heads. Steve sprawled out, Soda criss-crossed.

“You gonna let me get back to work now that y've tired yerself out?” Steve probbed Soda with a finger, accusingly so.

Soda burst out giggling, getting up and grabbing his radio. “Yeah, yeah. I'm goin'!” He smiled wide.

“Don't say you didn't have fun with me though!”

And with that, he skipped back out of the shop to go back into the DX. Leaving Steve out of breath and laughing to himself as he searched for the creeper.

“God, he's gonna kill me with that smile one of these days.” He cursed, trying to rub the blush off his face.

[alicanta77]

It has been a very, very long time coming, but I finally did it. I finally sat down and read through Tomorrow Never Dies. And, because I love you, I took the time to make live notes while reading. So, please enjoy seeing my thought process while reading the entirety of what has to be the best fic I've ever read.

Chapter 1

• "Sweet as sugar but just as artificial..." THIS LINE. Lines like this are the kinds that make a story - it's so simple, yet allows you to see the character so well. Bonus points for fitting this line so seamlessly into the rest of your writing style. 1000/10 WRITTEN SO FUCKING WELL!!!!

• AWWWW STRONG MAN JISUNG!!! I LOVE IT!!!

• All of these powers... man oh man am I curious as to where this is going to lead.

• Pffft Chenle turning into a bear - HE WOULD.

• "You had no thought process, no questions running around your mind, you weren’t thinking of anything. You just did what you were told." OH THIS IS TERRIFYING. Just the idea of mindlessly following orders makes my blood boil ‐ this is such a suffocating idea.

• Everything about this chapter has given me the creeps.

• Oh... there goes Doyoung and Ten 😶

Chapter 2

• Dead children. Lovely.

• Oh it's kinda bittersweet that they ended up in Donghyucks childhood home - leaning further towards the bitter though.

• WHY THE FLIP FLOPPITY FLYING FUCK WOULD YOU KILL DONGHYUCK. AND YOU HAD TO MAKE IT WORSE WITH THE WHOLE "Then it finally dawned on you as to why he couldn't see the future this morning. It was because Donghyuck didn't have a future to see." WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK FELIX.

• CHENLE TOO?!?!?!?!?

• I don't trust Jimin. I think nothing good can come out of this.

• And YES it would be fucking insulting if they ended up back at the lab.

• "Don't worry. Everything's going to change." I THINK IT'S A LITTLE LATE FOR THAT SENTIMENT. *donghyucks ghost is glaring at you*

Chapter 3

• "This power managed to somehow be everything you had, whilst also being the reason that you had nothing." THIS TYPE OF LINE AGAIN!!! I don't know what it is about it, but lines like this always seem to bring about a feeling of uncanniness even if the subject itself doesn't necessarily bring about that feeling. YOU ARE A MASTER AT WRITING LINES LIKE THESE!!!!

• "'We really hoped we'd be able to save you all...and... I'm so sorry we couldn't." SORRY DOESN’T FIX EVERYTHING JIMIN. SHUT UP. LET ME MOURN HYUCK AND CHENLE IN PEACE ���🤧

• No Mark, bby, don't blame yourself *sobs* it wasn't your fault *sobs more* no one could've known they'd die *glares at Felix*

• Yeah. Wtf. How did they know Ten was dead??? Uh.... sus.

• NO THE FUCK YOU DON'T. YOU WILL NOT KILL JAEMIN. IF JAEMIN DIES, I'M GONNA BE BIG MAD.

• It's too quiet. I'm getting nervous.

• THEY KISSED! FUCK YEAH!!!

• "'I think I love you'" 💀 What do you mean you think?! You've been stuck with eachother for literally forever and you STILL aren't sure???

• Jaemin isn't feeling safe and I'm gonna throw a fit.

• JUST FUCKING LISTEN TO JAEMIN YOU DUMB TWAT - GET THE FUCK OUT OF THERE.

• Rule #1 never trust anything with 'orb' in its name. Wattpad has ruined that word for me.

• "'Because they didn't need to. We never left.'" 💀💀💀

• "‘I need you to promise me something. No matter what happens, remember I love you. No matter where we go, or what happens to any of us. I love you. Thank you for being my friend.’" My heart dropped to my ass while reading this. JAEMIN 😭😭😭

• JAEMIN 😱😱😱😱

Chapter 4

• The lab people are playing fucking mind games and I'm not here for it.

• If anyone else dies, Felix, I'm gonna go bat shit crazy in your inbox.

• No. No no no no no no no no no. Those boys better not fucking be GASLIGHTING my girl Y/N. IF SHE SAYS THAT SHE SAW JAEMIN DEAD YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BELIVE HER. YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE FRIENDS, YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE BELIEVING HER, NOT FUCKING MAKING HER FEEL CRAZY. WHEN ANOTHER ONE OF YOU DIES, DON'T SAY SHE DIDN'T TELL YOU SO 🤬

• How was something as absolutely sinister as this series born from your sweet, angelic mind... it's BEAUTIFUL!!

• RENJUN TOO WTF FELIX?!?!? I may have some choice words for you once I finish this 😑

• CHENLE'S ALIVE?!?!?!?!? 😥

• Oh jaemin 🤧🤧🤧

• Just so you know, Chenle being alive does not make me feel any better about any of the events that have happened so far.

Finale

• The lab using Renjun's abilities to cover up Jaemins death is so fucking insulting. To both Jaemin and Renjun's deaths.

• "'I thought there were no heroes left in this world'.... 'There aren't.... They're just kids trying to survive.'" THIS IS FUCKING BRILLIANT. The two paragraphs that these lines were written in, summed up the Entire. Fucking. Story.

• Oh no... I forgot that Jeno still thinks Y/N is dead 😥 poor angel 🤧

• THEY FOUND JISUNG 😭😭😭😭

• YOU TIED IT BACK INTO THE TITLE AND NOW I'M FUCKING SOBBING 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

• Lowkey thought that "Tomorrow never dies" was gonna be the last line though.

• WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF

• FUCKING LEAVE JENO THE FUCK ALONE YOU FUCKING PSYCHOTIC FUCKING BITCHES 😭🤬

• "“It’s okay.” You managed to choke out a  whisper. “It’s okay, I love you.”" I'm mad. And I'm sad. I'm smad. And I'm hungry but that's beside the point. AND IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT.

• WHY DID SPOTIFY HAVE TO PLAY DON'T NEED YOUR LOVE WHEN I'M READING ABOUT SAD STUFF 😭😭😭

• "“Well thank god somebody finally did that.”" I cackled.

• "It was officially tomorrow. And, finally, after all you’d been through, you had something that you believed in. Tomorrow never dies." I WAS FUCKING RIGHT, IT WAS THE LAST LINE!!!

• Omg I'm literally sobbing; I did not realize how unprepared I was for this to end. I genuinely want more.

• I'm gonna start a petition for a oneshot about how they move on. I need it. I'm sure the rest of your readers need it.

General Notes

Felix, my love, my darling, my angel ‐ why have you done this to me??? I'm screaming, crying, sobbing, throwing up.

But, on a serious note, this has to be one of the most well written stories (fanfic and non-fanfic) I've ever read. The plot was amazing. The plot devices you used were amazing. The dialogue and characterization - everything was just absolutely perfect. And I can genuinely say that I wouldn't want to change anything about this fic. It felt like everything that had happened in this fic, was supposed to happen like that. This fic would not work if anything changed.

In particular, I was quite thrilled that the romance between jeno and the reader was very subtle, because that's not the story that this fic was trying to tell. It was much less about romance and instead focused very heavily on the power of friendship and not giving up, which is very refreshing to read.

Thank you for sharing this absolute masterpiece with your audience, my love. Your writing is so, so beautiful - I don't think I'll ever be able to get enough of it.

And I wasn't joking about that oneshot.

this reply has been a very very long time coming but i kept rereading this because it is quite possibly the best review i've ever had 🥺

the fact that you took live notes is just incredible to me and i can't express how much i loved hearing about your thought process

chapter 1

yessss this line was one of my FAVOURITE lines honestly - i feel like i could have played on that idea a bit more but jaemin wasn’t a focus of the early chapters so idm too much but i was so happy when i came up with that

chenle would 100% mess with people if he could shape shift and i stand by that

YES the way they were turned into mindless sheep was so important to me i really wanted to convey how unaware they were of their actions

we love and miss doyoung and ten (i’m still sorry brooke)

chapter 2

the way i SNORTED with laughter when reading that first bullet point ari you make me laugh so much

originally it was just gonna be a random home but i thought that would hurt more to make it donghyuck’s 😇

...yeah... sorry but really not sorry cause i do kind of love that line and the thought that he can only see into his own future and that’s why it stops

again...sorry...

you have fantastic instincts my dear

YES it would be insulting so they can’t let that happen no matter what

chapter 3

YOURE PICKING UP ON MY FAVOURITE LINES - these are honestly the kind of lines that i adore as well and i just love that you love them too

YES YOU TELL JIMIN THAT ARI

it’s all getting very sus ngl

noooooo... i’m sure jaemins gonna be fine - yeah i felt bad when you said that

quiet is never a good sign

FUCK YEAH THEY KISSED

yep if unsure ari you should trust your instincts

the “we never left” i was obsessed with - i knew i wanted that as a line in this chapter from very early on

y/n trust jaemin to save all your asses challenge failed

jaemin’s real cute but also i wanted a sad last line so there you go

chapter 4

ari: “if anyone else dies i’m gonna go batshit in your inbox” me: ...

IM SORRY BUT I HAD TO SPLIT THEM UP AND THIS WAY HURT THE MOST SO I CHOSE IT

somehow i think i do better with sinister and twisted stuff

YESSSS CHENLE’S ALIVE

sorry chenle being alive is kind of all i have to offer you at this point

chapter 5

it honestly is so insulting but also... pain so i that’s why i chose it

a majority of me writing TND was thinking “what causes the most pain” and going with that option

YES THOSE TWO LINES ARE THE ENTIRE STORY - like they’re not heroes they don’t want to be they don’t want any of this, they just want to live

again... jeno think yn is dead... pain

i was gonna kill jisung but i changed my mind (andy youre welcome) but fun fact if i hadn’t changed my mind they would have found him crushed by the falling bricks :))

I HAD TO TIE IT BACK INTO THE TITLE I ALWAYS KNEW I WANTED TO DO THAT

not sure what the 16 WTFs are about but they sound about right

im sorry your smad but im also not cause pain is the point of this story

DONT NEED YOUR LOVE NOOOOO 🤣

yeah jimin needed a good bash on the head

I HAD TO MAKE IT THE LAST LINE

im sorry i left you in such a state :(( but also really over the moon you enjoyed it

oh my - honey you are way too nice to me thank you so much i mean TND took a year of my life to write and well over that to plan so to have it all together and hear the things you’re saying about it just means so much 🤍

yeah i really didn’t want the romance to be the main focus cause it wasn’t and i didn’t want it to overshadow the hell that these kids have gone through - ahhh i’ve always been nervous about that so hearing it was good is such a relief

thank you for enjoying my little mind game of a story and for calling it a masterpiece i- thank you for being os supportive my love

also you will have to start a petition cause i don’t have plans for a one shot without people wanting it