#tamsyn how the fuck do you ruin what should be one of the most impactful scenes in your novels | Explore Tumblr Posts and Blogs

rosalesbeausderholle · 2 years

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Girls, gays, I've read The Locked Tomb books and I have to say this... everytime Gideon shows up I just want her to shut up. I'm so glad everytime she's gone again it's like omg the cringey humour is gone... bless... John is like that too but at least I'm supposed to hate him...

#tamsyn how the fuck do you ruin what should be one of the most impactful scenes in your novels #a huge plot twist #with an hi X I'm dad joke?????????#how is that an acceptable writing choice??????#how do you NOT CRINGE SO HARD IN EMBARRASSMENT AT HAVING WRITING THAT #AND CLOSE THE DOCUMENT FOR TWO WEEKS BECAUSE YOU'RE JUST TOO EMBARRASSED TO FACE WHAT YOU DID #HOW?!?!?!??!?!?!#am i crazy? that's what i would do i cannot physically stand first and second hand embarrassment it makes me want to die #also it feels like she wrote the whole plot around getting that joke in #like?#when someone finds out that his closests allies have just betrayed him and that he has a secret daughter somehow #that person doesn't just make a dad joke?#that's not how it works #and it takes out the whole drama of the scene #i know i started talking about gideon and ended up talking abt john but that scene almost made me throw my tablet into the trash

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