I'm baaaaack! I got a doozy of a piece too! For The Heir of Despair!
Read all that was there and I am here to share my thoughts in a slightly coherent way! Sorry in advance if I repeat myself!
First, Byakuya, my boy. Oh my gosh are you an irredeemable prick! I say this in a good way by the way! Like, you wrote him good in the sense that I am routing for his downfall in some way and was very excited near the end when he slightly didn't get his way. Bravo! You have succeeded in making me dislike my boy! (I still love him <3)
But, anyway, reading what's here really got my brain thinking! Like, what might happen with Byakuya and Junko. In fact, Here's a lightning round of fun little questions that make my brain do acrobatics in a skating park! Not for answering of course! That's be lame! I must expel these out though haha!
There! Got it out of my system!!
As for some other thoughts, I enjoy the canon divergences! Obviously the main gimmick is itself one, but you get what I mean! Also, I have no way to segway into this but I was no joke quoting and spouting a bunch of goofy crap and like, I can't just NOT give a peak into the innerworkings of my mind. So, here. Take those and a bit of tidbits on the context I said them in.
"Leave that little guy alone!" - Said mostly for Chihiro and Makoto, both when Byakuya was manipulate, mansplain, malewife-ing his way through existence. Less malewife though. Or scratch it. No malewife-ing for him. Not in this time line u_u
"Byakuya! Have you learned nothing!" - Just any time Byakuya was doing stuff I found worthy of mocking him for. Might have to re-read everything to find the specifics cus I unfortunately did not count those moments in a spread sheet T-T
"You're no good, Byakuya! You'll never be shit! You're just like your father!" - I find this one funny cus I legit find Kijo a saint in this in comparison to his son. It's both because the man hasn't really done much and he's not the focus. I also had a realization though that the reason I want this Byakuya to suffer so much is because I know he can do better than this! Like, Byakuya as a character! Unlike Kijo, he has the potential for redeemable qualities which makes his reveling in his own ego less camp, more pathetic. Like, Kijo makes it fun because he sucks, he will never improve, and that's that! And it's not like Byakuya can't be that fun camp! He just has to not be a monster! I like this factor in this Byakuya though in this fic. It really encapsulates how bad he could be. How he can surpass his father in horrible behavior, and actions. Like, it's sick reading how much he enjoys all of this and you did a really good job at it!
Also, I have no idea how to fit this either but I DID mentally joke to myself that I wouldn't mind Junko actually cutting of a limb from Kijo just to make Byakuya suffer a bit (even if it probably won't be much sadly) and I have no idea how to take that... I think that, weirdly enough, I like ridiculing this Byakuya. I want him to fail. And like, it's insane you're writing can do that!! Be proud!! Like, this isn't even the type of fic I normally read and I've been able to enjoy it.
You wrote many variants of just one rich guy and they're all distinct enough to feel different about them but similar enough where you can see where the divergences lie and I really like that!! And, it's oddly cool reading something and knowing that I could never write this. This goes for all your fics by the way but like, it's really cool reading this and just knowing that someone's able to write something I could never. I'm too much of a softie for Byakuya, even when I'm mean to him heehee! No clue if this makes sense by the way. I'm kinda blabbering now so I might end it here!
But yeah! You got some cool stuff!
Aaahhh!!! Thank you!!! LOVE the art as always, it looks AWESOME!!
And yeah, Byakuya is NOT a good guy. He's very much a prick and supposed to be like that.
As for your questions, I obviously can't answer those... Though, the answer to some are no and some are yes... That's all I'll say.
And Chihiro is really going through it, with Makoto joining him soon. Byakuya will unfortunately not be leaving them alone 😔
Kijo is strangely enough a better person here, though he still ain't good. Like, he is very much on board with the killing game. He doesn't really like that Byakuya is in it cuz he doesn't want his heir to die, but that's all.
He's also very petty tho and is quite offended Byakuya kept him in the dark about everything. It's why he agreed to the motive. And unfortunately, no missing limbs for Kijo. That is reserved for another dad only in an AU that isn't mine...
But Byakuya is not nice, yeah. And like you said, he could be much better but he simply doesn't want to. He likes the way things are and loves to manipulate some of his classmates.
And that makes people not like him, just as intended. He's the protagonist but one you want to fail. Cuz if he doesn't, that means something bad for the rest of the cast...
But thank you!! I really like writing these different versions of him and it's really not as hard as it might seem. Tbh, it comes kinda natural if anything! Though, I get being the softie to Byakuya, I myself would never hurt him... Other than the countless times he got injured in my fics... :D
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Confession
{ID - Two panel comic of Ibuki Mioda and The Ultimate Imposter from Danganronpa 2
Panel 1 : Imposter looks up into Ibuki's eyes with a worried expression, tenderly holding her hand. he says "My dear, Mioda. Before we Proceed as we are, I have something important that I have been hiding from you... I am not the real Byakuya Togami, I am merely an imposter."
Panel 2 : Ibuki bounces, lowering her head with a wide grin on her face. She lifts imposters hands up excitedly yelling "OH THANK GODS, Ibuki was starting to worry that she might have fallen head over heels for a stinky billionaire!!!!!!" END ID}
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Endless Heirs AU Fic Masterlist
Now in chronological order!
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/onus/n74v87brg6ow
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/critique/8q10p743k4xd
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/atone/jkwbwzmhju2m
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/languid/uclhe8blle14
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/proffer/9k5ivsm8br4g
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/avuncular/7yvysa7dcayi
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/transmogrify/idj967brfg82
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/bombinate/xcf8wxyidvw0
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/rabble/rpkmda9muk1r
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/decorous/2mhx032sg2m7
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/bespoke/dj76bc6bwpfx
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/lycanthropy/b7ckeyybceuq
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/spiel/ekt4yxy5aohq
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/endless-heirs-au-chapter-17-ibrithir-the/hh98v5xv1afr
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/cadence/022amxq1kwn0
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/gargantuan/nylemj0uv7mv
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/emblazon/4nvphw2c0xui
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/endless-heirs-au-chapter-16-ibrithir-the/m48e7qyelx8j
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/writhe/f35f2tpq24ys
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/cloying/ec1ut03eh868
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/abide/g1fhpto00uiz
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/volition/fvy3fwujk9wu
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/ok-its-now-morning-and-i-have-time-to-actually/gslxw1fc1jed
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/sepulchre/06jnb1p87nu5
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/peculiar/y1wv4e01wnyl
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/defile/qiysu2a7q83s
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/mnemonic/7zmz3atpg04s
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/notorious/5jjz3p0ivkx4
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/scour/lpxsl4izqem3
https://at.tumblr.com/ibrithir-was-here/utopia/6h6llioo8n2u
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Natsumi:"Happy new Birthyear Hajime!" *kisses him*
Hajime:"New Birthyear?"
Natsumi:"Because your birthday is the same day as new years, which makes new years ten times more special"
Hajime:"Heh, nice one"
Natsumi:"And for your birthday you get...me!"
Hajime:"Seriously!"
Natsumi:"Yup, cause only someone as amazing and kind and cool as you gets the Yakuza Princess as their gift...so please take care of and see value in yourself"
Hajime:"Ok Fine, I'll promise I'll try...thank you..."
Natsumi:"No problem...now to unwrap your gift"
Hajime:"What do you?"*Get jumped by Natsumi*
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Guys, I have an offer for you all. Sorta.
I currently have quite a bit written for the next chapter of The Heir Of Despair. However, where I live it's already evening...
But, technically I still have the time to finish it today... All I need is a wee bit more motivation... something which could easily happen if I get send some asks :3
Obviously you guys don't have to, but I won't have much time to write these next few days, so if I don't finish it today, it might take a few extra days. Just letting you guys know!
Also want to say that there will be a little reveal this chapter! Not related to the murder, but shocking nonetheless!
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