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How to fix warriors: pt 2

Hello! So last time, I didn't even share HALF of my ideas. So I made pt 2! Here it is!

There would be jokes that are actually funny. I'm tired of the cats not knowing what humor is. Much like how Fireheart and Graystripe have gay moments in The Prophecies Begin, Mothwing and Leafpool will have gay moments throughout The New Prophecy. Also Mothwing is a trans she-cat.

The thing with Crowfeather and Leafpool still happens. After the badger battle, Leafpool realized that Crowfeather wasn't the one for her and she loves Mothwing instead. Then she goes to tell her and Mothwing loves her too. This will be the prologue of Leafpool's Wish. It will be one of two novellas to have a prologue. I will explain the other one later. The reader would definitely be surprised that Mothwing is the other parent of Lionblaze, Jayfeather, and Hollyleaf because they would expect it to be Crowfeather, but Leafpool's Wish would explain all the behind the scenes Mothwing and Leafpool stuff.

Okay so now let's get into the good part of my au. Some of you may have heard of Dako's theory that Starclan are the real villains of Warriors and that they were manipulating Squirrelflight and Leafpool to control The Three. This is the theory: Starclan chose Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw to be the parents of The Three originally, even Cinderpelt the Fire and Tiger sign. They set up the connection with Squirrelflight and Leafpool to ensure Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight's safety on the journey to the Sun Drown Place. But Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw fight and Starclan just want The Three to be born. So when Leafpool starts showing feelings for Crowfeather, they send Spottedleaf and Feathertail to bring them closer together, so that Leafpool runs away with him. They killed off Cinderpelt so Leafpool had a reason to stay in the Clans. To protect The Three, they had Squirrelflight pretend to be the mother. To make her agree, they told her she was infertile. They aid in the birth of Leafpool's kits because they really want to ensure the kits safety. They send the sign to Firestar about making Brambleclaw deputy so that every cat in power would want to protect the three. Leafpool because she's their mother, Brambleclaw because he thinks he's their father, and Firestar because he's their grandfather and he was sent the sign about The Three. That's the theory. Before I compare my au to this theory, I want to say a few things. The reason this theory doesn't make sense is because there is no reason for Starclan to put Dovewing in a separate litter and also, what is Starclan's reason for wanting to control The Three? They have plenty of power already. In my au, it isn't Starclan manipulating Squirrelflight and Leafpool. It's the Ancients manipulating Starclan. I know that may seem pretty random, but let me explain. We know that Starclan are just normal cats and that they aren't all-knowing. We know that they can't do everything. And we know that they get prophecies and pass them to the living cats. But we don't know, however, where these prophecies come from. I think that they come from some higher power. And I think that higher power is the Ancients. Here is my au:

Jay's Wing, Lion's Roar, and Holly's Berry were reincarnated and became Jayfeather, Lionblaze, and Hollyleaf. At first, Rock's power to see all of the past, present, and future, was a curse. But then, it really started to come in handy. And Brightspirit could deliver prophecies to the cats of Starclan. Their goal was to work with Thunder, Wind, River, and Shadow, to set the Ancients free and rise back to power. And The Three have the power to do that if they put their powers together. Starclan had nothing to do with Squirrelflight and Leafpool's connection. It was the Ancients. The Ancients told Spottedleaf and Feathertail to bring Leafpool and Crowfeather together. (But Yellowfang came instead of Spottedleaf.) They told Starclan to remind Squirrelflight she couldn't have kits to make her agree, (she's trans) but in my au she didn't need to be told this as she would to anything for her sister. Also the reason they reincarnated Cinderpelt was because if they didn't Rock saw that she would figure out the Ancients plan. Notice how they only reincarnated cats if it would help with their plan. Basically The Ancients tell Starclan to do everything and Rock decides that The Three should have a leader. And that leader is Jayfeather. He attempts to manipulate Jayfeather by talking to him through the stick. The prologue of Eclipse would remain the same except after Yellowfang says"I just have a feeling" and looks at the trees, the scene changes and Rock is telling his "gang" that in the future there will be a really bloody battle. Jayfeather will survive because he's a medicine cat and won't be a part of the battle. Lionblaze will survive because of his fighting powers. But Rock can't tell if Hollyleaf survives. It's also bad because Hollyleaf doesn't have her power yet. Rock pause and then asks why Hollyleaf doesn't have her power yet. Holly's berry says that she thinks Hollyleaf subconsciously senses that she is being controlled by something and it will take a while for her to discover and accept her power. They decide that Thunder, Wind, River, and Shadow will stop the battle by covering the sun. (They are the ones who have power over the physical world.) Rock tells Brightspirit to send a prophecy to Yellowfang, but not tell her everything. Just that there will be a darkness. Brightspirit agrees and then the scene switches back to Yellowfang and Spottedleaf and the prologue continues as normal. Now let's talk about Hollyleaf. My favorite character. She is older than Lionblaze and Jayfeather, she's an Ace Lesbian, she has ADHD, she was mad at Lionblaze for being in a relationship with Heathertail, even though she was in a relationship with Willowshine at the time, she has has a hyper fixation on the warrior code, it affected her entire life and even her relationship with her brothers, she was a genius and could quickly figure out the consequences of the smallest actions, and she was the brains out of her siblings. No matter how much she cared about the warrior code, she was always getting herself into trouble as shown by her relationship with Willowshine (and also the fact that she killed Ashfur.) She always had a murderous side. Thats why being a medicine cat didn't work out for her. She would rather fight than heal. She freaked out when she learned that Squirrelflight was not her mother and killed Ashfur. But nothing changed. The code was still broken when she learned that Mothwing and Leafpool were her parents. And she kinda went insane.

yassified passage from Sunrise, page 180:

"Sol was sitting at the top of the slope, his back to her, his gaze fixed on the paling stars. " Do you still think they hold all the answers, Hollyleaf? " Every hair on Hollyleaf's pelt rose, until she realized that she was standing upwind of the stream and Sol must have scented her approach. "I...I don't know," she replied. "I don't know anything anymore," Now Sol turned to her, his amber eyes blinking sympathetically. "Why is that?" Hollyleaf sighed. "Everything I hear about Starclan and the warrior code and how good it all is, is just confusing now. Everything is making me question them. Are they really all that perfect?" Even as she spoke, she couldn't believe she was telling this to any cat. She hadn't even shared her doubts with her siblings. And now she was sharing them with Sol! A cat she used to hate. But he made her feel...strange. Something sparked inside her. Like an idea of some sort. Or something she had to to realize. "

The rest of the passage continues as normal. I would also yassify the part where The Three go and confront Crowfeather and I would change it to Mothwing and whatnot. But instead, I'm gonna yassify page 306-307

"Mothwing's voice rose above the rest. " It's true! " Beside her, Mistyfoot looked furious. "I was there when Leafpool had our kits," Then Leafpool stood up. The crowd of cats fell silent, their eyes turned toward her. She padded up to Mothwing and touched noses with her. Her yellow eyes were filled with grief. Pity stirred in Hollyleaf, but her insanity choked it down. I hate her! She lied and betrayed us all! Mothwing stared at the crowd with a fire in her eyes. "Leafpool means everything to me. whatever you do, you can't take her away from me" The crowd was surrounding Mothwing and Leafpool and hissing. Leafpool looked up at Firestar. "No matter what, me and Mothwing will remain medicine cats. I'm very sorry to you, Firestar, and to all my clanmates. But I regret nothing," She said every word with confidence. "And I will never regret having my kits. I love them more than anything," She leaned into Mothwing's shoulder and closed her eyes. Every cat stared at them, shocked into silence."

Now lets skip to 308.

"But none of the cats seemed pleased. Not even her own clanmates. Sandstorm was staring at her, bewilderment and sorrow in her green gaze. Graystripe's eyes were blank with disbelief. Poppyfrost and Berrynose had their heads close together, talking urgently and shooting hostile glances at her. Why didn't anyone understand? wasn't she doing the right thing? Why wasn't anyone proud of her? What did she do to deserve this? Usually, Hollyleaf could immediately predict the consequences of any action. So why couldn't she predict this?"

Okay, now for the part where she goes to the moonpool.

"Was it all worth it?" Hollyleaf wailed to them. "Being an apprentice, working hard to learn the warrior code? What could any of us done to make things different?" The flickering stars gave no answer. Of course they didn't. Maybe they didn't know what was going on either. Then, she felt it. That feeling Sol gave her. Suddenly, she realized that she was wrong about everything. The reason she doesn't have any power is because of this feeling. Starclan has no power over her life Something else does. Something else wants control. Starclan doesn't know all the answers. But who or what does? "

page 310

"A gleam of some emotion that Hollyleaf couldn't read woke in Leafpool's eyes. " Hollyleaf, " Leafpool meowed. " I have lost my kits and Firestar will probably prevent me from seeing Mothwing and being a medicine cat. I have lost everything. It would be easier for me to die," Without a word, Hollyleaf took the deathberries and left. She buried them in the sand outside the entrance to the camp. She knew exactly what to do next. She won't be controlled. " End of chapter.

She gives Jayfeather and Lionblaze one last smile before the tunnel collapses onto her...But nothing changes. And that is where we get into Hollyleaf's Story. The second novella to have a prologue. The Ancients know what Hollyleaf has figured out and they know that she isn't coming up from that tunnel anytime soon. So they replace Holly's Berry with Dove's Wing. Which goes like this:

"Holly's Berry shifted uncomfortably. " Rock, what will we do now?" Rock smiled wickedly. "Dove's Wing, come forth" A gray she-cat came forward, with her head down and her eyes closed. "Well Holly's Berry, looks like we won't be needing you anymore. We will give Hollyleaf's power to someone else," With sorrow in her eyes and her ears flattened, Holly's Berry padded off into the darkness. Dove's Wing slowly smiled and opened her eyes. Then she spoke. "We are going to combine The Three's power, open a portal, and kill. them. all. (she-ra reference)"

So that was the prologue. Basically throughout Hollyleaf's Story, her and Fallen Leaves figure out more about the Ancients and Fallen Leaves makes Hollyleaf feel the same way Sol did woth mysterious feeling like there was more to what hes saying. Also in my au, Fallen Leaves was abused and when Jayfeather goes into the past, instead of Fallen Leaves' mother crying for him, she's just happy he's gone.

So here's where my au meets Omen of the Stars. Rock tries to tell The Three how to combine their powers to make a portal. Jayfeather becomes angry with him and breaks the stick. But later he decides they should do it. Meanwhile Hollyleaf tells Ivypool about her suspicions. Ivypool tries to stop her sister, but she won't listen. Hollyleaf tries to stop her brothers, but they won't listen either. Hollyleaf and Ivypool are too late to stop The Three from using their power. They open a hole in the sky. The Ancients come through. But so do the Dark Forest. The Great Battle Begins. The Dark Forest and the living cats vs the Ancients. Spottedleaf, Yellowfang, and Bluestar join the battle to protect Firestar, whom all three of them love. Then the rest of Starclan join. Ravenpaw and Barley conveniently decided to visit the Clan cats that day. They joined The Battle as well. Ravenpaw kills Tigerstar. Hawkfrost is mean to Mothwing but Leafpool protects her and almost kills him but spares him. Ferncloud is one who saves Ivypool's life and dies instead of Hollyleaf. You remember when Tallstar died and changed his deputy to Onewhisker? Well, thats what Firestar does. He changes it to Hollyleaf. He also loves Leafpool so much that she can stay a med cat. Leopardstar said same for Mothwing. and they can still see each other. Suddenly, the Ancients use their FULL POWER. Everything looks hopeless. Then Hollyleaf glows dark green. And Jayfeather glows blue, Lionblaze glows yellow, Dovewing glows light green, Ivypool glows silver, Firestar glows orange, and it becomes Power of Six. Then, their colors glow in an orb in front of their chest and combine into a giant rainbow orb. It blasts magical power, sealing the Ancients away forever. But Rock pulls Hollyleaf in with him. He almost kills her but then Cinderheart rescues her and kills Rock. Everything is right with the universe, Mapleshade is redeemed, and Fallen Leaves' curse is broken! he can join Starclan! He tells Hollyleaf that she's better with Cinderheart. Firestar, Graystripe, Sandstorm, and Silverstream are poly in Starclan. Cinderheart looks longingly at Hollyleaf. Then nervously at Lionblaze. He smiles and nods his head. She bounds toward Hollyleaf and they touch noses. "It's over. They're gone," mews Cinderheart. "Good Riddance," Hollyleaf mews back. (she-ra reference) Cinderpelt whispers "Thank you" to Cinderheart and leaves her body and flies off, joining Starclan. Hollyleaf becomes Hollystar and changes the warrior code so that cats can have relationships with cats in other Clans and med cats can have kits!

The End I hope you enjoyed this au!

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How to fix warriors

So I have this au in my mind that fixes the whole series and starts from book one. First it starts off the same, and then Smudge shows up and Rusty basically tells the reader that he used to have feelings for Smudge, but Smudge is into she-cats, not toms. Then Graypaw shows up, and when he comes into the light, Rusty describes him as being unbearably attractive. (Also when he meets Onewhisker he will think he's attractive, but will remind himself that he's from a different Clan.) Spottedleaf will be his childhood crush but later in the series, when he admits his feelings in a dream, she'll just laugh. Then she'll apologize for laughing and say that she only views him as a friend. They will be really close friends throughout the series and it will be really cute and I like them as friends. In my au, Spottedleaf kinda acts like an older sister. Anyways Graystripe and Fireheart will have a looot of gay moments throughout the Prophecies Begin. Him and Sandstorm still become mates. I didn't like how canon Fireheart literally has no flaws, so in my au his flaw is that he doesn't know how to have fun. Graystripe helps him to realize this. But also, he gives so much to everyone else and nothing for himself. And Graystripe helps him to realize that he deserves love too. He also realizes that he loves Graystripe and he always has. He tells him and then him, Graystripe, and Sandstorm, are in a poly relationship! I think that idea is so cute.

Dustpelt wouldn't be creepily waiting for the day Fernpaw becomes a warrior. They would show affection for each other after she becomes Ferncloud. The clans have more differences. Shadowclan lives in caves, Skyclan lives on a plateau, Thunderclan and Windclan stay the same, and Riverclan lives in a valley with a river flowing through it with an island on the river because the river is really wide and their camp is on the island. They also have different customs. I think Snowkit would survive the hawk, but we wouldn't know until Power of Three. He would survive by flinging himself out of it's talons. He would join The Tribe of Rushing Water. He would have a novella called Snowkit's journey. When Thunderclan visits The Tribe in Power of Three, Firestar will say he recognizes (insert tribe name (I dont know what it should be yet) .) He will figure out that its Snowkit and it will be a whole thing. Silverstream will be implied to be a trans tom. Like Graystripe saying "Why couldn't I have died instead of him?" and Fireheart wondering what he means, or Stormfur saying "I wish we could have known our Father- I mean Mother," (Silverstream came out to him in a dream. He also came out to Feathertail in a dream) Everyone in Starclan knows. Millie was already pregnant when her and Graystripe escaped. Graystripe isn't the Father, it was some other cat. During the journey, Millie admits her feelings for him. He tells her he likes toms and he already has a mate. Millie will always be jealous. Millie is horrible. Millie was horrible to Briarlight when she became crippled. She wasnt happy she was alive she, she just talking about how she'll never fight, or hunt, or have kits She was constantly fretting over Briarlight to the point where it was bad for Briarlights mental health. She wished she wasnt crippled because then Millie wouldn't worry about her so much. Millie was even neglecting her other children to take care of Briarlight! But in my au, there is an apology scene that is real and emotional. Ravenpaw and Barley will actually be canon. Same with Tallstar and Jake. Dovewings eyes are light green. I have my reasons for thinking this. And Scourges collar is purple. Midnight uses they/them pronouns. Ivypool x Blossomfall will be canon. Stormfur doesnt like his sister Feathertails relationship with Crowfeather because they're from different Clans, but he doesnt like his sister Squirrelflights relationship with Brambleclaw because Brambleclaw is def abusive to her and probably doesnt even accept her as a trans she-cat.

In my au, Yellowfang doesnt completly change in the second series. When Leafpool goes to the Moon Pool after the fight with Cinderpelt, she calls for Spottedleaf, but Yellowfang comes instead. She asks where Spottedleaf is and Yellowfang replies "She was gonna say something mouse-brained, so I came instead," In Starclan, Bluestar has to choose between Oakheart and Yellowfang. She chooses Yellowfang. Eventually, Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw break up. Probably soon after she has Alderheart and his siblings. Swiftpaw loved Brightheart, but she didnt love him the same because she is a lesbian and Cloudtail is a he/him lesbian. Mousefur is Aromantic. Lionblaze is autistic, Jayfeather has OCD, and Hollyleaf has ADHD. Leafpool always had a crush on Sorreltail. Then she fell for Cody. Cody obviously liked her back. The last thing she did before leaving was lick her ear, brush against her lovingly and say "I love you Leafpool. I wish we could be together but I don't belong here," Then she walked away. Sorreltail, who was watching, came out of the bushes to comfort Leafpool. Leafpools feelings for Cody had faded after being rescued from the twolegs and she started to love Sorreltail again. She confessed her feelings, but Sorreltail is straight and had a crush on Brackenfur. Meanwhile, Leopardstar is with Sasha, apologizing because she couldn't get the Clans to stay in the forest. She says she wishes things could be different and that she loves her. Sasha says she loves her too. Leopardstar promises to take care of Mothwing and Hawkfrost. Mothwing, listening, basically realized "guess im not the only lesbian" Leopardstar and Sasha decide to spend one more night in the forest together. Meanwhile, Leafpool and Sorreltail decide to spend one more night in the forest together. Meanwhile, Leopardstar falls asleep leaning on Sashas shoulder, while Sasha looks up at the moon. Meanwhile, Sorreltail falls asleep leaning on Leafpool's shoulder, while Leafpool looks up at the moon. The camera pans up to the moon.

THE END

(Theres still so much ill make a part 2)