#carine and earnest

[twilightishot]

Moodboard of Carine Cullen

[bowlingshirtbellas]

Just started listening to the podcast and loving it. Something which confused me about Life and Death. Did Earnest Cullen take Carine's name when they got married? That was very progressive of them for the 1920s. Progressive Feminist Earnest confirmed?

omg you're right, he must have. icon status lol

[holly-and-honeybees]

Carine Cullen and Earnest Adam Platt Cullen from my original "Twilight" fanfiction "Midnight"

[panlight]

In Life and Death SMeyer wanted to show how everything would be the same with flipped genders, but we all know it wouldn't work like that. So, based on their flipped genders and kind of changed backstories (especially in Jessamine's case), which special abilities do you think the Cullens should have?

I think Carine still works with compassion or something compassion-adjacent (not a super power technically but you get the idea). And actually I wonder if people would be less critical of her actions vs Carlisle? That is, I don't really see people talking about consent and damnation when it comes to Sasha of the Denali creating her "daughters" (none of whom were on the verge of death so far as we know). Maybe there's some subconscious thing where a woman making vampire 'children' is more akin to birth (no one chose to be a vampire, but no one chose to be born either), whereas the power dynamics of a man making the choice for someone else, especially women, weirds people out? I don't know, maybe I'm way off base there, but I feel like there might be SOMETHING.

Carine's story is pretty much the same, just limited by what women were allowed to do in the medical field. There's also a bit of a "punish a man by hurting a woman" there in that the vampire who bit her explicitly did so to punish Pastor Cullen, but since I already sort of headcanoned that for Carlisle anyway, it didn't bother me much.

The difference was the Carine wasn't out doing the vampire hunting herself; likewise Jessamine had much less agency than Jasper, who actively chose to lie about his age to enlist. Jessamine was just kidnapped from her home. (And again, the dynamics of a male vampire breaking into someone's home and kidnapping her to turn her into a vampire just feels very different than three vampire women being approached by a man who thought they needed help. Yas Maria, slay Maria! Ew, gross Mariano!) So we have no evidence really Jessamine had the same power as Jasper as a human; she also had no military experience so she would have had a much steeper learning curve than Jasper in terms of learning how to fight, how to train, how to command. I've always thought that Jasper's power should have been mental anyway so let's make Jessamine's power mental instead. She can still sense and manipulate emotions but no more of that weird heartbeat and endorphin stuff (that doesn't seem like would apply to vampires anyway??), it's mental. Wouldn't work on Beau/Bella then I guess.

Royal can keep beauty, Eleanor can keep strength. I like how those upend expectations. And Eleanor's backstory stayed pretty much the same: being mauled by a bear. Good for her! I appreciate that SM still had them get married repeatedly; although I don't remember if it's still because Royal likes to do it. I hope so because again, it upends expectations (the man being wedding-obsessed) and it keeps them closer to their original characterizations.

Earnest's story is very different than Esme's (and again, I must ask, why not 'Ezra?' It's right there and just feels right! Even feels like the name of a kid who grew up on a farm). But again, I like upending expectations by having this sweet, loving house-husband while Carine is out there working. I do wonder, if we had seen more of Earnest, if SM would have made that Power of Heart more dad-like ("step into my office" "let's play catch" "You can tell your old man anything") than the just sort of bubble of love surrounding Esme but I don't know. It might also manifest differently because Earnest's child was older and was actively murdered by his wife. Esme only had her child for a few days and he died of natural causes. Those experiences are very different and might shape what form the Power to Love Passionately takes and how Earnest applies it to his family. He might be a bit more anxious? More protective? He knows his new children are basically indestructible but that helplessness he felt when he lost his human daughter might color how he reacts.

That leaves Archie and Edythe. You can't really change their powers too much because so much of the plot relies on them. And really I haven't changed much of the others either. I think the powers would be pretty similar because they are based on traits shared between the two versions of the characters, but how they used them, how they manifested, might be different because of their different lived experiences. Archie growing up as an eldest son rather than an eldest daughter (and does this mean his mother hires someone to kill his father and his mother and step-father lock him up? How deep does the gender swap go?) might change things like, perhaps he's more or less likely to tell people about his visions because of different societal expectations. Perhaps Edythe's latent ability to "read" people is seen as less impressive than Edward's, like, "oh she's a girl of course she has strong emotional intelligence" or whatever vs Edward being this sensitive piano prodigy was more of an outlier.

Life and Death is such an interesting experience because SM kept a lot of the dialogue word-for-word from Twilight. Earnest has almost all the same lines as Esme, etc. But she changed the backstories to fit gender expectations.

[deathswcrn-a]

"Bree, a hypothetical question, of course, but if there was a chance that I were to turn into a worm... Would you still love me?" (Gale)

"A worm? Why wouldn't I still love you?" she asked, a tilt of her head and a little furrow to her brow. She remembered how they were when they'd met - both of them ill with the Blight, both of them little more use to each other than being themselves, at heart, for each other, both of them anathema to most pleasant society. Wasn't that essentially the core of the question? Would you still love me if I turned into something most people considered unloveable?

"You're still you. I know a shapeshifter, you know Morrigan? I'd keep you safe until I could get her to turn you back. She'd do it in a heart-beat." Her voice was soft, earnest. "But if she couldn't... I guess I'd just spend my days carin' for worm-you."

[mousebites-blog]

Mind Over Matter: WLW

Her driving was just fine, I have to admit - when she kept her speed reasonable. Like so many things, it seems to be effortless for her. She barely looked at the road, yet the truck was always perfectly centered in her lane. She drove one-handed because I was holding her other hand between us. Sometimes she gazed into the setting sun, which glittered off her skin in ruby-tinged shimmers. Sometimes she glanced at me, stared into my eyes, or looked down at our hands twined together.

She had turned the radio to an oldies station and sang along with a song I’d never heard. Her voice was as perfect as everything else about her, soaring an octave above the melody. She knew every line.

“You like fifties music?” I asked.

“Music in the fifties was good, much better than the sixties or the seventies, ugh!” she shuddered. “The eighties were bearable.” 

“Are you ever going to tell me how old you are?”

I wondered if my question would upset her buoyant mood, but she just smiled. 

“Does it matter very much?”

“No, but I want to know everything about you.”

“I wonder if it will upset you,” she said to herself. She stared straight into the sun; a minute passed.

“Try me,” I finally said.

She looked into my eyes, seeming to forget the road completely for a while. Whatever she saw must have encouraged her. She turned to face the last of the blood red rays of the dying sun and sighed.

“I was born in Chicago in 1901.” She paused and glanced at me from the corner of her eye. My face was carefully arranged, unsurprised, and patient for the rest. She smiled a tiny smile and continued. “Carine found me in a hospital in the summer of 1918. I was seventeen, and I was dying of the Spanish flu.”

She heard my gasp and looked up into my eyes again.

“I don’t remember it very well. It was a long time ago, and human memories fade.” she seemed lost in thought for a minute, but before I could prompt her, she went on. “I do remember how it felt when Carnie saved me. It was not an easy thing, not something you could forget.”

“Your parents?”

“They had already died from the disease. I was alone. That's why she chose me. In all the chaos of the epidemic, no one would ever realize I was gone.”

“How did she… save you?” A few seconds passed, and when she spoke again, she seemed to be choosing her words very carefully.

“It was difficult. Not many of us have the restraint necessary to accomplish it. But Carnie has always been the most humane, the most compassionate of all of us… I don’t think you could find her equal anywhere in history.” She paused. For me, it was merely very, very painful.”

She set her jaw, and I could tell she wasn’t going to say anything more about it. I filed it away for later. My curiosity on the subject was hardly idle. There were a lot of angles I needed to think through on this particular issue, angles that were only beginning to occur to me. 

Her soft voice interrupted my thoughts. “She acted from loneliness. That’s usually the reason behind the choice. I was the first in Carnie’s family, though she found Earnest soon after. He fell from a cliff. They took him straight to the hospital morgue, though, somehow, his heart was still beating.”

“So you have to be dying, then…”

“No, that's just Carine. She would never do that to someone who had another choice, any other choice.” The respect in her voice was profound whenever she spoke of her adoptive mother. “though, she says it's easier if the heart is weak.” She stared at the now-dark road, and I could feel the subject closing again.

“And Eleanor and Royal?”

“Carnie brought Royal into our family next. I didn’t realize till much later that she was hoping he would be to me what Earnest was to her—she was very careful with her thoughts around me.” She rolled her eyes. “But he was never more than a brother. It was only two years later that he found Eleanor. He was hunting — we were in Appalachia at the time — and found a bear about to finish her off. He carried her back to Carnie, more than a hundred miles, afraid he would be able to do it himself. I’m only beginning to guess how difficult that journey was for him.” She threw a pointed glance in my direction and raised our hands, still folded together, to brush her cheek against my hand. 

“But he made it.”

“Yes. He saw something in her face that made him strong enough. And they’ve been together ever since. Sometimes they live separately from us, as a married couple. But the younger we pretend to be, the longer we can stay in any given place. Forks is perfect in many ways, so we all enrolled in high school.” she laughed. “I suppose we’ll have to go to the wedding in a few years. Again.”

“Archie and Jessamine?”

“Archie and Jessamine are two very rare creatures. They both developed a conscience, as we refer to it, with no outside guidance. Jessamine belonged to another… family, a very different kind of family. She became depressed, and she wandered on her own. Archie found her. Like me, he has certain gifts.”

“Really?” I interrupted, fascinated. “But you said you were the only one who could hear people’s thoughts.”

“That’s true. He knows other things. He sees things— things that might happen, things that are coming. But it's very subjective. The future isn’t set in stone. Things change.”

Her jaw set when she said that, and her eyes darted to my face and away so quickly I wasn’t sure if I'd only imagined it.

“What kind of things does he see?”

“He saw Jessamine and knew that she was looking for him before she knew herself. He saw Carine and our family, and they came together to find us. He’s most sensitive to non-humans. He always knows, for example, when another group of our kind is coming near. And any threat they may pose.”

“Are there a lot of… your kind?” I was surprised. How many of them could walk around with us all totally oblivious?

My mind got caught on one word she’d said. Threat. It was the first time she’d ever said anything to hint that her world wasn't just dangerous for humans. It made me anxious, and I was about to ask a new question, but she was already answering my first.

“No, not many. But most won’t settle in any one place. Only those like us, who’ve given up hunting you people” — a sly glance in my direction— “can live together with humans for any length of time. We’ve only found one other family like ours in a small village in Alaska. We lived together for a time, but there were so many of us that we became too noticeable. Those of us who live.. differently, tend to band together.”

“And the others?”

“Nomads, for the most part. We’ve all lived that way at times. It gets tedious, like anything else. But we run across the others now and then because most of us prefer the North.”

“Why is that”

We were parked in front of my house now, and she turned off the truck. The silence that followed its roar felt intense, it was very dark; there was no moon. The porch light was off, so I knew my dad wasn’t home yet. 

“Did you have your eyes open this afternoon?” she teased. “Do you think I could walk down the street in the sunlight without causing traffic accidents?”

I thought to myself that she could stop traffic even without all the pyrotechnics.

“There is a reason why we chose the Olympic Peninsula, one of the most sunless places in the world. It’s nice to be able to go outside during the day. You wouldn’t believe how tired you can get of the night time in eighty-odd years.”

“So, that’s probably where the legends came from?”

“Probably”

“And Archie came from another family, like Jessamine?”

“No, and that is a mystery. Archie doesn’t remember his human life at all. And he doesn’t know who created him. He awoke alone. Whoever made him walked away, and none of us understand why, or how, he could. If Archie hadn’t had that other sense, if he hadn't seen Jessamine and Carine and known that he would someday become one of us, he probably would have turned into a total savage.”

There was so much to think through, so much I still wanted to ask, But just then, my stomach growled. I’d been so interested I hadn’t even noticed I was hungry. I realized now that I was starving.

“I’m sorry, I’m keeping you from dinner.”

“I’m fine, really.”

“I don’t spend a lot of time around people who eat food. I forget.”

“I want to stay with you.” It was easier to say in the darkness, knowing how my voice would betray me, my hopeless addiction to her. 

“Can’t I come in?” she asked.

“Would you like to?” I couldn’t picture it, a goddess sitting in my dad’s shabby kitchen chair. 

“Yes, if you don’t mind.”

I smiled, “I do not.”

I climbed out of the truck, and she was already there; then, she flitted ahead and disappeared. The lights turned on inside.

She met me at the door. It was so surreal to see her inside my house, framed by the boring physical details of my humdrum life. I remember a game my mother used to play with me when I was maybe four or five. One of these things is not like the other.

“Did I leave that unlocked?” 

“No, I used the key from under the eave.”

I hadn’t thought I'd used that key in front of her. Then I remember how she’d found my truck key and shrugged.

“You’re hungry, right?” and she led the way to the kitchen as if she’d been there a million times before. She turned on the kitchen light and then sat in the same chair I’d just tried to picture her in. The kitchen didn’t look so dingy anymore. But maybe that was because I couldn’t really look at anything but her. I stood there for a moment, trying to wrap my mind around her presence here, in the middle of mundainia.

“Eat something, Bella”

I nodded and turned to scavenge. There was lasagna leftover from last night. I put a square of it on a plate, changed my mind, and added the rest that was left in the pan, then set the plate in the microwave. I washed the pan while the microwave revolved, filling the kitchen with the smell of tomatoes and oregano. My stomach growled again. 

“Hmm,” she said.

“What's that?”

“I’m going to have to do a better job in the future.”

I laughed. “What could you possibly do better than you already do?”

“Remembering that you’re human.  I should have, I don’t know, packed a picnic or something today.”

The microwave dinged, and I pulled the plate out, then set it down quickly when it burned my hand.

“Don’t worry about it.”

I found a fork and started eating. I was really hungry. The first bite scalded my mouth, but I kept chewing.

“Does it taste good?” she asked.

I swallowed. “I’m not sure. I think I just burned my taste buds off. It tasted good yesterday.”

She didn’t look convinced.

“Do you ever miss food? Ice cream? Peanut butter?”

She shook her head. “I hardly remember food. I couldn’t even tell you what my favorites were. It doesn’t even smell… edible now.” 

“That's kind of sad.”

“It’s not a huge sacrifice.” she said sadly like there were other things on her mind, sacrifices that were huge.

I used a dish towel as a hot pad and carried the plate to the table so I could sit by her.

“Do you miss other parts of being human?

“She thought about it for a second. “I don’t actually miss anything because I’d have to remember it to be able to miss it, and like I said, my human life is hard to remember. But there are things I think I'd like. I suppose you could say things I was jealous of.”

“Like what?”

“Sleep is one. Never-ending consciousness gets tedious. I think I’d enjoy temporary oblivion. It looks interesting.”

I ate a few bites, thinking about that. “Sounds hard. What do you do all night?”

She hesitated, then pursed her lips. “Do you mean in general?”

I wondered why she sounded like she didn’t want to answer. Was it too broad a question?

“No, you don’t have to be general. Like, what are you going to do tonight after you leave?”

It was the wrong question. I could feel my high start to slip. She was going to have to leave. It didn’t matter how short the separation was—I dreaded it.

She didn’t seem to like the question, either, at first, I thought for the same reason. But then her eyes flashed to my face and away like she was uncomfortable.

“What?”

She made a face. “Do you want a pleasant lie or a possibly disturbing truth?”

“The truth,” I said quickly, though I wasn’t entirely sure.

She sighed, “I’ll come back here after you and your father are asleep. It’s sort of my routine lately.”

I blinked. Then I blinked again.

“You come here?”

“Almost every night”

“Why?”

“You’re interesting when you sleep,” she said casually. “You talk,” my mouth popped open. Heat flashed up my neck and into my face. I knew I talked in my sleep, of course; my mother teased me about it. I hadn’t thought it was something I needed to worry about here.

She watched my reaction, staging up at me apprehensive from under her lashes.

“Are you very angry with me?”

Was it? I didn’t even know. The potential for humiliation was strong. And I didn’t understand—she’d been listening to me babble in my sleep from where? The window? I couldn’t understand.

“How did you… Where do you... What did I…?” I couldn’t finish any of my thoughts. 

She put one hand on my cheek, the blood under her fingers felt burning hot next to her cold hand. “Don’t be upset. I didn’t mean any harm. I promise I was very in control of myself. If I’d thought there was any danger, I would have left immediately. I just… wanted to be where you were.”

“I… That's not what I'm worried about.”

“What are you worried about?”

“What did I say?”

She smiled. “You miss your mother. When it rains, the sound makes you restless. You used to talk about home a lot, but it's less often now. Once you said, ‘it's too green.’” She laughed softly, hoping not to offend me again.

“Anything else?” I demanded.

She knew what I was getting at. “You did say my name,” she admitted

I signed in defeat. “Alot?”

“Define ‘alot.’”

“Oh no,” I groaned.

Like it was easy, natural, she put her arms around me and leaned her head on my shoulder. Automatically, my arms came up to wrap around her. To hold her there.

“Don’t be self conscious,” she whispered, “you already told me that you dream about me, remember?”

“That's different. I knew what I was saying.”

“If I could dream at all, it would be about you. And I’m not ashamed of it.”

I ran my fingers through her hair. I guessed I really didn’t mind when it came down to it. It wasn’t like I expected her to follow normal human rules anyway. The rules she’d made for herself seemed like enough.

“I’m not ashamed,” I whispered.

She hummed, almost like a purr, her head nestled against my neck.

Then we both heard the sound of tires on the brick driveway, and saw the headlights flash through the front window, down the hall to us. I jumped and dropped my arms as she pulled away.

“Do you want your father to know that I'm here?” she asked.

I tried to think it through quickly. “Um…”

“Another time, then…”

And I was alone.

“Edythe,” I whispered.

I heard a quiet laugh and then nothing else.

My father’s key turned in the door.

“Bella?” he called. I could remember finding that funny before; who else would it be? Suddenly he didn’t seem so far off base.

“In here”

Was my voice too agitated? I took another bite of my lasagna so I could be chewing when he came in. His footsteps sounded extra noisy after I’d spent the day with Edythe.

“Did you take all the lasagna?” he asked, looking at my plate. 

“Oh, sorry. Here, have some.”

“No worries, Bella. I’ll make myself a sandwich.”

“Sorry,” I mumbled again. 

Charlie banged around the kitchen, getting what he needed. I worked on eating my giant plate of food as fast as was humanly possible while not choking to death. I was thinking about what Edythe had just said—do you want your father to know that I'm here? Which was not the same as—do you want your father to know that I was here?  in the past tense. So did that mean she hadn’t actually left? I hoped so.

Sandwich in hand, Charlie sat in the chair across from me. It was hard to imagine Edythe sitting in the same place just minutes ago. Charlie fit. The memory of her was like a dream that couldn’t possibly be real.

“How was your day? Did you get everything done that you wanted to?”

“Um, not really. It was… too nice to stay indoors. Were the fish biting?”

“Yep. They like the good weather, too.”

I scraped the last of the lasagna into one huge mouthful and started chewing.

“Got plans for tonight?” he asked suddenly.

I shook my head, maybe a little too emphatically.

“You look kinda keyed up,” he noted.

Of course, he would have to pay attention tonight.

I swallowed. “Really?”

“It's Saturday,” he mused.

I didn’t respond

“I guess you’re missing that dance tonight…”

“As intended.” I said.

He nodded. “Sure, dancing, I get it. But maybe next week— you could take that Newton boy out for dinner or something. Get out of the house. Socialize.”

“I told you, he’s dating my friend.” He frowned. “Well, there's lots of fish in the sea.”

“Not at the rate you’re going.”

He laughed. “I’ll do my best… So you’re not going out tonight?” he asked again.

“Nowhere to go,” I told him. “Besides, I'm tired. I’m just going to go to bed early again.”

I got up and took my plate to the sink.

“Uh-huh,” he said, chewing thoughtfully. “None of the boys in town are your type, eh?”

I shrugged as I scrubbed at the plate, “No, not really.”

I could feel him staring at me, and I tried really hard to keep the blood out of my neck. I wasn’t sure if I was succeeding.

“Don’t be too hard on a small town,” he said, “I know we don’t have the variety of a big city–”

“There’s plenty of variety, Dad. Don’t worry about me.”

“Okay, okay. None of my business anyway.” He sounded kind of dejected.

I signed. “Well, I’m done. I’ll see you in the morning.”

“ ‘Night, Bella.”

I tried to make my footsteps drag as I was walking up the stairs like I was super tired. I wonder if he bought my bad acting. I hadn’t actually lied to him or anything. I definitely wasn’t planning on going out tonight.

I shut my bedroom door loud enough for him to hear downstairs, then sprinted as quietly as I could to the window. I shoved it open and leaned out into the dark. I couldn’t see anything, just the shadow of the treetops.

“Edythe?” I whispered, feeling completely idiotic.

The quiet, laughing response came from behind me. “Yes?”

I spun around so fast that I knocked a book off my desk. I fell with a thud to the floor. 

She was lying across my bed, hands behind her head, ankles crossed, and a huge dimpled smile on her face. She looked the color of frost in the darkness.

“Oh!” I breathe, reaching out to grab the desk for support.

“I'm sorry,” she said.

“Just give me a second to restart my heart.”

She sat up — moving slowly like she did when she was either trying to act human or trying not to startle me — and dangled her legs over the edge of the bed. She patted the space next to her. 

I walked unsteadily to the bed and sat down beside her. She put her hand on mine. 

“How’s your heart?”

“You tell me — I'm sure you hear it better than I do.”

She laughed quietly. 

We sat there for a moment in silence, both listening to my heartbeat slow. I thought about Edythe in my room… and my father’s suspicious questions… and my lasagna breath.

“Can I have a minute to be human”

“Yes mam”

I stood up and then looked at her, sitting there all perfectly on the edge of my bed, and I thought that maybe I was just hallucinating everything.

“You’ll be here when I get back, right?”

“I won’t move a muscle,” she promised.

And then she became totally motionless, a statute again, perched on the edge of my bed.

I grabbed my pajamas out of their drawer and hurried to the bathroom, banging the door, so Charlie would know it was occupied. 

I brushed my teeth twice. Then I washed my face and pulled on my holey sweatpants and an old T-shirt — it was from a barbecue place that my mom liked, and it had a pig smiling between two buns. I wish I had something less… me. But it was too late to regret not packing the Victoria’s Secret silk pajamas my mother got me two birthdays ago, which still had the tags on them in a drawer somewhere back home. 

I brushed my teeth one more time.

When I opened the door, I had another small heart attack. Charlie was at the top of the stairs; I almost walked into him.

“Ah!” I coughed out.

“Oh, sorry, Bella. Didn’t mean to scare you

I took a deep breath, “I’m good.”

He looked at my pajamas and made a little harrumph sound in the back of his throat like he was surprised.

“You heading to bed, too?” I asked.

“Yeah, I guess. I’ve got another early one again tomorrow.”

“Okay. ‘night”

“Yeah.”

I walked into my room, glad that the bed wasn’t visible from where Charlie was standing, then shut the door firmly behind me. Edythe hadn’t moved even a fraction of an inch. I smiled, and her lips twitched; she relaxed and was suddenly human again. Or close enough. I went back to sit next to her. She twisted to face me, pulling her legs up and crossing them.

“I'm not sure how I feel about that shirt,” she said. Her voice was so quiet that I didn’t have any worries that Charlies would hear us. 

“I can change.”

She rolled her eyes. Not you wearing it— its entire existence.” She reached out and brushed her fingers across the smiling pug. My pulse spiked, but she politely ignored it. “Should it be so happy to be food?”

I had to grin. “Well, we don’t know its side of the story, do we? It might have reason to smile.”

She looked at me like she was doubting my sanity. I reached out to hold her hand. It felt really natural, but at the same time, I couldn’t believe I was so lucky. What had I ever done to deserve this?”

“Your dad thinks you might be sneaking out,” she told me

“I know. Apparently, I look keyed up.”

“Are you?”

“A little more than that, I think. Thank you. For staying.”

“It's what I wanted, too.”

“My heart started beating… not faster exactly, but stronger somehow. For some reason, I would never understand, she wanted to be with me.

Moving at human speed, she unfolded her legs and draped them across mine, then she curled up against my breasts again, the way she seemed to prefer, with her ear against my heart, which was reacting probably more than was necessary. I folded my arms around her and pressed my lips into her hair.

“Mmm,” she hummed.

“This…” I murmured into her hair, “... is much easier than I thought it would be.”

“Does it seem easy to you?” It sounded like she was smiling. She angled her face up, and I felt her nose trace a cold line up the side of my neck. “Well,” I said breathlessly. Her lips were brushing the edge of my jaw. “It seems to be easier than it was this morning, at least.”

“Hmm,” she said. Her arms slid over my shoulder and then wrapped around my neck. She pulled herself up until her lips were brushing my ear.

“Why is that” — my voice shook embarrassingly— “do you think?”

“Mind over matter,” she breathed into my ear.

A tremor ran down my body. She froze, then leaned carefully back. One hand brushed across the skin under the sleeve of my t-shirt.

“You're cold,”  she said. I could feel the goosebumps rise under her fingertips.

“I'm fine.”

She frowned and climbed back into her original position. My arms weren’t willing to let her go. As she slid out from under them, my hands stayed on her hips.

“Your whole body is shivering.”

“I don’t think that's from being cold,” I told her

We looked at each other for a second in the dark.

“I'm not sure what I'm allowed to do,” I admitted, “ how careful do I need to be?”

She hesitated. “It's getting easier,” she said finally, answering my earlier question. Her hand brushed across my forearms, and I felt goosebumps again. “But this afternoon.. I was still undecided. I’m sorry it was unforgivable for me to behave as I did.”

“I forgive you,” I murmured.

“Thank you,” she smiled and then was serious as she looked down at the bumps on my arm. “You see… I wasn’t sure if I was strong enough…” She lifted my hand and pressed it to her cheek, still looking down. “And while there was still that possibility that I might be… overcome” — she breathed in the scent at my wrist — “I was… susceptible. Until I made up my mind that I was strong enough, that there was no possibility at all that I would… that I ever could…”

I’d never seen her struggle so hard for words. It was so human.

“So there’s no possibility now?”

She looked up at me finally and smiled. “Mind over matter”

“Sounds easy,” I said, grinning so that she knew I was teasing. 

“Rather than easy, I would say… herculean, but possible. And so.. In answer to your other question…”

“Sorry,” I said.

She laughed quietly. “Why do you apologize so much?” It was a rhetorical question, and she went on quickly, putting a finger on my lips just in case I felt like I needed to explain. “It's still not effortless, and so, if it is acceptable to you, I would prefer it if you would… follow my lead?” she let her finger drop. “Is that fair?”

“Of course,” I said quickly. “Whatever you want.” As usual, I meant that literally.

“If it gets to be… too much, I'm sure I will be able to make myself leave.”

I frowned. “I will make sure it's not too much.”

“It'll be harder tomorrow,” she said. “I've had the scent of you in my head all day, and I've grown amazingly desensitized. If I'm away from you for any length of time, I think I'll have to start over again. Not quite from scratch, though, I think.”

“Never go away,” I suggested.

Her face relaxed into a smile. “That suits me. Bring on the shackles— I am your prisoner.” while she spoke, she laced her cold fingers around my wrist like a manacle. `` and now, if you don’t mind, may I borrow a blanket?”

It took me a second. “Oh, um, sure. Here”

I reached behind her with my free hand and snagged the old quilt that was folded over the foot of my bed, then offered it to her. She dropped my wrist, took the blanket and shook it out, then handed it back to me.

“I'd be happier if I knew you were comfortable.”

“I’m very comfortable.”

“Please?”

Quickly I threw the quilt over my shoulders like a cape. She chuckled quietly. “Not exactly what I was thinking.” She was already on her feet, rearranging the blanket over my legs and pulling it all the way up over my shoulders. Before I could understand what she was doing, she had climbed onto my lap again and nestled up against my breasts. The quilt made a barrier between any place our skin might touch.

“Better?” she asked.

“I'm not sure about that”

“Good enough?”

“Better than that.”

She laughed and stroked my hair. That seemed careful.

“It's so strange,” she said, “you read about something.. You hear about it in other people’s minds, you watch it happen to them... And it doesn’t prepare you even in the slightest for experiencing it yourself. The glory of first love. It's more than I was expecting”

“Much more,” I agreed fervently,

“And other emotions too — Jealousy, for example. I thought I understood that one clearly. I’ve read about it a hundred thousand times, seen actors portray it in a thousand different plays and movies, listened to in the minds around me daily – even felt it myself in a shallow way, wishing I had what I didn’t…. But I was shocked.” She scowled. “Do you remember the day that Mike asked you to the dance?”

I nodded, though that day was more memorable to me for a different reason. “The day you started talking to me again.”

“I was almost stunned by the flare of resentment, almost fury that I felt— I didn’t recognize it at first. I didn’t know jealousy could be so powerful… so painful. And then you refused him, and I didn’t know why. It was more aggravating than usual that I couldn’t just hear what you were thinking. Was there someone else? Was it simply for  Jessica’s sake? Did you even like men? I knew I had no right to care either way. I tried not to care.” She smiled, “And then the line started forming,”

I groaned, and she laughed

“I waited,” she went on. “more anxious than I should be to hear what you would say to them, try to decipher your expression. I couldn’t deny the relief I felt, watching the annoyance on your face. But I couldn’t be sure. I didn’t know what your answer would have been if I’d asked…”

She looked up at me. “That was the first night I came here. I wrestled all night, watching your sleep, with the chasm between what I knew was right, moral-ethical, honorable, and what I wanted. I knew that if I continued to ignore you as I should, or if I left for a few years till you were gone, that someday you would find someone you wanted, someone human. It made me sad.-

“And then” — her voice dropped to an even quieter whisper— “as you were sleeping, you said my name. You spoke so clearly at first, I thought you woke up. But you rolled over restlessly and mumbled my name again and signed. The emotion that coursed through me then was unnerving… staggering. And I know I couldn’t ignore you any longer.”

She was quiet for a moment, probably listening to the uneven pounding of my heart.

“But jealousy… It's so irrational. Just now, when Charlie asked you about that annoying boy…”

“That made you jealous, really?”

“I'm new at this. You’re resurrecting the human in me, and everything feels stronger because it's fresh.”

“Honestly, though, for that to bother you after I have to hear that Royal— the male model of the year, Royal, Mr. Perfect, Royal— was meant for you. Eleanor or no Eleanor, how can I compete with that?”

Her teeth gleamed, and her arms wove around my neck again. “There is no competition.”

“That's what I'm afraid of.” Tentatively, I folded my arms around her. “Is this okay?” I checked.

“Very,” She sighed happily. “Of course, Royal is beautiful in his way, but it's different for you. Even if he didn’t belong with Eleanor, he could never have one-tenth, no, one one-hundredth of the attraction you hold for me." She was serious now, thoughtful. “For almost ninety years, I've walked among my kind and yours… all the time thinking I was complete in myself, not realizing what I was seeking and not finding anything because you weren’t alive yet.”

“It doesn’t seem fair,” I whispered into her hair. “I didn't have to wait at all. Why do I get off so easily?”

“You’re right,” she agreed. “I should make this harder for you, definitely” Her hand stroked my cheek. “You only have to risk your life every second you spend with me. Surely that's not much. You only have to turn your back on nature, humanity… what is that worth?”

“I'm not feeling deprived.”

She turned her face into my breasts and whispered, “Not yet.”

“What—” I started, but then her body was suddenly motionless. I froze, she was gone, my arms wrapped around the empty air. 

“Lie down,” she hissed, but I couldn’t tell where she was in the darkness.

I threw myself back on the bed, shaking the quilt out and then balling up on my side, the way I usually slept. I heard my door crack open. Charlie was checking up on me. I breathed evenly, exaggerating the moment. 

A long minute passed. I listened for the door to close. Suddenly Edythe was next to me. Her arm was over my shoulder.

“Bella, you’re such a terrible actress— I'd say that career path is out for you.”

“There goes my ten-year plan,” I muttered. My heart was careening around the inside of my ribs.

She hummed a melody I didn't recognize. It reminded me of a lullaby. Then she paused. “Should I sing you to sleep?”

“Right,” I laughed, “like I could sleep with you here.”

“You do it all the time,” she reminded me.

“Not with you here,” I disagree.

She tightened her arm around me. “You have a point. So if you don't want to sleep, what do you want to do then?”

“Honestly? A lot of things, none of them careful.”

She didn't say anything; it didn’t sound like she was breathing. I went on quickly.

“But since I promised to be careful, what I'd like is… to know more about you.”

“Ask me anything.” I could hear that she was smiling now.

I shifted through my questions for the most important ones. “Why do you do it?” I asked. “I still don’t understand why you work so hard to resist what you.. are. Of course, I'm glad you do — I've never been happier to be alive. I just don’t see why you would bother in the first place.”

She answered slowly. “That’s a good question, and you are not the first one to ask it. The other— the vast majority of our kind who are quite content with our lot— they also wonder how we live. But you see, just because we’ve been… dealt a certain hand… it doesn’t mean that we can’t choose to rise above—to conquer the boundaries of our destinies that none of us wanted. To try to retain whatever essential humanity we can.''

I lay still, feeling kind of awed. She was a better person than I would ever be.

“Did you fall asleep?” She murmured almost silently after a few minutes.

“No”

“Is that all you were curious about?”

I rolled my eyes. “Not quite.”

“What else do you want to know?”

“Why can you read minds— why only you? And Archie, seeing the future and everything.. Why does that happen?”

I felt her shrug. “We don’t really know. Carine had a theory… she believes that we all bring something of our strongest human traits with us into the next life, where they are intensified— like our minds and our senses. She thinks I must have already been very sensitive to the thoughts of those around me. And that Archie had some precognition, whatever he was.”

“What did she bring into the next life and the others?” “Carine brought her compassion. Earnest brought his ability to love passionately. Eleanor brought her strength, Royal his… tenacity. Or you could call it pigheadedness,” she chuckled. “Jessamine is fascinating. She was quite charismatic in her first life, able to influence those around her to see things her way. Now she is able to manipulate the emotions of those near her— calm down a room of angry people, for example, or excite a lethargic crowd, conversely. It's a very subtle gift.” I considered the impossibilities she described, trying to take it in. She waited patiently while I thought.

“So where did it all start? I mean, Carine changed you, and someone must have changed her, and so on…”

“Well, where did you come from? Evolution? Creations? Couldn’t we have evolved the same way as other species, predator, and prey? Or if you don’t believe that this world could have just happened on its own, which is hard for me to accept myself, is it so hard to believe the same force that created the delicate anglerfish with the shark, the baby seal, and the killer whale, could create both of our kinds together?”

“Let me get this straight— I'm the baby seal, right?”

“Correct.” she laughed, and her fingers brushed across my lips. “Aren’t you tired? It's been a rather long day.”

“I just have a few million more questions.”

“We have tomorrow, and the next day, and the next…”

A feeling of euphoria and pure bliss filled my chest until I thought I might explode. I couldn’t imagine there was a drug addict in the world who wouldn’t trade their favorite fix for this feeling.

It was a minute before I could talk again. “Are you sure you won’t vanish in the morning? You are mythical, after all.”

“I won’t leave you,” she promised solemnly, and that same feeling, even stronger than before, washed through me.

When I could speak, I said, “One more, then, tonight…” and then the blood rushed up my neck. The darkness was no help. I was sure she could feel the heat.

“What is it?”

“Um, no, forget it. I changed my mind.”

“Bella, you can ask me anything.”

I didn’t speak, and she groaned.

“I keep thinking it will get less frustrating not hearing your thoughts. But it just keeps getting worse and worse.”

“It's bad enough that you eavesdrop on my sleep-talking.” I muttered

“Please tell me?” she whispered, her velvet voice taking on that memorizing intensity that I could never resist.

I tried. I shook my head.

“If you don’t tell me, I’ll assume it's something much worse than it is.” she threatened.

“I shouldn’t have brought it up,” I said, then locked my teeth.

“Please?” Again in that hypnotic voice.

I signed. “You won’t get… offended?”

“Of course not.”

I took a deep breath. “Well… so, obviously, I don’t know a lot that’s true about vampires” — the word slipped out accidentally. I was thinking so hard about my question, and then I realized what I'd said, and I froze.

“Yes?”

 She sounded normal like the word didn’t mean anything.

I exhaled in relief.

“Okay, I mean, I just know the things you’ve told me, and it seems like we’re pretty different. Physically. You look human— only better— but you don’t eat or sleep, you know. You don’t need the same things.”

“Debatable on some levels, but there are definitely truths in what you are saying. What’s your question?” I took a deep breath. “I’m sorry.”

“Ask me.”

I blurted it all out in a rush. “So I’m just an ordinarily human girl, and you are the most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen, and I’m just… overwhelmed by you, and part of that, naturally, is that I’m insanely attracted to you, which I’m sure you can’t have helped but notice, what with you being, super aware of my circulatory system, but what I don’t know is if it's like that for you. Or is it like sleeping and eating, which you don’t need and I do? Though I don’t want them nearly as much as I want you. You said that Eleanor and Royal go off and live like a married couple, but does that even mean the same thing for vampires? And the question is totally too much, completely not first date appropriate, and I'm sorry, and you don’t have to answer.”

I sucked in a huge breath.

“Hmmm. I would have said this was our second date.”

“You’re right, but still.”

She laughed. “Are you asking me about sex, Bella?”

My face got hot again. “Yes. I shouldn’t have”

She laughed again. “I did climb into your bed, Bella. I believe that makes this line of inquiry quite understandable.”

“You don’t have to answer.”

“I told you that you could ask me anything.” She paused. “So… in a general sense— Sex and Vampires One-Oh-One. We all started out as human, Bella, and most of those human desires are still there— just obscured behind more powerful ones. But we’re not thirsty all the time, and we tend to form… very strong bonds. Physical as well as emotional. Royal and Eleanor are just like any human couple who are attracted to each other. By which, I mean very, very annoying for those of us who have to live with them and even more for those who can hear their minds.”

I laughed quietly, and she joined in.

“Awkward,” I murmured.

“You have no idea,” she said darkly, “and now in the specific sense… Sex and Vampires One-Oh-One, Bella and Edythe.” She signed again, more slowly this time. “It… might not be possible for us.”

“Because I would have to be too… close?” I guessed.

“That would be a problem, but not the main one. Bella, you don’t know how… well, fragile you are. I have to mind my actions every moment we are together so that I don’t hurt you. I could kill you quite easily by accident.”

I thought about the first few times she touched me, how cautiously she’d moved, how much it had seemed to frighten her, how she would ask me to move my hand, rather than just pulling hers away.

Now she pressed her palm against my cheek.

“If I were too hasty… if I were at all distracted, I could reach out, and mean to touch your face, crush your skull by mistake. You don’t realize how incredibly breakable you are. I can never, never afford to lose any kind of control when I'm with you.”

If her life were in my hands that way, would I have already killed her? I cringed at the thought.

“I think I could be very distracted by you,” she murmured. 

“I am never not distracted by you.”

“Can I ask you something now— something potentially offensive?”

“It is your turn”

 “Have you ever had sex with another girl, or even another human?”

I was a little surprised that my face didn’t go hot again. It felt natural to tell her everything. “Not even a little bit. This is all a first for me. I told you, I’ve never felt like this about anyone before, not even close.”

“I know. It's just that I hear what other people think. I know that love and lust don’t always keep the same company.”

“They do for me”

“That's nice. We have one thing in common, at least”

“Oh” When she’d been talking before, about how we tend to form very strong bonds, physical as well as emotional, I couldn’t help but wonder if she was speaking from experience. I found that I was surprisingly relieved to know that wasn’t the case.

“So, you do find me distracting?”

“Indeed.” she was smiling again. “Would you like me to tell you the things that distract me?”

“You don’t have to”

“It was your eyes first. You have lovely eyes, Bella, like a sky without clouds. I’ve spent all my life in rainy climates, and so I often miss the sky, but not when I'm with you.”

“Um… thanks?”

She giggled. “I’m not alone. Six of your ten admirers started with your eyes too”

“Ten?”

“Not all the guys are as forward as Tyler or Mike. Do you want a list?”

“I think you’re making fun of me. Even if I was attracted to them, I’d never pick another option.”

“Next was your hair— I'm very fond of your hair.” She brushed some strands out of my face, tucking it behind my ears. “Or, maybe it was your legs that were second…” I could feel her hand move under the quilt and lightly run across my upper thigh. Even though she was just touching my sweatpants, I felt a tingling radiate across my thigh. “I’m not entirely sure. It all took me quite by surprise when I realized that only did I find you delicious, but also beautiful.”

My face and neck were burning. I knew it couldn’t be true, but at the moment, she was pretty convincing.

“Oh, and I didn’t even mention your breasts” Her hand moved up, tracing the outline of my nipples over my shirt.

“Okay, now I know you’re making fun of me.”

“I’m truly not. I love their petiteness”  

“Really? I’ve always kinda been ashamed of them”

She paused for a moment, then whispered, “So, did I answer your question to your satisfaction?”

“Um… yes.”

“Then you should sleep.”

“I’m not sure if I can.”

“Do you want me to leave?”

“No!” I said a little too loudly.

She laughed, then began to hum that same unfamiliar lullaby— her voice was like an angel’s, soft in my ear.

More tired than I realized, exhausted from a day of mental and emotional stress like I’d never felt before, I drifted to sleep in her cold arms.

[sunhalf]

@spirestar : Lucien tilts his head, tapping his fingernails against the hardcover book in his hands--There's a knowing look in his pale eyes. “You don’t get enough--sleep, do you?” ( lucien as a guest speaker at the college edythe goes to? :0 )

It's not like she can't smell it on him. He can, of course, smell it on her. The beautiful girl shifts, allows the incessant hum of voices, a dull roar she can mostly ignore and strives to, peel away. Focuses on his mind, as she had during the earlier lecture once she'd realized that he was a monster, too. It had been funny, hearing it in his head the moment their eyes had met across the lecture hall and he'd realized.

There's no real ill intent, behind his skull or his question — his mind is all aimless curiosity, that's all. That's good. If he was asking the question with the intent to harm or expose her, she would have to kill him, and that would be just one additional sin on her spine. THOU SHALT NOT KILL. She's reminded of Carine, her mind echoing those words, a desperate mantra in a hundred languages, in the days after learning of Earnest's suffering.

Either way — the pair are alone in the library at current, and Edythe allows her gold eyes to go half - lidded, allows her body to still like a statue, to stop pretending at humanity. It's almost a kind of relief, not to have to hide. "I'm afraid I haven't slept in — close to 90 years, now. But — you knew that, Mr. De Lange."

His mouth parts, and she answers his thoughts before they can become words. "Even if either of us inconspicuous, I can read your mind." It's just polite to warn others.

[rose-lily-hale]

@sintbert

Carine - Jodie Whittaker

Earnest - Siddharth Malhotra

Edythe - Holland Roden

Eleanor - Meagan Tandy

Beau - Froy Gutierrez

Royal - William Moseley

Jessamine - Alexa PenaVega

Archie - Harry Shum Jr.

Life and Death - Fancast

[twilightinanotherlife]

All versions of C/E are really great, but I think that Carlisle and Earnest get the least recognition. So I want to show them some love on this blog.

[shadowcatgirl09]

The Olympic Coven

[twilightishot]

Moodboard of Earnest Cullen

[vampiricci]

Beau Swan

[holly-and-honeybees]

"'Midnight' Twilight"

My Midnight Twilight AU uses the gender swapped names from Twilight Life and Death while also changing the character's personalities, mates, backstories, and powers. For example, Jessamine (Jasper) still can feel emotions, but an only manipulate them in a mental way to make the person feel an illusion of anger. And Archie (Alice) can see visions of the past and can share his visions. Everything is well, opposite. Carine (Carlisle) is a mob boss instead of a doctor, and has poor self-control around human blood. The Cullens also are not vegetarian vampires with one exception. For the changing of mates, Beau (Bella) is mated to an original character named Anthony. They adopted a daughter together named Lucy. Edythe (Edward) is also mated to Petra, (Peter) who is still Jessamine's best friend. Everything else should fall into place from there. I will be posting moodboards and maybe drawings of the characters. Sorry about the long post. Feel free to ask me any questions! (Quick little edit here: I changed the name of Royal Hale to Ronan Hale because it physically pained me to say his name out loud.)

[therealvinelle]

What are your thoughts on the Life and Death counterparts of the Cullens?

Oh boy, can of worms.

In short, my canon-friendly blog draws a hard line of NOPE when it comes to Life and Death. The Cullens are very reliant on their genders, swap it up and there wouldn’t be a coven in the first place. Not as we know it, anyhow. To swap things up without anything changing is to erase the experiences of men and women through history.

Disclaimer - I haven’t actually read the book, but I’ve gathered enough from the Twilight wiki. And since you’re not asking me about the plot, I think we’re good.

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Archie. Both men and women were admitted to mental asylums at the turn of the century, but it was largely women. Mary Alice Brandon was forcibly institutionalized by her abusive father, which in turn was allowed to happen because no one believed her stories and thought she was mad. The story screams “Hysterical woman”. Could the same thing have happened if she were a boy? Sure. But I find it reductive.

Carine. Hoo boy, this one had me so exasperated I have a fic on it. That one gets slightly AU as her father survives the vampire, whereas in canon he was killed, but I say it goes. Anyway, Carine. You can’t take a 17th century man, make him a woman, and expect the same character to come out the other end. You just can’t. Carine and Carlisle are not going to be the same person. I think if Carine was anything like her male counterpart, she would stay in Volterra far longer than he did, if she ever left, as Volterra would be the one place in the world she could pursue knowledge, where she could educate herself and become an academic, the same as any man. It’d be her equality oasis, and she’d be leaving behind more than friendships if she left. If she went into the human world, or even tried to become a doctor, she’d have to crossdress. And I imagine she’d still be crossdressing in 2005, because misogyny and sexism isn’t going away anytime soon and it’s just what she’s used to by now. Carine puts on trousers and a fake beard before she leaves the house, it’s just how she lives her life.

Earnest. This guy is just... lackluster. Esme was turned because her husband was shitty and her son died, so she jumped off a cliff. Alright, let’s give Earnest a shitty wife and a dead kid, now he’ll jump off a cliff too. It’s just so uninspired, and I question the fact that Esme was abused, while Earnest’s wife was an alcoholic. Why can’t the woman be abusive?

Edythe. Edward’s character is strongly informed by his gender, yet I can’t imagine girl Edward being any less creepy. In case any of my readers have read @theoriginalcarnivorousmuffin‘s fic Lily and the Art of Being Sisyphus, I picture Edythe as the character Tequila. Which is to say girl!Edward gives strong vibes of an intense and creepy (it’s Edward) lesbian. Given Edward’s backstory, Edythe would still be turned, though. So, that still happens.

Eleanor. Mauled by a bear. Alright. I have no thoughts on that. I lied, I do. Eleanor’s uninspiredness is one of the reasons why this book is redundant. There’s nothing to do with this character, and so nothing is done. Nothing changes. Which, if we’re changing everyone’s gender, then the meaningful way to do that is to look at how that would change things. How has male and female socialization affected Edward and Bella? Who would Jessamine, Carine, Royal be? These questions are unfortunately rhetorical because Life and Death sure isn’t answering them.

Jessamine. It’s nice that Jasper isn’t a confederate in this AU, but I just find the story of Jessamine contrived. Besides, Jasper wasn’t supposed to be in the army, he lied about his age. If gender changes nothing, wouldn’t Jessamine crossdress her way into the army? Not that I’d want her to, glad she didn’t, but... Like the other Cullens, Jessamine’s backstory becomes a thought exercise of “How can I make the Cullens still happen, and as close to their original backstories as possible?”, one in which the answer is apparently to treat their backstories like check points. Jessamine gets turned by Maria, check, becomes warrior, check. It just feels so lazy to me.

Royal. Easily the worst. Well, Carine is the worst in terms of making no sense, but Royal... don’t genderbend Rosalie, people. And if you insist then don’t take out the rape. It’s just insensitive and uncalled for all around.

Then we have the fact that Aro and Caius were killed off-screen in a ridiculous manner. Let’s say that they were caught killing Didyme. So what? There’s no vampire cops. They were the leaders of their coven. If they’re caught killing Didyme it would mean Aro is sad because Marcus will leave, and he just killed his sister for nothing. What won’t happen is that they’re executed.

Mele’s power is another thing I take issue with. If a power like hers existed in canon... well, Caius would have a gift, for starters. More, the Volturi guard would be a repository of loyalists who were bequeathed gifts as rewards. The vampire world would be combed for new gifts, as it would only be prudent for Aro to have as many as possible and his potential enemies none. It’d be a different world, period.

The Volturi debacee seems to me like a misguided shot at girlpower on Meyer’s end, that this time around Sulpicia and Athenodora come out on top while Aro and Caius get their just desserts. Like everything else in Life and Death, it fell flat.

EDIT: Apparently I mixed up my Royces and my Royals. Yikes. Praise be to @toquesreveladores for the catch

[panlight]

What was your favorite change in LaD? Least favorite? The one that made the most sense? Made the LEAST sense? (I'm looking at you, epic car chase. >.>)

Favorite change, hands-down, is that Beau actually has to give things up. They have to fake his death, Charlie and Renee mourn him and he never gets to see them again. That's . . . that's fair? That's the price you're supposed to pay to be young and immortal forever. I'm not reading vampire stories to have my cake and eat it too. I want there to be downsides and heartbreak and isolation from the human world. Otherwise I'd read about some other supernatural create that's not horror-based.

Least favorite change(s) are all the gendered backstory changes. There are some that are necessary: Carine being a nurse rather than a doctor for part of her career, for example. But SM tended to needlessly complicate things because she couldn't figure out how men would be victims of violence the way women were in Twilight. Earnest's wife being an alcoholic who drunkenly jumped off a cliff with their toddler is just VERY different than Esme's story in ways it didn't need to be. Earnest could have taken his newborn daughter and ran away, fearing for her safety given his wife's abuse, and the baby could have died of natural causes shortly after and that would be much more like Esme's story. The whole rival crime syndicate angle with Royal is needlessly complicated. Rowen could have attacked and left him for dead herself to more closely match Rosalie's story.

Makes the most sense . . . I mean again, the ending. There's no death baby (because Edythe can't be pregnant) and Beau becoming a vampire is more like how all the others did: without any warning and without much choice. He barely knows these people. He moved to Forks in January and he's changed in March. It's not this long drawn out "nooooo we can't change you it would be wrong" only to get the "surprise! Actually everything worked out Perfect Piece of Forever-ly!"

I don't think the Mele thing makes any sense. The whole thing feels very "working backwards" in that SM couldn't conceive of a Volturi triumvirate working without Aro's power, so she had to invent a way for powers to be transferred somehow. So she invented a vampire whose power was . . . stealing other vampires' powers but not being able to use them herself and only being able to give them to someone else. That's so weird and so specific. Why would anyone develop that kind of power? How is it useful to Mele herself? It's always felt very clunky to me. Personally I don't think powers are that important and Sulpicia could have ruled with fear just fine -- she killed her own super powerful husband, after all! Tremble before her! But I'd rather there were a ~magic ritual used to transfer the power, or she got Aro's gift after eating his ashes or whatever. Mele makes no sense to me.

(Also, yes, the car chase makes no sense. It was an answer to a question no one was asking and it interrupted the flow of the story. Did not need a high octane action sequence here. It felt out of place and I cannot accept that this happened and it's NEVER MENTIONED in any of the other books when Alice stealing a car in Italy became a running joke in the family).

Also don't think it makes sense that Beau like Bella is super controlled. It basically proves that it wasn't that Bella was "mentally prepared" or whatever, it was that she was the protagonist and was always going to have an easy time of it. Beau had no time to prepare and basically did just as well.

[pumpkinpie1111]

I just reread 'Life and Death' and if I'm being honest, I think I like it better than 'Twilight'. I like Edythe so much more than Edward, and the dynamic between her and Beau seemed more authentic than Bella and Edward. Overall, I loved the story and how Beau changed at the end, though I wish they could have made it possible for him to see Charlie and Renee again.