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chelseypprimrose · 2 years ago

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Home Movie / Negan x Reader / S7 / 18+

Warnings: daddy kink, oral, unprotected/rough sex, slight dom!negan, talk of masturbation, Negan references himself as “the big bad wolf” (cringe but I love it), creampie, forbidden attraction, talk of voyerism, use of derogatory language, glove/leather kink (slightly)

Summary: Negan finds a smut tape of you on the video camera at Alexandria and makes it his mission to seek you out.

A/N: I got this idea in my head while I was watching the episode of season 7 where the saviours first visit Alexandria with Negan and he finds Rick’s confessional video as he’s emptying the houses out. also inspired by another Negan series called Polaroids by @reevesdriver on here as it’s one of my faves ever! 🫶🏼 I just had to write a Negan imagine in the TWD universe again bc as much as I like pre apocalypse Negan, I needed to write apocalypse Negan because there isn’t anything sexier to me than a murderous man swinging a barbed wire bat and talking about his dick, hope u enjoy 🤍 x

“Goddamn it.” You huffed out, a long breath leaving your lips as you shoved the deer that was on your shoulders further up to prevent yourself from dropping it on the ground. You’d been gone since the crack of dawn, with Daryl gone at this point in time, you were one of the best hunters that Alexandria still had. While you felt some type of way about putting in so much effort for someone else to just take the shit you’d risked your life for, you knew Rick needed people on his side at the moment. It would be foolish to try and be defiant right now, too much blood had been spilt recently and you didn’t want to be the reason it continued. Yeah, you’d played your part in the attack on the outpost but you’d all been in acceptance that it was just that outpost. That once that was cleared, you were rid of the foreboding threat that was the Saviours. How wrong you’d been in that moment, it was only the beginning.

You were now dealing with the aftermath of Negan, having to risk life and limb, bend over backwards to make him happy, the asshole. You couldn’t count the amount of times you’d had to hold your tongue to stop yourself from verbally berating his people, knowing what the consequences of giving them a piece of your mind would be. You hadn’t been there when he had killed Abe and Glenn, only hearing the horrid, sordid details after the fact.

The blood from the deer that you’d managed to kill was seeping into your white tee, making your shoulders feel sticky and matting up in the tips of your hair. You signalled a high pitched whistle, waiting for the large dark beige gate to be opened, allowing you enter back into Alexandria. Your eyes found the large sign, “Alexandria Safe Zone: Mercy for the Lost. Vengeance for the Plunderers.” You scoffed, how fucking ironic. The gate began to be moved, revealing three large vans parked up just a couple feet away from the entrance, the Saviour vans. “For fuck sake.” You thought, what could that bastard want with you now, you couldn’t help but feel slightly nervous.

“Negan, you’ll want to see this.” Negan turned to look at the saviour approaching him, holding out a small silver video recorder. “Well, what do we have here Grimes? Got my fingers crossed for a little freaky deaky!” He grinned, crossing his fingers in front of Rick’s face. He slid his hand into the leather handle of the camera, a video of Rick coming into view, looking a lot more threatening than he did now. He could barely make out it was Rick, with the massive beard grown on his face he wasn’t used to seeing. “Woah! Is that you? Underneath all that man bush? Holy shit, I would have not of messed with that guy… but you aren’t that guy anymore. Are you Rick?” He grinned, Rick stood with a stern look on his face, not moving. Negan continued to watch the interview, Rick speaking candidly about the amount of people that he’d killed. The video started to go static, indicating there was a tape that had been recorded on top of the original. Negan’s eyebrows furred in confusion, before his eyes widened at what the camera had blessed his eyes with. He watched as you were stood in-front of the camera, a light pink lace open cut babydoll set on, your breast sat in the cups, nipples on show for the camera. You started posing for the camera, running your hands through your hair, holding it up Pam Anderson style. A large sexy smile on your lips, turning to do a 180 spin, your smooth backside coming into view for the camera, Negan pulling the camera closer to his face, almost not believing what he was seeing. He didn’t recognise you, maybe it had been someone that used to be in Alexandria, wasn’t a member anymore. He growled lowly, that would be just his luck, the sexiest woman he’d seen in recent history just missed by a couple weeks. He moved his attention back to the camera, now watching you spread out on the bed, playing with your nipples while starting to rub your folds underneath your panties before the camera cut out, showing Rick’s interview once again.

“Fuck! Just when it was getting good!” He cursed, snapping the cameras screen back into place. A fire now in his stomach, his jeans now contracting around his hard bulge. He couldn’t get you out his mind, he knew he’d remember if he’d come across you before, so who the hell were you?

You’d managed to get the deer half way back to your house before being stopped by one of Negan’s minions, asking what you were doing. You ignored him, just wanting to get back, the saviour hadn’t liked that, grabbing you by the waist, dragging you towards the circle of people that were gathered around one of the vans. You could hear Rick talking about some guns that he’d found, apparently Negan thought you were trying to stash items, to prevent having to hand them over to his people.

“Negan. Got a rude bitch here for you, was about to run home, sneak this thing back with her.” You slightly rolled your eyes. “How am I meant to sneak a deer back, smartass?” You questioned, not believing someone could be so stupid. The man’s face contorted into a rage fuelled look, his hand raising up to you, before he had the chance, Negan whistled. “Hey! We don’t raise a hand to a woman, you know the fucking rules.” He stepped forward, now coming into full view of you, his eyes glancing over your body, looking like a kid on Christmas. You were still here, he couldn’t believe his luck. Lucille sat on his shoulder, his one gloved hand wrapped tightly around the bottom of the wood. “Now I don’t think we’ve been properly introduced. I’m Negan.” He smirked, holding his free hand out for a handshake, his large frame towering slightly over you. You were met with a slight musk, you recognised it as an old spice fragrance, masculine and powerful. You looked at it, questionable look on your face before your hand met his, engulfing you from the size of it. His rough skin a stark contrast from the softness of yours, the movement felt foreign, you shouldn’t feel this way, especially when it’s him.

You saw Rick tensing up as he watched on from the sideline, wondering what Negan was up to, showing such civilness to you. “Nice to meet you, sir. I’m Y/N.” You stated, his smirk getting wider. “Sir? Oh, you my dear, are like the gift that keeps on damn giving!” He exclaimed, bewilderment sitting on the faces of those around you and yourself. What the hell did he mean by that? “Load em up, we’re leaving.” He commanded, the saviours starting to retreat back to their vans, Negan not moving from where he was stood.

A few of the Alexandrian’s moved away as well, not wanting to be in his presence for a moment longer than they were required to. “Now doll, take that damn thing off your shoulders, wouldn’t want you to hurt yourself.” You reluctantly agreed, placing the deer just behind you, before Negan nodded at two remaining men, them coming behind you to take your prized find. You scowled, fury raging inside your soul, you’d risked your life trying to get just one actual nice, fulfilling meal for everyone, just to have your hard work stolen off you. “I believe that’s mine.” You spat out, the fire showing from your eyes as you glared up at him. “What’s yours is now ours doll, or hasn’t Rick drilled that into you yet?” He asked, aware of the sexual innuendo of his words, his tongue rolling across his lower lip. You huffed, knowing if you talked back further, it wasn’t going to end well for you. You felt like you were tasting blood from how hard you bit down on your tongue, fists balled up.

Negan walked over slightly to the back of the last truck, the doors open, a load of stuff that you recognised from peoples homes in the compound. Picking something up, he walked back over to you, Lucille still sat on his shoulder. You saw the small video camera, not thinking much of it, not knowing there was a tape inside that you probably would have never wanted him to see. He placed it on your chest, it digging into your skin, sat just on top of your heaving breasts.

“You should be careful with such sensitive material, never know what kind of perverts going to come across it!” He joked, your eyes widening in embarrassment as you finally understood what he was talking about. You got a look of disgust rise on your face, you couldn’t believe he’d seen such an intimate piece of film. You went to grab the camera from him before he gripped tight on it, making it harder to move. “Now doll, it’s a good job I found this before any of my men did, you know that right? They would have taken this back with them and sat around in a circle jerk together, I however am returning this to you, soooo… How about a thank you, Negan?” He demanded playfully, leaning closer to your face, nose almost touching your cheek. You gulped shallowly, your hand moving over his that was holding the camera to your chest. “Thank you, Negan.” You managed to get out, the words tasting like poison to you.

He laughed, letting go of the camera, allowing you take it back with a yank. “You are more than welcome, baby. Also, in case you were wondering, you are most definitely my favourite Alexandrian now.” He winked, walking backwards before getting in the truck, holding his head out the window, giving a small wave to you as they drove out the front gates. You huffed, letting out a breath you didn’t realise you held in your throat.

It had now been a couple weeks since Negan’s last visit, he’d sent groups of his saviours in between but never actually visiting himself. You were thankful that this had been the case, you’d found yourself thinking about what could have been. You’d began to let your mind wonder to the scenario of meeting Negan in another situation, you couldn’t help but be attracted to him. He was one of the most attractive men you’d ever come across, it was just a shame he was also the most evil men you’d ever come across.

Unbeknown to you, he’d found himself thinking about you too, that fucking video. He’d managed to score some old age dvd porno films from supply runs over the years but he couldn’t even watch them to get off anymore, only thinking of your little smut tape. It wasn’t even like you’d done anything massively explicit on the tape, it shutting off before it managed to get that far but he had concluded that was probably worse. It allowed his mind to run at all the different possibilities, what did you sound like when you moaned, what would you sound like whimpering out his name as he was filling you up? What did you look like when you reached climax? All these unanswered questions racing through his mind as he got out his sexual frustration on his wives, not caring which one it was as all he pictured below him was you. Moaning out your name instead of theirs, the women not caring that much as they were only there to be used by him, no affectionate feelings connecting them to him.

You were currently in the garage, clipboard in hand, biting on the end of your pencil in anxiousness as you went over inventory. You were expecting another visit today, making you want to double check over everything to make sure there wasn’t any discrepancies in the numbers. That was the last thing you needed, especially since you were now actively trying to get plans in place to take the fight back to the Saviours. You were just finishing up when a loud knock startled you, the garage door vibrating at the motion. You put the clipboard down on the side, bending down to pull the door up.

“Well well well! If it isn’t my favourite Alexandrian. I’ve missed you, doll.” It was Negan, that signature grin on his face once again, eyes raking over your body. You felt sheepish under his wandering eyes, now knowing he’d practically seen you naked since he’d come across that video of yours. You sighed, hands resting on your hips. “What do you need, Negan?” You asked, him walking into the garage now, the door slamming back shut. The anxiety started to kick in as you were now alone with just him, as he looked over the shelves, picking up random items and studying them. “Nothing really, just wanted to see your pretty face. I just cannot stop thinking about you, doll! I wonder why that is, huh?” He laughed, you knowing what he was alluding to. He noticed how you crossed your hands over your chest, almost trying to shield yourself from him.

“Oh no no no! There’s no need for all that, I’ve seen those pretty babies already, you’ve nothing to be ashamed of, doll.” He sauntered over to you, towering over you again like last time, practically feeling the heat from his body on yours. You couldn’t take your eyes off his, the way he looked at you making you get slick. He wasn’t one to hide his true emotion, his jeans getting tighter as he imagined you as he saw in the video, putting on a little private show for him. “I’ve gotta know, what made you film something like that? You must of known someone could come across it, why take the risk?” He questioned you, hand coming to rub over his bearded chin. “In this world, there’s not much opportunity to feel sexy. I just wanted something to look back at when I felt down about myself.” You squeaked out, feeling very intimate. Here you were telling the leader of a rival camp your biggest insecurities, possibly giving him ammunition to further torment you and your people.

“Oh doll, you could be covered in damn walker guts, and I’d still think you were the sexiest thing on this damn shithole planet.” He purred, grabbing you slightly by the chin, making you smile slightly. You shook your head, pulling yourself out of his grasp. “What are you doing Negan? We can’t be thinking like this. I can’t be thinking like this. You… you are the enemy.” Your hands resting on the lapels of his leather jacket, the slight coldness of it sending shivers down your spine. You leaned dangerously close to Negan’s lips, his beard scratching the surface of your skin. “Rick would fucking kill me, he’d fucking kill me, if he knew I think about you the way I do. Think about you when I touch myself, wishing it was you.” You whispered, getting more confident in your tone, your eyes staring at his lips, then back up to his dark eyes, your lips partially open as you let out shallow breaths, anything you could to try and lower your heart rate that was pumping under your chest. The silence in the room was deafening, you started to get nervous again, like you were just waiting for him to recoil away from you and laugh at your confession, that this had all been a massive joke to humiliate you further. “Goddamn it doll, looks like great minds think alike because I’ve been doing the same damn thing since I saw that little treat on that fucking camera.” He chuckled, picking you up in one swift movement, placing you on top of the workplace bench.

“Did you think about me claiming your pussy, doll? Fucking you until you can barely remember your goddamn name? What would Ricky say if he saw you submitting yourself so easily to me, the big bad wolf?” The dark tenor of Negan’s voice caused you to whimper in half fear, half pleasure. You could tell his personality was darkening to the more intense side, the jolly joking and fucking about traits were completely absent. You didn’t feel terrified though, like you did when he committed some of the horrific atrocities in front of you, the feelings of excitement causing your hairs to stand on edge and your pussy getting wet with every word that spilled out of his mouth.

“I did, god I want you inside of me.” You confessed, as Negan’s hands ghosted over your cleavage that was exposed by your tank top, before he pulled it over your head, your breasts spilling out of your lace bra. He shoved his gloved hand into your mouth, commanding you to suck. You obliged, your hands holding his arm in place as you swirled your tongue around the two thick fingers, head bobbing up and down as you did. The leather of the glove rubbery on your tongue, causing you to moan onto his fingers.

He grinned at you, a deep grunt as he leaned over capturing your right nipple into his mouth, suckling it, swirling his tongue around and biting it with his teeth causing you to moan and pull his head against your chest as you kept sucking hard on his fingers. He did it again, giving you light bites and licks, alternating between your two erect nubs. Negan removed his fingers from your mouth with a pop, bring them down to give one final pinch to your nipples, the wetness of his one hand causing the cold air to make your nipple more sensitive.

“Get on your knees, I want to see your mouth full of my dick, doll.” Negan grinned with a wicked smile, his hands undoing his jeans, letting them fall to pool at his boots. You felt your mouth salivate, eager to take him as slid off the table onto your knees. You started to lick him, going from bottom to top slowly, teasing him like he did to you with his dirty sweet nothings in your ears, hearing his low groans. You sucked the precum from his tip and swirled your tongue under his head, and then looked up at him, making sure you held eye contact with him, opening your mouth and taking him in little by little, bobbing your head up and down. Your mouth was being stretched wide, you started to move a little faster, sucking him, licking him, taking him deeper and deeper until you felt him in your throat. He was big, causing you to gag a little as your eyes began to water, your throat starting to get a sore feeling within it as he fucked your throat at a quick pace. He gave a slight gasp and his hand took a firm hold of your head keeping you in place, as his hips bucked, making it his mission to get as far down your throat as possible.

“I need to fuck you now, doll. Get up here.” Negan pulled back to your feet, slamming you stomach down onto the table, almost ripping your jeans as he pulled them down your thighs, your moist panties now on show, one tug and the flimsy material broke in two halves, now fully exposing your slick entrance to Negan. He rubbed his dick up and down your slit eliciting a pleasurable moan from both of you, pushing his length inside and then pulling out and rubbing it down your slit again.

“Please... Negan! Please!” You whimpered out, pinching your nipples, trying to get some relief from his teasing. He smirked down at you, that dark gaze watching your every move. “Please what? I want to hear you saying you want daddy's dick. I want to hear you beg me. Come on little girl, say it.” he demanded as he rubbed his length along your wet slit. “Please daddy! I want you deep inside me, please fuck me!” He groaned and pushed himself hard inside your walls, with no hesitations. You screamed, even being sopping wet, you were too tight around his shaft. He leaned on top of you and started to kissing your neck, biting lightly. Negan felt you getting used to his girth, you started to move your hips against him, wanting friction. He started to thrust in slowly, checking for your reaction to his movements. “I'm fine, please, fuck me daddy!” You moaned out, Negan pulling almost all the way out of you and then thrusting in hard making you gasp.

“You're loving this doll, aren’t you? Yeah, you're loving having my dick inside of you. I’d love good old Rick to walk in right now, see you bent over for the big bad wolf.” he chuckled, turning you on even more. Thrusting again and again building up speed, going faster and harder, just like you had imagined he would in your dirty dreams, but so much better than your imagination. “I'm going to fuck you like the slut you are and you are going to thank me for it.” He whispered in your ear, pulling your hair with one hand and holding your hips firmly with the other as he snapped his groin into you, making your ass ripple with the powerful movements. “I want to hear you doll, thank me.” You almost rolled your eyes at the narcissistic request but your brain was too blank to comprehend it. “Thank you, thank you Negan!”

You focused on the obscene sounds of your bodies echoing around you, amplified by how small the garage was. Negan continued fucking you rough and hard, until you felt the orgasm surging inside of you, building fast and strong. When it finally hit you, you screamed with the intensity of it, your body shook with the pleasure waves, running through your core. Negan released your hair to hold your hips so he could keep fucking you. His thrusts shortened, you clenched around his length, a groan leaving his mouth, feeling him finally release just after you. Negan pulled himself out of you, watching as his cum spilled out of your hole, dripping slightly onto the concrete floor below you. He leaned on top of you, leaving small kisses on your spine, body covered in a light sheen of sweat.

“Y/N! We need you out here! Negan is on his way!” You turned to Negan, a confused look on your face, he’d snuck into the compound to fuck you and now you had to act like he wasn’t even here.

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zombiigrll · 11 months ago

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INSECURITIES. ⋆｡°✩ carl grimes x reader .ᐟ WORD COUNT .ᐟ ⭑ 1.1K ꩜ .ᐟ WARNINGS ⭑ hurt to comfort, use of y/n, spoilers for twd 6x9, carl and reader are already in a relationship .ᐟ SUMMARY .ᐟ ⭑ you help carl after he gets shot. ꩜ .ᐟ A/N .ᐟ ⭑ ive been rewatching the early seasons of the walking dead and seeing everything carl went through again makes me SOB HYSTERICALLY. so ofc i needed to write this and make you guys feel my pain 😈 my creative juices have also been flowing a little bit more recently... but its also a little short too......... hope u dont mind 🙏

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he never showed any of his insecurities to you before. he always made sure that you felt comfortable telling him things, but he would never fully open up to you.

you were aware of his mother passing, that his dads friend died, and just how he's experienced so much death. but he never told you how anybody died. he wouldn't tell you no matter what.

that was until the walkers flooded the streets of alexandria.

as always, you were by carls side. you held his right hand in line as you two along with rick, michonne, jessie, ron, and sam walked through the herd in gut-stained ponchos, attempting to lead them to the quarry nearby.

but everything went downhill. fast.

sam saw something in the herd. no one was sure what, but he freaked out. his cries were loud, and gave away his position.

the walkers killed him, then they made their way to jessie, who had refused to let go of sams hand.

and if it wasn't for you using your machete to cut her arm off, carl would've died, too.

you thought that was it, that you would just have to slash through some more walkers to get somewhere safe, but not yet.

you looked to the side and noticed ron pointing his gun right to you.

but right as he shot, michonne stabbed him.

you were supposed to get shot. but due to the timing...

"dad..?" you heard carl from your left.

you turned to face him, and you immediately noticed his eye.

it was gone. a trail of dark crimson leaking from his socket. you caught him before he could fully fall.

"no.. no, no!" you cried trembling as you held him.

rick runs over and picks carl up. you and michonne pull out your weapons and begin clearing a path with adrenaline coursing through the three of you.

you guys eventually make it to the infirmary.

rick places carl onto the bed. the rest of that night, a loud ringing played in your ears.

your mind raced wildly. thinking of all the possible outcomes, but you were sure he was going to die. i mean, he was shot in the face.

after the nurse helped patch him up the best she could, you sat on the opposite side of rick. rick held one of his hands, you held the other. you rested your head on top of his shoulder, sobbing.

rick was crying, too. praying for carl to be okay.

that's when you felt his hand hold yours back, tightly.

you lifted your hand up to look at rick, and he had the same expression. he was holding both of your guys' hands.

your sobs turned hopeful as you began to smile.

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a few days had passed. carl was awake, thankfully. he tried to get you to leave the room, but you refused.

"i don't want you to see me like this." carl strenly spoke, his voice cracking slightly as he attempted to hide his face.

you walked over to his side, putting your hand up to his face to carefully cup his now scarred cheek. you turned his face so he could look at you. "i'm not going anywhere."

he sighed and closed his eye, knowing he wouldn't be able to make you go away. "i don't understand you."

"what?"

"after everything i've done.. you're still here with me." he lightly chuckled. "i'm really not a good person, y/n. theres so much you don't know about me."

"nothing you could tell me would make me believe that." you shook your head, moving your hand down to his and holding it tightly.

"you say that now.." he turns his head away. "if i told you what i've done, you'd think i'm a monster. you'd hate me."

"you're not a monster, carl. what are you talking about?"

"i've killed people. a kid i didn't know the name of, my dads friend.. my mom." he kept his eyes shut as he spoke, his voice and body trembling.

you held his hand tighter, looking at him softly. "i'm sure there were reasons to all of that. i don't believe you're a monster."

carl stayed silent.

you brought your other hand up, moving his hair behind his ear before holding his face.

"i love you. no matter what." you smiled at him with your eyebrows furrowed. "no matter who many people you've killed or hurt, no matter if you've done shitty things in the past, no matter how many scars, i don't care. because i love you."

he opened his eye to look at you, he quickly sat up and put his arms around you, putting his head in the crook of your neck.

"hey.. be careful for your eye." you put your arms around him carefully, your hand on the back of his head.

"i love you, too." he silently mumbled. "i don't understand how i got so lucky with you."

you laughed, kissing the top of his head. "i've done bad things too, carl. it's just something we can't avoid now. it doesn't make us monsters." you pushed away from the hug, leaving your hands on his shoulders. "i got lucky with you, too. in my eyes, you're an angel."

his eye moves all over your features. you knew he had been adjusting and learning how to see without his other eye, but seeing it happen right in front of you was a bit difficult to witness.

"i should've been the one that got shot. you saw me kill jessie." you sighed, your gaze turning down to the floor. "he was aiming at me."

carl shakes his head. "it's not your fault. it's no ones fault. if he had shot you, i think he would've really killed you. but i got shot, and i'm alive." he smiles at you, tilting his head as he continues taking you in. "i'm glad it was me."

you tilted your head, pursing your lips slightly. "i guess either way, no matter who got shot, no one would be okay with it." you laughed, trying to make light of the situation. "...you should get some rest."

"i know." he moves away and lays back down, looking back up at the ceiling.

you stand up, leaning down to give him a quick kiss on his forehead before turning back away to the door. "goodnight, carl."

"wait."

you turned back around. "hm?"

"...could you stay?" carl asked, his voice softened.

your lips curved up into a smile, walking back over to him. "of course." you sat back down next to him, holding his hand again, similarly to when he was first shot. "get some sleep, okay?"

he nodded, closing his eye. "alright. i love you."

"i love you too, carl. always."

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optics-anddesign2 · 11 months ago

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okay I had the strangest experience because I watched the first 3 episodes and went "this is great! a little silly but thats to be expected, no where near as bad as season 3" and then the last 3 episodes happened !! anyways

thoughts/take aways :

ty for letting them say fuck

aidan gallagher get out of the writers room and get a girlfriend

baby shark, seriously, that was at least 4 years ago

lila character assasination is CRAZY omg. she would never?? do anything with five 😭 her and five have hated eachother this entire time no matter how many years they were in a train station she would not get w his dusty ass

I dont understand how this happened except somehow aidan got leverage with the plot bc the GREENHOUSE?? SHOTS??? ARE LIKE IDENTICAL?? TO HIS WEIRD INSTAGRAM SELF INSERT FIC?? i hate this boy, get ur hands off my tua

also generally the way they have Lila act abt her family??? idk it feels like such a bland plotline to make her and diego hate being parents

the chubby jokes about diego are also crazy

the fives scene was so cringey 😭 i see what u were going for but it literally just gave citadel of ricks it was not good, and the rain man joke.

the plotline of klaus getting kidnapped was genuinely crazy to toss in there and play for jokes, they only acted like it was serious when the guy threatened allison like no he has been sex trafficking the hargreeves on screen for an entire episode

also while klaus being really paranoid of dying without his powers COULD have been a good plot line I feel like they did not do it well and it just ended up feeling like promoting his addiction

that goop ending was really weird, why'd they get gooped, what if they all died normally no goop involved, they window breaking shot was cool just have that massive monster kick their asses why goop

why did they imply Viktor is like treating all the women in town badly in the first episode 😭 viktor has NEVER acted like this. like please let trans men be GOOD men it doesnt men them girly to not treat women like shit

they act like sloan died and then never elaborated on it???

please explore why raymond left allison and fire aidan gallagher

klaus immediately going for the dog tags was actually rlly sweet almost cried

the two seconds of young apocalypse five were the best moments of the whole season

plot holes bc i was gonna be nice but you did this to yourself :

why is everyone calling it marigold like its not just random thing harlan came up with

"power up" THIS IS NOT WHAT ANY OF UR POWERS LOOKED LIKE UNTIL RN WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING

and fives jumps are purple??? for the reason of ??? ??? why??

and WHY THE HELL DOES LILA HAVE LaZER EYES. ALL THEIR POWERS ARE LIKE THEIRS BUT SLIGHTLY DIF/MORE POWERFUL AND SHES JUST GOT LAZER EYES 😭

why were lila and five living like they were in the apocalypse in that train station when they clearly could pop up and time travel around??? like go up take a shower, time travel to sometime with stores, buy some meat, why are you hunting rats, theres literally a deli in there

also they were in there for SEVEN YEARS and never saw another five until the last episode????

I also really heavily doubt it would take five 7+ years to figure out the train system

also the way allison pours the marigold directly into klaus' wound and it just works 😭 how does it work both by drinking it AND ALSO BY POURING IT DIRECTLY IN A MANS GUNSOHT WOULD

what? was going on w Sy Grossman ?? did we ever figure that out?? did they just kill him off and leave us wondering?? why did he say he was Jennifers dad? was he actually with the Keepers? was he just working for Abigail?? no fucking clue

one of the hargreeves (i think luther) called bens death the jennifer incident in s3,,,, but they did not know the girls name and also allegedly had their memories wiped???? okay,,,

also i thought sparrow ben KNEW jennifer already cuz he had her name in his journal or whatever?? but now he doesn't???

why was she in the squid 😭 ?

honestly im sure theres more ive forgotton but omg, that was not good 😭

#the umbrella academy #tua season 4 #tua s4 #tua spoilers #spoilers #tua #umbrella academy

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final-girl96 · 2 years ago

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Broken World: Chapter Twelve

"He's not here!" I called. They came down the steps from the little walkway to the stairs and looked at me. Rick came over and knelt down in front of me. "Are you alright?" He asked. "Yeah. I think u might have a concussion, though," I said. Daryl stormed over and pointed his crossbow in my face. "What the fuck did ya do to him?!" He yelled. I looked up at him with a blank expression. "Either shoot me or get that fucking thing out of my face." Rick stepped between us and looked at him. "We don't kill the living," he said.

Daryl lowered the bow and walked over to T-Dog. "You got a durag or something?" He asked. T looked at him, pulled out a bandanna, and handed it to him. Daryl bent down in front of Merle's severed hand, picked it up, placed it on the bandanna, and then stood up and put it in Glenn's backpack. "What happened?" Rick asked me.

"Well, after you guys left, walkers started to push against the door, so I killed as many as I could while trying to get Merle to calm down. I didn't have my cuffs on me, so I told him I was going to go to the precinct, which is only like six blocks away. I told him to just sit tight and to try and keep quiet and out of sight as much as possible. Then I left out that other door." I gestured to the other door on the other side.

"I did as I said I was going to do. I made it to the precinct and found a pair of handcuff keys. Then I gathered what I could that was still there from when Glenn found me. We weren't able to take it all, so we left it there. It was just starting to get dark, so I decided to risk it and started making my way back. I had to fight a little more than I did on the way, but nothing I couldn't handle. I wasn't gone for more than maybe four or five hours. When I got back and opened the door, Merle rushed me. Slammed me into the wall, then proceeded to knock my head against it a few times until I blacked out."

I looked up at Daryl, who was glaring at me. "I tried to save your worthless ass brother. Won't make that mistake again. Now I have a concussion, accompanied by a pounding headache, nausea, and dizziness. Oh, and my head was fucking bleeding too. So fuck him, I hope he dies out there" I told him. He didn't say anything for a few minutes, opting to just glare at me through squinted eyes. "Don't blame 'em for not trustin' ya! You turned on us before!"

I rolled my eyes and slowly stood up with Rick's help. "Are you going to be okay?" He asked. "Yeah, I'll be fine. Just need to get off this damn roof." We followed the blood trail that Merle left in his wake. Rick was going on how there was a lot of blood, and Daryl went on saying how Merle was tough and nothing could kill him. "He's not wrong. Merle is a stubborn asshole. He used his belt as a tourniquet. Which means that it helped slow the blood down some. He could have gotten out of here if he found something to press against the wound."

"Even the strongest man can die from blood loss," Rick said. I nodded, "You're right. But trust me, Rick, Merle Dixon is not one of those men. I've seen him survive a hell of a lot worse." We followed the blood through the building. He had gone the way I went but then turned, which led us into a kitchen area.

His belt was on the counter, and one of those flatteners that you used to push down on a burger was laying there with burners still on. "What is that burned stuff?" Glenn asked. "Skin," Rick and I said simultaneously. "He craterized the wound," Rick told him. Daryl was standing by the window. "Told ya my brother was tough. He was able to get out of this death trap." Looking over at him, I saw that the window was broken. Merle had gone down the fire escape and out into the infested city.

"This wouldn't have happened if you didn't drip the damn key!" Daryl yells, pointing a finger at T-Dog. Then he turns to me, face screwed up in anger. "Don't even think about blaming me, Dixon! None of us are at fault. If your brother wasn't so out of fucking control all the damn time, then we wouldn't be in this situation. I stayed back for you! I stayed back with that asshole because I know what he means to you! Because I still fucking care for some God only knows why reason!" His face softens just the tiniest bit and doesn't say anything.

Then Rick offers him a deal. We would look for Merle, but he needed to be quiet and corporate. T-Dog said he would help only if we got the bag of guns Rick had dropped by the tank when he came into the city. Daryl agreed, and we were now in one of the offices. Glenn was on the floor. He had drawn a map of the block, with a marker on the floor. He used an eraser, a clip, and I balled up post-it to show where everything was.

Rick and T-Dog would be in an alley a block or two away just in case he needed to change directions; he was going to be the one running for the bag. Daryl and I would be in the alley closest to where the tank is. Daryl had a crossbow. It was silent. Glenn trusted that I would have his back if need be. We all went to our assigned spots and got ready. Glenn was with Daryl and I, hiding behind a dumpster. "Got some balls for a chinaman," Daryl said. I rolled my eyes and looked at him. "He's Korean."

"Whatever." Glenn nodded to be before he left the alley to go after the bag. Daryl and I stood in silence. I had taken my t-shirt off and shoved it in my bag, so now I was only wearing a tank-top. Daryl kept glancing at my right shoulder. I knew he was looking at the scar that was there. There was one in the front and the back.

"It's a bullet wound. I was shot two years ago by some drug addict, who murdered his girlfriend. He kept saying it wasn't her. That it was a demon that took over her body. He shot me because he saw the demon when he looked at me. Fucker was high out of his damn mind. I got lucky that it went all the way through, but I had to do physical therapy for six months."

He didn't say anything. He didn't have the chance because someone was yelling. Daryl stepped out and slammed him against the brick wall. He continued to yell someone's name, and Daryl covered his mouth. Glenn came running back into the alley when two guys came running up on us. We tried to fight them off, Daryl shooting an arrow into one of the guys' ass before they took off, taking Glenn with them and leaving their guy with us.

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dannyo000 · 2 years ago

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This is the first part of my Rick fanfiction. Follow the character through their life and attraction to the taken sheriff.

Word count: 4.6k

Warning: Self harm; suicidal talk/mentions; angst; character death (not sure what else)

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I yawned sitting in the main lab. Computers and gadgets surrounding me. I rubbed my eyes and stood up from the computer.

I froze when my eyes caught sight of our security cameras. There was a group of living people outside our heavily armed doors. I could see 2 guys arguing while everyone around them looked upset and worried, constantly glancing around, making sure no walkers were close.

"Come on, let's go. Let's get out of here. Let's go. Please." A man with a black t-shirt on and army pants begged the sheriff.

I hurried over to see how many people exactly the group was. I moved the camera over and saw it was quite a big group. I laughed and smiled, other living people.

The sheriff was the only one who noticed the camera move. He was trying to convince everyone that someone was inside. I grabbed my gun and looked around to make sure my dad was nowhere close by. Quickly, I made my way to the front of the building.

"Vi, open the main entrance door." I called out and slowly the door began sliding upwards.

"Hello?" I spoke, cocking my gun. "Anyone infected?"

"One of our group was but he didn't make it." The sheriff spoke, his gun also pointed towards me.

"What are you guys doing here?" I asked, looking around behind them. "What do u want?"

"A chance."

I nodded and uncocked my gun.

"Im going to have to have you all submit a blood test. My father would kill me if I didn't have you guys do it."

Not like he might already since I'm breaking our number one rule of not letting anyone in from the outside.

"We can do that."

"Grab all your things. Once this door closes it has to stay closed."

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Everyone finally got into the building. I turned around and gulped, seeing my dad standing behind everyone.

"Vi, seal the main entrance! Kill the power up here." Dad spoke and crossed his arms with his brows raised as the door beeped and clanged.

I put my gun in the back of my jeans.

"Rick Grimes." The sheriff held his hand out to my dad.

He eyed his hand before shaking it with his own.

"Doctor Edwin Jenner. And my daughter Beatrice Jenner." He pulled me to his side.

I gave Rick a side smile and a wave. My dad pulls me and leads us to the elevator. We all fit in packed tightly.

"Your daughter always go around packing heat like that?" The guy with a crossbow asked referring to my gun.

"There was so many left around that I took it upon myself to learn how to use one. Took forever go convince my dad to learn." I laughed answering the question myself.

Rick laughed and smiled at me. Seeing him up close. He was honestly very attractive. And im not just saying that because he's the first guy I've seen since all hell broke loose in the labs.

We made it down to our zone and began walking towards the big room. Dad in the lead with me behind him a bit.

"Are we underground?" A lady with super short hair asked.

"Are you claustrophobic?" My dad replied back to her.

"A little."

"Try not to think about it." I shrugged looking back at her.

We walked in silence to the big room and began walking into it.

"Vi, bring up the lights in the big room." Dad speaks out.

The computers lit up, and then the florescentlights above turned on illuminating the whole room.

"Welcome to zone 5." I looked back at everyone before heading towards the middle of the room.

"Where is everybody?" Rick asked walking a bit faster than his group to catch up to us. "The other doctors, the staff?"

I sat down and looked at my lap.

"We're it." My dad sets his hand on my shoulder. "Its just us two here."

Rick slowly looked down defeated.

A brunette with long hair spoke up, "What about the person you were just talking to?"

"Vi?" I asked.

"Vi! Say hello to our guests." Dad outspoke. "Tell them welcome."

"Hello guests, welcome." The computer spoke through the speakers.

"Its just my dad and I. Im sorry." I frowned at everyone's devastated looks.

My dad clapped his hands together. "Shall we get started on those blood tests."

Everyone followed him out of the room and down the hall to a room with medical supplies. I listened while everyone introduced themselves, and then, while my dad took care of them, I pushed through the group and made my way to my room. It wasn't anything special. As soon as the world went to shit my dad rushed me to get here as soon as possible, and once I got here, there was no leaving.

My bed is in the corner of the room, it's enough for maybe two people. All white sheets and pillowcases. I have my suitcase sitting on the floor wide open with all my clothes in it. Well, what I could fit in it. Next to my bed a have a cart with wheels that I use as my nightstand, I have a desk lamp on it that I took from someone's desk and a picture of myself with my dad and mom.

I laid in bed and read a book for about an hour before heading out to see where everyone was. I heard laughing and cheering coming from the "dining room." I walked in and saw everyone drinking and eating food. My dad nodded to me in a way of greeting. I took a seat next to him and took a drink of his wine. He stood up and patted my shoulder before putting some dinner on a plate for me.

I sat quietly as everyone talked and laughed with each other. It made me feel awkward, and I could tell my dad felt the same way. We'd been alone for a little more than a month, and to have so many living people with us is overwhelming.

I glanced over at Rick as he sat with who I would assume is his wife and kid. He made eye contact with me before nodding and standing up, clinking his fork on his wine glass.

"Its seems we haven't thanked our hosts." He smiled at me and nodded his head to my dad.

I smiled back. Looking back down at my plate as I blocked out everyone's cheers.

"So when are you gonna tell us what the Hell happened here, Doc?" Shane began asking, "All the—the other doctors that were supposed to be figuring out what happened, where are they?"

I froze and looked up at him. He looked between Dad and I waiting for an answer.

Rick got serious and glared at Shane, "We’re celebrating, Shane. Don’t need to do this now."

"Whoa, wait a second. This is why we’re here, right? This was your move—supposed to find all the answers." Shane shakes his head and chuckles humorlessly, "Instead we- we found them. Found one man and his daughter, why?"

Shane looked at everyone in the room and it got quiet. Everyone began wondering the answer.

I swallowed the last of my spaghetti and glared at Shane, I didn't like him.

"Well, when things got bad, a lot of people just left, went off to be with their families. And when things got worse, when the military cordon got overrun, the rest bolted."

"Every last one?"

I scoffed at his reply and opened my mouth to speak but my dad beat me to it.

"No, many couldn’t face walking out the door. They….opted out. There was a rash of suicides. That was a bad time."

I scratched at my wrists nonchalantly before quickly standing up and taking my plate to the sink. I quickly rushed out of the room and headed to my room. I sat on my bed and tried my best to calm myself down. It felt like hours before I felt okay again. I grabbed spare clothes and a towel before heading to the showers.

Few of the guys walked out with smiles on their faces, and I chuckled softly. I stepped into a stall and closed the glass door. Luckily, it has texture, so u can't see completely through. I stripped out of my clothes and tossed it out the door before turning the water on.

I washed myself and washed my hair before taking a seat on the floor of the shower. I grabbed my razor from the hidden spot between the stalls and cut at my thighs. The water that ran under the stall to the drain was red. I turned the water cold and sat under it with my knees to my chest. I shivered and started crying.

Ever since I watched my mom slowly turn into a walker, I've been falling apart. Recently, it's gotten worse. As the days dragged on with nothing new happening or being accomplished, I started giving up hope.

I gasped as the door to my stall was pulled open. I froze seeing Rick looking from me to the red water going down the drain.

"Wh-what are you doing?" I spoke as sternly as I could in my state, trying to keep myself covered in certain places.

"Shit! Im sorry. I saw the water and-and I needed to make sure nothing bad happened."

I gulped and looked away from him ashamed. Suddenly the water stopped and a towel is wrapped around me. I looked up at Rick and he helped me up off the floor.

"Where is the blood coming from?" He asked checking over my arms and face.

I scoffed, "You don't actually care Rick. You don't know me and you just met me."

"You're right I don't know you and we just met but that doesn't mean I don't care. You saved us earlier which means you cared about us and you didn't even know who we were. Now quit being stubborn and tell me where ur bleeding at."

I rolled my eyes and took a seat on a toilet seat, lifting my towel a tiny bit to still keep me covered but show him what I did. His face changed to guilt and maybe sadness? I rolled my eyes.

"I assume you have never seen someone hurt themselves."

He shook his head, "Yes but not like this."

"I've been locked in here for over a month. No one to talk to except my dad and that's when he doesn't ignore me."

"Does he know about this."

"He knows. This isn't my first rodeo."

I got up and walked over to the cabinets, grabbing some gauze, wipes and bandages I put in there for times like this. Walking back to the bench I cleaned my thigh up and put bandages on the small cuts before wrapping my thighs with the gauze. I looked up at Rick.

"Im perfectly fine. You can go now." I fiddled with my towel and he blushed and nodded before making his way out the showers.

I pulled on my undergarments, then an oversized shirt and a pair of sweatpants. I towel dried my hair and threw it in the corner of the bathroom. I walked out into the hall and made my way to the big room. My dad sat at one of the computers looking over the blood samples from everyone. He looked over at me and smiled.

"Whats up honey?" He asked as I took a seat next to him.

"Just figured I would see how you were doing thats all." I shrugged and laid my head on his shoulder looking at all the data.

I sat up at the sound of footsteps walking towards us. Rick came walking in holding a wine bottle which I could see was half full.

"Hows the blood?" He asked.

"No suprises." My dad replied back beginning to pack his papers and binders up.

I turned in my seat to look up at Rick , who stood next to me now. I could easily tell he was tipsy on the verge of drunk.

He wiped his mouth, "I came to thank the both of you."

"You did." My dad spoke and we glanced at each other confused.

He was smiling at us before he suddenly stumbled back a bit and slid down the side of the computer desk. I gasped and tried to steady him, but he was too far away from me. He sat on the ground, leaning up against the desk.

"You alright Rick?" I asked him getting down on my knees next to him, gently taking the wine from him which thankfully he let me.

"You don't know what it's like." He laughs a little and looks to the side away from where I am. "You don't know what it's like out there." He got serious, his head resting against the desk behind him. "You may think you do. But you dont."

I get up off the floor and sit back in my chair, looking over at my dad with the same guilt ridden look on his face that I have.

"We'd have died out there. It was only a matter of time. There's too many of those things." He pauses for a second, his eyes getting glossy. "My-my boy.. My-my wife, I never- I never told them what I really thought. I never even hinted, just-."

He closes his eyes. "Just kept it in."

"Kept it in and kept us moving you know?" He began getting a little hysterical.

"It'll all be okay." My dad promised. Rick stared at him, "It'll be okay."

Rick stayed where he was for quite some time. I stayed with him while my dad put his things away before heading to bed. I stared at Rick before standing up.

"Let's get you to bed."

I reached down and helped him up, throwing his arm over my shoulder to keep him from falling or running into something. He was quiet the whole walk to his room. I let him go once he was outside the door.

"Pretty sure everyone is in bed so rest well." I smiled and turned around to walk to my room.

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I smiled at everyone as we ate breakfast. Carl was absolutely adorable. Even though I wasn't super close to everyone, I still felt like I was part of the family. I smiled bigger seeing Rick walking towards us. Definitely hungover. Not gonna lie he looked pretty cute.

"Are you hungover?" Carl asked and glanced at his mom tryna not laugh. "Mom said you'd be."

Rick smiled at his son and nodded as he took a seat. "Mom is right."

Lori ripped pieces of her bacon and put a piece in her mouth, "Mom has that annoying habit."

She glanced at Rick and he looked down.

"Eggs powdered but I do 'em good." T-dog announced, walking towards us with a plate of eggs, dishing some out to Glen who looked way worse than Rick.

Shane walked into the room and sat down with scratches on his neck.

"Must've done it in my sleep."

"Never seen you do that before." Rick said.

"Me neither." Shane shook his head, "Not like me at all."

Shane stared at Lori and she looked over at him before looking down at her plate. I furrowed my brows at their weird body language towards eachother.

In came my dad, "Morning."

Shane replied "Hey doc."

"Doctor I don't mean to slam you with questions first thing- but you're going to anyways." My dad interrupted Dale.

His back was to us all as he got himself a coffee.

"We didn't come here for the eggs." Andrea spoke.

My dad itched his nose as he turned around, looking at everyone. "Follow me." He nodded towards the door and made his way out it, everyone got up from the table. I quickly rushed after him, knowing exactly what he was doing.

"Dad."

He kept walking.

"Dad!"

He continued to ignore me. He walked down the ramp to his main computer, pressing a fre buttons before speaking.

"Give me playback of TS-19."

'Playback of TS-19.'

The giant screen in front of us loaded to a picture of the scan of a human brain.

"Few people ever got a chance to see this. Very few."

I stare at the screen as everything around me suddenly disappeared.

The screen changes to a side view. The imagine begins to zoom in. The image becomes more and more detailed. You could see the inside of the brain. Bright blue threads of energy racing around. The detail zooms in until the threads become closer and pulses of light can be seen sparking throughout the brain.

"What are those lights?" Shane asked

"It’s a person’s life—experiences, memories. It’s everything. Somewhere in all that organic wiring, all those ripples of light, is you—the thing that makes you unique and human." My dad informed them.

"You ever gonna make sense?" Daryl asked.

Dad looks to me to speak "Those are synapses. Electric impulses in the brain that carry all the messages. They determine everything a person says does or thinks from the moment of birth to the moment of death."

I turned away from the screen as he fast forwarded to the end. I closed my eyes and covered my ears not wanting to see or hear anything that's about to be done.

My dad rubbed my back as a way to tell me it's okay now. I looked at everyone and took a deep breath.

"Dr. Jenner, I know this has been taxing for you and I hate to ask one more question, but…that clock—it’s counting down. What happens at zero?"

"The basement generators—they run out of fuel."

I furrow my brows and look at my dad confused. He wouldn't look at me.

"And then what?" I asked him and he ignored me, walking out of the room.

Rick watches him in disbelief as he walks out the room.

"VI, what happens when the power runs out?" Rick asked the computer

"When the power runs out, facility-wide decontamination will occur." Vi warned us.

Most Everyone ran out of the room to who knows where because I went after my dad. I checked a few rooms before finding him in my mom's office looking at a picture of all 3 of us smiling and happy.

"Did you ever think to tell me what was going to happen?" I asked him hurt.

"No, I figured we would both just go out quick and painless." He stood up from the desk.

"I think I deserved a choice to choose what I want for myself. This wasn't up to you!" I shouted at him.

"Im what I think is best for you! You saw the way your mom died. You wanna go out like that?!" He shouted back, slamming his hands on the desk.

I went to speak but the air shut off and shortly after the power shut off. I stormed out of the room followed by my dad. Dale and Lori were in the hallway and spotted us.

"Why is the air off?" Carol asked walking out of her shared room with Sophia.

"And the lights in our room?" Lori asked.

I see Daryl poke his head out his door, "Whats going on? Why is everything turned off?"

My dad began walking past everyone, "Energy use is prioritizing itself."

"Air isn't a priority? Or lights?" Daryl scoffed.

"Its not up to me. Zone 5 is shutting itself down." We all followed him to the big room.

"Hey! Hey, what the hell does that mean?" Daryl began to get angry, storming towards my dad faster.

But Dad ignores him of course.

"Hey, man, I’m talking to you. What do you mean it’s shutting itself down? How can a building do anything?"

I see Shane, T-dog, Glen and Rick came into the room. All looking pissed off as ever.

"You’d be surprised." I shook my head sadly looking at Daryl.

Lori and Carol stayed close to the rooms exit with their kids while the rest of us were in the center of the big room. I pushed through everyone and sat down at my dad's computer, looking through everything to find a way to stop the building from exploding. Anything.

A loud alarm sounds in the room, and I look up at the stopwatch on the screen, seeing only 30 minutes till we are all dust and ash. I mumbled to myself, ignoring everyone's yelling and crying. I stood up and threw the computer mouse across the room. I stressfully raked my fingers through my hair.

"We need to go now." I spoke and walked towards the doors only for them to shut as a few of us got close.

I flipped around and noticed my dad by the security lock keypad by his desk. I felt my heart break seeing him take a seat in his desk. Completely calm and okay with locking everyone in the room. He opens up his video recording and begins speaking to it.

Rick and my dad are arguing with each other. I couldn't hear the words over the sound of my rapid heartbeat. I'm scared. I'm not ready to die. Before, I thought I was, but I'm not. Meeting Rick and his group has made me want to keep surviving, keep living.

"You know what this place is?! We protected the public from very nasty stuff! Weaponized smallpox! Ebola strains that could wipe out half the country! Stuff you don’t want getting out! Ever!" My dad was up from his seat shouting louder.

"Open the damn door!" Daryl growled.

Shane runs at the door with a fire axe. T-Dog tosses one to Daryl. He catches it and they both try to destroy the door.

"You should’ve left them alone it would have been so much easier." Dad gritted his teeth at me.

"Easier for who? They would have died!" I cried out.

"And they are still going to, just not painfully. You guys know what’s out there. A short brutal life and an agonizing death." My dad turns to Andrea who is sat on the floor leaning against one of the computer desks, "Your—your sister—what was her name?"

"Amy."

"Amy. You know what this does. You’ve seen it. Is that what you really want for your wife and son?" He looks to Rick.

Rick gets in my dad's face, "I don't want this!"

He walks to Shane and they converse for a second.

"The doors are built to withstand a rocket launcher." I sighed walking over to them.

"Yeah well his face ain't!" Daryl shouted as he ran towards my dad with an axe.

"Woah, woah!" Everyone blocked Daryl and grabbed the axe from him.

I stood back and listened to how hysterical my dad has become. Suddenly I hear a gun cock. Shane angrily comes towards my dad and I.

"Shane, no!"

"Get out of my way Rick! Stay out of my way"

Shane comes towards me pointing the gun at my forehead. I raise my hands and keep my face normal as I stared him in his crazed eyes.

"Open that door! Or I'm gonna blow her head off, do you hear me?!" He looks to my dad.

"Brother, brother. This is not the way we do things." Rick reminded Shane, trying to calm him down. Rick kept glancing between Shane and my 'tough exterior look. "We will never get out of here."

"Shane you listen to him." Lori speaks up.

"Its too late." Shane mutters.

"She dies, we all-"

Shane interrupts Rick by yelling and pushing the gun further into my forehead before turning away to the side away from my dad and I and shooting the computers over and over all while still yelling. I cower away and go running into Rick's arms in a matter of seconds after the gun is out of my face. I finally broke down. He gently rubs my back for a second and then hands me over to his wife, who rubs her hand up and down my arm as it's wrapped around me.

Rick struggles as he takes the gun from Shane. Shane was going crazy. Once he got the gun from him, he had to hit him with the butt of it and elbows his shoulder, dropping him to the ground.

I hid my face against Lori's shoulder, crying quietly as Rick began talking to my dad again.

"She was dying. It should’ve been me on that table. I wouldn’t have mattered to anybody. She was a loss to the world. Hell, she ran this place. I just worked here. In our field she was an Einstein. Me? I’m just… Edwin Jenner. She could’ve done something about this. Not me."

She never would have wanted him to do this to me let alone to a group of people who didn't ask for it.

"Your wife didn’t have a choice. You do. That’s—that’s all we want—a choice, a chance." Rick begged.

"Let us keep trying as long as we can." Lori tightened her grip on both Carl and I.

My dad made eye contact with me before looking down.

"I told you topside’s locked down. I can’t open those." He walks over to a keypad and scans his card and types in some numbers, opening the doors to the big room.

Everyone began rushing to the exit. I shooed Lori off as I stayed in the room.

"There’s your chance, take it."

"I’m grateful."

"The day will come when you won't be." My dad warned.

My dad takes Rick's hand and shakes it before pulling him close and whispering in his ear. I ran over and dragged Rick away, pushing him towards the doors.

"You staying?" He asked me quietly.

"I need to say goodbye but I will be right behind you." I smiled softly and nodded at the door.

"We've got 4 minutes let's go!" Glen shouted.

I walked over to my dad and let out a sob. He let a few tears drop from his eyes.

"I can't stay here dad." I shook my head and gave him a sad smile.

"I know baby I know. It's not your time yet." He pulls me into a hug. "But it is mine." He kisses the top of my head.

I pull back and wiped my eyes.

"I love you dad."

"I love you too sweetie, don't forget it." He kisses my forehead and gently pushes me towards the exit.

I nodded and ran quickly out of the room. I ran as fast as I can to my bedroom to grab my family picture, then made my way to the front of the building. The walls shook with a loud explosion. I got to the front and noticed they had broken a window. Everyone was running towards the vehicles, but Rick, he stood waiting. He smiled when he saw me and climbed out the window first before helping me out, making sure I didn't cut myself on any of the glass. Both of us came running to the R.V. I got on before Rick, and he quickly took a seat in the driver's seat, grabbing the keys that were left sitting on the dash.

I stood behind him watching the building. Suddenly, Dale and Andrea slowly came out of the exit. They began running towards us. Rick began honking the horn.

"Get down!" I yelled and Andrea and Dale took cover behind a small barricade of sandbags.

Not but 2 seconds later did we all get down, and the loudest explosion happened. Heat from it hit all of us. I quickly stood up to see the aftermath of it. I began sobbing, knowing my dad was gone. I quickly moved to the couch and sat on it with my head facing down. I feel the vehicle began to drive away. With one last look out the window, I saw black smoke and an unrecognizable building.

#rick grimes #twd #the walking dead #walking dead #fanfic #fanfiction #twd fanfiction #rick grimes fanfiction #zombie #lovers #angst

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phinamina · 1 year ago

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hi guys this is jusy me complaining abt pjo tv

so um errrr scroll if u domt like im not arguing w anyone abr this i js want to share my opinion on my blog

first thing im gonna start off with saying, i ahve nothing against the actors . they did an amazing job and i love them all . (except dior, reminder shes a zionist)

but, the inaccuracy of the show compared to the books is insane and it makes me mad actually🙁

so many people will defend it by saying ‘ricks working on the show too!’ man idc actually we were promised a book accurate show and we did not get it . im not talking about the appearances of the characters, im talking about the events . i didnt get the changes of a lot of things, and the changes take away from everyones character .

we couldve seen percys street smarts and annabeths fear of spiders, but they settled for scrapping the first thing and instead telling us that annabeth is afraid of spiders . this has happened multiple times

more on telling us instead of showing us, the amount of times this happens in frankly annoying, it acts as if the viewer is stupid . ohh yes annabeth is your sister, show us luke 😇i dont believe uou😇 can i have an example😇ARGHEHHHH

it also removes already good dialogue and replaces it with mid dialogue .

also, percys claiming scene….. i domt like how they didnt have them bowing or whatever because it removes the severity of the situation and the impact that him being the son of poseidon is important and not just like oh yeah that guy is yhe son of poseidon .

rip it was a big bathtub

rip the book

the removal of humor in the story makes it quite frankly boring, and removes more character from everyone . everyone is too serious in the show and its like watching paint dry .

the only memorable part that could be seen as funny was percy dancing instead of being ready at capture the flag

and sighhhhh annabeth being there when luke was revealed to be the traitor means she had to of had a suspicion of him in the first place which is . um . annabeth spent four whole books denying luke being evil

rip pit scorpion

and the . THEM MISSING THE DEADLINE . IN THE BOOK IT SAYS PERCY WOULD BE KILLING FIRST AND THAT DID NOT HAPPEN !! ITS REMOVING FEAR FROM THE GODS !!!! AND PERCY CONFRONTING ZEUS WAS STUPID BECAUSE IN BOOK ONE IT SAYS,

“I dared not look up. My heart was racing. I could feel the energy emanating from the two gods. If i said the wrong thing, I had no doubt they could blast me into dust.” Page 340 …. die actually

percy is scared of zeus and poseidon in book one . the removal of this also adds more to the gods not being a figure that is scary.

and annabeth sassing the gods is unreal . annabeth in the books thinks disrespect=surprise surprise, get smote!

anyways im just mad and theres probably more but i havent watched in a while so this is all ur getting

#pjo tv crit #pjo hoo toa #i honestly just needed to yap #sarah yap sessions #pjo text post

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sssm1l3 · 11 months ago

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rereading sins of the flesh and i can’t believe it didn’t cross my mind until now to ask u if u would be willing to divulge ur secrets since it won’t be finished. if not i understand but i’m still so curious<3!! how would it have ended? what was the deal w shane? what was carl n judith’s true relationship? etc etc anything ur willing to share i will eat up !

-youneedavisa

Hi soooo glad to see you again! So, okay When i write, I never really...plan? I let the characters tell the story and watch it play out, And a lots happened since I was writing that, so forgive me if these are inconsistent with anything I wrote in the story, but from what I remember,

After Ron tried to kill Beth, him and Carl were going to go into like the city to go and visit Rick while he was in a coma, giving Ron and Carl a chance to bond more. They did this because Gabriel assumed that if anyone could convince Ron to stay in the cult, it would be Carl, and going back into the city would give Ron a chance to see what he was missing if anything, and hopefully help fuel his decision to stay

The footprints by the edge of the cult were not Shane's but actually Dan's (the pedophile dude that Shane let fuck Carl before Carl was taken to the cult), because he was scouting out the area to eventually intrude upon

When they did this, it was because Shane learned about Judith, and wanted her from Carl, mostly just to hurt Carl not because he actually wanted to raise his daughter, but he wanted Judith from Carl. Him and Dan would rip through some of the cult, violence, maybe some deaths and all that, but would eventually get to Carl. They'd also try to kill Ron cause he would try and protect Judith and Carl obviously but---because I love Ron and cant bear to kill him---he would survive and while Shane was occupied trying to fight Ron, Carl would kill him, because Its not one of my fanfictions unless Shane gets murdered (Dan managed to get away from the cult before he was killed)

They would eat Shane later, Carl and the rest of the disciples, and while Ron still refused to eat Shane, he would be the one to cook the meat, he's getting used to the customs, and doesn't want to leave

Carl and Judith's true relationship is what it is, she's Carl's biological half-sister but is Carl's daughter in every way that matters, and would grow up with Ron and Carl as her parents

Rick would wake up from his coma and would meet Ron and Carl and Judith and it would be really sweet and everything, and when he went back to work, he would investigate the case with Dan because since Gabriel's little cult is recognized by the law as like....an actual religion, they did report that they had been attacked, and they just.......didn't mention that there were two guys, only one, only one guy came and attacked them, there wasn't another one kicks dismembered hand under rug

Dan would be caught and prosecuted

Ron ends up staying the cult after he sees his mom in the city during an outing with Carl and sees that she's going on about her life, and that she's doing well, and doesn't need him, but Carl does, and so does Judith, so he stays, and he cooks, but he never eats anyone, just to maintain some of the morals he once had

So thats what I remember of my plans, thank you for asking!

#the walking dead #carl grimes #fanfiction #carl the walking dead #anon response #anon ask #hi youneedavisa!!#so glad to see you

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literaphobe · 2 years ago

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hello!! i remember you said a while back that you liked rick and morty! just wanted to know what you thought of this last season because im a fan of the show too :]

oh thank god and also jesus HI ANONNN I’ve been dying to talk about rick and morty. I’m so so SO obsessed w the finale like I’m still thinking about it and can’t wait to rewatch. did u know I’ve been watching this stupid show since 2014? I’m a NINE YEAR LONG Rick and morty fan. I can’t believe one of the only shows I’ve been EARLY to watching is goddamn Rick and morty. ok back to the finale

i have been FROTHING at the mouth RABID and WAITING for diane content. it’s crazy to me that diane was like. a part of rick’s backstory that they didn’t have from the start but the fact that she existed and the place she had in his life made him go from random asshole grandpa who’s a megagenius dickhead that cares more than he’ll admit to All Those Things BUT a man who’s madly in love with his wife…

i think about the tragedy of it all sometimes and how it could have easily been this super generic Yeah Yeah Guy Has A Dead Wife Thing whatever BUT the way we found out she was ERASED FROM EVERY UNIVERSE? he was the ORIGINAL Rick who had his wife killed. The other dudes just like. Idk. i guess she just vanished for them. and because of his grief he invented the very item he rejected -> inter dimensional portal gun. only to be unable to find even a VERSION of her that exists

and he’s like. despite his flings and exes and people he fell in love with (birdperson and unity) it’s become so much more evident especially in recent seasons that diane is his whole sky and stars and he’s so madly in love with her that. Rick prime calls him the WIFE GUY. and when we found out the AI running his garage and car is modeled after Diane’s voice… HE CANNOT LET GO -> she haunts the narrative

and then when we saw diane in Morty’s version of the hole? it was so fascinating bc her portrayal is like something that u can hate or love all u want! u can choose to believe that diane was similar to/exactly like how morty envisioned her to be, or u could think she was entirely different, and you’d have basis for it. she’s shrouded in mystery still but at the same time we’re learning more of a version of her. and because morty knows Rick so well you just KNOW that how hole!rick behaved around hole!diane WOULD be how actual Rick would be like. because that was him!! a guy so deeply in love with his wife and family that he didn’t care about traveling the multiverse. he just wanted to spend time with her :(

this show that started from a place of random cynicism became this like. found family of family members who aren’t exactly from the same universe but are the family u choose and love and all that? yeah anyway i really really hope we get more diane content ALSO um summer content ❤️ i want more summer development

Idk if i want real diane to be brought back or the omega device to unerase her bc the whole point of Rick’s arc is that he has to deal with losing diane and become a better person and get healthier etc etc but… i am interested to see what else we get. NEXT SEASON I GUESS. cries forever

oh also when he ran back to the hole after hearing morty saw diane in there? and his face dropping when he internally reminds himself she still wouldn’t be REAL and it’s just not something he would survive probably. and he takes a picture of MORTY OUT OF HIS WALLET and pins it to the board of people who survived the hole :((((((( HE HAS A PICTURE OF HIS GRANDSON IN HIS WALLET BC HES THE MOST SENTIMENTAL RICK EVER .

#ask #rick and morty #rick and morty s7 spoilers #i have so much to say about this show tbh

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vacantgodling · 2 years ago

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Tell me about the most ridiculous occurrences and most terrible arguments (on- or off-screen) in Sixteen Candles and Celestial Weddings! - @void-botanist

thank you for asking rose!! <3

i don't have much written for celestial weddings and a lot of it is gonna be more sappy and romance, not so much ridiculous happenings so i'm gonna p much just focus on sixteen candles for this LMAO.

a lot of sixteen candles i do "technically" want to rewrite, just to align more with the developments i've made, though i think a lot of the convos may still be the same lmao. so from my old draft some of the most ridiculous arguments/occurrences are:

getting upset with ranger for fucking the CEO of the bar he works at and (1) not telling anyone where he was (2) being gone for the entire weekend without anyone knowing where he was (this wasn't them being upset that he had sex but more like we were worried about your safety also..... fucking your boss is.....)

ranger and roger fighting over whether star wars or star trek is better:

Hanger Rick (ranger): eowugfdsfnrjwkfktnejekdntjejeje kill me (roger): FOR THE LAST FUCKING TIME Hanger Rick: F I G H T M E VaniVee (vani): ???? What’s happening??? Why are you two fighting??? Nanette: From what I understand, Roger said that Star Trek was better than Star Wars and the two of them have been arguing ever since. VaniVee: For an hour??? :00 kill me: from what you understand??? kill me: NAN YOU’VE BEEN HERE THE WHOLE TIME Nanette: I stopped paying attention because I don’t have an opinion.

if roger can outdrink ranger (he can't. no one can. its ungodly how much liquor ranger can put away)

this entire bit:

Nanette: The secret’s out Ranger. Nanette: You are an alien. Hanger Rick: gasp Hanger Rick: all this time i never thought anyone would find me out… kill me: Oh my god. Hanger Rick: YOU’LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nanette: I don’t have to. The government will accept a dead specimen just as much as a live one. Hanger Rick: nan how… how could you?! Nanette: -cocks gun- Sayonara, Mr. Alien.

ranger and tucker are the most likely to bitch at each other about things and one of the things they constantly bicker about is spelling. tucker misspells stuff on purpose specifically because it gets on ranger's nerves

Park Hanger (ranger): SPELL MY FUCKING NAME RIGHT YOU ASSHOLE sunbolian 689 (tucker): ;D Park Hanger: DON’T YOU FUCKING WINK AT ME

and speaking of the two of them, whether channing tatum or chris hemsworth is better:

Team Thor (ranger): this fucking idiot thinks that channing tatum is better than chris hemsworth Team Thor: he is fucking MISTAKEN Magic Mike 4ever (tucker): DAS BULLSHIT ND U KNO IT RNGR downtown blues (roger): Are you fucking kidding me?

and speaking of roger, a more serious argument/discussion they got is over roge's internalized homophobia :((( his family sucks bad and he's internalized a lot of stuff (but all his friends are queer, and he himself is questioning but he just struggles with it)

the boys (ranger/roger/tucker) arguing about tucker's very obvious but thank-god-vani-is-oblivious crush thats 13 years and counting (also for context, they all have sleep overs quite often)

sigh (roger): Oh, so, what would you call her sleeping in her panties and one of your shirts that you LEFT AT HER HOUSE BEFORE AND NEVER GOT BACK TUCKER????? range rover (ranger): TBH I THOUGHT YOU GUYS FUCKED BUT YOUR AGGRESSIVE NECK SLITTING MOTION TOLD ME OTHERWISE range rover: ALSO YOUR SEVERE LACK OF HICKEYS. Vani’s Romeo (tucker): OMFG Y WOULD WE FCK IF U GUYZ WRE ALL DERE????????? range rover: listen. don’t let us stop you from getting a good dicking

but also tucker and ranger get into a huge fight about how well they know and care about each other (its a lot of backstory but the two of them are the biggest hotheads so they tend to get into it the most often)

"magnet-ologist"

who cares you know who i am anyway (ranger): we all remember your shitty braces roge tarvak gilfensparrow (tucker): i rmbr wen u got ur braces stuk on a magnet gena rose brought 4 career day who cares you know who i am anyway: lmao wait why the fuck did gena rose bring a magnet for career day who cares you know who i am anyway: is the magnet her father?? what?? tarvak gilfensparrow: lololol she said da magnet was her mthr tarvak gilfensparrow: waz suppsed 2 represent hr or somthin cuz hr mum waz a magnet-tologist Nanette: Is that even an occupation? tarvak gilfensparrow: lmao idk return of the sis (roger): The technical term is probably “geomagnetist”

so those are all the big ones i think! i know there'll be more when i revamp this properly <3 i love these idiots

#s: sixteen candles #ren writing

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riotlain · 2 years ago

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Hello!! This is my first ever request so sorry if it’s a bit weird or to doesn’t make sense, could u do little headcannons of negan, glenn, rick, and carl dating a trans ftm reader? Tysm!!

this aint weird at all😭😭😭

anywho these guys along with owen

keep in mind. Im not ftm😭😭

THIS IS A NWLNW BLOG!! WOMEN DNI

Rick Grimes

He was an Atlanta cop. Give him a bit to be more open minded ok

Once he understands he will be fine with it

Will help you shave if youre one T

If you aren't then he'll help with periods, dysphoria, ect

His clothes might be big on you. Goes on runs with you to find clothes and stuff

Literally hes trying but hes ass at it but its funny ngl💀💀

"Gonna go on a run ask Y/n what him wants"

If you have a binder then he makes sure to watch over you especially in the HOT AS BALLS SUMMER

Glenn Rhee

Since he's one of the younger adults here he's probably one of the best people to come out to ngl

Like he probably will end up. Questioning his sexuality a bit

But other than that he understands and is very supportive!!

Please dont overwork yourself in a binder if you have one

He will go on runs with you to get new clothes. Or give you his.

He cant cut hair. He cant just not him💀💀

He'll ask someone else in the group tho

Will shave your face for you if youre on T

Carl Grimes

Supporter (doesn't know what being trans means)

Like just explain and he'll be like "Ooohhh alright"

He's probably trans idk

Take his clothes sure!!

He'll get Jessie or Maggie to cut your hair if you want

If yall manage to acquire a binder somehow then he makes sure you dont overwork yourself

like istg if you end up hurting yourself he'll die

Doesnt understand dysphoria. Mainly because he never like. Thought about gender at all since its the apocalypse

So like seeing you struggle with this he's just like. There.

HE DOESNT KNOW HOW TO VERBALLY COMFORT PEOPLE OK

"How do you feel??" "Lowkey wanna throw my organs into a highway" "Ok?"

If anyone purposely misgenders you he'll literally start a fight (or you can depending on who you are)

Negan

He does not give a shit man is inlove with you💀💀

Hes like trying. If youre like pre transition just realizing he will be like "Her pronouns are he/him"

If you been using he/him it wont change toooo much

But this for you pre trans fellars ig

He is going to acquire T for you dont matter who he gotta fight for it

Has someone cut your hair for you

Struggling with your period?? Punch him in the gut and he'll hunch over next to you so yall got the sameish pain

You and him or you and simon go out to find new clothes

You wanna dress like a badass?? Heres a leather jacket like his

Wanna dress feminine still? Here have a nice dress he stole from Alexandria

Owen

He cares he does. Hes just horrible at showing

"Owen I'm trans" "Ok 😐"

He doesnt give a fuck what you do unless it's actively involves him

Like yea bro will use the right pronouns but still

Will try to help cut your hair but ends up just having someone else in the group doing it for you. Much to his dismay (he hates other ppl touching you)

Or grow it out if you want yall can match

Stealing shit from mfs he kills. Hes just like that

Kills anyone who says shit

#twd x reader #twd x male reader #rick grimes x male reader #rick grimes x reader #negan smith x male reader #negan x reader #negan x male reader #glenn rhee x male reader #glenn rhee x reader #owen twd #the wolf twd #wolf twd #carl grimes x male reader #carl grimes x reader

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haruhey · 3 years ago

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chronological thoughts of 11x21

safe to say i am… EXCITED….

@imagine-thewalkingdead, this one’s for u 😚😚

- OK EXCITED IS AN UNDERSTATEMENT

- OUTPOST 22 LETS GOOOOOOOO

- IM SO EXCITED I CANT STOP SMILING

- omg lance my precious pathetic baby boy 🫶🫶

- rip to a real one

- RICK GRIMESSSSSSSS

- no taking hershel away from maggie is sick and twisted hasn’t she been through enough 😭😭😭

- why is this show so dark guys please

- omg she got out of those ropes so quick

- omg the girlies look so tired free them

- OH MY GOD MAGGIE

- oh my god their face thats so awesome what a win

- RAGDOLLED AGAINST THE TREE omg

- just taking a nice lil nap 🫶

- who tf are these people

- omg girlie going through it

- omg exiles

- WHWRE ARE CAROL AND DARYL GUYS COME ON THIS IS THE ONLY REASON IM WATCHING RN???

- damn rosita going through it fr

- THEYRE ALL GONNA MEET AT THE END OF THE TRAIN TRACKS ARENT THEY

- terminus tease

- CAROL AND DARYLLLLLL

- OMG CONNIE

- LET HER GO LET HER GOOOOOO SHE AINT DONE NOTHING WRONG !!!!

- NOOO NOT THE CAVE

- carol’s sordid past 😔

- THE HANDHOLDING 🫶🫶🫶

- such a slay on maggie’s part

- i honestly dont think i could ever kill a kid walker thats like too much emotionally but also fuck them kids

- DARYL AND CAROLLLLLL

- season one girlies iktr iktr

- this is so caryl coded goodbye

- “they had to come at us when we were seperated. what does that say to you?” “that we scare the shit out of pamela.” SLAY GIRLIES SLAYYYYYYY

- I KNEW THE THE TRAIN WOULD SLAY

- DARYL????

- omg gabe pulling his religious

- omg they kill them we all know what that’s code for

- HE JUST HAS A BIBLE IN HIS POCKET PLEASE THATS SO FUNNY

- carol the problem solver as always 🫶 (ignore all the times shes caused problems thanks)

- kelly giving area 51 how gen z of her

- lmao negan getting a taste of what working for the Saviours community was like

- outpost 22 really is that girlie huh

- carol and daryl are truly so sexy

- CAROL AND CONNIE MY GIRLIES 🫶🫶

- hell yeah daryl chase him down kill him

- OH MY GOD THIS IS THE STUPID MOTORCYCLE SLIDE EPISODE THATS AWESOME

- ayyye the gang’s all back ♥️

- this train conductor is giving very math for science majors energy

- daryl and connie are so cute 🫶🫶😭♥️

- damn thats

- rip to a real one

- KILL HIM EZEKIEL!!!

- SLAY EZEKIEL SO TRUE EZEKIEL

- shut up negan !!!

- shut up negan i hate u!!!

- kelly looks so fucking sad omg my sweet girl please 😭

- NEGAN MARTYR ERA??

- SHUT UP NEGAN I DONT WANT TO THINK OF YOU AS A HERO SHUT UP !!!!

- omg music building up

- OH MY GOD THEYRE GOING TO ALEXANDRIA

- on a mission !! on a mission !! on a mission !!!

- they are all so slay it’s unbelievable

- wait why am i so excited for the next three episodes 😭😭

#get to know haruhey #haruviews #twd season 11

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thewalkingdeadband · 3 years ago

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Ok, here we go twd series finale review, very long i'm afraid

Things i liked:

- The fact that basically everyone survived (except Rosita but im gonna talk abt her) and had a happy ending (except Caryl but im gonna talk abt them in a separate post). I was expecting more deaths, which in retrospective was naive of me cause Twd has always done that, one big death in a finale or even in half a season, thats all. And considering Caryl's ending, having everyone else, or almost, happy is a balm for my heart. Some people are probably thinking that there wasnt enough death, but im more than ok with that. I was sooo freaking worried for Aaron, Gabriel and Eugene particularly that the relief was immense.

- Rosita's emotional scenes with Eugene. Not once in season 4, 5, 6, 7 or 8, could have i imagine things ending like that between them. Not once have i imagined back then the possibility of seing these two saying to each other how much they loved each other.

Contrary to a then popular belief, i always knew she cared abt him deeply: please go see her reaction when he's taken by Negan instead of her in 7.08, she's litteraly losing it. And her anger at him and "determination" with Daryl to "kill him" (pff, yeah, right) in s8 only shows how much she was hurt by his actions. They grew closer after the time jump in s9 and were basically bff by then even if he still was in love with her and had to be reminded later that no, it would not happen. So while im not surprised abt the love they had for each other, im actually amazed they said it outloud, like whaoh, because if there is one relationship in this show that hasn't been ruined but on the contrary has totally improved over the course of the last seasons, it's them. Their scenes in those last episodes were magnificent, and the finale was no exception. They have come such a long way. I bawled like a baby.

The highlight of this moment: "im glad it was you in the end". Excuse me? 🤧😭😭😭

- Rosita and Gabriel: at first it felt underwhelming, like he didnt show many emotions. Not when he learnt the news, that i could understand, he was in shock and it was actually such a fucking beautiful scene... but then, he prayed for her, and at first i thought could u pleaaaase drop the priest act and be the former boyfriend/the father of her child that she needs before dying (i dont care that Coco's not his biological child, and that they were broken up by now, he IS her father. And i loved Siddiq, but u get my point). But then i understood. He was on the verge of crying while praying, and tried to be strong and keep it together for her and Coco. He had to take care of Coco, having Rosita saying goodbye to her and then taking her away before the turn... Acting like a priest and a father, and not the man who loved her probably helped him stay grounded in this. I have no doubt that he lost it and ugly cried for hours in private alone in his room, off screen.

The highlight of this moment: "we will see you again someday". I'm not okay. I'M NOT OKAY😭😭

- Daryl being there for Rosita in a subtle, discreet and moving way. They did share a significant amount of scenes together over the course of the show ( ex: both kidnapping Eugene in s8, both trying to save him in s11c, kind of "funny" in a way) so it made sense that he was there.

- Rosita's goodbye with Carol and Maggie. The OG being there for one of the OG (Rosita is to me by now, in a sense). I wish we have had more scenes between them three..

- The fact that we didnt see who got to take her down before turning. It was not Gabriel who was with Coco. We can assume it was Eugene, and it is fitting, but who knows: Daryl was still behind them. Maybe Eugene could not do it, since he was so emotional, and maybe Daryl did it (a la Dale and Rick, remember? He would be the kind of guys to do this). I loved that we could interpret it the way we wanted.

- The music. It was awfully beautiful the whole episode, and i might go back on this for my specific post about Caryl for example, but the whole music post time jump especially was heart breaking. And then can we talk about.. Landslide?? LANDSLIDE GUYS? Really?? 😭😭😭 This song makes me cry no matter what so you can imagine... in a scene who reminds us of the s7 dinner scene?? And also the one in s1... Please😭🤧 (oh, Yumiko's toast to Luke also reminded me about Abe's speech "to the survivors! " in the church in s5...💔)

- The "we're the ones who live" montage. I loved the first montage too especially since we got to see almost all the people we lost, but the dialogue/monologues of Richonne were too cheesy for me. I would not have minded "cheesy" for a reunion between them or between Rickyl or between him and the kids, him and Carol, etc... but for something that sets the spin off and isnt final, it didnt work out for me (also, since we're paying tribute to the dead in this montage: Sophia and Merle were missing. Hell, they could even have added Jim and Jacquie, Amy.....

But i did like that Sasha was put beside Maggie and Tyreese beside Carol, it was fitting in a way that i cant describe).

A simple line like "we're the ones who live" repeated by everyone made a bigger impact on me than their inner monologue in the first montage. Just my opinion, obviously. And we got to hear Morgan too: the "Morganite" in me kept saying please show him, please show him, please show him... So i obviously screamed when it happened. And hey, we even got a glimpse/nano second of Dwight too!

On a side note, i was soo happy we got more of Richonne than what i thought we would get, aka 2 sec as a post credit. I loved that it was in the actual episode and that it was quite long!

- Seeing Rick again. I loved seeing Michonne too, but i was simply a wreck to be able to get to see him, simply see him, and hear him again. Not because i love him more, but because he left earlier i guess. The wait was longer. Also, not my dumbass realising on a second rewatch only that their timelines were different🤦‍♀️🤦‍♂️ (he had the phone, she had the phone... He threw the bag that she found later in the boat just before beeing taken back..)

Plus the line "Consignee Grimes..." with the look on his face, desesperate but determined, and the music behind... gave me so many chills omfg

- Luke's death. Didnt like that he died obviously, but the acting...the acting... it was so good and so poignant, it broke me

- Yumiko and Magna, while i didnt really actually care about them, i have to admit that seing them back together was nice amongst the chaos, and yumiko has been a bad ass with the whole Eugene situation these last episodes

- Princess living her best life at the end with Mercer just like i wanted, her being the bad ass that she is saving her man

- Eugene getting the freaking happiness he deserves, with baby Rosie (💔) and Max

- Zeke and Daryl's hug at the end. After everything, that was nice

- the callbacks: Daryl protecting Judith in her hospital room the same way Shane did with Rick... Giving her his blood just like Rick with Carl... Gabriel opening the gates after refusing to do so to his parishioners when we were untroduced to him... oh my💔 (i was sooo sure he was gonna die here and then by the way... as in coming full circle sacrifice u know... i stopped breathing)

- "At least we dont have to worry about who will get your house" "we already had to make an ugly decision: we kept u alive" KABOOOOOOOOOM CAROL MY HERO

Things that bothered me:

- well, caryl, though not surprising, but its for a separate post because there are still things that i liked, and things that i obviously didnt in this whole mess

- Negan and Maggie talk: I wish this particular talk had been saved for the spin off, so that we could have focused on having last moments with the other two people who were supposed to have a spin off together but ended up separated, u know, couch couch. That said, it was still a beautiful scene: of course she doesnt forgive him, of course she remembers how he laughed while killing Glenn, how Glenn called for her ("i'll find you"💔), and the fact that she still acknowledges he's trying and how she is grateful he saved Herschel Jr's life is more than enough and it would not have been realistic to have her forgive him. Now, we'll see i guess what happens in their spin off...

- i LOVE Glenn, but i would also have loved for Negan to remember that he killed Abraham too (not even talking abt all the things he did because thats not the point i want to make). He didnt have any scenes with Rosita, or Eugene, to be able to do that, but it really didnt seat well with me. And i wanted so bad for Eugene to mention Abe while Rosita was dying, saying something like "say hello to the big bad red- haired bad ass we all miss over here" well maybe not like that because cringe and clumpsy, but i dont know, something, anything, a simple mention for fook's sake. But he still was in the first montage, thankfully.

- Merle beeing, again, mentioned only for the bad things he did. I know he was NO angel, but if we can move forward when it comes to Negan we certainly can when it comes to Merle, who had no real time to be fully developped a la negan but still redeemed himself releasing Michonne and trying to take down the governor by himself, all because, believe it or not, he loved Daryl. So each time he's mentioned, and its rare, its actually to say things like "he would have been Negan" (back in s7 i think or 8, Daryl said that to Tara) which in my opinion is not true (s1 Merle? Probably. But the Merle who tried to kill the governor? Absolutely no. By then, he would have stood up to Negan a la Abraham i think. Especially if Daryl's safety was involved.). Or to say " he made me sell my blood for drugs". Great. We soo needed to know that. I get that Daryl probably have very actual few good memories of Merle (hopefully when they were very little at last), but lets not act like he didnt love him, didnt lose it when he learnt that Rick abandonned him on the roof, didnt cry his heart out when he died (the first time we actually saw Daryl cry i believe), didnt want Merle to try be part of the group... ("I just want my brother back.. " Remember?) No, instead, lets just bring again how shitty he could be and not acknowledge his sacrifice, despite how we keep saying in this show that we're remembered for the last thing we did, hence why its important etc. And believe me, i hated him at first like everyone else. But it seems unfair to me. I would have prefered no mention at all.

- also, how it was just an excuse to explain conveniently that Daryl is an universal donor, when it comes to blood... who knows if learning this in earlier seasons could have been helpful 🤣🙄🤦‍♀️🤦‍♂️

- "To Luke", yeah... and to Jules too i guess? Although her grave/stone was shown later along his, and i get that she wasnt as developped as him (and he wasnt even greatly developped himself..) but still?

- Daryl's reaction to THE Rick news: i waited one full season for this? I get that at first he thinks Judith's kind of dizzy and not thinking clear (and he did have a "shocked" look for 2 sec) but when she then confirms it, what do we have? "Is this true ? Yeah? Well im not going anywhere" (!!?). Then he stays for a full more year indeed (!!?) and then he leaves, but while eveyone seems to assume in the comments/reactions i've seen that he goes looking for Rick/Michonne, i took it as "im following Maggie's advice to go explore and oh Jude by the way if i come across them i'll bring them back". IF, he says, not "im gonna look for them". All this coming from a man who looked for Rick's body for years, so much that Carol had to check on him worried as fuck on a very regular basis to make sure he was ok. Yep. I dont know, maybe i missed something?

#twd family #twd spoilers #caryl #eugene porter #rosita espinosa #gabriel stokes #rick and michonne #and everyone else #rest in peace review #twd series finale review #season 11 ep 24

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