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first part posted :3

would anyone be interested in a ride the cyclone au where ocean takes too long to vote and karnak dies before anyone can get revived O_o

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“In five minutes, all bets are off.”

since at least choir’s worth of people wanted it, we’re making the au !! hooray !! also based off of this one shot about perfect dolls so go check that out!! (link is at the bottom)

This is part 1 for everyone who wanted it :3

TLDR: ocean takes too long to vote and karnak fucking dies.

warnings: written by a bored teenager so it’s probably not the best, cursing, it’s rtc what do you expect

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“In five minutes, all bets are off.”

That is what Karnak is telling Ocean O’Connell Rosenberg, the most successful girl in town. After five minutes, a rat that Karnak has named Virgil will chew through Karnak’s power cable and kill them both. He, Karnak, had said this before bringing the dead teenagers to this afterlife before the real afterlife

“What happens in five minutes?”

Ocean O’Connell Rosenberg asks this, afraid of what could happen if she ends up not making the deadline and thinking too long about who should win. Originally, she would vote herself and be brought back, but she has now realized that she, along with all of her friends, deserved to live.

“An appointment with a rat named Virgil, and then my death. After that, I’m not quite sure.”

Even with this machine’s fortune telling abilities, he can’t tell the future of anything past his demise. What if people would live past him? Could he not tell their fortune?

“Um.. and if I pick myself what’s the moral? If I choose myself… if I choose myself, the moral of the story is that humans suck.”

Ocean was earlier chosen to select the winner of the grand prize, being revived, due to having the highest grade point average in the choir. Even with being the one to select the winner, she will not choose herself. She never could bring herself to.

“That would be a valid interpretation, yes.”

Karnak, being the monotone fool of a fortune telling machine he is, saying something that many have laughed at when watching this show live. Although here, this is not a show.

“No, no we are going to honor the original agreement. We all are going to vote on who comes back.”

As the stubborn girl protests, Karnak shows the choir the portal to leave to the other side. The other children watch in awe as Ocean looks closely.

Karnak tries to remind ocean that she doesn’t have forever to decide. She is about to yell at him to leave her alone to think for five seconds, before the machine blows up.

“Your lucky number is seven. You will soar to great heights. Make sure to ride the cyclone.”

As Karnak loses power and his magical ball goes out, all the lights go out and the legendary portal to living breaks. It broke?! It fucking broke?!

Ocean runs to the wall where the portal used to be located and begins to bang on the wall. The other choir members follow after her and look horrified. None of them will get a chance at life? Never?

“No! Wait! Please!”

Ocean begins to panic. The potential she once ever had gone now. No one gets a second chance at life.

And none of them will get the chance at heaven or hell.

This realization sends all of the choir members into a panic. Noel Gruber, already hating Ocean, groans loudly and puts his hands to his head.

“Now look what you’ve done, Satan, now we’re stuck here forever!”

Ocean tries to defend herself, but it is quite literally her fault. She was the one chosen to select the winner, she was the one who wasted all of the time. No one else here did.

“Look, I’m sorry, okay? I didn’t realize that we had 5 SECONDS instead of MINUTES!”

Ocean says that with the sarcasm she’s always had, but she’s changed a lot. She has changed so much since coming to this afterlife. So had everyone else

But any change that they make won’t matter anymore. No effect they have will impact the world they once lived in. This is the beginning of eternity.

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hai :3 hope u guys like this ! please note this is like the first writing I’ve done that’s been published for the world to see so it’s probably really bad and any criticism is welcome ! first part, kinda sad or tragic, but the other parts WILL include these silly goobers goofing off.

here’s the link to the AO3 perfectdolls one shot that inspired this so credits to that author for the idea!!

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would anyone be interested in a ride the cyclone au where ocean takes too long to vote and karnak dies before anyone can get revived O_o