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For my magic system I was watching jjk, and decided the aspect of a school environment seems good to me. Yet in the same way I want to show how the physical world is affected by emotions like jjk, but also how magic affects the system.

To begin with is the job classifications for people involved in special arts. They are Mages, Exorcists and Neutralisers.

Then their is the people who work against mankind, seen as villains. They are Mages( which is a neutral term), Evokers, and disrupters.

Mages are generalised as people who wield magic and manipulate the natural or metaphysically worlds. For example, people who control fire, storms, the ocean or earth. These people deal closely with elements and energies.

Second is Excorsists and Evokers. Exorcists serve to remove powerful spirits or demons, having great medicinal knowledge aswell as spiritual and energy wise. Then there is evokes who summon, bind and work as vessels for demons. A physical pathway for creatures from beyond to enter our world.

Finally there are Neutralisers and disrupters. Neutralises and disrupters are vastly different,only working in a similar field. Neutralisers seek out forces that cause trouble for others, these forces are made by human emotions, thoughts, and ideas. Anything from the subconscious can take form and affect the world. These peculiar creatures are called the ruinous, beings ranked from U to G. U meaning non important and G being god level. Disrupters are beings which harness their own suppressed and unexpressed thoughts and emotions, using them to conjure the ruinous or to enhance them selves. The most experienced being able to create techniques out of their Supressed selves.

The first main story will revolve about kids in a school learning to harness their own emotions and thoughts, controlling them into powerful and structured techniques. The main character would struggle until he created his own way to harness his whole self. By the end someone would find out that inside the main character is a Double S rank Ruin. Originating form 5 centuries ago, having power beyond all else. Pls give ur thoughts?

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Supreme Tribeing of Perversion

This entity, if you can call them that represents ideas within, beyond, and even separate and nonexistent to humanity. Using She/her/they pronouns in the human languages, they take the form of a feminine character despite being beyond those lesser and meaningless ideologies.

In the beginning their was the Being representing a fraction of Endlessness. This being created 3, Time, space and Perversion. Perversion being the oldest, she represented an idea long lost. The closest description was a realm which represented creativity, freedom and possibility. Yet these ideas, they became twisted and she wanted to become the strongest thing that ever will and had came into being.

But why? Why did such a powerfulbeing seek MORE power? No one could comprehend it. There was no necessity, the All existing has removed their own power to destroy their creations. All the Tribeings had enough power to do anything, so why seek more power? Because they sought out a version of true and limitless freedom for all. Their idea was confusing yet made sense, aswell as possible. They would absorb all the All Existing and become existing within all, removing murder in a current existence way, but just a separate existence for both in different planes which can be transcended if need be. Then if anything dared threaten it then she would intervene.

There was 3 problems, one that pit a stop to her plan.

1- not being able to destroy or hurt things

2-removing their own existence

3- if the All being took over

After failing in some diabolical way they were sent of to the corners of another reality, due to them being unable to be killed for some reason ill state later, can't risk everything lols.

Then she rested in a reality which goes by many names, the distortion world, the reverse, the realm of fate, the Destiny's home realm, the great pandemonium and many more. This realm will also be explored later and you'll understand why.

Finally, her point in the story. Why is she here, why does she become relevant. Well look at this point if view, she lost in a battle and has rested in a realm of absolute disorder an chaos for centuries. Her children have been controlling after itself and removing free will to an extent.

So she's pissed, her own creator imprisoned her. She lost. Her children are rebelling. Her life was wasted. Her goals destroyed. Her life lost. The last stone was people disturbing her realm, causing further chaos.

Then she found a way out, disguised herself as a regular human and has been spying and setting up out main characters to meet her. She was pulling the strings, warping nature and cutting off the Destiny's control on this planet.

Then when meeting our main character, she reveals herself as the puppetmaster. Then the pupetmaster goes through a whole storyline and is sealed away. The way is kinda bizarre but hope u love it. Lols cya later

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Hey, to anyone wondering I've given up on my miraculpus rewrite for now due to how boring it is to start off. If anyone has any ideas pls let me know cause I'm so uninspired rn.

My new idea will be sectioned into the Multiverses Crystals.

The magic system works in a similar way ro the real world, with inspiration of mieaculpus and possibly avatar the last airbender, aswell as a minor influence if Chinese myths. The world is centred around the 4 core elements and which one your tied to is actually based on yourself. So if your smart you'll have a greater affinity for water magic, if its connected to yoru bloodline and space also.

This is a reoccurring theme, your bloodline, your space, your life, and yourself. Who you are and what you are both work together to influence which element or ability you have control over. The 4 core elements are Earth, water, Air and Fire. These elements gave subsections which blend together or advance in on themsl3ves due to the elements being their own realms of power.

Then theirs the 4 core points situated with these elements, the mind, body, soul and energy. If someone's in tune with their own energy, their vibe, or their own works then they are more likely to be able to work with Fire. This also applies if a person is very energetic or has excessive energy amounts. Although it also depends on their bloodline, as any outliers are rare to a point where only 1 in 1 billion can do it. With 1 in 100 actually awakening it and 1 in 4 being connected with their own element. (1 in 5, making 1 in 20 can awaken any element albeit only 1). So overall it's around 1 in 400 billion to 1 in 2 trillion to awaken an element with no genetic disposition.

Then there's the core elements of the universe which are Perversion, Time and space which form their own holy trinity. I'd like to keep this a mystery but they all play a part on the multiverse. Kinda like Infinity, Eternity and more from marvel.

Pls drop any question below.

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Adrienette is shit!

Let's talk about how marinette immediately becomes obsessed with adrien. It's an abnormally quick pace. Like she goes from -1 to 10 in less than a day.

A great plot idea us the fact that marientte is alright with adrien. Starts to think he's just a bit like chloe, yet less rude and snobby. Then she thinks he's a bit ungrateful. Until finally they develop a bond, where she sees herself as adriens protector from his father.

This goes from steady friendship, to forced parental role. But she misunderstands her feelings of protection for love, which spiral put of control due to her being a non implied neuroduivergent in my au.

So season 1, they are close and develop a close friendship, aswell as becoming protective of her famous buddy.

Season 2 the 2 become close friends and she sees her love as something more and acts as if they're a couple but they aren't.

Season 3 she's obsessive, even going as far to argue with his current girlfriend about his needs.

Season 4 they become separate, then date for a bit before breaking up at the end. This is incorporated with the story and marienttes trauma.

By the end I want the idea of her loving adrien in a atomic way, and through protecting him she becomes close with felix. This connection develops more naturally and not overly obsessed adrienette, by felinette. Also it's more natural than kagami can't get adrien so she gets felix vibe

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The butterfly miraculous in my rewrite.

For the first few episodes all is roughly the same witha few edits to make the story different. So when I do publish everything after episode 1 and 2 may seem lazy for a while, so I'll probably redraft them.

Now for the plot points. The butterfly miraculous is of transmission. It allows you to transfer your own will onto someone, grabting them powers to enact upon your will. These powers are materialised thoughts and feelings which can be specified by experienced users.

The power of the butterfly miraculous grows on the strength of said thoughts and feelings, the consequences being taht sometimes after akumatisations they feel powerless or depressed.

Whilst in the original show the miraculous were mainly based on the aspect, the powers tie into butterlies much more. Those who are deakumatised become fragile. The actual way akumatisations work is like Metamorphosis. Yet at the same time like a parasite.

The main idea of the post was to ask for how I could better how the butterfly mriaculpus works in the show without removing its main power?

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My first go at a miraculous ladybug power system rewrite.

Hierarchy

There are 3 classifications for the miraculous hierarchy. This hierarchy is present in most if not all miracle boxes, with the highest class being the most protected, the middle being used in danger, and the lower being used more often.

The hierarchy consists of:

Monarchs

The Arch-miracles

The Support-mirales

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Monarchs

The monarchs are traditionally located at the centre of the miracle box, surrounded by the Arch-miracles. This symbolises the way that the arch-miracles serve the royal miracles, acting as their protectors and acting out their will. The monarchs usually have powers that counteract and maintain control over the Arch, and Support miracles. Most boxes have either 1 or 2 royal miracles, their purpose isnt entirely known but they are only used when a dangerous threat is unleashed. These threats can either be miraculous holders or others. The reason they are used sparingly is due to the threat of the wrong people holding their power or the power corrupting them(explained further down).

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Arch-miracles

These miracles are used more often than Monarchs, to retrieve more minor miraculous or to defeat threats. In miracle boxes their are usually 2 subcategories. Defenders or Actors.

Actors usually are used against enemies, they have more physical powers. For example the butterfly miracle which grants people powers to go and do something for them. These can be used to physically harm people. In the mother box the Actor miracles are the Butterfly and Peacock due to their destructive potential.

Defenders are traditionally used to protect the miracle box, or to support other miraculous. The miracle of illusion can trick someone granting other heroes the chance to act. Or shelter which works in defense, creating a barrier to either entrap and enemy or protect yourself.

The Bee miraculous though is a defender, but has been used to attack enemies. Venom can render a villain defenseless which is support and allows others to attack. But it also can be used on its own to immobilise and defeat a villain. A sort of miracle which can worked an Actor 1v1.

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Support mircales

These miracles are stored below the Arch and Monarch miracles. Stored in droors or compartments below their higher level miracles.

For example the mother boxes:

Dragon,snake,mouse,rooster,cow and pig miracles aswell as much more. These usually have powers that aren't that useful in combat. Traditionally they were used to help society develop, and sustain themselves. Such as help during a drought or stop raiders.

These miraculous have limitations and their own sort of unofficial hierarchy. For example the dragon, snake and bunny miraculous are stronger than many others. While the Ox, tiger and horse miraculous are more useful than the Goat, dig, mouse rooster and pig miraculpus.

The reason they are all considered the same classification is the way the Support miraculous work. Their powers are weaker than the Arch and Monarch miracles, not only in use but also in the degree their powers work.

Examples:

The dragon can only use one element per Transformation as a child, and can only use each element once as an adult. They can either transform into the element or have to physically manipulate it.

The bunny miraculous had the power to enter the burrow, a place where all of time is stored. If they affect the timeline then there will be a consequence. For example by going back to affect timetagger there was no affect due to it being a necessary event. In the case of chat blanc by fixing the natural order a new consequence was added. This being the guardian dies and marinette is traumatised. Thsj will lead to it own plot.

The snake miraculous resets time, but this is stored within the burrow and is changeable. Aswell as nobody remembering anything which is a consequence of its own.

The rest will probably be mentioned in a later post.

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Consequences and limits of miraculous

Limits:

No weilder who is immature or not mentally/physically strong enough can use the miracles full power.

Abusing the miracles powers will cause in damage to the miraculous.

There are individual limiters to miraculous.

The miraculous tool given works as a conduit for your power. Children/similar cannot use powers without them.

Consequences:

Using miraculous for extended periods of time can result in side effects, for example lack of creativity or self destructive personality

Using damaged miraculous will slowly kill/drain someone. Leading to illness.

Insanity from wearing/using multiple miraculous at once. Due to side effects and physical strain.

Possible death if using both cat and ladybug miraculous at the same time.

(That's all for now please give ideas below)