ocritix - Tumblr blog

[ocritix]

yooo can you review this oc i just made? ;A;

Sure thing!

Name: Nameless (that’s his real name i swear)

That’s a name I wouldn’t really /like/ to see in characters along with names like ‘nothing’, ‘emptiness’, ‘ins*nity’, etc unless done right, but I hope Mr. Nameless won’t be one of those characters. :>

Gender: Cis Male (he/him, even though he’s not really human so idk why i put cis pfffff)

There isn’t anything bad about that, so I’ll leave that alone.

About: Nameless was made so I could have an OC I can draw constantly, no complicated design, no huge color scheme, just some little fellow. (sorry this isn’t the best about in the world)

Sounds a bit lazy, but I think it can work if done right. Characters like this can possibly be justified if they  were in an animated movie created by someone with a less-than-”great” budget, no offense ment.

History: Nameless doesn’t know much about himself besides the fact that he really doesn’t have a name, he goes by the common nickname by his friends (which is how he got his “name” Nameless in the first place) so it doesn’t bother him. He’s pretty relaxed most of the time and doesn’t really consider himself that exciting and he cares alot about his friends. Nameless also has a big interest in space, he doodles stars alot whenever he gets the chance to.

I like him! Nameless sounds like an amnesiac character done right, whose amnesia isn’t selective (aka “only forgot/doesn’t know things because plot”), which is good.

Description of looks / link to art or picture: http://prntscr.com/7z2wc6 nameless looks like this :>

He kind of looks like a Rhythm Heaven/The Binding of Isaac character! I like his design!

Overall, I like Nameless’s character, but I would like if you fleshed out his personality and backstory.

~Captain Bixbite~

[ocritix]

Name: Allura Caves Age: 19 DoB: July 21, 1996 Height: Around 5'11 Weight: 133 lbs. Likes: Music, Cake, Cold weather, Pastel colors, Organization, Nighttime Dislikes: Warm weather, Snakes, Romance, Attention, Politics Birthstone: Ruby Blood Type: O Horoscope: Cancer Backstory: Allura was a normal, everyday person, and still partially is, until she encountered a parasite in the form of a sentient flute. After aquiring it, she began having a stroke of bad luck, including getting into a fight with who she considered before to be friends. The parasite acted as an efficient weapon during said fight, perhaps too efficient, however, as its sheer power fatally wounded her now-enemies. Allura, after a while of pondering, decided to keep the parasite as an instrument that would, at times, double as a blowdart-esque weapon.

A very impressive first submission! Allura is the sort of person that’s actually very dangerous- while she would be innocent enough, a magic-esque object attracts her and poses as both helpful yet deadly. It hasn’t been done much, which is good, and a sentient flute definitely isn’t usually seen. Her backstory is sinister as well, and she can definitely be shaped into a formidable OC. With a story like how she uses it, what it drives her to do and how it corrupts her, Allura is a powerful and interesting OC! The fact that it’s set in our time also makes her a strong character because of the questions it raises, like what other creatures like the flute exist, and where it came from. Her design is good as well, and the flute looks very interesting!

- Admin Hainu