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RWBY OCs

Rwby OCs

Team SKLL (skill)

Name: Silver Kalmaar

Gender: Male

Species: Human

Hair color/style: Bedhead-like black

Eye color: Reddish-brown

Skin color: Pale

Personality: Calm, impassive, hard-working, selfless, protective, short-tempered, and secretly sweet

Aura color: Orange

Semblance: Immunity to fire and heat

Weapon(s): Daggers that can combine into a double-ended naginata

Hypothetical voice actor: Jesse McCartney

Extra Info: Gets mistaken for Qrow's son and Cinder's brother, is dating Lukas

Name: Kestin Morrow

Gender: Male

Species: Human

Hair color/style: Shoulder-length deep red pulled into a ponytail

Eye color: Hazel

Skin color: Fair

Personality: Observant, adaptable, seems cold, quiet, reactive, and strong willed

Aura color: Blue-purple

Semblance: Manipulation of Electricity

Weapon(s): Axe that can turn into a shield

Hypothetical voice actor: None

Extra Info: He is deaf, communicates through gestures, facial expressions, and sign language, doesn't wear hearing aids because his semblance destroys them

Name: Lukas Valencia

Gender: Male

Species: Half-Grimm

Hair color/style: Unkempt dark brown

Eye color: Pupil-less bright blue

Skin color: Brown with pale around his eyes and nose like a mask

Personality: Loyal, respectful, conservative, familial, blunt, and secretive

Aura color: Faint gray

Semblance: None

Weapon(s): Crossbow that turns into a laser rifle

Hypothetical voice actor: Eric Vale

Extra Info: Has the ears and tail of a Beowolf, is dating Silver, can shift into Beowolf form at will

Name: Lilith Valencia

Gender: Female

Species: Half-Grimm

Hair color/style: Braided dark brown

Eye color: Pupil-less bright blue

Skin color: Brown with pale around her eyes and nose like a mask

Personality: Loyal, secretive, opinionated, familial, agile, and outspoken

Aura color: Faint gray

Semblance: None

Weapon(s): Metal whip that de-magnetizes at the end into a multi-tailed whip

Hypothetical voice actress: Ashleigh Ball

Extra Info: Has the ears and tail of a Beowolf, can shift into Beowolf form at will

Before anyone says about not following the RWBY guidelines... I have no idea what those guidelines are, I just know that there's four to a group and they have to be based off of fairy tales or legends.

I had these characters for so long, and only one didn't have to be changed except for having a semblance. The other three went through some revisions and this is what I ended up at.

I just realized that they are all based off of myths of monsters: the twins are based off of werewolves, Silver is based off of vampires by his appearance, and Kestin is based off of monster hunters

So their theme is monsters

Don't know if I'll change them again or not.

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Warriors Series Seven Rewrite

-Dovewing gives birth to Birchkit, Rowankit who is now black-and-red, and Magpiekit, who Shadowsight thinks is Magpie reborn

-Myrtlebloom is renamed Meadowbloom

-Duskpaw's mentor is Hollytuft instead of Lilyheart

-Bramblestar refuses to name a deputy after Mapleshine’s death

-Stormcloud is Bayshine's and Meadowbloom's biological father

-Duskpaw is given the name of Icestorm, surprising and infuriating Wildpelt who wanted Bramblestar to name him Dusklight

-Icewing is Stonestar’s current deputy

-Although RiverClan is able to spare catmint, Rowankit still dies from greencough

-ThunderClan is worried about Bramblestar and of how he still hasn't appointed a new deputy then become panicked when he decides to step down leaving them with no leader or deputy

-Icestorm leaves ThunderClan for ShadowClan after rumors spread of him betraying Dawnstar by not asking for his 'real' name

-Frostpaw gets a warning about 'a darkness in ThunderClan' which confuses her since she's RiverClan

-Icestorm returns to ThunderClan after failing Berryheart's tasks and is still treated with hostility from the rumors

-Wildpelt asks Redheart if he had any sign of who the new leader would be, but he says that StarClan has only given him visions of cats fighting

-Frostpaw recovers from her attack and finds Icestorm who was walking around aimlessly, wondering what he did wrong to earn his Clan's ire

-Frostpaw reveals her omen of ThunderClan in trouble, and Icestorm realizes that maybe the answer they're looking for might be elsewhere since the Clans have become distrustful of each other

-They arrive at the park where Frostpaw learns to meditate for future conflicts and Icestorm meets a large brown tabby with a bushy, blunt-tipped tail and a scar over his nose. Icestorm is respectfully afraid at first until one of the park cats reveal that Buck Hunt is just shy around newcomers

-ThunderClan meanwhile, is trying to figure out what Redheart's vision means while Wildpelt is sorting out any conflict

-After a quarter moon of being in the park, she realizes that Wildpelt is shown a vision of Wildpelt plotting with Finchlight to force Icestorm to ask for his 'real' name and of teaching the Clan of the importance of Dawnstar's legacy

-They return to the Clans with Buck Hunt, Waffle, and Wasp to hear at a Gathering that Redheart has announced that Wildpelt is chosen to be ThunderClan's new leader

-Redheart tells Icestorm that Wildpelt has been boasting of cats that have Dawnstar's blood

-Buck Hunt confesses to Icestorm about his feelings, and the two beocome mates

-Wildpelt, after returning from the Moonpool, tries to rename Icestorm as Dusklight but he refuses saying that just because he has Dawnstar's blood that doesn't mean that he has to lose his individuality

-Finchlight had offered to be a surrogate for Buck Hunt and Icestorm, who agree, and gives birth to a pair of black kits that are named Lightningkit and Willowkit. Until Finchlight reveals that their 'real' names are Dawnkit and Thunderkit, leading to an arguement between Icestorm and Finchlight until Wildpelt decrees that Finchlight is the kits' mother and exiles Icestorm and Buck Hunt

-They head to ShadowClan where they are given refuge and reveal what Wildpelt has been doing to ThunderClan

-Molewhisker and Honeyfur trick ShadowClan into thinking that ThunderClan has turned on Wildpelt before trapping the group at the half-bridge

-Wildpelt leads and attack on ShadowClan, and Lilyheart reveals that she had threatened to kill Stempaw, Bristlepaw, and Graypaw if ThunderClan refuses

-Icestorm lets himself get captured in order to find out what is going on in ThunderClan and discovers that Wildpelt has sent cats that have no relation to Dawnstar as death fodder while cats related to Dawnstar are treated like StarClan

-Icestorm tries to reason with Finchlight who says that Wildpelt had plans for him and that he had to ruin everything by not accepting his 'real' name and that will be fixed through Dawnkit and Thunderkit

-The rest of the Clans arrive to weaken Wildpelt's hold and Wildpelt just shouts that she's just doing what Dawnstar would've wanted until she finally notices Icestorm and loses it

-Icestorm is able to finally kill Wildpelt, surprised that she never got her nine lives when she doesn't wake up, and collapses from his own wounds

-Finchlight is exiled for being an accomplice in Wildpelt's plan, and Buck Hunt returns to ThunderClan

-A quarter moon later, Icestorm is still unconscious as Redheart finally understands that Dawnstar never cared about having Clan blood, she only cared about proving that you belonged

-Icestorm is shown visions of Dawnstar's life where she has made it clear that she doesn't care about blood, instead she cares about how each future cat would prove themselves to the Clan

-Dawnstar herself appears to Icestorm and reveals that the Clan has forgotten what she stood for and that he has to wake up to help remind them

-Icestorm wakes up much to the delight of Buck Hunt, and the entire Clan apologizes for believing Wildpelt's manipulations

-After hearing what Dawnstar has told Icestorm to say, Redheart reveals that he knows who is supposed to be leader, a cat who knows what Dawnstar wants, a cat who had lived a hard life themself until they proved themself to the Clan: Jayflight

-Two moons later, Jayflight is now Jaystar with Ivypool as his deputy, and Buck Hunt as decided to become a permanent den father with Willowkit and Lightningkit as although he looks scary, he is actually a gentle giant

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MLP G5 Rewrite

-Long after the inclusion of the other species, a threat of overpopulation was looming to occupy Equestria. In order divert the growing threat, almost half of the pony population volunteered to leave Equestria and create a new nation: Friesia. Until the ponies couldn't decide who would lead them, and the stress and paranoia combined with slowly draining resources after several months of travel caused the three races to fight and separate.

-Sunny is Scootaloo's descendant

-Hitch is Apple Bloom's descendant and doesn't talk to animals

-Pipp and Zipp are Sweetie Belle's descendants

-Izzy is Trixie's descendant, she has short-term memory loss, and can talk to animals who act as her guides

-Since there is no magic anymore, cutie marks no longer appear and names are now more human-like instead of being based off of cutie marks

-Opaline is now an ancient evil from Grogar’s time, originally a unicorn who offered her services to him in exchange for being transformed into a fire alicorn only to be sealed away by Gusty and her friends

-Maretime Bay, Zephyr Heights, and Bridlewood are capitals of the three nations that were created after the separation, the other cities and towns will only be mentioned unless an episode requires them to be there

-The Unity Crystals are gifts from Equestria that the refugees brought with them that would be the new nation's Elements of Harmony

-It takes the entirety of Chapter One than the pilot episode for the Mane 5 to help the three races to accept each other

-Sparky is renamed Emerald Sparks, Sparky is now a nickname, and he doesn't have wings or overpowered magic fire

-Izzy doesn't activate Rainbow Power just by imagining, in fact Rainbow Power doesn't exist and the water park is actually built

-When magic returns, unicorns still need to learn spells, pegasi need to relearn how to control the weather, and earth ponies regain their lost strength and nature connection

-The Isle of Scaly is a part of the Dragon Lands and the current ruler is Ember’s and Garble’s child: Saber

-Sunny does not become an alicorn after the three races are reunited, she becomes an alicorn after Opaline’s defeat

-Opaline’s personality is now changed to be more like Mother Gothel, and she and Misty have a mother-daughter relationship

-Misty accidentally teleported to Opaline when her fear overwhelmed her and activated her magic

-Opaline escaped her imprisonment after coming back to consciousness and regaining enough magic to destroy the spell restraining her

-Starlight Ridge is now ruled by Flurry Heart as a test to experience what it’s like to be a ruler

-The Crystal Brighthouse was grown by the Unity Crystals like how Twilight's Castle was grown from the crystal treasure chest seed

-Skyros remains a mystery with very little details revealed

-Allura is now searching for a crystal that holds all the power she wants until it's revealed that the 'crystal' is actually Flurry Heart's title: Princess of the Crystal Empire

My redesign of the Mane Six

Please don't ask about Hitch's hair, his concept art is just him in different colors, so I used Sprout's concept art for his hair. This was the closest I could get to the concept art.

The base is by DarlyJay on DeviantArt

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Warriors Family Trees Rewrite

ThunderClan

From oldest known families to current known families

Notice: Not every cat are mates with others. Some will ask a clanmate or a friend to sire their kits, meaning that the queen will be the kits only parent after mating

-Gorseclaw (SkyClan-born) and an unknown she-cat had Oakstar

-Spottedpelt (SkyClan-born) had an unknown number of descendants until Adderfang

-Mapleshade became mates with Appledusk, and they had Petaldawn, Larchtail, and Patchface (In my rewrite of MV, the kits survive)

-A paranoid Oakstar became mates with a young Sweetbriar a couple moons after Frecklewish’s death, and they had Pinestar

-Squirrelwhisker became mates with Eaglestorm, and they had Windflight

-Petaldawn and an unknown tom had Flashnose and Daisytoe

-Flashnose and an unknown tom, possibly Littlestep, had Swiftbreeze and adopted Stormtail (One of the Erins said that the two are littermates, so Moonflower mated with her cousin)

-Daisytoe became mates with Rooktail, and they had Goosefeather and Moonflower

-Fallowsong and an unknown tom had Poppydawn, Rabbitleap, and Heronwing

-Larksong became mates with Flamenose, and they had Sunfall/star and Featherwhisker

-Harepounce became mates with Stagleap, and they had Speckletail and adopted White-eye/One-eye

-Rainfur and an unknown tom had Dappletail, Tawnyspots, and Thrushpelt

-Swiftbreeze became mates with Adderfang, and they had Leopardfoot and Patchpelt in their first litter, and Redtail, Spottedleaf, and Willowpelt in their second litter

-Moonflower became mates with Stormtail, although it was one-sided, and they had Bluefur/star and Snowfur

-Poppydawn became mates with Windflight, and they had Thistleclaw, Rosetail, and Sweetpaw

-Speckletail became mates with Smallear, and they had Lionheart and Goldenflower in their first litter, and Snowheart (Snowkit) and Mistlekit in their second litter

-Dappletail became mates with Stormtail, and they had Featherkit (Oliver) and Cricketkit

-Leopardfoot asked Pinestar to sire her kits and they had Tigerclaw, Mistkit, and Nightkit

-Snowfur became mates with Thistleclaw, and they had Whitestorm

-White-eye became mates with Sparrowpelt, and they had Frostfur and Brindleface in their first litter, and Mousefur and Runningwind in their second litter

-Bluefur/star became mates with Oakheart, and they had Stonefur, Mistyfoot, and Mosskit/petal

-Willowpelt became mates with Whitestorm, and they had Darkstripe in their first litter, Graystripe in their second litter, and Sorreltail, Rainwhisker, and Sootfur in their third litter

-Goldenflower asked Patchpelt to sire her kits and they had Longtail in their first litter first litter, and Swiftpaw/step in the second litter

-Rosetail offered to care for Sandkit after Thrushpelt returned to the Clan with her and claimed her as his daughter

-Robinwing became mates with Fuzzypelt, and they had Chestnutkit, Cherrypaw, Dustpelt, and Ravensong

-A tuxedo loner named Magpie adopted a calico kit who would be named Dawnlight/star

-Mistyfoot becomes mates with Ebonygaze (Scourge), and they had Blackwhisker, Primrosepaw, Nightkit, and Shadekit

-Lionheart becomes mates with Frostfur, and they had Cinderleap and Brackenfur, and adopted Brightheart and Thornclaw

-Brindleface was mates with Darkstripe, and they had Ashfur, Ferncloud, Tulipkit, and Elderkit (Who names their kit ‘Elder’?)

-Tigerclaw becomes mates with Goldenflower, and they have Brambleclaw/star and Tawnypelt

-Graystripe was mates with Silverstream, and they have Feathertail and Stormfur then he became mates with Sandstorm, and they have Blossomfall, Briarlight, and Bumblestripe

-Oliver and an unknown kittypet have Cloudtail

-Dawnlight/star adopted Cloudtail before becoming mates with Blackwhisker, and they have Mapleshine and Skypool in their first litter, and Redkit and Magpiekit in their second litter

-Dustpelt becomes mates with Ferncloud, and they have Spiderleg and Shrewpaw in their first litter, and Birchfall, Hollykit, and Larchkit in their second litter

-Brightheart, Cloudtail, and Swiftpaw/step becomes mates, and they have Whitewing (biological father: Cloudtail) in their first litter, and Ambermoon, Snowbush, and Dewnose (biological father: Swiftpaw/step) in their second litter

-Daisy was mates with Smoky, and they have Berrynose, Hazeltail, and Mousewhisker then she was briefly mates with Spiderleg, and they have Toadstep and Rosepetal

-Sorreltail becomes mates with Brackenfur, and they have Songheart (Cinderheart), Honeyfern, Poppyfrost, and Molepaw in their first litter, and adopted Lilyheart and Seedpaw after their seond litter was stillborn

-Skypool briefly became mates with Crowfeather, and they have Lionblaze, Jayflight, and Hollyleaf

-Feathertail and an unknown tom had Icecloud and Foxleap, and Ashfur decided to step in as their father

-Whitewing becomes mates with Birchfall, and they have Ivypool and Dovewing

-Poppyfrost becomes mates with Berrynose, and they have Molewhisker and Cherryfall

-Lionblaze becomes mates with Songheart, and they have Fernsong (who is transgender), Hollytuft, and Sorrelstripe in their first litter, and Snaptooth, Flywhisker, and Spotfur in their second litter

-Bramblestar briefly became mates with Jessy, and they have Redheart and Wildpelt

-Lilyheart becomes mates with Snowbush, and they have Larksong, Honeyfur, and Leafshade

-Thornclaw offers to sire Ivypool's and Fernsong's kits, and they have Bristlefrost and Thriftear (biological mother: Ivypool), and Flipclaw (biological mother: Fernsong)

-Blossomfall becomes mates with Toadstep, and they have Stemleaf and Shellfur

-Dovewing becomes mates with Tigerheart, and they have Shadowsight, Pouncestep, and Lightleap in their first litter, and Birchfeather, Rowankit, and Magpietail in their second litter

-Sorrelstripe becomes mates with Stormcloud, and they have Bayshine and Meadowbloom (Myrtlebloom)

-Wildpelt asked Snaptooth to sire her kits and they have Finchlight and Icestorm (Nightheart)

-Icestorm becomes mates with a park-raised wildcat named Buck Hunt, and they have Lightningkit and Willowkit with Finchlight as their surrogate

-Spotfur becomes mates with Stemleaf, and they have Stemtail, Bristleclaw, and Graywhisker

-Meadowbloom becomes mates with Wafflepelt, and they have Oakkit, Sunkit, and Hazelkit

-Thriftear becomes mates with Dewnose, and they have Moonpaw

That's all for now until more books are published

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The Divide AU

Decided to call this the Divide AU since it'll be divided into two timelines after The Last Hope: the rewritten and fixed canon timeline and the DawnClan timeline

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Mapleshade’s Vengeance Rewrite

-Maplekit is born to Dawnfeather and Redstar alongside Seedkit. Redstar and Dawnfeather had lost several litters before and became a bit protective

-Maplekit becomes spoiled and entitled from being the leader’s kit while Seedkit becomes disappointed by his sister’s behavior

-The day before Maplekit and Seedkit become apprentices, Redstar dies from a tainted piece of fresh-kill and the ceremony is pushed back by a day

-Seedpaw slowly starts to drift apart from Maplepaw during their apprenticeship

-A couple of moons pass when Dawnfeather tells Maplepaw that she is expecting kits, and Maplepaw assumes that she is replacing her with the new kits

-Dawnfeather dies from greencough when Nettlekit is four moons old, and Maplepaw has another breakdown

-The newly named Birchface decides to bring Maplepaw to the forest in order to talk privately about her reaction and reveals about his mother's death

-Maplepaw gains a small crush on him

-But she never gets the chance to tell him since a few moons later, he falls from Sunningrocks and drowns alongside his apprentice

-Mapleshade completely shuts down for a while until she formally meets the tom that caused the accident: Appledusk

-The two keep meeting at Gatherings and border patrols before they confess to each other and start meeting in secret

-A few moons passed and Mapleshade reveals her pregnancy to Appledusk

-Appledusk is reasonably worried about ThunderClan finding out, but Mapleshade pushes aside his worries

-Frecklewish approaches Mapleshade the next day and wonders if, against all odds, the kits are Birchface's, and takes Mapleshade's shocked silence as a 'yes'

-Petalkit, Larchkit, and Patchkit are born

-Two moons later, the secret is revealed after Ravenwing misunderstands a sign

-At the river, Mapleshade is trying to get her kits to swim across when a patrol of Bloomheart, Seedpelt, and Frecklewish appear and says that Oakstar changed his mind after an elder, Amberclaw, reveals that Oakstar is half-Clan since his father Gorseclaw was born in a now forgotten Clan and brought to ThunderClan as a kit with his sister and mother

-But Mapleshade is too blinded by hostility to even listen and instead yells them that it's too late before yelling at her kits to cross the river

-Unfortunately, the kits instead run to the patrol

-Mapleshade, feeling betrayed by the only ones that could never leave her, tries to attack them but Bloomheart fends her off and accidentally pushes her into the river

-The RiverClan patrol still manages to save her, and she is freaking out over ThunderClan 'stealing' her kits

-She is brought to Darkstar where Appledusk reveals their secret meetings

-When asked about what she meant about ThunderClan stealing her kits, Mapleshade reveals what happened and begs for RiverClan's help

-Darkstar notices an unsettling look in Mapleshade's eyes and decides that she will not risk her warriors' lives just to get three kits

-Mapleshade yells at her before turning to Appledusk for help, which he says that she is not the cat he once thought she was and wants nothing to do with her

-"You told me you loved me! I went through the agony of bearing your kits! And now, you treat me worse than prey. You will regret this Appledusk. That is my last promise to you."

-She then runs out of RiverClan's camp and ends up at the barn where she plots how to make both RiverClan and ThunderClan pay

-The next few moons, she secretly torments the Clans by stealing prey from both territories and putting them on the other's territories, she kills Ravenwing at the Moonstone, she blinds a pregnant Frecklewish when she's out on a stroll, and paralyzes Perchpaw before killing Appledusk while trying to attack Reedshine

-Reedshine's yowl alerts a nearby patrol that attack Mapleshade and chase her off the territory where she returns to the barn and dies, descending to the Dark Forest

-In the epilogue, Frecklewish died giving birth to stillborn kits, Petalkit is now Petaldawn and is Flashpaw's and Daisypaw's mother, Larchkit is now Larchtail and is Mistpaw's mentor, and Patchkit is now Patchface, the new ThunderClan medicine cat after Cloudberry was asked to train him when Ravenwing died

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Warriors Series Six Rewrite

Mapleshine's Hope Rewrite

-Snaptooth is now Wildpelt's mate in a Bluestar's Prophecy Stormtail/Moonflower relationship

-Flamekit is now a blue-gray tabby tom named Duskkit and Finchkit remains the same

The Broken Code Rewrite

(Version One)

-Bristlepaw and Thriftpaw are born from Ivystorm and Flippaw is born from Fernsong, both litters are sired by Thornclaw

-A voice warns Shadowpaw that a great darkness will destroy the Clans from within

-Shadowpaw decides of freezing Bramblestar as a last resort since the herbs are not helping the leader

-Rootpaw sees a spirit near Shadowsight trying to comfort said cat but is distracted by Bramblestar's ghost

-Toadstep dies in the battle against the impostor

-Mapleshine tries to trick the impostor into revealing themself as Ashfur but the impostor reveals that they are not Ashfur and that they are Petalstar, an ancient SkyClan leader before killing Mapleshine

-The Sisters' ritual reveals Petalstar as a cream-colored she-cat with a ginger face, tail, legs, and ears and pale blue eyes

-When Shadowsight dreams himself into the Dark Forest, he finally meets the voice that has been giving him reassurances from the beginning: a tuxedo she-cat with blue-green eyes who identifies herself as Magpie

-The Dark Forest is being swallowed by thick fog which will tear a spirit apart if they touch it for too long

-Petalstar reveals that the Clans are too soft on codebreakers so she wants to remake the Clans, no matter who gets in her way

-Dawnstar manages to get through the hole in the barrier that is slowly growing and kills Darkstripe

-Redwillow falls into the thick fog and his screams are heard as he's being killed bit by agonizing bit

-Petalstar reveals that she used Ashfur to harvest spirits before disposing of him once his usefulness wore out

-Magpie tries to protect Shadowsight's body but Petalstar strikes her

-Originally, Bristlefrost told Rootspring that she loved him to get him to not suspect her but once she falls into the fog, she realizes that she developed feelings for him

-After Bristlefrost's sacrifice and the fog disappears, Magpie calls out to a 'Little One' as she is bleeding from her throat before collapsing

-Dawnstar rushes to her side and reveals that Magpie is her adoptive mother that she formed her beliefs around

-Once back to the living world, Shadowsight reveals that it was Magpie he was communicating with instead of StarClan and that she tried to help him all along

(Version Two)

-Just the two Clans fighting over where borders go and about half-Clan relationships within DawnClan

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Warriors Series Five Rewrite

Dovewing's Silence Rewrite

(Version One)

-Basically nothing changes from the original

(Version Two)

-The new Clan debates what to do: if they should leave the lake or choose one of the old Clans' camps as their own

-Spikekit and Grasskit become apprentices with Tigerheart and Heathertail as their mentors

-The newly named Toadstar chooses Heathertail as deputy

-Songheart finds out she's expecting Lionblaze's kits

Bramblestar's Storm Rewrite

(Version One)

-Toadstep survives greencough

-Benny survives and is renamed Patchpaw as ThunderClan's new medicine cat apprentice

-Fernsong is now born a she-cat but identifies as a tom i.e. a he-molly: a she-cat or tom that identifies as their personal gender

-Jessy gives birth to hers' and Bramblestar's kits: Redkit (red-brown tom) and Wildkit (black she-kit) but when they're fully weaned, she leaves the Clan to go back to her Twolegs

(Version Two)

-Tigerheart and Ivystorm settle their grudge with each other

-Benny survives and is renamed Patchpaw as DawnClan's new medicine cat apprentice

-Fernsong is now born a she-cat but identifies as a tom i.e. a he-molly: a she-cat or tom that identifies as their personal gender

A Vision of Shadows Rewrite

(Version One)

-An unknown figure helps Redpaw with his warrior training but is unsuccessful as he is forced into the medicine cat position

-Twigkit is renamed as Mistkit

-Blossomfall gives birth to Toadstep's kits

-Darktail and a pale gray she-cat named Moonfall are revealed to be Blackstar's kits from his time as a rogue

-Dawnpelt, Lioneye, and Mistcloud are revealed to be alive since Moonfall went behind her brother's back and saved them

-Moonfall and Darktail fight in the lake which they both go under, a red spot slowly forms from where they sank and Moonfall bursts out of the water saying that she killed Darktail once and for all, and disbands the Kin

-Mistpaw is named Mistshade

-Moonfall becomes a member of the revived ShadowClan and asks to be renamed Moonfoot after Blackstar

(Version Two)

-Ivystorm gives birth to hers' and Tigerheart's kits: Shadowkit (unchanged), Leafkit (light brown tom), and Brightkit (pale silver she-kit)

-Darktail is dissatisfied that DawnClan is all there is left of the four original Clans

-Moonfall and Darktail fight in the lake which they both go under, a red spot slowly forms from where they sank and Moonfall bursts out of the water saying that she killed Darktail once and for all, and disbands the Kin

-Moonfall joines DawnClan and asks to be renamed Moonfoot after Blackstar

-SkyClan decides to occupy the old ShadowClan territory while DawnClan occupies the old ThunderClan territory

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Warriors Series Four Rewrite

Omen of the Stars Rewrite

-Stonestar announces that RiverClan will be fishing from the lake because of the drought but staying on their own territory

-Ivypaw is now Lionblaze's apprentice and Dovepaw is now Songheart's apprentice

-Dovepaw is chosen alongside Lionblaze which surprises Ivypaw and Songheart

-Ivypaw is starting to feel neglected by Lionblaze paying more attention to Dovepaw

-Dovepaw sees and hears Blackclaw plotting with Leopardfur to get rid of Stonestar and have Leopardfur reinstated as RiverClan's leader

-Dawnstar reveals the prophecy after Dovepaw and Ivypaw sneak into WindClan

-Lionblaze seems to be agitated with Ivypaw which makes her think that he would prefer being Dovepaw's mentor instead

-Longtail is crushed by the tree but manages to push Briarpaw away just in time as the only wounds she receives is being scarred on her side and half of her face

-Ivypaw tries to interrogate Lionblaze about how he truly feels about being her mentor and notices his eyes glaze over before he snaps out of it

-Dovepaw finds out that Ivypaw is training in the Dark Forest and tells Jayflight and Lionblaze

-Jayflight finds out that StarClan is now divided but an unknown figure approaches him and says that the code states that they must fight together against evil

-Songheart comforts Ivypaw after finding out that the sisters are drifting apart

-Dovepaw reveals her powers to Ivypaw which makes her decide to spy on the Dark Forest

-Flametail falls through the frozen lake, but Jayflight and a mysterious figure save him

-Ivypaw finds Flametail's spirit in the Dark Forest and is told to kill him, but Tigerheart intervenes

-Flametail reveals that his body is healing which is why his spirit is able to move freely

-Ivypaw and Dovepaw become Ivystorm and Dovewing

-Ivystorm interrogates Lionblaze again that he only reason she became a warrior was because he was through training her, and with glazed over eyes he reveals that he would have preferred Dovewing as his apprentice since she is better at listening to her mentor

-Ivystorm realizes that she has a power of manipulating cats by talking to them and being able to resist manipulation from others

-Flametail is now fully recovered from his near drowning

-Sorreltail's kits are stillborn, but Brackenfur finds two abandoned kits who they decide to raise and name them Lilykit and Seedkit

-Hollyleaf tells Lionblaze and Jayflight that she absorbed Ashfur's spirit when she killed him and that she kept hearing his voice was in her head which led her to reveal their parentage

-Ivystorm also reveals her powers to Dovewing who relays the knowledge to Lionblaze and Jayflight

-Jayflight tells Dawnstar that there are five cats with powers: himself able to walk in dreams and memories, Lionblaze being invincible, Dovewing being able to extend her sight and hearing, Ivystorm being able to manipulate cats and resist manipulation, and Hollyleaf being able to absorb souls

-Strange scents are being detected in all of the territories

-StarClan is now experiencing changing seasons

-Brightheart gives birth to Swiftstep's kits: Snowkit, Amberkit, and Dewkit

-The Clans prepare for the battle against the Dark Forest

-The Dark Forest attack ShadowClan and take one of Blackstar's lives

-The mysterious figure that helped save Flametail reveals themselves as a cat made up of stars named Star's Path: the first spirit and creator of StarClan

-Midnight reveals that they are the kit of Star's Path and helps fight the Dark Forest

-Ivystorm inspires the trainees to fight against the Dark Forest and is saved from Hawkfrost by Hollyleaf

-Ivystorm kills Hawkfrost before carrying Hollyleaf to camp where she makes amends with her family before dying

(Ending One)

-Dawnstar, Hollyleaf, Ferncloud, Sorreltail, Mistyfoot, Ebonygaze, and Mousefur ascend to StarClan

-Midnight and Star's Path reveal that the prophecy has been fulfilled

(Ending Two)

-Mousewhisker, Ivypool, and Songheart are all that's left of ThunderClan

-Tigerheart, Ivytail and her kits, and Berryheart are all that's left of ShadowClan

-Kestrelflight, Heathertail, and Owlwhisker are all that's left of WindClan

-Toadpelt, Robinwing, and Petalfur are all that's left of RiverClan

-The survivors meet at the island and decide to join together as one Clan with Toadpelt as leader

-The new Clan is named DawnClan for the cats joining together for a new dawn

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Warriors Series Three Rewrite

The Power of Three Changes

-Lionkit is now red-and-cream

-Feathertail is now Ashfur's mate, and they are the parents of Foxkit and Icekit

-Cinderpaw is now named Songpaw after Ravensong

-There is no Tribe or Ancient sub-plot

-After finding out about Brightheart neglecting Jaypaw, Dawnstar takes him as her own apprentice

-Graystripe and Sandstorm return and it turns out they became mates during their journey home

-Jaypaw accidentally dreamwalks into the Dark Forest where Spottedleaf leads him back to StarClan and try to force him to become a medicine cat which he refuses since Dawnstar believes in him and told him about her experiences before the Clan where disabled cats can hunt and fight as well as normal cats

-WindClan is attacked by dogs and Dawnstar sends a patrol to see if they can help or if WindClan has it covered, the patrol is needed to defeat the dogs

-ShadowClan's accusation of ThunderClan taking in non-Clanborn cats at the Gathering has Dawnstar snap at Blackstar and says that she and the other 'non-Clanborn' cats will leave which surprises all four Clans since Dawnstar is the most loyal and passionate cat they know

-Dawnstar says that if she proved herself over and over again to the Clans then why can't the others, and all of the Clans agrees

-Jaypaw dreamwalks into Dawnstar's dream and finds out about the prophecy but also that Dawnstar is confused about which kin since she adopted Cloudtail when he was a kit so that makes Whitewing her kin as well

-Songpaw breaks her leg, but Cinderleap comforts her by saying that Dawnstar never gave up on her when the rest of the Clan did

-Lionpaw is visited by Tigerstar and Brambleclaw finds out which he then warns his 'son' about the dangers of the Dark Forest

-Lionpaw discovers his power after kittypets from the Greenleaf Twolegplace attack the border patrol

-Jaypaw reveals the prophecy to his siblings and about Dawnstar's confusion about which cats the prophecy is talking about

-Sandstorm gives birth to Bumblekit, Briarkit, and Blossomkit

-WindClan attacks ThunderClan, and Feathertail and Dawnstar's and Blackwhisker's newborn kits are killed by accident

-Dawnstar attacks Onestar and tells him that he will pay for the deaths his warriors caused

-Jaypaw gets his warrior name: Jayflight and is now a full-time fighter since his lack of vision makes it hard to hunt precisely

-A fire breaks out and the remaining cats head towards the Twoleg nest, but Jayflight, Hollyleaf, and Lionblaze are trapped

-Mapleshine reveals that the three are not her kits before a black-and-white blur knocks Ashfur off of the branch, the blur is revealed to be Swiftstep with Dustpelt close behind

-Dustpelt says that Dawnstar sent the two to search for them

-The three escape and they are all escorted back to the Clan where Ashfur is interrogated by Dawnstar and reveals everything

-Ferncloud surprises the Clan by slashing her brother's face and reveals that Feathertail loved him much to his surprise since he took her as a mate to try and get over Mapleshine which failed

-Foxpaw and Icepaw disown Ashfur as their father

-Dawnstar strips Ashfur of his name before exiling him which he retorts by saying that the Clan will pay for this

-As Sol is taken prisoner, Purdy is invited to join ThunderClan as an elder since he is older now than when he first met the journeying cats

-The other three leaders arrive to talk about Sol's punishment

-Skypool reveals to Hollyleaf that she knows that she killed Ashfur and that she is the three's true mother

-Hollyleaf reveals at the secret at the Gathering, but all Lionblaze notices is that her eyes are now dark blue instead of green

-Hollyleaf reveals that she was the one that killed Ashfur and threatend to kill Skypool before running into the tunnels just before it collapses

-Dawnstar reveals to Blackwhisker that she knew the three were Skypool's kits and wonders if her silence was worth it

-He tells her that it was up to their daughters since it wasn't hers to tell

-A barely visible figure is watching the Clans as it wonders about what will happen to 'the balance'

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Warriors Series One Rewrite

I decided to rewrite the series since there was a lot of things that annoyed me, like Firestar being a gary stu, how stupid the Clans are and how they treat adoption and disabilities

Bluestar's Prophecy Changes

-Frostfur and Brindleface are now White-eye's and Sparrowpelt's kits

-Windflight is no longer Thrushpelt's and Tawnyspots' father

-Rosetail is now cream-colored with a ginger tail

-Featherwhisker and Spottedpaw, who chose to be a medicine cat because of her interest in herbs and healing, help Bluefur stop Thistleclaw and Tigerpaw from killing a kit before helping to carry him to ThunderClan

-Featherwhisker tells Sunstar what happened and Tigerpaw gets a new mentor, Lionheart, and Thistleclaw is given one chance to regain his Clan's trust

-The kit, Tiny, recovers and explains that his brother and sister tried to kill him for being small and chased him from their den

-The queens share the responsibility of raising Ebonykit since he's old enough to eat prey

-Thistleclaw tries to usurp Lionheart's mentoring while at the same time try to force Spottedpaw to have his kits which he attempts by trying to force mating her when she's gathering herbs in the forest

-Adderfang finds out and helps Spottedpaw back to camp where she reveals what Thistleclaw has done, and when Sunstar asks Thistleclaw why he did it, he says that Spottedpaw is Snowfur and that they are in love which Spottedpaw vehemently denies

-Thistleclaw is then sentenced to exile and told that he would be killed if anyone saw him again

-The clan doesn't blame Spottedpaw because she was the victim

-Tigerpaw and Whitepaw become warriors, and Ebonykit becomes an apprentice with Leopardfoot as his mentor

-Bluefur never gives up her kits, and becomes deputy when they are three moons old and able to eat prey

-It's hinted that the kits' father is from RiverClan because of Mistykit's name

The Prophecy Begins Changes

-The prophecy is changed to: A shining light will change the Clans

-Longtail is now Goldenflower's and Patchpelt's kit

-Sandstorm is Rosetail's and Thrushpelt's kit

-Mistyfoot and Ebonygaze(Ebonypaw) have kits: Blackkit (Reedwhisker), Fawnkit (Primrosepaw), Shadekit (Pikekit), and Nightkit (Perchpaw)

-Whitestorm is Darkstripe's and Graystripe's father

-Rusty is now an unnamed calico she-cat loner with hazel eyes who is renamed Dawnpaw for waiting since dawn to join ThunderClan

-Dawnpaw uses human words which confuse the Clan (i.e. road instead of Thunderpath, human instead of Twoleg, human curses instead of Clan curses, etc.)

-Although Dawnpaw is harsh and blunt, around elders, kits, and queens she is kind and friendly

-The Dark Forest is introduced instead of the next series

-Ravenpaw is now Spottedleaf's apprentice and gets the name Ravensong when Yellowfang takes over his training

-Longtail and Dawnpaw get into an argument when Longtail askes her if her mother taught her any manners she retorts: "Which one? The one that abandoned me at a week old, or the one that died protecting me when I was four months old?!"

-Dawnpaw then runs into the forest while Longtail and the entire Clan stare in shock

-Shadekit disappears and it's discovered that he went to comfort Dawnpaw in the forest but a fox got to him while she was trying to save him

-Nightkit is killed by Brokenstar

-Lionheart survives but is now mute and Bluestar decides to replace him with Tigerclaw

-Dawnpaw is now thought of as the traitor since she is loner-born although she proves to the Clan that she is not

-Fawnkit dies due to greencough

-Ashfur's and Ferncloud's father is Darkstripe

-Dawnpaw and Graypaw find bones scattered throughout ShadowClan territory, but they're too big to be prey bones

-The ShadowClan elders reveal that Brokenstar is hunting them down since he eats the bodies of the kits that died and has already eaten a couple elders

-Brokenstar is still chased out of ShadowClan with his loyal warriors and a cream-and-gray she-cat named Sandycloud, Hopekit, is chosen as leader instead of Nightpelt

-Dawnpaw and Graypaw are made warriors, and Dawnpaw gets the name Dawnlight

-Dawnlight and Graystripe have a small falling out during the search for WindClan since Dawnlight is more experienced with traveling and Graystripe doesn't listen to her

-Dawnlight intercepts Whiteclaw when he lunges at Graystripe, saving him and telling him that if Graystripe dodged then he would fall into the gorge

-Cinderpaw is still crippled but continues training to be a warrior at Dawnlight's encouragement of already meeting disabled cats that have adapted their way of living

-Dawnlight finds a newborn kit with its' dead mother and takes him in while telling the rest of the Clan that she was adopted and because of that would never leave a kit to die

-It is revealed during the battle against the rogues, Brokentail had planned with a Twolegplace group called 'BloodClan' to destroy ThunderClan

-Bluestar tells the other Clans at the Gathering about keeping Brokentail prisoner and allows one warrior from each Clan to end Brokentail once and for all

-Dawnlight reveals what she knows about BloodClan but Tigerclaw refuses to listen saying that a bunch of kittypets aren't difficult to take care of

-Silverstream joins ThunderClan when she is expecting kits, Crookedstar tries to get her back but stops when Silverstream goes into labor and the third kit, named Spring by Graystripe after asking Dawnlight of what rogues, loners, and kittypets call newleaf, is stillborn

-Tigerclaw is stripped of his name before being exiled

-Bluestar refuses to name a deputy and slowly experiences dementia

-Whitestorm is chosen to lead a group for the Gathering when Bluestar refuses to allow anyone to go and find out that Tigerclaw is the leader of ShadowClan

-Bluestar refuses to make any of the apprentices warriors and the kits apprentices

-Snowkit is saved from death by Dawnlight who kills the hawk before it could get him

-Bluestar attacks Dawnlight for stopping the upcoming battle against WindClan

-Swiftpaw and Brightpaw are attacked by the dogs while hunting and both survive the ordeal but are named Lostface and Dogslip

-The Clan leads the dogs to the gorge where Bluestar reveals to Mistyfoot, Stonefur, and Mosspetal that their father is Oakheart

-Ravensong receives a dream that tells him that Dawnlight is to be the new leader

-Dawnstar gives the older apprentices their warrior names and gives the kits their apprentice names, including Snowkit

-Swiftpaw is renamed Swiftstep

-TigerClan kidnaps Stonefur, Mistyfoot, Stormpaw, and Featherpaw while Mosspetal is killed for trying to escape and Silverstream is killed for being a traitor

-Blackfoot, having a change of heart, knocks Stonefur unconscious to trick Tigerstar into thinking that he died and helps the group escape

-Tigerstar tries to kill Gorsepaw but a cat comes between them and take the blow

-The cat is revealed to be Sandystar who reveals that Tigerstar took the rest of her lives and forced her to give up her leadership

-All of the Clans are shocked when Ebonygaze reveals that the leaders of BloodClan, Death and Strike, are his siblings Socks and Ruby

-Both siblings murder Tigerstar and give them three days whether to die or leave

-Dawnstar loses her first life before killing Death (Socks) while Ebonygaze kills Strike (Ruby)

-After BloodClan is defeated, Dawnstar suggests to change the medicine cat rule and the rule about forbidden relationships: 'A medicine cat can have a mate and kits as long as there is another fully trained medicine cat' and 'If a cat chooses to switch Clans to be with their mate, they must start over in that Clan as an apprentice'

-Dawnstar names Longtail her deputy after Whitestorm's death

-Cloudtail, being annoyed at his adoptive mother's and Blackwhisker's obliviousness, reveals to the duo's feeling for each other in front of the Clan

Dawnstar's Quest Changes

-Snowpaw is now named Snowheart and is a full-time hunter since he would have a hard time fighting in border patrols

-Cloudtail, Brightheart, and Swiftstep are mates

-StarClan forces Dawnstar to rebuild SkyClan when she refuses by making the fresh-kill be covered with maggots, herbs in the medicine den rot, and prey disappear from the forest

-Squirrelflight is now tortoiseshell-and-white and renamed Maplekit/paw/shine, and Leafpool is now blue-gray and renamed Skykit/paw/pool and Blackwhisker is their father

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Warriors Series Two Rewrite

The New Prophecy Changes

-Hawkfrost, Mothwing, and Tadpole are now Leopardstar's and Tigerstar's kits

-Stonefur decided to lead RiverClan after Leopardstar was forced to step down

-Tadpole is now named Toadpelt

-Maplepaw and Skypaw don't have the mysterious connection

-The RiverClan representative is a white she-cat apprentice named Snowpaw

-Longtail is still deputy after Dawnstar helps him relearn how to hunt and fight after being blinded

-Cloudtail is Whitepaw's biological father

-Purdy is now young when he meets the journeying cats

-Midnight is now a shape-shifting spirit

-The actual savior of the Tribe is a pale gray she-cat named Frost on Gray Feathers

-Both Graystripe and Sandstorm are captured by twolegs after freeing the others

-Snowpaw dies saving Smokepaw

-Crowpaw is named Crowfeather after Frost

-Maplepaw receives her warrior name: Mapleshine

-Dawnstar refuses to be with Tallstar when he dies since he asked for Onewhisker as well and knows that it's WindClan's business alone but mourns for the fallen leader

-Toadpelt refuses to help his father with taking over the Clans, which makes Brambleclaw start to doubt his father and Hawkfrost

-Skypaw finds the Moonpool and receives her medicine cat name: Skypool

-Mudclaw is seemingly killed when lightning struck a tree and it fell on him, but Dawnstar sees a dark shape kill Mudclaw before hiding his body under the tree

-After Onestar receives his lives, Dawnstar decides to only help WindClan when it's an emergency or to warn them about dangers in order to not look like WindClan needs ThunderClan's guidance

-Mothwing reveals that she doesn't believe in StarClan and that only Toadpelt knows

-Skypool spends time with Crowfeather when she can and the two fall in love

-Dawnstar allows Daisy and her kits to stay until the kits are three moons old then they will decide if their placement in the Clan is permanent for not

-Skypool finds out about the Place of No Stars

-Dawnstar thanks Onestar for the help against the badgers and tells him about her idea which he agrees to

-Longtail decides to retire and Brambleclaw is chosen as deputy

-Brambleclaw finds Dawnstar bleeding out as Hawkfrost stands over her

-Hawkfrost reveals that Dawnstar used a stick to trigger the fox trap in order to not get caught and decided to attack her instead

-He orders Brambleclaw to take the rest of her lives, but Brambleclaw instead digs up the stake and uses it to kill Hawkfrost when he lunges at him

-After Dawnstar comes back from losing a life, she reveals that it was Ashfur who told her that Blackstar was on ThunderClan territory and says that she will be keeping a close eye on him in case he didn't know about Hawkfrost