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ATTACK ME!! ATTACK ME NOWWWWWW!!!! Or in like 9 days

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Hello tumblr. Will you accept this or will I have to change the design out of shame

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Holy shit it’s my favorite guys ever

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The first Forsakened

Crappy Elliot comic

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Sigh…hi guys. Here’s Two Time.

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I CANT DRAW GHOST 😭🙏 hello to the three perdition fans this one is for you…

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I should make a daily account for someone. Maybe dawn. I like her

Carmine WIP under the cut

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Since my AP exam is soon can you draw him in hell

day 175

me too brother

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Do you guys think I have a favorite?? I’m not too sure!!

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Hi guys idk what this is but if you want to support me you can just be patient with me!!!! I’m getting the money to like publish i guess and hopefully move out of the US soon (character is Steven Stoughton from strangled ted)

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I haven’t posted in forever i fear. you guys get a sketch today as a treat. tomorrow? probably nothing tbh

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Don’t be afraid, come on!

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These are my book OCs! The red is Ace and the orange is Luna

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Can someone tell me how to market a book just in general i’m scared

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My two strongest RR criticisms and how I would fix them for a potential rewrite! Reference: last post.

Disclaimer: I’ve been writing a book since October 2023. I know how storytelling works. I’m not a professional though! Please take everything I say with a handful of salt.

With that out of the way, read below to hear me yap about Octavian and Solangelo (but mostly Octavian).

Octavian No-Last-Name: Wasted Potential

I could make a whole post on Octavian alone because of everything I would do with his character. Maybe if this does well. However, I am coming from a slight bias with this opinion since I like Octavian! Be cautious.

Octavian had potential to be a good character and probably would’ve been if Rick didn’t write him to be made fun of by others in the cast (the opening scene(s) to Mark of Athena being a prime example of this).

The real issue I find with Octavian is simply this: he died.

In The Hidden Oracle, it states that it’s Octavian’s fault for Apollo/Lester being cast down as a mortal (will update when I find the quote). So it seems like it would make more sense for him to be alive, right? To give Apollo/Lester more adversaries when he’s mortal?

I don’t care how he relates to the ToA storyline: exile him to CHB, let him stay at the Waystation, keep him at CJ, I don’t care. I just think he should’ve been a part to the story. He could’ve impacted Lester’s character too, sigh.

Moving on to his actual death. In Blood of Olympus, he gets caught on an onager and launches himself into the sky in what is described as a “fiery comet,” “blazing comet,” and FUCKING “MISSILE” HELLO? HE’S A TEENAGER, EIGHTEEN, AND HE’S BEING SHOT INTO THE AIR IN AN EXPLOSION.

Okay. Continuing on, what is his death, actually? He just gets shot into the air and dies on impact, when he hits whatever he hits. So he’s alive in that comet.

How would I rewrite this personally? I would still get him caught on the onager and have him cut the release wire. However, he wouldn’t get shot up into the comet. He would get hit with the explosion and fall unconscious, almost dead, and gets taken care of by Will until he’s at a good enough health again.

Due to him starting a war, he gets told that he’s on a semi-permanent exile from Camp Jupiter and that he’d be executed if he shows up. And since Lester starts by arriving at Camp Half-Blood, it would basically force the two to interact. Great!

Solangelo: It’s very interesting

I’m not here to hate on people who like this ship. If you like it, you do you. I’m not even hating on the ship itself here, so don’t misinterpret this as that okay.

Solangelo is very sudden.

One of their main interactions in BoO (the only one I recall off the top of my head) is Octavian’s death, which leads into other smaller interactions between them after. Then they’re just together in THO.

I am aware that there is a six month, if I recall correctly, gap between BoO and THO. I still wish there was a bit more with them, y’know? Like, a few more memorable scenes in BoO, or maybe them not being together immediately at the start of THO.

How would I rewrite this personally? I wouldn’t make them already be dating at the start of THO. I’d either make them start dating at the end of THO or at the end of The Tower of Nero. I haven’t finished ToA yet though, so I don’t know if that makes sense story wise yet.

But whatever! That’s that. Maybe I’ll talk about rewriting characters next. We’ll see.

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Does anyone want to hear my ideas about an PJO/HoO/ToA rewrite please i need to yap about this so hard there’s so many things for me to fix

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Stellara Grace Caelum! 🛸

. 12 years old

. daughter of ???, blessed by Hestia

. born 6/22

. main protagonist of Chronicles of Time

. loves the galaxy, space, stars, etc. she’d spend hours rambling if she could

. she does every activity at camp half-blood the best she can. she wants to see who her parent might be.

. dyed her hair by herself

. has night vision and heightened senses

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I’m trying to make a Lester Papadopoulos design. Official ref coming never.