#PLEASE DEVELOP YOUR CHARACTERS YOUVE GIVEN SO LITTLE FOCUS TO 3/7 OF THEM
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This book I’m reading gives me SO MANY MIXED FEELINGS
#the plot and characters are very interesting#it would be nice if we foCUSED ON THEM MORE#THE ROMANCE HAS TAKEN OVER AND I WNAT TO DIE#PLEASE DEVELOP YOUR CHARACTERS YOUVE GIVEN SO LITTLE FOCUS TO 3/7 OF THEM#The subplot needs like 50% less time in the book I swear to GOD#also the characters who are given the most time developing are both assholes please#I can’t deal with them for this stretch of time please please just pov a more bearable character for two seconds#then we can go back to developing the two bitches of the crew#they’re great characters but I need a fucking break for them please#I SHOULDNT HAVE TO DIG THROUGH OFFHAND LINES ABOUT A MAIN CHARACGER JUST DEVELOP THE NON POV CHARACTERS#and the plot is so interesting if we could focus on it for TWO SECONDS#also why are there so many interesting off page moments that are only referenced to??#please I feel so cut off from like half the cast#do not have 7 main characters if you can’t spend time on each other them for the love of god
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