#and then moved it to make a mega argument at the end LOL!!!!!
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ok. removed one argument. inserted one physical altercation
#equivalent exchange LMAO.....#i think it wasnt technically an argument i just removed the emotionally charged part so its less heavy#and then moved it to make a mega argument at the end LOL!!!!!#i do feel the pacing has improved and just the general flow#unfortunately i do have to now rewrite entire swathes. but im having fun thats whats important lmao
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