Chapter 25 - thoughts.
Another long overdue behind-the-scenes post! It was a combination of being busy, and not being able to write, but here it is!
I think this is the most anticipated one, due to all that happened throughout the chapter hahah I hope I deliver with the behind the scenes :>
Also, as expected, donāt read this post if you havenāt read chapter 25, which you can find on ao3, on this link here. Because youāll just get a bunch of no-context spoilers (but if you want, go ahead š)
Now, without further ado, I hope you enjoy these behind-the-scene comments!
Now, without any further ado, here are the behind the scenes.
As I started previously, I was really nervous to write this chapter, because it represented a big shift on the future of the story, as well as considering how the last chapter ended lol.
But it makes it exciting as well!! This is hands down my favorite chapter :> for the past reasons hehe.
Anyways, I knew there would be many questions regarding withā¦ everything. From what happened immediately after Y/N had that conversation with Jinichi, Naoya, and Naoaki. Specially this last one š
Letās start by the beginning, and the one topic most comments spoke of: Naoaki and Jinichi.
Did his words imply something else?
Perhapsāalthough I can argue that he was more caught off guard by Naoakiās mention than anything else. Itās been stated in the manga that basically anyone who lives in the estate goes through hell.
However, I do think that hell for each and every inhabitant must be different.
I do not think Naoaki suffered the same as Toji did (or that twins in that matter) considering that the first was, in a way, still good enough to become a sorcererājust not good enough to be the next leader. There was still a point in his life where everyone around him venerated him as some kind of savior, until he lost it all, so thatās a different kind of struggle. Toji, Mai, Maki never had anythingāNaoaki had it all.
I wish Gege wouldāve told us more about the things that Toji and the twins went through at the Zenāin clan, at this point, I had to limit myself to just imagining Toji to be some kind of punching bag, while Mai and Maki were pushed to the side to become simple nameless servants for no one to see or hear about (with Maki being able to join the kukuru unit becauseā¦ insistence? Only becoming a sorcerer because she wanted, Mai being dragged along to do the same forā¦ idk, resentment?)
Anyways, as Naoaki stated, Jinichiās words mightāve come from bitterness/frustration for not being able to do much for his own brother, as well as thinking of him as some kind ofā¦ well, ungrateful, privileged kid compared to his own brotherālike a āI suffered moreā kind of competition, although itās really not.
And while I still consider Jinichi to be leaning more onto the good side of his morals, he still has allot of things to unpack due to the suffering he endured by the clan, leading him to do thingsā¦ well, that could be interpreted the wrong way.
I mean, didnāt he basically trauma dump Y/N? Well, it was a moment where he allowed himself to remember his brother. I like to think that he cared for Toji one way or the other.
If itās ever stated otherwise, Iāll be disappointed, but oh well š
From there, Naoaki!
I completely understand howā¦ bad Jinichiās words might make Naoaki look, as well as how the last avoided talking about certain topics, so Iām not surprised some started to believe he was planning something.
But I really donāt find a better explanation than what is already stated on the chapter (and the previous notes hehe)
It wasnāt in his place to talk about Toji, or anyone elseās suffering in that matter. He didnāt like speaking of his own, only doing so to relate a bit better to Y/N, but other than that, he likes to keep to himself. Naoaki is ashamed of all that he had to endure :/ because deep inside him, he believes that if only heād been better in certain things, none of that wouldāve happened.
Besides, after her initial reaction to his backstory, I donāt think he was willing to put her through that again š¬ itās kind of sad because it seems that everything related to the Zenāin clan is straight up bad lol. Talking about having shitty in-laws.
I really hated writing Naoaki in a less than desirable way hahahahaha Itās like Iām trying to break that perfect persona I made for him, but I canāt help itā¦ heās precious to me š And these kind of things end up with making up scenes that make my heart melt so I think it was all worth it ā¤
Anyways, now that thatās setā¦ letās move onto Naoya.
Ok so, thereās no denying that all that happened is sending Naoya down a different pathāwhether for good or bad, we donāt know. But itās something that Iām excited to explore :> Iām still upset that Gege just wanted Naoya to be likeā¦ straight up bad, but not even in the good sense. Almost cartoonish hahaha, we get it, Zenāin=badā¦ but I wasnāt satisfied with their portrayal.
Well, since I donāt believe weāre going to see much of the clans anymore, I decided to take matters into my own hands.
Letās start with what happened after Y/N left.
Thereās no denying that Naoya was angry, and more than ready to enact some kind of punishment on his supposedly errant wifeāand while I do understand the rage that comes from being hurt, he was completely tone deaf as to why that happened.
I mean sure, he got hurtābut he was attacking her first, and way worse. What was he expecting to happen? That she would just take it and move on with her life?
Well, just as he spent this time away cooling off from receiving the death sentence of his wife, (and apparently leaving her in some kind of daycare for her to become a better wife, per Junkoās words) Y/N did the same tooāsheād turned into the woman that wasnāt going to take his BS anymore, while Naoya just came back the same, if not worse.
However, for the whole night to go without incident meant that something bigger mustāve happened meanwhile.
And thatās what I like writing about Naoya lol he likes to act all though, as if nothing stands on his wayā¦ but then Naobito comes along and reminds him of his place. (Which kind of serves as a foreshadowing? I also hinted at that in the last chapter with that conversation about children, and their roles/stereotypes in the families)
Anyways, Naoya is really scared of his father, I mean, Naobito is a frightening power figure with tendencies of getting drunk and lose his cool, and add the whole situation with the L/N clanā¦ yeah :> Naoya isnāt really in any position to fight this authority.
Also, when Ranta hinted that Naobito was lurking around just to see what his son was going to do with his wife, wellā¦ thatās kinda creepy š³ However, I do believe it was coincidentalā¦ as well as brought forward because Y/N was quite loud with her rejection towards Naoya. (I believe he was just going to get water or something)
Still, itās kind of in character for Naobito to do this. To be waiting for the moment others fail just to rub it in their faceāmore so when that person has been seemingly failing constantly in this one aspect. And now that Naoaki is also part of the equationā¦ well, itās like free entertainment. But I just think that he was just passing by when everything went down, and since it was also pretty late at night, doing just about anything that isnāt sneaking or sleeping, well, itās bound to get you in trouble.
But moving on!
From there, itās easy to assume that Naoya did not have a good nightāor a good morning. As soon as everyone heard what happened through the murmurs of the guards that were on patrol last night, or from seeing the bandage on his face, they were quick to put two and two together and the rumors just got out of control.
Poor Ranta tried his best to offer advice (which served to mirror the MariyaāY/N dynamic, but like, if it were on crack and super toxic) but once Naoya has something in his mind, nothing can stop him (asides from his dad of course LMAO)
And then, one of my favorite scenes unfolds.
As certain parts of the story, this is something that I always intended to occur, more so after giving it much thought and deciding there was nothing more I could think of that could possibly entail some kind of change from Naoya hahah
I was like, how do I make this insufferable man a bit more human? Maybe even cause some kind of pity?
Loneliness. Thatās it.
I assumed that Naoya must feel lonely most of the time, like genuinely lonelyānobody likes him, most of his relatives are quick to attack him, even his own dad was like nope, someone out there is better and heās becoming the leader.
And the people that compliment/admire him areā¦ well, while he likes it, but he doesnāt think itās genuine. Or their words are more like a dime a dozen, for example, those compliments would mean the world if they came from Tojiāor Y/N.
I donāt think heās been cherished, everĀø in his life. And thatās something that definitely fuels his terrible attitude.
There are allot of things Naoya wishes to be recipient of when it comes to his wife. Her attention has to be on the top of the list, but more than that, he wants her support, her admiration. Remember that scene at the mall, where Naoya was kind of being harassed by this obnoxious laughing woman and he was like I think Y/Nās laughter is prettier? Yeah. He doesnāt care if otherās laugh when he tells a joke or whatever. He wants Y/N to react at him.
So, there you have it, he wants everything from herā¦ but he wants it for him because of him.
To see you happy with Naoaki, or how well the servants speak of youā¦ EVEN JINICHI!!! Well, canāt say anything more than it was enough to shake the foundations of his marriage, if only for a second, to ask himself why them and not him? before his anger comes back and places him back to another one of his priorities, which was his mission.
Talking more about this scene, I initially just wanted Y/N to laugh and move on with the conversation, but I was like you know what? I want to indulge more of Naoaki, and make Naoya see it all, suffer, thus, we got that somewhat intimate moment between the two. Spit and kick Naoya while heās downāhe deserves it hahahahahahah
Now, I donāt have much to say about the exam, except that I was inspired by Naruto and My Hero Academia, more into the last one. I just liked how their exams tend to be a bitā¦ theatrical in a way? All Might comes to mind throughout this whole charade, due to him being the inspiration for the instructor playing the villain/enemy haha.
However, I did feel like maybe my interpretation wouldāve been likeā¦ silly, in a way? I really donāt know how high ranked sorcerers get evaluated. I constantly felt like this exam would be easy for them to take, but then I remembered:
āWell, if youāre a very talented sorcerer, then I guess everything is easy by defaultā
Ā So, I moved on from that dilemma pretty quickly. (It was still a difficult task to write something different, but Iām pretty satisfied hehe practice makes perfect)
Which takes me to another point that I also liked writing, which was Naoyaās distraction, and eventually, his failure :>
Once more, I wanted to show just how affected he was by Y/N coldness towards him. Letās remember that heās never seen anything positive come from her, and with good reason! He does not deserve it!!!
Itās at this point that I think he slightly understands that he could do anything, achieve everything, and Y/N would not bat an eye. She doesnāt care about him. She seemingly only has eyes for everyone elseāspecifically Naoaki, the man whom he and the rest of the clan considered a failure!
What does his brother have that he doesnāt??? Naoya is the one paying for everything regarding your livelihood, as well as being a promising sorcerer and heir of the clan.
Why is Y/N so interested in Naoaki? Are there feelings involved?
And if this were the truth, then why would anything matter anymore?
Just as heās quick to indulge in the reflection of how he truly feels about whatās going on in his marriage, heās quick to return to snap out of it and go back into his mission, using his emotions as fuel to get it done with.
Had he not committed the small (grave) mistake he did.
This was very satisfyingālike, he wants to portray himself as some kind of strong man, whose emotions never cloud his vision because thatās āwoman stuffā and yetā¦ that couldnāt be further from the truth.
Naoya is human at the end of the day, and his (one of many) weakness has to be the emotions heās always tended to ignoreāwhich is now making way to other areas of his life.
Y/N has such a grip on him (always had, I suppose) and I wanted to show that, since all weāve seen was just him taking advantage of her (to the point where many believed if Naoya even cared for her at all)
And now that this is presented, karma was bound to get him.
From there, the start of his downfall.
The next scene was like another one that Iāve been wanting to write since FOREVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER since itās just a sliver of consequences Naoya has to face for the first time in his life maybe š (as well as being angst between the main couple, and who doesnāt love some angst?) but I also had to be very careful to how I presented it, cause I believe it might be misinterpreted.
I mean, I totally understand how Y/N ādefendingā Naoya could be seen asāthe man literally abused her!
However, the intended message is not about that.
Kind of a ālife isnāt black or whiteā situation, Iāve always been a fierce believer that itās not good to take the law into our own hands, or treat others badly because weāve been treated badly.
Believe me, Iāve been there, and as much as Iāve wanted to get my revenge, I donāt think thatās the healthy nor the best option to choose. Besides, thereās nothing better than thriving and making the others realize they canāt get to you.
Now that this is stablished, this scene was also placed to further show that indeed, Naoya does not deserve Y/N nor has he done anything to obtain her respect, as well as how Y/N is like, the bigger person of the two, why everyone around her likes her.
And omg that part where he was like, ah yes, finally, she sees me as her husband and it was only a matter of time before she came aroundā¦.
Talking about being delusional š
Thank God she was quick to set him back to reality when she told him he was worse than his father, and the subsequent way she showed how regretful she was of saving him. Get his ass, Y/N.
Also, how Y/N and Naoaki were leaving??? I posted about the staff thinking they were totally having an affair, and while that mightāve been a jokeā¦ Iām sure one or two servants DO BELIEVE THAT.
No, but really. This is something that needed to be exposed in a way, further cement the broken relationship Naoya and Y/N have. That the woman he seemingly loves, does not give a shit about him.
It was the beginning of some self-reflection, and after questioning why his marriage is failing and why Y/N is acting differently towards him vs the rest of the worldā¦ it seems that heās finally understanding why.
Or maybe not, this is still Naoya that weāre talking about. Ah, but isnāt that exciting š?
Aaaaandā¦. Thatās it.
I think most of the general points are completed. Now, onto the questions Iāve been asked somewhat frequently :>
Did Naobito abuse Naoya as well?
I have no doubt that he has. I mean, heās abusive with the rest of his kids, what difference would it make with Naoya? If anything, I feel like he couldāve been stricter with him in certain moments because he is the heir? (Endeavor, Shoto, you know the drill š)
But because Naoya is more talented than the others, he often avoided those situations all together thanks to itāhowever, because heās so perfect, his mistakes are often highlighted more than the usually requiredā¦ even the smallest thing, itās like blown so out of proportion, that it adds stress into Naoya to follow everything the clan wants, just how they want it.
Thatās the dark side of being the preferred one.
I was slowly trying to building up the levels of abuse that the Zenāin clan suffers, as a way to motivate Y/N to still have some kind of connection towards Naoya. After all, had it not been for the characters that she encountered I think she wouldāve been completely detached from everyone lol.
First, we start with the more obvious. Women and non-sorcerers. Pretty self-explanatory, the most viewed in the story. Y/N, Junko, Mai, Maki, and Toji are here. Y/N already expected this, so she wasnāt surprised.
From there, those that are in power, but not necessarily at the same expectations as others. This is were Naoaki and his brothers areāa topic that I like to discuss because appearances are often deceiving :> Itās quite easy to believe that because theyāre not in the lower end of the pyramid, theyāre living a good lifestyle, when thatās justā¦ not the truth. However, they donāt have it as hard as the ones ābeneathā them. Y/N was reallyā¦ disgusted by this, which only made her hatred toward the ones on the top of the pyramid (and subsequently her husband) even stronger, as well as readjusting her perception of reality.
And finally, the ones on the ātopā Naoya, Naobito, Ougiā¦ I guess Jinichi sometimes too hahah. The ones with most of the power, the ones youād think they stick to each other and be collectively evil togetherā¦ when they can be as vicious to one another as they are to others. If not more, because they have access to moreā¦ tools, as well as having apparently more to lose than the other tiers. The hardest pill to swallow, but ultimately the reason why she decided to step in when Naoya was being reprimanded.
I also tried to avoid explicitly stating that Naobito was abusive towards Naoya as well, as to keep it a surprise lmao, although we could already guess that was happening by the way Naoya reacted to his father whenever he was around lol
Well, Naobito is a terrible man over all. With his wife, children, and I guess everyone that doesnāt act as he wants? That's something that I've always believed ever since I saw Naoya all too happy to hear he was dead, combine that with the expectations he must've instilled in his childrenā¦.
There was no way he didn't lose his patience once or twice in his life, and probably gotten abusive at one point. So yeah, thatās what I think of the NaoyaāNaobito dynamic.
Now, onto another question :>
Did Naoaki know Naoya was being abused too?
Yesā¦ No. Maybe.
I think he had the vague idea that that couldāve happened, however, because Naoaki was distancing himself from his father and brother, and wellā¦ how Naoya thinks of him, as well as how heās preferred over the rest of the siblings, the evidence is pointing towards him not getting the same treatment as he did.
After all, heās the child Naobito always wanted; you know? Why would he go down the same path?
And even if he got to see that kind of familiar abusive reaction when Naoya got back from his exam, the combination of his own ptsd, as well as having Y/N out there and exposed to be victim of his fatherās rampage, I think he was more concerned with getting her out of there (and subsequently comforting her) than questioning if his brother was being hurt as well. Their relationship is broken at that point, and I canāt blame him from not caring for Naoya at all.
If I were to detail what he wanted to do right now, itās probably spend all of his free time with Y/N lol.
At the end of the dayā¦ weāre entitled to suffer our own pain. And be selfish when it comes to itāas long as it doesnāt hurt anyone elseā itās kind of funny, because Naoya is super selfish, thus, he has to learn the exact opposite, which is to be benevolent :>
And thatās all of my behind the scenes for chapter 25! I think I got most of the questions that were asked to be about this chapter, but if Iām missing any, be sure to let me know! (This is what I get for writing this after a while) Of course, all within nothing that will spoil the future of the story š
As always, thank you so much for your support ā¤ as well as for sticking with me during my hiatus/break.
Take care yāall, and hope to see you soon!!
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IDOTSC BTS #5: All tied up with no strings attached
A pretty valid question to pose: Why havenāt WW and J fallen in love with each other? They seem to exhibit emotional compatibility and even greater physical chemistry. Iām sureĀ WW has definitely wondered such a question, whether legitimately or as a passing thought. Since I couldnāt really get into it in the story, here are my thoughts regarding that.
Spoiler alert: itās not just drama for the sake of drama. Who knew!
Hereās one thing Iāve realized in this current pandemic era, during which anxiety, stress, and concerns about the future have reached an all-time high. I find myself engaging more and more in things I objectively likeāwriting, watching certain Youtube channels, playing video games, other creative endeavors that may even include friendsāto the point that I feel like Iām suffocating in them sometimes. I try to smother the pain with pleasure, which doesnāt exactly fix anything thatās actually inside. They simply help hide the noise. Even then, excessive pleasure can make me more tired. Why do I do it?
First, I donāt like settling, even for objectively inconsequential things. Going at 100% all the time can yield great results, but inevitably leads to burnout. Maybe thatās why Iām so tired all the time.
Second, I have a theory that is sort of analogous to gate control theory:Ā the idea that, if youāre in pain, adding a source of non-painful input inhibits transmission of that first pain to your brain. Imagine getting a cut on your finger and then sucking on it, putting pressure on that finger to not only clean the blood but to also suppress the pain. Or youāve accidentally stubbed your toe on the coffee table and you start rubbing the skin to dissipate the feeling. I wonder if this theory applies to psychological pain.
For WW, engaging in this seemingly inconsequential, non-painful no-strings experience helps numb the pain of his career. Vice versa goes for J; inequality in Asian entertainment, especially regarding unfair treatment of non-Koreans in Korean entertainment, has long been a historical issue in the industry (e.g. oldies will remember Super Junior M, and even EXOās earlier eras are still pretty recent). WWās and Jās relationship is a means to ultimately selfish ends. Deep down, I think they both know that any chance of āreal romanceā has been fully tarnished by this yearning for internal contentment through the guise of companionship, one founded on mutual struggle in life and workāand seeming understanding thereof.Ā
TL;DR: Itās a relationship where the parties involved know how to scratch each otherās itches because they have similar wounds, but wounds arenāt healed by scratching them. It just feels good.
For those with little experience in relationships, I understand that the idea of FWB can be very foreign and/or simplistic. āItās just sex.ā I myself donāt have experience in it. I see sex as intimate and requiring of great trust (I didnāt even know sex could be casual until university). But Iāve been reflecting on one particular past relationship and realized that, though not FWB, was pretty much the same. It was in high school. In what felt like a relationship where I was respected, I actually felt desirable and admired in a way that fed a young ego desperate for the validation I lacked. I gave this other person gifts, time, attention, all the bullet points for being a good partner on paperābut in my heart and soul, it was all for my emotional satiation.
In the end, I donāt think I truly liked this person, just the sugary words and reassurances they gave me, but never the body or aspirations that came with them. I liked the idea of this person, but not the person themselves. And, my god, thatās the type of shit you hear all the time in try-hard indie love songs from VSCO teens and young artists brandishing their ukuleles and unnecessary vocal trills. But itās so damn true. The imagination is a dangerously powerful thing. (n=1, take it with a grain of salt.)
Iāve spent the last few months grappling with how fucking MESSY life and relationships really are. For so long, Iād subscribed to picture-perfect ideals of family, friends, significant others. Unconditional love doesnāt leave room for hurtāright? This grand ambition of love that Iāve written about, read about, and consumed has been challenged so many times and itās only recently that Iām realizing it. Perhaps I wrote about unconditional love so much because I thought I felt like lacked it, or, really, what I imagined it to be. Perhaps it was inevitable that Iād eventually challenge these āfantasiesā I dreamt of. Perhaps thatās why we also write so much damn fiction about it, because their reality is questionable.
But rounding back to the story, as for WW and J, I fully anticipate genuine feelings seeping in once in a while; theyāre only human. But at the end of the day, as the characters that they are with the goals and lives they have, they wouldnāt have worked out romantically in the end.
Originally written on February 11, 2021
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