WIP Intro - Her Countenance was Light
~SYNOPSIS~
The 1970s, twenty years after the rebuilding of Toreguard, semi-retired Sergeant Elowyn O'Toreguarde is called in for a new case - the murder of her childhood best friend, Evelyn Strucker.
When the King of estranged Iceland turns up for an unexpected visit, the Triumvirate Council force O'Toreguarde to play tour guide, passing the murder case to her subordinates. But it doesn't completely leave her hands. A strange set of circumstances reveals an ethereal side to the City, filled with secrets. Secrets which may hold the key to Evelyn's murder.
~DETAILS~
Genre: Crime/ Urban Fantasy
Type: Novel
POV: Third person limited, predominantly Present tense
Themes: Grief/ mourning, Change is neutral, Accepting who you are, Mercy is the preferred choice
Aesthetic: Dieselpunk, Detective Noir, Brothers Grimm Fairy Tales
Status: Technical editing. Posting weekly on Archive of Our Own and Tumblr.
Tags: #WIP 'Her Countenance was Light' (All posts inc. meta info); #HCWL Chapters Only (Follow this tag for only the chapters in posting order)
~MAIN CHARACTERS~
Elowyn O'Toreguarde - F, Sergeant-Detective, Freeman of the City
Johan Strucker - M, Evelyn's Father, General, 1/3rd of the Triumvirate Council
Storri Nargondsson - M, King of Iceland
Lerrald Brauma - M, Master of the Exchequer, 1/3rd of the Triumvirate Council
~MINOR CHARACTERS~
Farren Breakwood - M, Constable-Detective, Elo's Police partner
Thazaar Clayrmantle - M, Acting Magister, 1/3rd of the Triumvirate Council
Snotgrut - M, Unusual fellow. Curiosity. Shouldn't exist. ???
Meredith Gruksdottir - F, Bodyguard of K. Storri, Old friend of Elo's
Yoruk Copperheart - M, Bodyguard of K. Storri, Husband of Merri
Irvine Cobbleskater - M, Constable, subordinate of Elo
~OTHER STUFF~
Written for NaNoWriMo 2017. Technically a Modern, Mundane-ish AU of a TTRPG set in the Fighting Fantasy World of Titan. Formerly known as "FF/T Modern-Ish AU".
The plot is... not something I would normally write, and for a long while I hated it. Then I thought it was a too cringy, and tried to 'fix' it, only to give up.
Now, on a recent re-read, I think this is the shape this story has always had to have. So I've decided to suck it up and get it ready for posting, so at least it's out there and not loitering on my hard drive.
Title is from a traditional song, Besse Bunting, arranged by Mediæval Bæbes.
~EXCERPT~
She cuts through a narrow alley of dark soot-stained brick, trots down a short set of steps and onto the flagged towpath next to the canal. There is an improvised bridge up ahead that will allow her to pass over the canal closer to where the station lies.
She has run this route a hundred times, she knows every nook and cranny along this path, so when she reaches where the bridge should be, and finds it missing, she is perturbed, but not worried. Maybe someone finally reported the ramshackle thing, made of old boards and stolen scaffolding.
It was quick work though, she thinks as she back-tracks to where a tree clings to the bank. The bridge was still there when she came home in the early evening. She shakes the thought aside as she unhooks a rope swing from the tree. It's been a while since she had to use it, but she's in a hurry and has no time for the uncertainty that tries to drape over her like a cloak.
With a running start, she jumps.
It is only as she enters the apex of the swing that she realises something is wrong. The weight of the rope is too heavy, it shifts alarmingly as she reaches the apex of the swing.
Then it has snapped, and she is falling, and she cannot remove her hands from the tacky surface of the rope, and the water is closing in over her head, and she thinks she sees the blaze of red eyes on the bank as she sinks through the darkness.
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Very Faerie — An ACOTAR playlist
For Tamlin Week day four, a soundtrack for A Court of Thorns and Roses. It is generally chronological; and since it is for Tamlin Week, it has a slight focus on Tamlin, though most of the songs apply to both Tamlin and Feyre.
Cover image is from an illustration by Stephanie Law of The Ballad of Tam Lin.
Song listing with notes below:
Tam Lin by Mediæval Bæbes
“And at the end of seven years
We pay a tiend to Hell.
I am sae fair and fu' of flesh
I'm feared it be myself.”
“Tiend” is also known as “tithe.” The Hell tithe, as described, was a payment that had to be given, every seven years, of a fairy to Hell. It is not commonly referred to in fairy mythology; the Ballad of Tam Lin is one of the few mentions of it.
2. Howl by Tanya Tagaq
A lament for the sentries killed in the curse.
3. The Curse by Agnes Obel
“It was swift, it was just another wave of a miracle
But no one, nothing at all would go for the kill
If they called on every soul in the land, on the moon
Only then would they know a blessing in disguise
The curse ruled from the underground, down by the shore
And their hope grew with a hunger to live unlike before
4. The Hunter Gets Captured By The Game by The Marvelettes
I had to lay such a tender trap
Hoping you might fall into it
Love hit me like a sudden slap
One kiss and then I knew it
Oh, my plans didn't work out like I thought
‘Cause I had laid my trap for you but it seems like I got caught
What's this whole world comin' to
Things just ain't the same
Any time the hunter gets captured by the game
MY ultimate Feylin song.
5. The Boy with the Thorn in His Side by The Smiths
The boy with the thorn in his side
Behind the hatred, there lies
A murderous desire for love
How can they look into my eyes
And still they don't believe me?
How can they hear me say those words
Still they don't believe me?
6. I Hope That I Don’t Fall In Love With You by Tom Waits
‘Cause falling in love just makes me blue
7. Throughout The Dark Months of April and May by Cocteau Twins
The Bogge, the Púca, torn wings
8. Lhiannan Shee by Mediæval Bæbes
Lhiannan Shee, also spelled Leanan sídhe, is a type of Irish fairy that takes human lovers, often becoming a muse to them. The human chosen, however, often ends up dead or insane from the encounter. “Lhiannan Shee” means “fairy lover.”
9. Hymn To Herne by S. J. Tucker
Hunter who tracks outside of time
Guardian lord of ancient rhyme
Brother stag in the musky glen
And consort of the Goddess in her woodland den
We call you forth as we make our way
Walking in your power every day
Guide us true in our hunt this night
And maybe even later in the Great Rite!
He will call you out, make you sweat
Give you a blessing that you'll never forget
So revel in the chase and let your heartbeat run:
Blessed are the children of the Horned One!
Herne the Hunter is a spirit said to haunt the British countryside. He is known to bear antlers, and is often associated with other horned gods and gods of the hunt and the wild such as Cernunnos, Pan, the Green Man, etc. though these aren’t all the same figure necessarily. The Great Rite is a traditional Wiccan ceremony. Writer Starhawk on The Horned God:
“The Horned God is difficult to understand because he does not fit into any of the expected stereotypes, neither those of the ‘macho’ male nor the reverse-images of those who deliberately seek effeminacy. He is gentle, tender, and comforting, but he is also the Hunter. He is the Dying God—but his death is always in service of the life force. He is untamed sexuality—but sexuality as a deep, holy, connecting power. He is the power of feeling, and the image of what men could be if they were liberated from the constraints of patriarchal culture.”
10. The Mummers’ Dance by Lorena McKennitt
When in the springtime of the year
When the trees are crowned with leaves
When the ash and oak, and the birch and yew
Are dressed in ribbons fair
Mummers are masked and costumed performers often associated with springtime and fertility.
11. As The Bell Rings The Maypole Spins by Dead Can Dance
Maypoles were described as being raised for Midsummer in A Court of Thorns and Roses; in some cultures they are raised then, but they are also associated with May Day—known in Welsh as Calan Mai
12. Beltaine Fires by Gaia Consort
Beltaine is a similar celebration to Calan Mai. The fires occur on the night before, traditionally as protection for cattle, crops, and people. Rituals involved people leaping over the fires, and driving cattle between the bonfires.
13. Lilac Wine by Jeff Buckley
Lilac wine is sweet and heady, where's my love?
Lilac wine, I feel unsteady, where's my love?
Listen to me, why is everything so hazy?
Isn't that she, or am I just going crazy, dear?
Lilac wine, I feel unready for my love
Feel unready for my love
14. Joga by Björk
All that no-one sees
You see
What's inside of me
Every nerve that hurts
You heal
Deep inside of me
You don't have to speak
I feel
Emotional landscapes
The “Winter Woods” painting scene
15. Pepper-Tree by Cocteau Twins
A head in the garden; the curse ticks down
16. Jig Of Life by Kate Bush
"C'mon and let me live!"
Solstice/Rhysand terrorizing Feyre. This is my favorite song featuring the fiddle.
17. All Night Long by Peter Murphy
No bad vibe hearts
Tamlin and Feyre’s last night together. This song was inspired by Beauty and the Beast, and includes audio from Jean Cocteau’s 1946 film La Belle et La Bête.
18. Flight by Tanya Tagaq
The next song on the album this comes from, Animism, is “Fight.” And though Tamlin does fight to the last, as evidenced by Feyre when she returns to the Manor, I imagined this song as representing Tamlin as prey that has evaded his predator for over 500 years—but who finally gets caught.
19. Otterley by Cocteau Twins
Nothing is known of what happened to Tamlin under the mountain; still, this song describes the unreal and nightmarish atmosphere in the early days of his captivity.
20. 57821 (feat. Deep Cotton) by Janelle Monae and Deep Cotton
One by one
It's your time lead them both back to one
The sun has come (sun has come)
May your light lead them both back to one
(May your light lead them both back to one)
Indivisible sum
Here's the book now the saga's begun
He wonders if she is the one (she wonders if he is the one)
(You're the one) you're the one
“If it’s any consolation…she would have been the one for you…”
Feyre returns.
21. The Warden by Chelsea Wolfe
Hole, rack, wheel, time
Heart, thorn, knees, blight
Hand, hold, bright white
Whole head feels light
Tore off my limbs and my breasts
The heart it's heavy in the chest
Pulled out my tongue so I can't speak the truth
The picture in my vision it's the sun, it's you
This song is about two lovers who are separated and tortured so that they will betray one another—but who refuse to.
22. In Power We Entrust The Love Advocated - Remastered by Dead Can Dance
I am disabled by fears concerning which course to take
When memory bears witness to the innocents
Consumed in dying rage
The way lies through our love
The final trial.
23. Dreams Made Flesh - Remastered by This Mortal Coil
Feyre’s suffering under the mountain.
24. Persephone (The Gathering of Flowers) - Remastered by Dead Can Dance
Feyre’s death. The titles of this song and the last, of course, hint at what’s to come.
25. Into My Arms - 2011 Remastered Version by Nick Cave & The Bad Seeds
And I believe in Love
And I know that you do too
And I believe in some kind of path
That we can walk down, me and you
Feyre’s resurrection, and reunion with Tamlin.
26. All Flowers In Time Bend Towards The Sun by Ruby Weapon and Hannah Telle
All flowers in time bend towards the sun
I know you say that there's no one for you
But here is one
@tamlinweek2023 Day 4: Music
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