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Quick question could we roast the author and tells her how much her story sucks and her character roles makes no sense like T personality is less fitting of protagonist and more of a absolute scumbag that everyone is routing for them to die a horrible death

Yes you can. I mean come on.... the author was a psycho who fell inlove with someone she couldn't have. So she created this book..... 🤔. So yeah anon curse her! Curse them all! How dare they publish such trash that has no substance whatsoever! Look at the hero/heroine of the novel! Just a sex-starved man/Woman who sleeps with his/her father's concubine. Imagine sharing someone with the person that created You, Jesus! The things people write about makes you wonder what their train of thought is actually like on a daily basis. This author needs to be locked up in a mental asylum. 👀👀

Thinking about it.... I'm twisted. But we can't always stick to the cliche. 😂

We both can agree that Trysten/Trista's downfall needs to happen now but let's all be honest he's the protagonist of the world. Nothing will happen to him. If your MC gets forced into a mission the only thing your MC can do to wriggle out of it is to actually abandon the mission and face the consequences. Lemme show you something.

(Rough drafts.... So ignore the mess. And this is the scene i am tryna work on too.)

🤔 this scene though can only be unlocked for my soft/hard core revenge peeps. So not everyone will have access to this option unfortunately. But yeah you'll definitely be able to curse the author of the book after all she walks amongst you and now that your MC has entered the chat there will be alot of butterfly effect which will alert her that there is a intruder inside her world. 🚶‍♀️

Thanks for the ask anon. Hope all's well with you. Have a good one.

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Was streaming the other day and I was talking with my friends and we’ve all agreed your character the bitch as I call her needs to die.

Also how are you? You doing ok

First of all I wanna bawl my eyes out. Cause someone once said there are perks to being an adult and I haven't seen any of those perks! If only I could go back in time and punch that sucker in the face maybe he would stop telling little kids lies about adulthood.

Any way I am here.... when I am not working I am sleeping. Rinse repeat... that's basically all I have time for. Yesterday I got trapped on a call with a customer.... Who wanted something cost effective so I left work LATE! Woke up with a raging headache so yeah.... I'm fantastic. *cries in the corner* so I had to call out so now I am home nursing my headache and writing. They say no rest for the wicked. Hello I am wicked and wicked is me. 😫

And how are you Apollo? I see that you have alot on your plate as well. With school, not to mention you writing multiple stories at once. Chile you're something else. With that talent of yours you're going to go far. But you know yes! Trysten/Trista should die! I say we tear down his/her palace gates. Round up his/her men set those poor souls free. Tie Yesenia and Trysten in a cellar and beat them until they've come to their senses! (That's what I mean by die btw). We ride at dawn. 👀👀

On a serious note... it's nice to know my silly little hobby has created such impact. Honestly warms my heart.

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Overall I'm doing fine. I'm getting a handle on this.... *waves hand around* ion know what this is though. Welp lemme stop here. 🚶‍♀️

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Random Scenes.

MC × Atticus

There was something that was simply exquisite about this man and it wasn't even his beauty. A part of you wanted to explore in depth the tension that was between the two of you so badly, but the rational part of you knew you shouldn't go there, not after what happened between you and Cadmus two days ago. How ironic because here you are strolling on the beach with another man. You clenched and unclenched your fist. If Atticus knew the real reason as to why you even accepted his offer, what kind of facial expression would he show? Would he still be so stoic?

Your gaze drifted out to the waves, lost in thought as the sun began to set. Atticus, noticing your distant expression, stepped closer, his eyes locked on yours. Without a word, he reached out, his thumb brushing against your cheek in a gentle, comforting gesture.

MC × Trysten

Trysten/Trista chuckled, his/her breath whispering against your ear. "You didn't seem to think that a week ago when I was making love to you."

You pushed at his/her chest. "A mistake that will never happen again." You utter as the flashbacks from a week ago attack you from all angles of your mind.

"You cannot deny that you want me just as much as I want you MC. I can smell your arousal. From day one you were destined to be mine and mine alone." His/Her teeth nipped your ear and you couldn't help melting in her/his arms. His/her hand fumbles with your pants/skirt zipper.

MC × Nyssa

"Who was that?" Nyssa/Nyala asked, her/his voice firm but controlled.

You hesitated, and for a moment, Nyssa/Nyala thought you might lie or deny it. But then, you seemed to deflate, your shoulders sagging in resignation.

"Trysten/Trista," you admitted, your voice barely above a whisper.

Nyssa's/Nyala's eyes flashed with anger and hurt, but she/he kept her/his expression neutral. She/he had suspected something was going on, but seeing it with her/his own eyes was a different story altogether.

Cadmus×MC×Atticus

As the sun dipped below the horizon, you found yourself sandwiched between Cadmus and Atticus on the beach. The warm breeze carried the sweet scent of blooming flowers, and the sound of the waves created a soothing melody.

Cadmus's arm wrapped around your waist, pulling you close, while Atticus's hand brushed against yours, sending a spark of electricity through your body. Your heart raced as you felt the tension between the two men, their eyes locked in a silent understanding/competition.

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How would Trysten/Trista react if MC tells them

‘You know I should propose thank you for dumping cause if it weren’t for that among with the other shitty things you done to me I would never know how much I’m better off without you and that theirs other people who actually cares about me and are 1000 time better than you and my shitty family so so long Prince/Princess and please go fuck yourself with a cactus’

No comment. Spoiler MINEFIELD.

Hope all is well. Sorry for late responses. Have a good one anon! ☺

[taintedsoul-if]

Can the MC Go full genocide

Of course they can. Why wouldn't I give my readers the choice to bring complete destruction to Vathila? 👀👀 (I'm assuming destruction is what you meant anon)

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Thanks for the ask.

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theres this video and it reminded of them in the current timeline

cadmus, appearing ominously out of nowhere: daddy chill ✋

mc, freaking out: WHAT THE HELL IS EVEN THAT

cadmus is so silly I can't with him, I mean come on what did he think was going to happen? 😭😭

😂😂. Share the link for that video and stop gatekeeping.

Face the consequences of your actions. He had every right to be upset with you and ion even wrong him. Continue playing the victim till Cadmus deals with your MC. 🚶‍♀️

Thanks for the ask.

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Hi I hope u r well, if u don't mind I'm asking do u still working on this story or not? best of luck wherever u r, the story is really make me on the edge of my seat lol I hate T so much I can forgive for my MC mental health but won't forget. U have a talent in writing stuff all the LIs are unique in their own way, my fav ofc our dear husband

I am still working on this story. I can't abandon my baby. But you know taking it day by day. Getting back into the habit of writing. I am glad you are enjoying yourself and that I was able to create that effect. ☺. I am biased Cadmus is my favorite as well. There's nothing I wouldn't do for that white haired sexy man! Absolutely nothing. Thanks for checking in and I hope all's well with you. Take care of yourself now.

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Hey, I just wanted to ask if your okay? I know you probably get this a lot, but make sure to take care of and make time for yourself. I already love the work you put into this Interactive Fiction and can't wait to see more. You have me hooked already, but don't rush yourself!

Aww sometimes I forget that there are strangers out here who cares about strangers like myself well being. These past few months after updating my little story hasn't been good but I am trying my hardest to put myself back out there and get in the mood of writing again. 😊. Can't allow my emotions to control the love that I have for something. I am fine. Healing day by day and learning that sometimes things happens for a reason. Thank you for checking up on me. I'll do my utmost best to take care of myself. Someone said to me today that I should take it day by day. If it's even fifteen minutes out of the day do some writing. If it's hurting and you really want someone to talk to I am here. The sweetest soul.

I'll be fine. I plan to be a frequent visitor of this app once again. That is in my free life after all.... I have a 9-5. Welp not a nine to five seeing as I have lots of grave-yard shifts. 😭.

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Anyways thanks again and I hope you are doing well drinking your fluids and getting ample sleep. Don't let work/school stress you out or you'll end up like me. 😫

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At first, I wanted to have a good life path, but when I saw T and our dear sister, I decided to have a revenge path. Thanks for making this an option. It's rare to see a story where our MC can have a revenge path and not just forgive and forget what all they went through.

No need to thank me. I've always longed to read a book where the MC didn't give two shits about the destruction they left in their wake.... and they always say if there's a book you want to read write it yourself and don't be a burden on others! (I think that's how the saying goes or something. ) so that's what I wanted to do. Anyway, thanks for reading. ☺

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I noticed the error is still appearing will it be fixed soon? I only got up to that part in the demo so I'm dying to see what comes next!

The error will be fixed soon. Sorry for any inconvience that was caused. I went offline shortly after putting up the new update. I'll revisit the unedited work sometime this week or next week. Thanks for your patience.

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Can you explain the status and what each of them do

Status and a little insight.

Ash-black (Power Level: 1-5) - F-Rank

1. Lowest rank in society

2. Limited access to resources and opportunities

3. Often forced into poverty and criminal activities

4. Viewed as inferior and expendable by higher ranks

Obsidian-Black (Power Level: 5-15) E Rank

1. Slightly higher than Black Level

2. Basic skills and knowledge

3. Limited influence and autonomy

4. Often serve as apprentices or assistants to higher ranks

Crimson (Power Level: 15-30) D Rank

1. Developing skills and abilities

2. Some influence and autonomy

3. May hold entry-level positions in guilds or organizations

4. Still viewed as relatively weak by higher ranks

Carmine (Power Level: 30-50) C Rank

1. Proficient skills and abilities

2. Moderate influence and autonomy

3. May hold mid-level positions in guilds or organizations

4. Respected by lower ranks, but still viewed as inferior by higher ranks

Salmon Pink (Power Level: 50-70) B Rank

1. Advanced skills and expertise

2. Significant influence and autonomy

3. May hold senior positions in guilds or organizations

4. Respected by peers, but still viewed as inferior by highest ranks

Vermilion (Power Level: 70-90) A Rank

1. Exceptional skills and leadership

2. High-level influence and autonomy

3. May hold leadership positions in guilds or organizations

4. Respected by most, but still viewed as inferior by the elite

Purple (Power Level: 90-100) S Rank

1. Elite skills and high-level influence

2. Highest level of autonomy and respect

3. May hold positions of power and authority

4. Viewed as superior by most, but still subject to the whims of the SSS+ Rank.

Rainbow (Power Level: 100+) SSS+ Rank

1. Unparalleled skills and legendary status

2. Ultimate level of influence and authority

3. May hold positions of supreme power and leadership

4. Viewed as divine or semi-divine by most.

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Sorry it took so long for me to do this. I am just now getting the time to sit down and do this of course I got a little help from a friend of mine.

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it was after choosing a job! all choices throw that error

Thank you. I was able to locate the error immediately after getting your response. ☺

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got this error: chappy1 line 68: increasing indent not allowed, expected 1 was 2

Thanks for pointing that out. Um, do you remember the page you were on.... what the dialogue or the choice looks like?

(I'm not at home.... so I was able to update this demo using my mobile device. Which I don't recommend.)

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Hiya how's it going? Anyways I finished earlier than expected with the rewrite so I'm just going to leave this here.

Once again.... there are grammatical errors so don't come at me. 😂. So it's the first chapter.... plus intro which is the prologue. Anyways I won't continue blabbering. I hope y'all enjoy it. See ya!

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When it comes to procrastination I believe that I surpass everyone. 😩. I've been going over what I've written these past few days and making a lot of drastic changes. The reason being that I felt like when I wrote chap2 and chap3 the way how I paced the story just seemed wrong. A couple of days ago I was feeling under the weather. And so I ended up opening the file on my phone. While reading I got some inspiration. That led to changes that I feel content with..... my problem lies with the fact that I suck at editing. 😂 you guys are most certainly aware of that.

I plan to give myself some slack. It's not easy learning about coding and having to write a story from scratch. 😭. So I plan to post the unedited rewrite that I have of Tainted Soul on January 14th. (The time is still unknown) I am hoping to get some feedback. (Be nice y'all. :D).

This post is all over the place I am aware. So forgive my tardiness. Anyway, I hope everyone has been well these past few months. Healthy, happy, and prospering. It's the New Year..... There are a lot of things to be accomplished! See ya.

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I'm a bit late but...

Merry Christmas!!!🎉🎄

Hi Anon, thanks for the seasons greetings.

Merry belated Christmas and happy belated new years/ happy belated holidays!

I do apologize for the late response as well. I hope all is well on your side. ☺

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So today I felt a bit tired.... I overworked my brain these past few days with adding new things to what I've currently written down. I made the mistake of opening my gosub file and y'all know what i bumped into? Everything I wrote for the first scene was just off. The MC had no sympathy whatsoever towards Ada who just walked in on her cheating boyfriend. So I decided to make a few changes. Majority of what I had at first was deleted by me because it made absolutely no sense, in my eyes. I completely left out the description of Ada in the opening, when our MC got introduced.

So look at this. It's unedited. (Yea so majority of what I'm writing now is unedited.)

Now I know why writers wait until they've reached somewhere before they start rereading and such.

I also have good news. I am a lazy couch potato on my days off. Because of my laziness I can't seem to write anything at all. But you know what? Everything has finally pieced itself together. The reason why the MC was trapped in all those timelines. The reason why Cadmus is stalking them. The reason why the MC keeps on dying. Hey! This revelation has caused me to stumble a bit, because i don't know if such a tag is accepting. In all the ifs I've read since joining this community, I've never seen such a tag. *clears throat* but I believe that we should not always stick with the cliches, some times we need to think out of the box and that is what I did. Also.... well that is all I wanted to say for now.

I'll try to see if I can get these revamped scenes posted to the public by the middle of next month, so that I'll be able to focus on more important stuff. Also I've decided that instead of the MC moving into the house their mother left behind, why not let them move back home to their ancestral home. (I feel like my thoughts towards this story has truly matured over these past months. 🤷‍♀️)

Anyways enough rambling. I'll be going now. Enjoy the rest of your evening.