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theloganator101 · 15 hours
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I have read your mha fanfiction "we are not friends", loved it because it shows how action have consequences.
I have a question: what would happen have Izuku been on his own, no classmates nor the "heroes" that are supposed to do their jobs. Just Izuku being the vigilant.
I know that he been tired but I felt the vigilant arc was too short.
I will understand if you don't want to talk about mha due the leaks.
Oh it is NO trouble at all! I just haven't had any time due to working at my job and writing my Ao3 stories.
I feel if Izuku were to keep doing what he was doing, he would've eventually passed out from exhaustion right then and there. But eventually I believe someone would've found him.
And personally, I would choose Starhead guy. The first person to believe Izuku had what it takes to be a hero. Who takes him home to help him back on his feet with a good rest and a meal.
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theloganator101 · 3 days
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Honestly that would make much more sense and provide Charlie the character development she needs.
She doesn't like violence and wants to find a more peaceful way to end things, but the thing is sometimes fighting really is the only way to make progress and she shouldn't be afraid to do that if she wants her dreams and goals to stay alive.
Why Vaggie's songs doesn't hit as hard as the other songs
Hey it's time to criticize Vaggie some more and why she fails at being her own character!
And it's her songs that we're gonna be looking at!
First off, Whatever it Takes
Now this song takes place after the Overlord Meeting and Vaggie's attempts at the bonding exercises fail, Carmilla's part is about she'll do whatever it takes to protect her daughters and that makes sense.
But Vaggie's part is about... how much she loves Charlie and how she'll do whatever it takes... to help make Charlie's dreams come true.
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Uh, I think we already got that across already? Why is Vaggie's part in this song just repeating what we already know about her? Shouldn't this be giving us more about Vaggie in order to actually care about her?
She loves Charlie, okay. She wants to help make the hotel a success, that's fine. But the bigger question is what else is there?
And this problem kind of bleeds into Out for Love too.
Now don't get me wrong, this song is a fucking banger! But the problem is that it's a banger OUT OF CONTEXT! Much like how I said More than Anything Reprise is also good but out of context.
The basic gist of this song is Carmilla telling Vaggie instead of fighting in anger and rage, she should be fighting for love.
Which is a good message... but wasn't that what Vaggie was already doing? Since she wanted to help defend the hotel and make it up to Charlie about the whole her being an angel?
Now if it was made more clear that she was fighting for vengeance and was angry at her secret being exposed, that would make more sense.
Again this is just repeating what we already know without giving us anything new. If you don't give us anything else about a character other than what we already know, it kind of exposes just how much of a stagnant character you created.
Also side note! I don't like Vaggie's singing voice. It just sounds unnaturally high compared to her regular voice, to which no hate to her voice actress! As I'm sure she did the best she could with what she was given.
But overall Vaggie's songs or songs related to her failed to win me over due to it's repetition of telling us what we already know about her.
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theloganator101 · 4 days
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Why Vaggie's songs doesn't hit as hard as the other songs
Hey it's time to criticize Vaggie some more and why she fails at being her own character!
And it's her songs that we're gonna be looking at!
First off, Whatever it Takes
Now this song takes place after the Overlord Meeting and Vaggie's attempts at the bonding exercises fail, Carmilla's part is about she'll do whatever it takes to protect her daughters and that makes sense.
But Vaggie's part is about... how much she loves Charlie and how she'll do whatever it takes... to help make Charlie's dreams come true.
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Uh, I think we already got that across already? Why is Vaggie's part in this song just repeating what we already know about her? Shouldn't this be giving us more about Vaggie in order to actually care about her?
She loves Charlie, okay. She wants to help make the hotel a success, that's fine. But the bigger question is what else is there?
And this problem kind of bleeds into Out for Love too.
Now don't get me wrong, this song is a fucking banger! But the problem is that it's a banger OUT OF CONTEXT! Much like how I said More than Anything Reprise is also good but out of context.
The basic gist of this song is Carmilla telling Vaggie instead of fighting in anger and rage, she should be fighting for love.
Which is a good message... but wasn't that what Vaggie was already doing? Since she wanted to help defend the hotel and make it up to Charlie about the whole her being an angel?
Now if it was made more clear that she was fighting for vengeance and was angry at her secret being exposed, that would make more sense.
Again this is just repeating what we already know without giving us anything new. If you don't give us anything else about a character other than what we already know, it kind of exposes just how much of a stagnant character you created.
Also side note! I don't like Vaggie's singing voice. It just sounds unnaturally high compared to her regular voice, to which no hate to her voice actress! As I'm sure she did the best she could with what she was given.
But overall Vaggie's songs or songs related to her failed to win me over due to it's repetition of telling us what we already know about her.
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theloganator101 · 5 days
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After years of being apart, Isabelle and Axel meet up again.
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theloganator101 · 6 days
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The kids grow up and we see how they're doing! Including Axel...
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theloganator101 · 8 days
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Today we meet Vaggie's kid Kimmy! Along with a game of hide and seek and Isabelle meeting someone new!
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theloganator101 · 10 days
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IT'S FINALLY HERE!
The first chapter to the sequel of Bride of the Radio Demon is finally here!
Hope this will be just as good of a read that the first one was for you all!
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theloganator101 · 13 days
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Like I get it, there's a time and place for everything. But would you really want to be with someone who doesn't want you to do the things you're passionate about?
And you also want to turn away the first person interested in joining the hotel, kind of makes it hard to believe you support your partner's dreams if you're gonna suspect everyone.
And honestly, the whole never telling you about my past should've been the breaking point. Not as in them breaking up for good, but to at least get some space to process that information and figure out how to go about it once Charlie got everything figured out.
“Why do you ship RoyalHalo instead of Chaggie?” Fair question, and I’ll tell you the answer. Vaggie:
-Doesn’t care about the sinners, and openly resents and insults them instead of trying to understand them and help them redeem themselves
-Only lives and works at the hotel, and defends it and its guests and staff, because it’s what Charlie wants
-Has no goals or motivation of her own which doesn’t revolve around Charlie
-Lied to Charlie for years about her past, and never properly apologised for it
-Has no chemistry with Charlie which isn’t based on surface levels of wholesomeness and cuteness with no depth
-Is openly annoyed by Charlie’s singing
Compared to Emily, who:
-Supports Charlie’s goals because she agrees with them, and not because she’s going along with whatever she wants to make her happy
-Stands up for the sinners because she genuinely doesn’t think that they deserve extermination
-Wants to protect all human souls, even those who are in Hell
-Is her own character with her own motivation and goals which don’t revolve entirely around Charlie
-Shares Charlie’s love for singing
-Defends Charlie without completely speaking over her
And that is why RoyalHalo is superior to Chaggie in my heart ❤️ of course if you don’t agree, that’s fine, but this is my opinion
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theloganator101 · 13 days
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Well with Daughter of the Radio Demon in the works, I created the two main characters that'll be the center of the story. Isabelle and Axel. Here's what they look like
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theloganator101 · 13 days
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A moment between Alastor and Charlie before the big fight against Adam and the Angels
Alastor: Charlie, if I should die, I just want you to know that they might find some things. Strange things. Things that don't make sense to you. Charlie: Uh, okay? Alastor: And there's gonna be a lot of talk, nasty talk. And I just want you to know, from me, that it's all gonna be out of context. Charlie: I... don't know what that means. Alastor: (Grabs her shoulders and shakes her) IT MEANS IF I DIE YOU GOTTA BURN MY RADIO TOWER DOWN!!
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theloganator101 · 17 days
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Hot Take: More than Anything Reprise is only good out of context
And I'm only gonna say that in context, it doesn't feel earned
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theloganator101 · 19 days
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So... as much as I'm satisfied with how Bride of the Radio Demon ended, I wonder if I should make a Daughter of the Radio Demon.
I already have a premise in mind for how Isabelle, the daughter of Alastor and Charlie, meets the youngest of Adam's sons, who would be an OC named Axel, and falls in love with him.
Should I make this into a story?
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theloganator101 · 21 days
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And here we are... the Epilogue of Bride of the Radio Demon.
Thank you everyone who has taken the time to read my story and enjoyed it. I would like to write more about this ship in the future when I get the ideas for it.
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theloganator101 · 23 days
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The chapter before the wedding, get ready for that
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theloganator101 · 24 days
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Me after seeing Bakugou winning the polls AGAIN!
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I'm completely convinced the polls are rigged as hell.
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theloganator101 · 26 days
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Am I the only one who feels like the scene where Charlie and Vaggie meet and fall in love is a fucking copout?
Because the scene of Charlie finding Vaggie, fixing her up and acting all bashful to this random demon she just met and it’s supposedly love at first sight.
Yeah I call bullshit on that.
Because if that was ANYONE else like say, Alastor or Husk for example, would the scene play out like normal? Would it not? What happened in between then and now?
You see how stupid this is when you actually sit down and think about it?
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theloganator101 · 28 days
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Note to self: Never piss off Charlie
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