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Part of me is happy about the new page with the name changing from Avanti since I was recently thinking about how it was a shitty name to still be calling her, but the other part of me is just like đ it feels so out of place like every other thing in this comic. Such a jarring scene shift.
I agree. I hate that âViljaâ or whatever weâre calling her now went from only speaking in her native tongue, to a complete thesaurus of the modern language. Typical Kique writing, as he did the same with Argeirr.
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Are there any updates on how Alakai/Pralig's ex wife is doing? I think about her occasionally and how awful everything that happened to her was, I hope she's managing alright.
As far as I know, I am unsure. Others around may have more intimate details, but I always wondered the same!
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Cheese and rice, Kiques proportions are so AWFUL. Idk if you guys seen the recent patreon pages, but what the hell is going on with the size differences between Jahla and the horse - antelope thing?!
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Uh oh! Big stinky thinks he owns wolves with saber teeth!1!!
Except I CAME UP WITH THE IDEA FIRST
UNO REVERSE DOG-MAN

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Bit aggressive much..? One time I can agree with the smackjeeves readers and thatâs how you shut a valid point?
Say heâs emotional abusive, thatâs possible, yet all I saw from their interactions is that Rogio always was the dominant one. After Ronja was titled Viscountess, Rogio went to Ranach and berated him, on the night of Kargoâs capture, it was Rogio that pinned him down and bared his fangs at him, etc etc. I am in no way protecting Ranach, I have zero sympathy for r4pists! But to say he manipulated Rogio? Where exactly? Saying heâs gonna kill him if the tribe found out about their relationship, thatâs manipulation and a threat⌠but thatâs by far the only example I can think of.
Plus, when Rogio stumbled upon the tribe, Ranach looked at him and cared for him with sympathy, literally saying he makes sure he gets through his injuries. At the very beginning, when Ranach heard of his brotherâs death, it was Rogio that went and comforted him. I never seen an abuser but i donât really think theyâll allow their victim to touch them? He was more manipulative to Ronja than Rogio.
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Hahaha I noticed this too and it just bothered me so badly đ¤Ł
page 899 (not really a review sorry)
This by no means my opinions on the newest pages because I have the motivation of a tired cat. and well these pages are just filler. nothing important other than flirting and yeah thats literally all that is. but this one panel bothered me, cause kique drew the paw on backwards? like why is it twisted like that. dog legs don't bend like that. it could of been so easy to just have it faced front forward while the character still tells keirr to fuck off. it might be me, but the first time I saw that it was just distracting.
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This is going to be my last take on the situation, because Iâm like 80% sure this is Kique or a bestie of his, hell maybe even Chris because those two are just MISERABLE with themselves.
Nobody cares bro, yall act like Kiques life is just so amazing, but what has he done that is so important? Absolutely nothing. His art is basic as hell, anyone can use premade brushes and trace animals. This account sits here and bashes Zirvasity, when sheâs actually taken the time to improve her art. Though I agree she should break more away from Kiques style, because I feel like she can make better looking dogs in her own vision.
Also too, anyone can throw shapes around and make a dog. Have you seen how Kique draws facial structures? It looks like someone literally stepped on their faces.
All I can say is you all need to take some time to grow up and stop defending someone who is a pathological liar / narcissist who tries to claim literal WILDLIFE designs and poses. Like wtf?!
She was a good person until Ashestarr, Ovacalix and Iumm3N entered her life, like a toxic thorn.
Say what you will, but it's the truth.
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Not to compare these two, butâŚ
What the heck is going on with Kiqueâs anatomy recently? It was questionable before, but this???
Zirvasity posted hers on the 11th, not sure how long after he posted his, but the massive difference between anatomy knowledge is shocking.
Did Kique change his mind midway through the drawing to change the pose from standing to sitting? Thatâs the only way this makes sense, unless his âbreedâ has horribly flexible ribcages lmfao
Weâre not addressing that one hind leg, atrocious.
(I will update soon, forgive me)
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My guy must be getting sick of the dog abuser đ¤Ł
This is effing ridiculous. Iâve stayed in my lane and been quiet for so long about this but he and his buddies keep tabs on us where we exist in public and attribute EVERYTHING we do to Kique7/Runestorm. Then go and insist that we are hunting him down as if we give a shit about him at this point.
I have been cordial / polite in spaces we share, have I affirmed boundaries and not allowed him to exercise control over me? Absolutely. Call me callous and rude for that, you are allowed to think I am wrong, but I will never apologize for protecting my peace.
Man cant even have a face to face discussion until the point of resolution so trying to bury the hatchet is legitimately pointless. But he insists upon inserting himself into our lives over and over again because he has nothing better to do.
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Questions upon Questions⌠Pages 887 - 891
Gâday loves. Iâve been waiting a while to post this one. Mainly because⌠WTF KIQUE.
Introductory to this scene is⌠Strange? I still donât understand why Kainan decided to make Marduk a statue.
Anyway, with progression of the scene, it is now really confirmed that Feaf is pregnant.. Zahira notices two cats in the treeline. Again, we are greeted with dark af characters that cannot be spotted unless you REALLY look. Kique, buddy, you need to learn color theory PLEASE. Anyway, in the later pages it is stated that Zioqaâs were guardians of the gods, along with the Rabisu. First of all, nothing is ever stated / hinted at the cats being guardians to the gods, they just suddenly made their appearance in Asmundr. And if so, why does Father never attempt to contact Zahira? And another thing, when did Zahira even talk to these felines that made their appearance from the trees? GAH!
Now here is the kicker, Kainan and Rhov are greeted by a white Rabisu, obviously they canât understand what he just said.. But, to clear all that confusion, suddenly the kangaroo dogs can talk - even translate! They have only been in the comic for a few pages, you would think they would have been introduced pretty earlier on, because it seems they can understand ancient language as well, showing they have been around for a long time on Aedra. With this also in mind, how did Marduk back on page 859 not recognize the kangaroo dogs as TALKING natives?
We are then graced with a little backstory on the Rabisu. It becomes clear that Aedra was previously an alien planet, Inhabited by the gods? Anyway, on page 890, it looks like Aedra was stripped clean of everything, including plant life on the last panel, so how the hell did Aedra restore itself back to life??
Eventually, it seems the gods had too leave Aedra, not entirely sure WHY they couldnât take their creations; the Rabisu and Zioqa with them? I mean how the hell did the Zioqa end up on earth, if they were left on Aedra? PLOT HOLE! Besides, youâre going to tell me that these animals survived off of nothing? Why would the gods leave their creations behind to starve and dehydrate to death, if Aedra was stripped of all resources?? Kind of an asshole thing donât you think? Also, if the Rabisu have lived on Aedra for thousands of years, why are they just now starting to appear? Marduk has been on Aedra for QUITE A WHILE and youâre going to tell me theyâre just now coming after him? Itâs funny that Kique tries to say, the Rabisu / Zioqa lived underground this entire time, and youâre going to tell me that they didnât notice Aedra slowly becoming inhabited again and they werenât curious? Ninmah even states that Father sometimes comes down to talk to her, so wtf Kique? Itâs clear Father HAS returned to Aedra and he didnât bother to scoop up, or even update the âguardiansâ they left behind? Itâs all a bunch of a bullsh*t.
My biggest thing here is, if Marduk is suppose to be the evil, green, alien god thing, then how did he have access to the Akiulfrs energy signal? Isnât that fatherâs creations? If Marduk is portrayed to be so evil, then Father probably wouldnt allow Marduk to have any access to HIS creations. I mean hell, Father shoots down Mardukâs green ship in Asmundr. This would symbolize that Father and Marduk are ENEMIES. So how does Marduk know so much about Father? Why would Father keep an enemy so close?
And how did Marduk strip Aedra clean of resources? Youâre going to tell me a whole army of people just let ONE dude destroy the world? Kique says âMarduk and his creationsâ but what creations could aid in stripping an entire planet? The green alien dog looking things donât look like they could possibly do much, aside from being an attack dog of some sort. Marduk would need some mass weaponry, an army himself, or a crap ton of those green dogs to even make a dent on a populated planet like this. At least I THINK.
And how exactly did he destroy the biosphere, using dogs? That is my ultimate question here. I think itâs quite funny how an entire alien civilization just let one guy go ham on their planet. Obviously, this isnât the video game Horizon Zero Dawn, but even that explains in better terms how the biosphere got destroyed. Iâm scratching my head on this one. Even the dog that is killed by the jaws of the alien dog in page 890 looks healthy enough. Câmon Kique, letâs learn to draw actual sickly looking creatures can we? ( I also hate how Kique draws humans but thatâs just a personal issue of mine LOL )
Honestly, if this comic was actually written before hand, we would have learned about this A LONG TIME AGO. None of this shit makes any sense, Kique really floored the comic with this one, because he still has hater energy for his ex-cowriter.
#kique nordin#kique7#asmundr#bad dog comics#asmundrcomic#asmundrhome#comic review#comic#homeasmundr#homecomic
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Hello! I do dialogue edits for Home as I am a writer and Kique's attempt at "dialogue" pains me. I share them with the Jonna server once they're public. I edit the dialogue to better fit the characters' personalities, or to fix inconsistencies in the story. Here are some!
Oh I would love to be apart of the Jonna server if I ever got a chance đđ but these are FANATASIC. So much better and more in character of the characters!
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Finally some action, but for the wrong reasons.
Alright, so I am referring to the current patreon pages that were posted recently. Some of you know what I am going to discuss and others, not so much⌠So if you donât want to be spoiled, then do not continue.
For the record before people get their panties in a bunch, I will not be posting pictures or anything of that matter as I do try to abide by Patreon rules. However, I am going to simply discuss what I felt from these pages.
So we finally got some action scenes with Marduk and let me just say, this whole thing is a giant mess. Kique so badly needed an antagonist for his story, so he decided to pick his ex co-writers character to defame, and blame for the whole mess.
This is absolutely ridiculous. In my opinion, Kiques decision in doing what he did with Marduk and with Jahla reading the scrolls throws not only Homeâs plot off balance, but Asmundrs as well. I have way to many questions than I do answers, with where Kique is currently taking the story.
It is quite obvious that he has no damn clue where to take Home and is creating EVEN MORE plot holes! Once these pages become published, sadly wonât be for a while, Iâll be able to do a better and more detailed review.
But for now, all I am going to say is WTF KIQUE?! Youâre in such desperation to make Home relevant again, that youâre willing to just confuse your audience even more? And just go nillie-willie with whatever idea you think will grab others attention? Also to make Asmundr confusing as well? I guess you finally figured out that people donât like a live in roleplay for a comic. But god damn, why did you have to wait almost 900 pages later for something that could have been EXPLAINED better and EXCUTED 500 pages ago? When Marduk first made his appearance? Good lord idk what to say lmao.
#kique nordin#kique7#asmundr#bad dog comics#asmundrcomic#asmundrhome#comic review#comic#homeasmundr#homecomic#just terrible writing
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Who would you like me to review next?
My reviews will be a little slow paced, as I have other outside things to tend too. But when I have the time, who would you like to see me review next?
Currently I am stuck between these two, as both of their reviews are going to be absolute train wrecks lmao. ( I have an Argeirr review in the works as well! )
Jahla or Roamer?


#kique nordin#kique7#asmundr#bad dog comics#asmundrcomic#asmundrhome#comic review#comic#homeasmundr#homecomic
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Ronja Character Discussion / Breakdown
⢠The Damsel ⢠The Unfit Leader ⢠The Clueless

YâALL HAVE BEEN PATIENT, SO HERE IT IS FINALLY!
- What we will be going over
⢠Her early history.
⢠Read along breakdown / discussion of her character in the comic.
⢠Why she is clearly unfit / clueless af running MT.
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⢠Early History
From what we know about Ronja, she was born in Kiques first comic, Asmundr. She was born around the time Kainan finally rescued Lifa and returned to Asmundr, only to find out the territory has been claimed by strangers. A pack, sort of similar to MT in their way of thinking and beliefs.
Ronja is born to an old female named Zita, presumably the result of a possible unwilling pregnancy, but who knows. Ronja is also the niece of Raela.
It is also interesting how Ronja looks nothing like she does in Home, picture(s) for examples:


Even though Ronja now has an interesting coat color, she did look better in Asmundr. Only reason I say this is because, judging from how Raela looks, Iâm sure her brother ( Ronjaâs father ) looked the same. Kique seemed to have a better understanding on how genes worked, back then at least lol. Otherwise, can someone explain to me how you get a rip off ridgeback dog from a dark wolf ( Zita ) and a dog similar to Raela?
Continuing.. Kainan managed to kill the leader of the pack and free Ronja and her mother. Zita died shortly after their rescue and Johaan ended up adopting Ronja as his own.
In Asmundr, Ronja is shown as a childish pup, of course. She is still rather young and learning her environment, under Johaan. In my opinion, Ronja seemed more promising in Asmundr and had more personality than the yes man she is now. She was even more willing to hunt for christs sake, instead of hide behind walls and feed off a dying herd.
Then came the time the war of the shield wolf broke out, I wouldnât say Ronja was useless, but more young and inexperienced when it came to dealing with Ranulfr and trying to cut his ankles. I mean hell, it was pretty brave of her to offer herself to help out with Ranulfr and the shield wolves.
Unfortunately Ronja stumbled on cutting Ranulfrs ankles and managed to get grabbed by Ranulfr. In early home, the scar was still seen on Ronja, but eventually Kique got lazy with details and removed everyoneâs scars they once had.
Then Ronja was tasked with watching Raela and staying behind with her, while everyone else went out to fight. Eventually, a shield wolf spots Ronja and Raela and Ronja quickly reaches for her weapon. And in a very non-dramatic, rushed as hell fight scene, Ronja managed to kill the shield wolf.
And that about sums up all I have to say about âAsmundrâ Ronja! Imo Ronja was very promising in the first book, but in Home she has unfortunately become a slave / yes man to the god awful RxR coupleâŚ
⢠Read along breakdown
So now we will continue with âHomeâ Ronja.
Ahem, weâre not even through the first chapter and already Kique is trying to throw a potential ship in our direction. Itâs obvious that Ronja has a fling for Roamer, considering heâs the only one that she is not related too. Still, Kique sums it up to Ronja not having enough âoptionsâ. Okay, weird. Roamer should have been treated like a cousin, not a suitor for Ronja. ( Page 8)
Skipping ahead, I would just like to note.. It is nice to see Ronja retain some of her personality that is established in the beginning. When Ronja watches Ferah murder an MT dog right in front of her, she is bewildered that someone would do this over a hare. ( Page 34 - 35 )
Again, suddenly Ronja is a love sick teenager over Roamer. When Roamer decides he wants to stay with Kargo and Ferah she suddenly turns into this jealous fool, that immediately goes on the defense, throwing out her last words and then walking away. ( Page 55 )
Now, here comes the part where Ronja becomes full fledged idiot! She runs into Ranach, while crying her eyes out over someone that should have been treated like a cousin? She literally helped RAISE Roamer? I also donât know why she feels the need to approach a stranger like that and not be the least bit of cautious? Or scope him out before making an appearance.. But anyway. Ranach works his charm on her, course it works. Ranach offers to meet up with her again and sheâs already giving him a time and date! Damn girl you move fast! You didnât even stop and ask yourself if this dude was truly safe to be around lmao. ( Page 58 - 61 )
I think about 2 days after Ronja and Ranach met, sheâs already horn dogging with Ranach. Talk about rebounding, am I right lol. ( thankfully she does admit to this later, but still, ew lol. ) Ranach then gives her an ultimatum, to join his tribe - or never see him again. Back then, one would think she would deny this, because she doesnât know who tf he is buuut⌠( Page 83 )
Without any hesitation, Ronja it seems like agrees to join MT, hell weâre not even given a scene where she talks to her family about it. Weâre just shot over to a scene of her and Ranach standing outside the walls. I guess weâre forced to assume she wanted to join MT? It would have been nice to see her speak to her family and the Asmundr pack fighting her on it, or even a lick of hesitation on Ronjas part. Ronja just mindlessly joins a tribe with a male she hardly knows, which is incredibly idiotic, considering sheâs in a world she knows NOTHING about. She should have also paid attention to that âUnfortunatelyâ Ranach said, when she asked if something was wrong. Why would nothing being wrong be unfortunate? Hm.. But I guess d*ck was the only thing on her mind. SIGH. Anyway, Ranach manipulates her and tells her that he fears sheâll find someone better. Ok buddy, you know thatâs BS. Ronja doesnt have the slightest clue sheâs being used and is being too overly trusting. Of course she ends up mating with Ranach, cause fuck Roamer right? THATâLL SHOW HIM lmao. ( Page 88 - 89 )
Of course, Ronja waltzed right into the trap, immediately breaking her trust in Ranach right? WRONG! Then she is dragged to the Jarls den, basically preparing to get r*ped without her knowledge on it. God this story arc is already going to hell.. ANYWAY. Thankfully, she is saved in the nick of time because Arenak was poisoned by Rogio, at Ranachâs request. Then somehow, without asking ANY questions, or fighting Ranach on what tf just happened, she goes in for a comforting hug because sheâs âconfused and scaredâ ok, but why arenât you more irate? Why arenât you questioning Ranach on where he brought you?? Why are you HUGGING HIM? ( Page 99 - 102 )
Adding on to the next page, why is Ronja still sticking around? What she just endured and witnessed I would think be traumatic AF to her. And yet, sheâs sitting there like NOTHING just happened. ( Page 103 )
Then she is seen later that night sleeping in Ranachs bed, still not making a peep about what she just endured. Granted, it could be argued that she is traumatized beyond belief, but nothing shows this. She hasnât questioned anything yet, she hasnât even tried to put a fight / argument about anything. Ranach then tried to consult her, but she just ends up walking away and sleeping in a corner. GIRL LEAVE? It is obvious she is UNCOMFORTABLE! ( Page 107 )
Ranach then bestows the title of Viscountess to Ronja.. Again, nothing from Ronja. She didnât even question Ranach on how much responsibility is on her shoulders or what the actual hell is going on.. She still hasnât shown any emotion / trauma from anything she has just endured with MT. Hell she hardly knows ANYTHING about MT why is she just accepting this? Why would she want to lead in a place that confused and scared her? DUNNO MAN. Poor thing is a plot slave at the moment to Kique. ( Page 110 )
I am unsure why Ronja is waiting to get the word about Roamer, for her to be able to leave MT. She tells Jonna that she was too embarrassed to leave, but considering how much she saw and went through, one would think she would high tail outta there at a moments notice. Itâs not like Ranach is really holding her down, like Arenak would have. Then she says she really wants this to work. GIRL WHAT. What exactly do you want to work? Did Ronja really not factor in what happened to her upon her arrival to MT, STILL? ( Page 133 )
Even though Jonna was a decent character by Home standards, her behavior is a strange one to endure for Ronja. Ronja talks about leaving, but for some damn reason hasnât yet and Jonna basically tells her she isnât going anywhere. ( Page 153 )
All of a sudden, Ronja grew some big ol golf balls when she confronts Ferah. Ronja went from hating MT, wanting to leave it, to suddenly puffing out her chest and telling Ferah she rules the tribe together with Ranach. But I thought you wanted to leave? You are also extremely uncomfortable in MT, so why are you acting all high and mighty here? Now Iâm confused. Anyway, Ronja doesnât seem to ask a whole lot of questions about Roamer, aside from asking if Ferah killed him. And that was about it. So I guess Ronja actually doesnât give a shit about Roamer, cause she sure doesnât seem like she does in this scene lol. Also Ronja is still clueless AF, saying that Ranach cares about her. Girl, if he cared he wouldnât have brought you there in the first place. She never even factors that clue in! But honestly, this whole time Ronja has been ignoring every red flag that is MT, so not surprised really. Also, why isnât Ronja looking further into why Ferah is being held hostage in a cave? ( Page 156 - 158 )
Looking deeper into the beginning times of Ronjaâs âleadershipâ it really confuses me. Because how is it she goes from being traumatized, not questioning anything, just accepting whatever Ranach says, even talking about leaving to suddenly acting like a mini Ranach, when it comes to the second rebellion. Why is Ronja not asking ANY QUESTIONS in this point of time? She just suddenly took on the role of viscountess ( which she wanted to be short lived apparently ) and is suddenly against Kargo and Ferah and not asking why Ranach is hunting them down? She wanted to leave MT herself, so why is she alerting the guards? Hell, she could have joined them? Maybe even ASK QUESTIONS to Ferah and Kargo where Roamer is / was? Itâs kind of funny how sheâs trying to kill the only two dogs that know where Roamer is lol. ( Page 173 )
Quickly we are blessed with a scene where Ronja ALL OF A SUDDEN wants to know everything about MT. Well that was a quick 180 and Iâm not even sure what changed her mind from leaving there. ( Page 183 )
Right here, Ranach pretty much opened the door for Ronja to leave, but yet she decides to stay anyway. Again, this whole plot line to this point, is very poorly written. Ronja was thrown into MTâs arms and not in a very good way.. She just basically accepted whatever was thrown at her, with no reaction / questions to anything. She is brainless to Kiques decision making with the plot. ( Page 193 )
Little bit of world building as we get a grand poetry about the Matriach from Axi. Ronja handles herself well and is at least honest from the get go of where she comes from. Itâs also interesting that Ronja doesnât ask if she has potentially seen a dog named Roamer, since thatâs pretty much the only dog thatâs had her attention this whole time. ( Page 194 - 196 )
Going forwards, we see Ronja sitting upon a rock, gathering the tribe around. She announces the game changing rules for the Tribe, under her reign. Unavoidably, some members are opposed to her rules, but she sets some ground work and goes from that point. Axi was kind enough to attend, casting Ronja a smile before leaving. Ronja shares the smile, but quickly retracts it when Axi is no longer looking. Assuming that maybe Ronja isnât so confident for this after all. ( Page 233 - 234 )
Itâs kind of weird how Fuss jumps around a lot, at first. Why didnât he confront Ulfr before Ronja came up to him, to talk to him? He was obviously against everything Ulfr stood for. Idk just weird. I donât really have much to say about this scene, minus that Ronja is obviously too timid and naive to deal with the tribe as a LEADER at this time, nonetheless. I mean hell, sheâs basically giving females their freedom / rights around a bunch of unwilling to change rapists lol. There is going to be a lot of drama involved. ( Page 263 - 267 )
I suppose this scene shows that Ronja can in fact handle MT. Though, prior, she didnât really have a reason or drive to stay and change sh*t around in MT, until Ranach basically passed off leadership. I mean hell, she DESPISED MT. Anyway. Ranach reveals to Ronja that she is pregnant and then Vigr suddenly decides AFTER KNOWING THIS WHOLE TIME, to spill the beans to Ronja about Zilas. Although tbh, I donât know how Vigr even got that information, or even put two and two together that Zilas and Ronja were even âfriends.â Ahem. Ronja suddenly grows baseballs and threatens Ranach, even though later comic she is a hopeless push over that wishes no harm on anyone! ( I suppose this was an out of character thing of her to say to Ranach. ) Of course, Ronja never asks anyone why they kept that info about Zilas away from her. ( Page 295 - 297 )
All of a sudden, freaking Ronja wants to see her family, though she had many chances before to LEAVE. Well guess what! Ya canât do that now because you decided you wanted to help lead a tribe that wasnât even your responsibility to begin with! So! Planning family trips wonât be so easy! Aside from that, Ulfr and Ranach are basically waiting for her to come out anyway. ( Page 309 )
Here we have Jonna asking Ronja a very solid question. Why in the hell DID she mate with Ranach? Ronjaâs answer is that she was basically acting like a jealous fool over Roamer, even though she basically helped raise Roamer and turned into a cougar over him. F*cking weird, but anyway- This gives her the justification as to why she did what she did. She just brainlessly left with Ranach without questioning anything. And this is how women in real life die :). ( Page 318 - 319 )
Finally Roamer and jackass Rogio arrive in MT. Roamer is worried that Ronja wouldnât want to see him, but Ronja quickly rushes to Roamer and hugs him. Roamer then discovers that Ronja is pregnant, his facial expression here looks more disgusted than surprised / shocked, not quite sure why? Ronja then asks Roamer to stay with her and here is where the clown show begins!

Real quick though, wtf is that anatomy?? I pulled every disk in my lower back just looking at Ronja here lmfao. ( Page 349 - 351 )
One thing that bothered me about Meteor was how different the territory became. When we are first shown what Meteor tribe looked like, the tribe was in an actual crater. Here, we can kinda see that idea was scrapped and now itâs just a regular area that has a fence around it. But anyway.. ( Page 353 )
Why tf is Rogio asking Ronja this question? âRonja is the leader of this ever expanding group, correct?â No shit idiot, you were there when she got coronated??? Donât you remember casting a jealous gaze over to her and bitching at Ranach about it? Oh! Guess not. ( Page 353 - 354 )
Anyway, here comes the part where Ronja suddenly shows favoritism / friendship for Rogio. I mean hell, I understand her being grateful for Rogio helping Roamer, but to literally let him basically do whatever he wants when no other tribe member is looking is KINDA overstepping the grateful-ness?? Then without Ronja fully assessing Rogio, she decides to brainlessly offer him the Baron rank. She should have taken into consideration how he took over the Baron rank previously. Obviously Rogio just wants power, he doesnât care to actually do the work with that power. Not only this, but Ronja needs to think about her tribe and who should be her second hand. This rank should take some time to THINK about, not just throwing it at the first body she sees. ( Page 363 - 365 )
I know that Iâve said this before in Rogioâs breakdown, but it still annoys me that Ronja says âAnd Rogio deserves someone like you, after everything heâs been through.â GIRL you donât know shit about him! Just because someone apologizes to you on how they acted before, doesnât just magically fix everything. I get why Ronja would want to give Roamer the Baron rank, but you ever heard the saying you donât mix your family with business? Well clearly she didnât get the memo lol. Roamer is not qualified for the Baron rank either and plus, none of the tribe members know him nor even got to know him yet and theyâre suddenly suppose to listen to what Roamer says? ( Page 393 - 394 )
I also donât know why nobody told Ronja that the Novas needed to be moved pastures, I know that at least SOMEONE knows, why does it wait until Rogio says something? So sure, all the blame canât really be put on Ronja because she didnât know that the Novas needed to be moved and she is still fairly new on how things run in MT. ( Page 403 - 404 )
So Ronja gave this prodigal speech a few pages back, where she would sit on the back of her nova and lead them into battle. Sure this isnât a battle, but why isnât Ronja being that âstrong, brave, courageous leaderâ that weâre SUPPOSE to see? She should definitely go into the woods with her tribe members and help sort the mess out that SHE created with Ranach and Ulfr, but no, she wonât do that. ( Page 406 )
Then comes Rogioâs fake ass panic attack and Ronja asks him what happened. Rogio tells her and she ends up agreeing with them, that she wonât use Rogio as bait for Ranach. Then she chases down Vigr, then agreeing with HIS plan, suggesting they use Rogioâs scent instead. ( funny, because this was never done. ) Iâm going to assume that Kique wanted Ranach to find out about Rogio at this point in time, but decided nah, imma drag this story out further. ( Page 416 - 417 )
Again, Ronja decides to sit on her ass and let her tribe deal with the mess SHE caused. ( Page 421 )
I also donât know why Ronja is letting her two barons borderline f*ck in front of everyone. That would be high key embarrassing lol. ( Page 495 )
I also think itâs funny how Ronja can thank Rogio for helping Roamer, but screw Ferah and Kargo! Not a single thank you, or any other question for them! ( Page 498 - 499 )
Idk why Kique always makes his characters hide / lie about shit, Ronja included. Sure itâs hard for her to throw Ferah and Kargo out, because of what they have done for Roamer. But she needs to put her tribe first, knowing that Kargo is a wanted man will put her tribe first on the chopping block, with SolarStag. All SolarStag knows is that MT is harboring a fugitive, so that gives them validation to break down the walls and kill if they wanted. But as usual, Ronja has to talk to someone about her decisions, because god forbid she makes one on her own lol. ( Page 507 )
Okay so why the hell is Ronja not doing anything? Kargo just went ape shit and beat the hell out of Rogio, though it was highly justified lol. Ronja doesnât ask anyone what happened, she just stares at Roamer and Kargo and then turns around and leaves two panels later. NOTHING! Youâd think as a LEADER she would be wanting to know why the hell Kargo just attacked her tribe member? Especially after given the reason why he returned?! Gonna assume that she thought Roamer could handle it, but still, you have drama going on in your tribe that youâre aware of. Why not at least ASK whatâs going on? Do your own investigation?? At this rate, Ronja is just dumb as bricks. She never asks or questions anything. ( Page 524 )
So instead of putting responsibilities first, Ronja thinks itâs a great idea to throw a party, instead of figuring out why they may starve soon, or keep eyes outside the walls for Ranach. Basically what I got from this scene was, hey guys! Letâs celebrate starving to death with a maniac outside the walls! Idiotic! And look where that got her! Ranach ends up attacking the walls! Then Ronja spews out the most idiotic sentence in this entire comic. âRogio you are the strongest here next to Kargo, go protect the cave entrance!â GIRL WHAT?? If you feel that Rogio is the strongest alongside Kargo, why arenât you sending his dusty, crusty self out there with them to attack Ranach?? I STILL canât get over that line lol. ( Page 539 - 542 )
Ronja then has her pups and we all already know who is Kiques favorite lol. Anyway, I hate that Ronja acts like she gives a shit about Zilas, mentioning how Naeva reminds her of Zilas, girl shut up lol. And another thing, she gives them nicknames but I have never once heard her use them. And why isnât she keeping the pups close to her body? Already sheâs a clueless af mother lol. Itâs also kind of funny how we get this random af time skip and Ronja is like OK! GET OUTTA MY HOUSE! She doesnât even bother to go show them HERSELF the rest of the territory lol. Or seizing the opportunity to spend quality time with her kids. ( Page 557 - 559 )
One thing that bothers me, is Ronja hardly knows Rogio on screen. She DOES know that he was part of MTâs rapist days, so what makes her think heâs changed and wonât try to go after her while theyâre alone? Nah buddy, itâs cool, take me to the meeting spot ALONE. Besides, Rogio has shown how unwell he is, is it really a great idea to take an unwell member with you? Hell if I know anymore. ( Page 571 )
Skipping ahead to Tinget, I donât know how Ronja managed to be late for the meeting here. I would say that this goes in her âunfit leaderâ folder, tbh. Even though Ronja is shown to be nervous and timid, she does actually end up standing up for herself in the meeting, after everyone throws what they can at her. I have to say, she handled this pretty well, under Kiques writing, lol. Cant forget, that she also got to re-unite with Jahla and her new lover boy. But first, she is able to hold a conversation with Fraujar. Fraujar is understandably concerned, since he lives so close to MT. Ronja is able to shake some doubts. After this, she then meets Fjordor, telling him that Kargo died. Fjordor then extends an alliance deal to Ronja and she accepts it. Jahla then re-unites with Rome and they share a boring conversation. ( Page 617 - 630 )
Skipping ahead to another judicial moment, where Fraujar brings Keirr back to MT. This was Ronjaâs face exactly:

So theyâve been apart, at least 100 or so days, not even knowing whether Keirr was alive or not. And her face is so expression-less and bland, itâs super hard to enjoy or even put yourself into the scene. Probably the WORST reunion known to comic history, here. ( Page 645 )
Skipping ahead, because I might as well crush all the previous Ronja scenes into this one paragraph. Weâve obviously been thrusted into a Ronja x Fraujar ship and I must say, the build up was lame. Even though.. In Kique standards, it was better laid out than how he handled RxR. But really dude? ANOTHER relationship? Itâs only a matter of time before he figures out what he wants to do with Keirr, what, with him being the only single one now. I mean hell, he even tried to push Raun onto him at one point. Itâs sickening really, not everyone needs someone. Kique could have made Ronja an epic, independent, single mother character and I personally would have killed for that. But no, instead we get a frail, canât make any decisions, co-depending character like Ronja. Ahem, anyway. Fraujar here states he wants to get to know Ronja more, if Ronja was actually the badass I WISH she was, she would have told Fraujar no. Simply because her tribe comes first, she doesnât have time for a relationship. Especially considering the fact that she put MT on a hot list, during Tinget. But what do I know about story telling?! Might as well hurry up and merge Whispervale with Meteor and just save us the next 200 pages that are coming about that! ( Page 735 - 737 )
Ok, I get it, Kargo was resurrected. But I feel that Ronja shouldnât seem so⌠Happy? Maybe shocked? She should say something else like, âRoamer.. You wonât believe this..â instead of just âRoamer!â With her stupid looking face LMAO. And then the introduction of Diarko? This is another mouth she has to feed? Which speaking of, whatever happened to her issue with the herd? What even HAPPENED to her herd? I know that Fraujar brings them food and what not, but what is she now? A moocher? Is she even giving Fraujar anything in return thatâs not booty? IDK. Feels a bit unfair to have an entire other tribe take care of yours and you AS THE LEADER donât try to help them back out, or find differing ways to help your situation. ( Page 740 - 742 )
Even though Ronja is suspicious, she just willingly said sheâll put her tribe / pups at risk for protecting Kargo FROM THE CAPITAL. Then of course she just trusts whatever Rogio says, again not making a self coherent thought / decision for herself. ( Page 747 - 748 )
Now this whole scene was just dumb. Why does Ronja have to approach Roamer, like he is the leader and announce that some members are leaving? It would have been better for Kargo and Roamer to stumble across them as Ronja tries to sort things out. But as a leader, why tf are you going outta your way to cut the conversation youâre having, sprint away and tell your SECOND IN COMMAND, that tribe members are leaving? God she is so helpless. And honestly Iâm surprised Vigr is still in existence here, this is the same dog that literally held her down to be r*ped. Adding to this, Ronja hasnât done shit, aside from rely on Fraujar to feed her tribe. ( 762 - 763 )
I think my biggest gripe about this scene, is how Axi is acting. One thing I have noticed about how Kique writes her, is she is always extremely suspicious and like she subtly knows whatâs going on. Why is that? Why is she looking around all suspiciously, like she KNOWS Kargo is around. Is she a damn mind reader? I understand writing a suspicious character to be.. Well, suspicious, but she acts like she knows whatâs going on, but is playing dumb. But, adding to Ronjaâs case, here she is actively lying about Kargo and further digging her tribe into a hole. ( Page 769 - 770 )
Here we have a crucial role in Ronjaâs leadership but in typical fashion Ronja doesnât do SHIT. Her Tribe is under attack and she gives a direct order to Roamer to NOT hurt anyone, but make them leave. So what does Roamer do? Goes against her word and KILL the dog he was ordered to not kill! And what does Ronja do about it? NOTHING! Thatâs right! Still to this day, Roamer does not suffer any consequences from this! So now Ronja has an unhinged as hell Baron and she doesnât do anything about it! ( Page 802 - 805 )
Another crucial part, where she renames and relocates her tribe. Guess what happens! She doesnât decide either of these! Yup! She doesnât come up with the name, or where the new territory is! Kargo, Roamer and Rogio all make that decision! This is just proof that that Rogio and Roamer run the joint, Ronja is a measly side kick at this point, even though she is the leader. ( Page 831 - 832 )
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In conclusion
Iâve decided to cut off to this point, because I feel like I have stated enough about Ronja.
Ronja is a simple minded, unfit leader with unused potential. Kique missed a mega fat opportunity with Ronja. He could have shut us all up by making her a head strong, single mother that leads her tribe with pride and confidence. Instead, she is a watered down pathetic, plot slave to Rogio and Roamer.
She is extremely unfit because she relies on everyone to do her decision making. Hell, she has another tribe feeding her! I havenât once seen a confirmation that theyâre using their own herd yet!
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Alright, alright Iâm done I swear đđ
For the record, I am going to repost my Rogio and Ranach topics since he wanted to hide them so badly lol
I donât really care much about my Lifa post since @saltysplayt00ns has a whole descriptive topic on that subject! So therefore I donât mind removing that one
Edit: Even better, I can literally just replace the photos with the original photos I had up before, and it clears whatever Kique did đ¤Ł. I think itâs absolutely hilarious he tries so hard to silence us and nothing works in his favor. Glad I could waste your time though Kique, now adios~
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Oh Kique, you truly are something.
Adding onto his copy right thing, I have noticed he only copyright claimed certain posts lmao. He copyrighted Rogio AND Ranachâs character breakdowns of mine and Feaf and Rhovanions red flags lmao.
So he doesnât care with other shit, but if you call out his favorite characters and relationships, god almighty might as well smite you lmfao.
Go ahead and scroll through my blogs. I hope he realizes just because he copy righted my posts I will not be removing them. Theyâre quite clearly TRUE otherwise, why would he only target certain posts đ¤Ł
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Also like to throw in really quick that I will not be removing these posts, as anyone who comes across my blog will see how Kique tries to sensor everything.
He really outdid himself with this one, not even realizing that he just proved EVERYONES point and shooting himself in the foot in the process.
I donât think Kique realizes the pot he just stirred lol.
Looks like Kique is falsely copyright striking art of his PUBLICLY AVAILABLE comic. Just wanted to say, it's a shitty move by the man child and it will just cause a Streisand effect. Criticism doesn't just go away, and the more you try to silence it, the louder it becomes you dumbass.
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