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tfone au where OP is created as the last of the primes but way after them, a sparkling born at what were thought to be the last days of the war against the quintessons, the beginning of a new generation of peace after eons of war. a child meant to be loved and raised knowing nothing of war nor sacrifice.
he's kept mostly out of the spotlight by his siblings, who don't wish to expose him to everyone's optics so young, and want to wait until the war is done and over to properly introduce him to their people.
except of course the primes are betrayed and murdered by sentinel, the war is lost and everyone who knows and cared for the truth is either banished or outright killed in order to suppress it.
and the high guard, the ones the primes trusted the most, the ones that were supposed to protect them, the ones who failed in their most important duty, have to make a choice. to take the last prime, their last hope, with them to the surface, a hostile environment where there's little to no supplies and where they'll be hunted down by both sentinel and the quintessons as the biggest threat to their regimen.
or hide him in plain sight. place him where sentinel won't think to look for him. one more sparkling among many. and hope it will be enough to keep him alive. pray to primus that he'll protect his last child long enough for them to come back for him when it's safer (even if most of them have already lost their faith on him when he allowed the rest of his children to be massacred like that)
they almost lose their resolve when they realize they will have to take the little one's cog away in order to make him blend in with the rest of the newborns (and oh do they burn with murderous intent when they see what sentinel has done to their people but it's not the time yet-) but in the end they decide an impaired little prime is better than a dead one.
and so in the chaos of thirteen dead primes and a sudden energon crisis, a little sparkling who very few mechs really knew about and even fewer had seen completely vanishes. and in the depths of iacon a mech in charge of a new batch of newborns scratches their helm in confusion as they realize they must have miscounted the first time.
optimus prime is quietly erased from any official records by sentinel, written off as dead when they find a sparkling's frame mangled beyond recognition after an attack on the base of those rebels that insist on being a thorn on his side. killing the sparkling hadn't been precisely in his plans, he probably could've found some use for it after all, but he's not particularly upset about it either.
and orion pax grows up with an ache on his spark that tells him he's missing something far more important than a t-cog and dreams of gentle and loving hands, cradling him against the frames of mechs he cannot recall the faces of.
#i talk a lot <3#transformers#transformers one#optimus prime#orion pax#baby prime orion au#this is mostly an excuse for me to draw the primes and baby OP later on. just to be clear.#i WILL be drawing this at some point lmao#tbh i'm a little uncertain how i want things to progress#because on one hand it would be very tasty and tense if sentinel recognized optimus during the race#but that means a lot of changes very early on in the plot and i would have to do a lot of Thinking on how to justify getting the gang#to still pick up bee and elita. cause i love them <3#i do think it'd be very funny if the high guard's plan worked like a charm except for the very tiny fact that they didn't count#on orion being an absolute hellion. like. this kid is Not Going Unnoticed and it's completely his own fault lmao#in this version maybe a member of the high guard stayed behind to keep an eye on orion and is able to get them out before they're killed#but instead of taking them to where the primes fell they take them directly to the high guard#which is very awkward because it's a very moving and emotional moment for the high guard who are finally reunited with their little prime#all grown up and healthy and blessedly *alive*. except orion doesn't fucking remember any of them and is very confused as to why#the legendary warriors of cybertron are getting all weepy over him. they finally explain the truth to him which is a Fucking Bomb#to drop on anyone but especially a group of kids who almost got killed by the person they all thought the world of just hours ago#they also return orion's t-cog to him which would create some tension between him and the rest of the gang because this time#he's the only one getting his cog back. add to it that they were just told he's the equivalent of a demi-god and... well.#there's a gap between him and them that wasn't there before#on the other version of events that follows canon more closely everything goes the same up until the gang finds the primes in the cave#and wake up alpha trion who now not only has to deal with the fact the rest of his siblings are dead but that he missed fifty cycles#of his baby brother's life. that the only sibling he has left does not remember him or his true identity at all.#he has to choose between telling him the truth which has the risk of unbalancing him in a critical moment where he cannot afford to#be distracted because they're being hunted down. or let him remain unaware. let him forget their family and the love they had for him#but letting him remain free of the knowledge of what he lost and the heartbreak it would bring.
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The thing is I don't believe Miles Edgeworth would ever say "I love you" to Nick, and I don't think he would reach out to hold him. But I do think the moment he hears about what's going on with Trucy he would show up at Nick's door with a stack of documentation on adoption and sit down with him for hours as they wade through the legal process to gain custody. One step at a time, you are not alone in this, we'll figure this out together. Acts of service my beloved... Let me ease your burden by taking it on. I love you and want you to be well.
#I know he would do the absolute most. He wasn't the youngest lawyer ever for nothing#He hands over a 4 page double spaced document vouching for Nick's character to submit to the court#He gets out a tape measure to make sure Nick's spare room meets the legal size requirements to be considered a bedroom#After 6 hours he leaves Nick with a 38 step plan and a scheduled court date#I JUST THINK A LOT ABOUT how Miles was adopted as a kid and now Trucy is being adopted too at the same age#I think Miles would care fiercely about her getting the parental love and support he never got simply because she reminds him of him#girl who loves miles edgeworth “hmm i bet i could make this unrelated plot point relevant to miles edgeworth”#ace attorney#narumitsu#miles edgeworth#phoenix wright
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Leo getting hit with a truth curse but instead of forcing him to admit to super sad or worrying things it’s things like “it was me who broke the remote” “I saw Mikey prank Donnie and helped hide it because it’s way funnier if he didn’t know who it was” “I rip my clothes to look more like Raph’s because he’s really cool” “my stripes aren’t even red they’re pink!”
#rottmnt#rise of the teenage mutant ninja turtles#rottmnt leo#rise leo#plot twist he COULD be admitting angsty stuff but he’s pushing the less oof truths forward instead on purpose#raph: hey leo what do you want for dinner#leo: *about to bare his soul on all his internal torment but pivots* I’m afraid of snakes#(no but fr Leo’s stripes being technically more pink instead of red is cute ngl)#(a very reddish pink to the point that in certain lighting it looks red but at the base they’re p pink)#(i also am very fond of the idea that Leo doesn’t just have questionable taste in fashion he also just loves Raph a lot and looks up to him)#but yeah I think that something like this would be 99% Leo admitting to unimportant things or admitting to how much he values everyone#like they all KNOW Leo loves them and he’s talked them up enough for them to know but it’s different when he’s like#‘I just wanna read my comics with you guys around - it’s my favorite place to be’#or again just random bs that doesn’t REALLY have a lot of weight like#‘I like using my portals to prank random people around the world’#‘I’m worried about being a bad influence on hueso jr’#‘sometimes I kinda wanna see hypno’s plans succeed’#‘it’s been way too long since I found this out and honestly it’s embarrassing but I actually don’t have a di-‘#SORRY COULDNT HELP MYSELF#(<-but did u know that that pink rather than red observation actually ties into this headcanon as well if u know about red eared sliders)
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currently reading Sunrise on the Reaping and I wanted to cross-reference it with Catching Fire, and I came across this.
Haymitch in SOTR says that he only ever came second to Woodbine Chance in footraces, and he never misses the target when throwing knives in pre-Games training.
Haymitch in Catching Fire? can't do either of those things.
He's so freaking traumatized yall —
#I haven't even finished sotr#but I've seen some spoilers#and like.#suzanne collins really covered everything huh#hunger games#catching fire#katniss everdeen#peeta mellark#haymitch abernathy#sunrise on the reaping#you know I really wonder how suzanne collins wrote this book#like did she go back and look through CF to find details like this to plant in SOTR#or did she plant these details in CF knowing her plan#did she have a backstory fleshed out for haymitch#before writing sotr#because lots of people are pointing out woody harrelson in the movies now#acting like he knows some of these plot points#i mean#did collins give harrelson the scoop#or did she go back and look at the movie for details too#what was the process
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What to Do Once Things Are Planted?
This is my seventh post in a series I’ll be making on how to increase biodiversity on a budget! I’m not an expert--just an enthusiast--but I hope something you find here helps!

So you’ve gotten started on making a garden to boost biodiversity! 10/10, excellent work! So, now what?
First, you’ll need to keep watering the plants--especially if you’re going through a dry season. Native plants will be more acclimated to your area’s seasonal weather, but they’ll need a helping hand while they’re getting established--especially if you’re starting with young, tender seedlings. With that in mind, if you accidentally skip out on crucial watering days, don't panic! There's been tons of times where I haven't watered for an entire summer and had perennials come back the next spring! Even this year, during a heatwave, I completely did not water my swamp milkweeds, but they're already popping back up! You may also need to go in and weed, especially if you’re seeing invasive species popping up in the garden. Invasives are no good--if you do anything, do your best to get those out as effectively and safely as possible!
If you’re needing to maintain your shrubs in spring and summer, double check to make sure there are no active bird or insect nests within them. If it’s possible to wait until later to cut your shrubs, it could be extremely beneficial.

When fall and winter come around and your plants begin to die back, don’t cut them away if you can! Many insects overwinter in the plant stems left behind as perennials die back to the roots. In addition, birds will use seed heads as a source of food over the winter. Try not to clean things up until late winter/early spring, when other food sources are beginning to come back and things are growing again. By then, the insects should be waking up and leaving the plant stems as well.

However, don’t let this discourage you from collecting seeds! Collecting seed from your plants is a great way to continue gardening at low cost, as well as making friends and encouraging others to garden by trading seeds or offering them as gifts. If you're in an area where you do need to cut back, this is a great opportunity to collect the seeds and save them for the future. You could also cut back what’s dying in the front yard and keep things to overwinter in the backyard. Some overwintering habitat is better than no overwintering habitat.
Want to know how to collect seeds from specific plants? I've found YouTube to be a great source of info for this! Knowing what you're doing and when is key to getting a viable harvest.
As your mulch begins to break down, you’ll need to keep adding more to top it off, if you can. It can get a bit repetitive, but no worries--the mulch breaking down means your soil is improving!
If possible, add to your garden! Expand, add in new things, and keep encouraging the growth of native plants. If you couldn’t add that water feature in year one, see if you can in year two! New interest in birds? Add a birdhouse, or more bird feeders. Loving the butterflies? Add plenty more nectar-rich plants, or do more��research into what they lay their eggs on! Want more color? See what else you can add in! Came into some new pots to expand your flowerpot garden with? Find cool native plants to put in them! I always encourage people to start small and then expand over time, as opposed to starting big and getting overwhelmed.
Keep learning and observing native species of birds, insects, mammals, etc. See what’s coming to your yard now, and look into how you can improve things more for them on your budget. If you aren’t seeing what you were hoping, see if there’s other actions you can take that’ll attract what you’re hoping to see in your backyard habitat. Knowing more about the world around you makes it easier to know how to help the world around you. Talk to others about what you’re doing, the changes you’ve made, and the results you’ve seen! Curious neighbors? Work friends? Your closest homies? Your family? All fair game! You just might be the one who gets someone else interested in making their space a habitat for local wildlife!
That’s the end of this post! My next post is gonna be about the secret Other Thing you can do to help biodiversity--tackling invasives! Until then, I hope this advice was helpful! Feel free to reply with any questions, your success stories, or anything you think I may have forgotten to add in!
#biodiversity#solarpunk#gardening#outdoor gardening#ani rambles#out of queue#the biodiversity saga#at least it hasn't been 2 months since the last post amiright#i know its september so by this point a lot of northern hemisphere folks are winding down on gardening#buuuut winter's a good time to buy seeds for cheap! and for plotting and planning#and meanwhile the southern hemisphere will be just gearing up!#either way I hope this advice has been helpful so far!
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Wow, okay. Even if I hadn't known about Avatrice from tumblr, Ava's vibes with the women are impeccable. Four episodes in and her thing with J.C. is.... fine, i guess. But I swear she has more chemistry with Chanel, and they've had, what, two scenes together at this point?
#she's bonding with chanel over expressing themselves#she's got that rivals tension with lilith#and we've already started to see the seeds of budding mutual respect and trust with bea#and then j.c. is just. there#i think the problem is they're not building any kind of friendship with j.c.#imo all the best ships are either a foundation of friendship that becomes something more#or else an enemies-to-lovers situation where mutual respect is earned along the way#j.c. is obviously not enemies to lovers material and i don't really buy a friendship outside of the romantic interest#therefore it's just. less solid overall#which i suppose is the point since it seems like they were planning for avatrice from the beginning#j.c. seems to mostly be functioning as a plot beat for Ava's journey#a way for her to stumble and learn a little before she's ready for something serious#though to be fair he could have been a lot worse. standard male love interests over the years have been a lot worse#warrior nun#avatrice#ava silva#warrior nun spoilers
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i have been cooking an over-complicated roleswap au for. a VERY long time
#mix of tristamp/trimax where i cherry-pick my favorite plot points designs and characters to create the ultimate mess of an au#just how i like it#unfortunately ‘group of dysfunctional shitheads find themselves having to collaborate’ is one of my fav tropes of all time#it’s not a 1:1 roleswap#more of a. narrative role swap? place/purpose in the story moreso than actions#some are more straight-forward#others are based on vibes#knives and vash easy. legato and meryl easy. elendira and milly is more hand-wavy but it makes sense i swear#i asked myself “what would happen if they were in this scenario? how would it change if a diff personality handled it?#and how they were shaped differently by the world due to the slight shift in story#it’s a lot of fun! i’m enjoying planning it. will i ever write it? who knows!!#‘what are the ships’ ‘yes.’#you’ve heard of polygun now get ready for polygung#trigun#trigun stampede#trigun maximum#charlie’s art#millions knives#elendira the crimsonnail#legato bluesummers#livio the double fang#razlo the tri punisher of death#swap au#roleswap au#designs
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I'm so curious about your writing process, could you please shed some light on how you approach it?
Aside from already having a vision for the plot, do you have ideas about scenes you want to include and then write the chapters around them, so to speak? Or is it more like, "the goals of this chapter are to reach this and this checkpoint with each character," and fill in the blanks like that?
Sorry, I have no clue how writing is done, but I enjoy your writing so much that I really wanted to ask! 🐒
I don't recommend the way I write to anyone ever but to be honest, I go off of vibes a lot.
I have a vague outline in my notes with rough chapter numbers attached and pivotal moments that push the plot in different directions (the cheating reveal, who ???? is, the choices you can make in response to the cheating and starting a new route/what happens during them or choosing a career, the setting changing, mc's family appearing)
the rest is kind of improvised. I have a couple long scenes/convos written and saved in a doc and go from there but I've never been someone that managed to write a full chapter outline beforehand/went into details and stuck to them (I wish I did though lmao)
at the beginning of starting a new chapter I look at my IF outline and decide how far I want the plot to progress and how to make that happen. then I write down every new idea I have for a chapter at that moment and decide whether to shift a specific interview to a later chapter or if they should continue the tour then/how long they stay in a city and what happens during those scenes/what should be revealed about R and mc or any of the other ROs during one-on-one scenes/if a new character introduction makes sense.
editing is where I go in and take note of the details I included/side plots i should expand on and include them into my outline to remember later on! so the outline is kind of filled out as I write.
which is. bad. but it worked for all my projects so far and it hasn't failed me yet! :)
#asks#ik a lot of people adjust their outline as they write as well bc in the moment new scenes come to you#or you think of a better side plot but most my planning stays in my head#which is a habit i need to shake fr#bc the amount of emails i send myself a plot points to includ/rmr is ridiculous#tldr vibes. and an outline i fill out as I go
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Very random but I’ve been writing SteveTony/Superhusband things and based it on the Avengers Assemble (AA) universe (and MineVengers and Ultimate Spider-Man and Hulk and the Agents of S.M.A.S.H. but I digress since AA is the main focus lore-wise and the rest are taking parts of lore from single episodes or combining characters buuUut annyywaays) because yeees
Tony is plagued by nightmares and this worsens especially after returning back home after the events with the Beyonder (season 4). So much so that Steve promises to be the first person Tony sees when he wakes up from these nightmares. Sometimes Tony believes he is still in a nightmare, hallucinating, or has been kidnapped, where both Steve and Tony found the solution to instantly ground Tony is…ice cream flavors?
A bit of silly writing I did for a silly Avengers Assemble AU I am writing:
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“Neapolitan. Chocolate.” Steve said softly to him. Two words. Two very, comforting words.
“Chocolate. Butter pecan?” Tony replied instantly, moving back to look into those azure eyes as Steve nodded, replying ever so softly, “Isn’t it everybody’s?”
Tony laughed as he gently rested his forehead against Steve’s, who laughed with him. This wasn’t a nightmare, a vision. This was real. And Tony wasn’t kidnapped, he was back with Steve.
Their small exchange always grounded Tony, which may seem random to others, but it worked for the two. Instead of convincing Tony was not hallucinating or kidnapped, Steve would say Tony’s favorite ice cream flavor, neapolitan, and specify one of the three components, where they are listed in order from the last time it was mentioned. Tony would confirm and mention Steve’s favorite ice cream flavor, butter pecan. Steve would end it off with their own inside joke “Isn’t it everybody’s?”. Their code words have worked wonders for helping ground Tony.
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Basically, Steve doesn’t waste words trying to convince Tony that he’s alright. He just says Tony’s favorite life cream flavor, which starts the code words for the two. Steve always initiate and the times he doesn’t, Tony knows something is wrong. Like, if he was truly kidnapped, Tony blurting a random ice cream flavor to his captors would definitely stump them.
I have no idea if there is even an ounce of logic to this buuut it’s so silly so why not <3
#Sol Dial writing things#I do write..occasionally..hehe#I don’t know Tony’s favorite ice cream flavor in terms of AA#But I took Steve’s favorite flavor (butter pecan) from the season 3 episode hehehe#(Also also that line ‘Isn’t it everybody’s?’ is also from that AA episode heheh I can’t help myself :3)#(screeches since I love writing but terrified of how well my writing is)#(Like I could believe that DAMN I COOKED 🗣️ 🔥)#(But at the same time it’s so random and odd)#(There’s also the fact that most of my writing is plot based in my head that I planned but never started actually writing)#(And when I write it’s in a sudden burst of inspiration and I start writing 2K words or more in an hour)#(I found plotting/outlining to help a lot since it’s just silly then actually expanding on the plot points I’m more fond of)#Annyywaays woah random post hehe :3#SteveTony/Superhusbands#Iron Man#Tony Stark#Captain America#Steve Rogers
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i don't think enough people talk about how the backbone of nie huaisang's plan hinged heavily upon jin guangyao's low birth, and the jianghu's willingness to dogpile on such people.
nie huaisang is upper class. he's specifically stated in the novel as behaving more like the idle rich than like a distinguished second young master of one of the five great cultivation sects, but he's still an heir by birth. even if nie huaisang had been more openly caught, who would do anything to him?
wei wuxian notices that bicao's testimony was bought with a few shiny baubles— that nie huaisang was the one who bribed her with a nice bracelet for her testimony. he intentionally kept his own sect half dead, barely afloat for years, just to keep up the guise of an incompetent loser!
but the only actual consequence he's faced for such poor leadership that probably hurt a lot of common folks in his territory over 13 years is that people think nie huaisang is an annoying, useless crybaby. nie huaisang has a level of protection from consequences that jin guangyao had to fight much harder for (and that jin guangyao ultimately never truly got).
nie huaisang knew his own class and social position extremely well, and he knew how most people of that position behave and think. he was more than willing to use this in his revenge.
we know lan wangji is the type to use his wealth and position to do good for others. nie huaisang is the opposite— he's the type to use his wealth and position for himself and his own personal goals.
and this wasn't just something that started after his brother died! avoiding responsibilities, never carrying his sword, ignoring the fact that he wasn't honoring his sect or ancestors the way others wanted… his underground ring of selling porn as a teenager even got him out of the worst part of the wen indoctrination camps, because he bribed the wen cultivators overseeing everyone else.
my point is, nie huaisang is self-aware enough to know he doesn't really ever do the "right" thing! at no point in the story does he delude himself or others with grand ideals of how one ought to behave. he doesn't care.
unlike almost every single other upper class cultivator in the story— jiang cheng, jin zixuan, nie mingjue, lan xichen— who all think of themselves as righteous in a way, who are always able to justify their thoughts and actions, rarely if ever able to conceive of those thoughts and actions as flawed or wrong... nie huaisang KNOWS his own selfishness.
like lan wangji, nie huaisang recognizes that his class can easily be used as a shield to do whatever he wants. while lan wangji at worst uses this nifty privilege to silence people he doesn't like, refuse to explain himself in inconvenient situations, and bring wei wuxian along with him everywhere, nie huaisang uses it to shirk his duties for decades and tear jin guangyao apart in revenge.
jin guangyao being the son of a prostitute automatically amplifies bad rumors around him. bringing to light his incestuous marriage and the gruesome way he murdered his upper class father, however deserved, is obviously going to impact him in a way that someone higher class wouldn't be as hurt by. combining that with a final lie to get his sworn brother to stab him in a flash of doubt, and well...
is that good or righteous or just? no, of course not. nie huaisang doesn't spend any time pretending that his actions were conducted based on morality, or that he "had no choice".
nie huaisang just wanted to destroy jin guangyao, and damn did it feel good to finally do it.
#keri chats#nie huaisang#mdzs spoilers#mo dao zu shi#Nie Huaisang Is A Callous Careless Self-Aware Rich Man Who Weaponized His Social Class Against The Guy Who Killed His Brother#I LOVE NHS SO MUCH OKAY BUT I MIGHT GO CRAZY IF MORE PPL INSINUATE HES RIGHTEOUS OR ''GOOD'' LOLLLL#i mean yea girlboss!! but i rly hope ppl r aware nhs is a man who's purposely written to embody the worst aspects of cultivator society.#also his plan was Not a deep orchestrated plot he outlined key points and improv'd that shit as best he could LMAO#also just bc NHS gets away with what he does doesn't make him morally grey. the narrative doesn't consider him a good person.#he's just the one who came out on top by the end of the book#other things: im sure ppl easily see why i'd consider jc jzx & nmj as not self-aware rich folks but lxc is a lot more subtle and#occasionally self-pitying in how he depicts himself and his clan to make them always conveniently seem like the good guys#even when he's recounting the story of how he +33 elders drew their swords against his injured stubborn younger brother.#if u read this whole messy unorganized post and my tags i love u. if u agree with me i Love u.#mdzs#danmei
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I don't think anything will ever be funnier than Banesaw's first of his only two sentences being, "Finally, I get to kill a Schnee," knocking Weiss unconscious in a single hit, then just chucking her into the next room so Blake can save her

#rwde#forever giggling and exasperated by this train sequence#this could have been avoided if it had been BLAKE fighting Banesaw and far more interesting too#they (presumably) had HISTORY. HE WANTED TO DRAG HER BACK INTO THE FOLD. THIS COULDVE BEEN PERSONAL#and literally NOTHING came out of a white fang member meeting a schnee so what was the FUCKING POINT SHAWLUNA#YOU DIDNT EVEN TRY#also im like 99% sure banesaw is just yatsuhashis model w a mask#anyway wtf was that train plot eh? was the purpose solely to cause chaos and destruction? wtf was the goal?#seriously early rwby schemes feel so random. reminds me of mcu thanos oddly enough#the way both cinder and thanos bip bopped between destruction for destructions sake and Big Smart Plan with Big Purpose is uh. Bad#and for the exact same reason: there was no structure or forethought in the writing process#also both were written by shitty men. i will fight the russos in a parking lot with nothing but my teeth#they absolutely shouldve been fired after civil war. absolute dogshit#do not ask me abt my mcu opinions i will never stop screaming#edit: forgot banesaw opened for roman at the white fang recruitment meeting so he has FIVE lines not two#two out of five lines are abt members of rwby yet neither amt to anything. yeehaw
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been thinking about childhood friends au quite a bit the last couple days and i had an idea for the sequel that is giving me the emotional equivalent of the shark-chewing-on-its-computer gif and i want to yell about it but no one i talk to regularly has read my childhood friends au so they would have no idea what i'm talking about and i don't want to spoil a major plot point for anyone who follows me on this blog by yelling about it here 😩
#i miss discord sometimes but. sigh#my fics#it's nice to have a friend 'verse#rwrb#it would be a spoiler bc it's one of the plot points i get questions about a lot when people ask about the sequel in my comments#and i'm always like ''wait and see lol'' which up until now has secretly meant ''i don't actually know yet'' oops#i've been bouncing ideas around in my planning doc but i didn't have anything concrete#but now i'm like OOH WAIT THIS MIGHT BE PERFECT???#and i want to yell about it with someone who would be as hyped about it as me but alas 😔#my irl bestie would be hyped FOR me but she would also be confused lol#which is fair tbh we do that to each other with our respective fandoms a lot
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the fic has come together a bit, i think they fuck in chapter 7 which to me is a Slow Burn. hopefully the ending will also magically form properly in my mind. also it would be nice if i could sleep at some point.
#no one is having a good time in this fic yet but as far as i know there's a happy ending at some point.#i had to get up and type out the notes for the next 3 chapters which is good to have because i'd already wandered a bit from my plan.#i typed out what i could remember of the chapter 3 that formed in my head while i was trying to get to sleep#but i think i will have to risk forgetting the rest as my eyes are getting sore now and also there's a lot of yawning happening.#off to bed i go for up to an entire hour of sleep! hopefully i shall have several of those pathetic naplets with minimal waking in between!#i think chapter 7 is at least halfway i don't want to drag this thing out by adding drama that isn't already part of the plot.#fic related
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It’s a little sad that Jamil’s negative attitude towards his peers makes a lot of people think he’s just a shitty person (and don’t get me wrong, he is a jerk and an asshole)
But despite his general dislike of those around him, he still continually makes huge personal sacrifices for his family and Kalim.
There’s just a bit of selflessness in there even if it’s because it’s his job to care for others and not himself.
#i get he was trained to do this and it’s out of duty#but idk him sacrificing his safety and happiness for his family and Kalim’s saftey is a lot#for someone to eat poison and shield another from danger to act as a bodyguard#and even when he’s the one in danger he pushes Kalim out of harms way#his betrayal plot literally just leading to his death because he didn’t care what happened to him anymore#like he literally had no plan to continue past that point he knew that betraying kalim would be the death of him he just had enough#im probably not making sense and i know he isnt a well liked character by fandom but agsgdhhd#its just interesting that despite his gripes and complaining he still performs his duty without thinking#twst#jamil viper
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rest in peace cross duel, here are my fanmade cross duel gijinkas i did donkey months ago (these two are based off kraken and penguin, my favourite fluffal and frightfur!)
the dimensional dragons are all girls because i wanted them to match odd-eyes and i even cooked up a fantasy plot for them to be actors in (more in tags)
i had a vision of green hair girl to be a harem queen a la gudako so bad
#arc-v#yugioh arc v#yugioh arc-v#cross duel#kraken is a pirate and penguin is an ice-skater in training#hashtag fantasy zarc is of course the ruler of whatever country and odd-eyes is the favourite child and court jester#chicken understands that being underestimated is an opportunity to not have her every action monitored#iadk starvie does but she just plots around a lot (probably planning to overthrow her mom at some point tbh or is even behind everything)#dark rebellion serves zarc as the captain of a platoon or something and she realises that she really shouldn't#clear wing is the captain of the anti-zarc resistance and 'canonically' at some point cw imprisons dr and hits on her ^_^#may or may not have drawn said scene but only two souls on this earth have seen it#the finale features odd-eyes vs starvie (just like the anime wow)#can you tell i had the most passion for rebby#i also had a beta clear wing design where she was like this plucky king of bandits orphan#but her design was a little too modern and she had the criminal face mark and everything#and i much prefer to have an overarching story tying all of them together#character design is my passion (stares at the camera directly)
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also we are at the halfway point and like, nothing substantial has happened
#text post#we still haven't met the blonde lady either!#this is similar to s2 pacing problems#i feel like haolin has these really grand ideas and knows that he wants to get from point a to b#but has no idea how to like satisfyingly write the in between#so a lot of it ends up feeling like filler#idk just my opinion#it's...a tricky thing to balance#bc like if you want to make a story so plot heavy and filled with all these threads which may i remind you season 1 was NOT doing at all an#who knows if that was the plan all along or not#but anyway#if that's what you wanna do!!#it's not like filler DOESN'T have its place#it absolutely can be used to flesh out the world and characters etc etc#but that...doesn't feel like what's going on rn#it just doesn't feel like any of this was thought out#like steins;gate for example also spent a lot of time just chilling with its characters and exploring the dynamics and stuff#but like...all of that became relevant later iirc#whateverrrrr just me thinking thoughts#can't wait for next week! looks like some more plot to chew on
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