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I didn't really have a song in mind for Link to be playing in my ghiralink Orpheus and Eurydice fic—mostly just unnamed song in an unfamiliar language because that was easy lol—but I'm listening to Zelda music and I think it would be fun if it was Laruto's Lament :) it's a simple harp melody, and the lyrics are in Latin, which would call back to the Greco-Roman origin of the myth:
Ad idem, Ad infinitum
In memoriam, cor unum
vi et armis, vale
As is the same eternally
in memory, one heart
with strength and arms (weapons), farewell
The Latin isn't... great. Also I did the translation while listening to the song so I may be
If you look it up online the most popular translation is
Ad Idem (Of the same mind) *idk where they got mind from, and ad mean to/towards not of
Ad Infinitum (Without Limit)
In Memoriam (In memory)
Cor Unum (One heart)
Vi et Armis (By force and arms) *vi et armis is ablative, so it could be with or by, usually determined by context that doesn't exist here. This translation went for a darker interpretation
Vale (Farewell)
We share one mind
Time cannot bind us
Remember
The heart we share
Now the enemy arms destroy me
Farewell
Which isn't exactly what it's saying but works well enough!
#it fits the sequel I haven't written where Link and Ghirahim become permanent inhabitants of the temple#the sequel if from botw Zelda's pov visiting the spring of power and sws Link shows up as a spirit to guide her#because he was also 'late' in becoming the hero and seen as weaker than his previous counterpart(s)#but he succeeded#and he's kind of like. do you really want hylia to answer you? this action will have consequences#Ghirahim's there but sulking in his sword form for some reason. Link mentions him and warns Zelda that botw Link should avoid him#and it would get into what I set up from the previous fic about how Ghirahim can only be drawn by someone who is worthy and would except#the dark power without changing it#mostly it would be a link&zelda thing#I'm just thinking about sws Link who in an Orpheus/Eurydice situation took Ghirahim's curse on himself as well#and is now stuck with him forever but in like an underworld spirit-y kind of way#the spring of power being revered by Hylians as the place where Hylia trapped Demise's sword#because power is usually associated with ganondorf and therefore the hylians see it as bad#and sws Link there to tell all who come after him asking the gods for help to hurry up fate or change it or something#that it doesn't work#also I like the song#ghiralink
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I’m on board with the “Adar was/is Celeborn” theory purely because I want this crack exchange -
Adar/Celeborn: You cheated on me with Sauron!
Galadriel: Well you also cheated on me with Sauron so the scales are balanced
Adar/Celeborn: What?? In what-
Galadriel: You left me, your wife, for 1000 years, to have a family and children with him
Adar/Celeborn: Okay, well, you fell in love with him. Which means you weren’t even in love with me in the first place. Which is worse
Galadriel: YOU LITERALLY HAD HIS CHILDREN
Adar/Celeborn: You married me for all eternity wiTHOUT EVEN BEING IN LOVE WITH ME
High King Gil-Galad, to Elrond: Still think he’s fake and they’re not married?
Elrond: Oh no, I take it back, they’re definit- oh my god Galadriel do not challenge him to a duel there is nothing wrong with your womb gods above
#Galadriel: HOW WAS I SUPPOSED TO KNOW WHAT LOVE FELT LIKE IT ONLY HAPPENS ONCE#Adar/Celeborn: Well apparently it feels like a scruffy lost king that doesn’t even EXIST#Galadriel: MY children wouldn’t have stabbed you to death#Adar/Celeborn: SHUT UP#my desire to turn rings of power into a comedy is strong#it also legitimately feels like the only path where you don’t feel bad for Celeborn#because they both abandoned the other for Sauron#and they both are equally obsessed with killing him#also Adar was way way too weird around Galadriel for it to be normal#and you can’t set up and feed an entire relationship between the two just to kill him#they were literally more interesting than all the Galadriel Elrond stuff#the parallels and mutual understanding#who better to help her heal from the darkness infecting her than someone who was also changed by Saurons darkness#it also means you get both Celeborn and Sauron in the story without forfeiting the relationship Galadriel has with either#rop spoilers#rop season 2#rop#galadriel#galadriel/sauron#galadriel/halbrand#gil galad#elrond#sauron#adar rings of power#rings of power#celeborn#adar#oh context elves can only fall in love once#so Galadriel cannot have been in love before if she fell for Halbrand#which is a huge yikes for Celeborn lmao
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OC again gomen ... (her name is Yuma)
#my characters#she was (shocking to no one) a side character in a plot from forever ago and while i fleshed out her bg a LOT#she never got her own actual story ? the plot she was in had a lot of characters so her and her best friend myo were like... cameos#in other character arcs rip to she having her own#basically she had light powers and had a kind of whispy clear happy look (top)#and then the big bad guy corrupted her and she got dark powers#so myo and her start to think she is sick and then big bad shows up and tells myo that if he wants to help yuma - hed help#so he manipulates the two into working for the bad guys who id like to point out! think they're the good guys#so yuma keeps having cloudy and foggy memories and nightmares and she doesnt understand whats going on with her#and she tells myo who hasnt clued in yet and he tells her shes fine and shes too nice to do what she feels guilty for#and then after its all kinda said and done and the big bad dies the corruption disappears bc he was the one causing it#and at that point myo knows the horrible things hes kind of helped yuma do and the actual things yuma has done#and he goes to rem who a lot of people avoid since rem has mind reading and memory manipulation powers#and he asks if rem can help yuma forget everything bad#and rem - who is the unfortunate right hand of the big bad who feels so much guilt for everything he has done -#asks him if its what yuma wants cause it isnt his place to change it without her consent as well#bc rem was actually the one that yuma interacted with most outside of myo#but as far as actual plots and arcs rem was more important ? common? idk ? as a focus#so despite yuma having a lot of established background and drama she never had her own ... thing#but as the dark corruption gets to her she loses the clear stream vibes and is like an oozing oil spill#and it kinda festers into her becoming like an eldritch monster type being from the grief and guilt her conscious has#while polluted by darkness sooooo#she just kinda becomes a monster in the background of the plot its fine she gets better#and that was storytime in the tags bye
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I don’t have beef with ascended astarion on a moral level (lord knows I’d be a hypocrite) but every time I see someone romancing him uncritically I become the biggest “I hope jakey fucking dies” lesbian in the universe
#bg3#not putting full fandom tags on cause I don’t want to get eaten alive#am I a hypocrite? why yes! thanks for asking#I’m all for dark romance but when one partner has full bodily control over the other without any hope of that changing I tune out#the astarion romance is in large part about power dynamics and while imbalance is inherently subjective it’s clearly visible#both in the lead up (someone holds the means of survival over you) and in the ascendant ending (with the positions flipped)#when people refuse to interrogate it and turn it into some romantasy book I get really disappointed.#no shade to people who do study it#or are just massive 24 power exchange subs#again nothing morally wrong#but it annoys me
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i can tell when my mental health is getting bad because I always start hyperfixating on stolas again
#woof#owl in a cage you show your age your sweetness has gone foul#without a change you're lost exhausted by your time on stage#and you walked in my room and like sparks in the dark life was suddenly thrilling and new#what's between you and I just a comfortable lie I'm the fool who believes when you look in my eyes#prince all alone upon your throne your power is so frail#you raise your voice you have no choice inside your gilded jail
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Jadus lost his flesh long ago. He can take any form he so chooses, as long as it is warped by the Dark Side; shadow oozes out of the holes in his mask, his limbs elongating, his body a crack in the void. Fear changes him, and fear makes him different than he appears both before mortal eyes and in lasting memory. Fear makes him larger than life-- there is no corner of the psyche he cannot fill, no shape too terrifying he cannot become. He is fear itself, nebulous, changing, twisted, sticky and stinking as oil, a rot in the hive. Jadus is the man who walks among us. Jadus is the thing that walks among men. Jadus is Jadus.
#swtor#ooc#more poetic ramblings#i always laugh nervously when it comes to discussing my version of jadus#because mine is a Being and not so much a person#a genderless entity who seems to not care being called he#but something that preys on fear#a being of the void irreparably changed by the dark side#there is nothing beneath that mask inside that body#it is all darkness and bleached bones#ink as blood and exposed marrow#his connection to fear is so strong that he eventually takes on the appearance of what would scare you most#contained quietly inside that iron maiden he calls armor#either way. I think you can tell my idea of him isn't much of a person at all. but his principles remain.#only something so removed from us could find the most insignificant souls to be so interesting#a sith who hates his kind. who is above them. who cares not a lick for the force in others. but he loves those without power#like ants in a jar he carefully dissects.
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Re-tag drop: Yelan
#tag drop#[ yelan. ] i can't change the facts. but if it's a choice between the cold; hard truth and blissful unawareness: i'll take the former.#[ yelan: ic. ] that's a worst-case scenario. but all too often; the most pessimistic speculation turns out to be the closest to the truth.#[ yelan: inquiries. ] oh? you'd like to know more about me? what will you give in exchange then?#[ yelan: countenance. ] an old friend of mine once privately commented to me that ] yelan “is always smiling; but never with her eyes.”#[ yelan: introspection. ] like a phantom she appears in various guises at the center of events; and disappears before the storm stops.#[ yelan: wishes. ] that which hides inside her… that constant calling; it is the blood of heroes which has been howling for 500 years.#[ yelan: etc. ] every round of finger-guessing is a tiny adventure; and every roll of dice sends sporadic thrills down her spine.#[ yelan: liyue. ] liyue will never plunge into disaster without clue of the danger like it once did. she will see that it is not unprepared#[ yelan: home. ] i'm guessing you've fallen for the rumors about me being very wealthy; having high demands for my standards of living?#[ yelan: yanshang. ] the teahouse has really brightened up after the boss took over and kicked the fatui and gamblers out.#[ yelan: lantern rite. ] every year on this day; the lanterns light up the night. may the fire never die and may humanity endure.#[ yelan: chasm. ] perhaps she will plunge into that darkness one day; and the ill fate that once befell her ancestors shall find her too.#[ yelan: scope. ] i serve ningguang. the tianquan of the qixing. the scope of my work includes some of liyue's biggest secrets.#[ yelan: weaponry. ] water. divided it is as streams uncounted: close yet untangled. united it is as a giant wave: inexorable; unstoppable.#[ yelan: wriothesley. ] don't fight over fleeting gains or losses. focus on where your heart is leading you and move forward. [ delusionaid#[ yelan: uncle tian. ] there's nothing wrong with wanting to win other people's respect. but when has uncle tian looked down on anyone?#[ yelan: ningguang. ] we both made a mistake: we shouldn't have involved ordinary folk in what we do. / ordinary folk?#[ yelan: xiao. ] you think you're oh-so cold and ruthless. i'm not buying it. - losing one of us so the rest can escape? some victory that#[ yelan: keqing. ] if something happens that they didn't anticipate; it throws their plans into oblivion. but the yuheng is different.#[ yelan: ganyu. ] i could never work non-stop like she does. certainly not at that level of efficiency. i guess being half-adeptus has its#[ yelan: yanfei. ] when i help her out; i always get some invaluable leads in return. gotta say though: i think she respects me a little mu#[ yelan: traveler. ] you don't have to be on guard around me. i never scheme against people who have my stamp of approval.#[ yelan: v. youth. ] you're still young. be patient. believe in yourself; and don't look outside yourself to prove your value.#[ yelan: v. pre-qixing. ] i don't do these things to help the powerful or mighty get rid of dissident forces. but because water too has a s#[ yelan: v. qixing. ] seeing isn't always believing. and if you can't trust your eyes; you certainly can't trust rumors.#[ yelan: meta. ] the chances are if i open this door; there can be no witnesses left alive. is that a sufficient reason for you?
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You who's studying abroad in the UK where you have a one night stand with Ghost at a bar; it's a special night for the soldiers and he gets lucky after making you laugh by telling a shitty joke thanks to the liquid confidence in you. You ask his name, and he tells you there's no need — that you'd forget by the end of the night.
Taking you back home, there was no time wasted. The man practically has you seeing stars. He pumps you full of cum, whispers absolute filth in your ears and leaves bruises on your thighs by the time it's all over. He at least cleans you up, gives you proper aftercare before disappearing while your still fucked out of your mind.
Anyways, a great night. perfect 10/10, you have a story to tell your girls. So, your life continues on track as normal, right?
Wrong!
You dream of him. You have countless dreams of him. They were graphic reenactments of that night. His stubble rubbing against your cheek, his lust-filled eyes burning into yours even in the darkness. And oh, his voice - deep and confident - the very reason why you were drawn to him in the first place.
He creeps into your dreams every single night without fail, so much so that it frustrates you. surely not because you were soaking wet afterwards, no, no, it was only because he was so annoying! Surely it wasn't because you’d end up pumping your fingers in and out your soaked cunt for hours in hopes of recreating that mindblowing orgasm he'd given you only to fail each time.
After your 10th failed attempt to cum, you crack asking the friend who took you out to the bar in the first place if she knew who the soldier was and she claims her boyfriend does. You've met Kyle before, he's a handsome man with dreamy eyes and a gentleman's demeanor.
Kyle tells you he'd pass the word back to his lieutenant, but he's a busy man who doesn't stay in one place. There's no guarantee he'd even respond.
Lucky you, screwing a lieutenant who probably doesn't remember who you are or won't have the time to find out.
The waiting game painfully starts all while the dreams continue. Each torturous night leaves you more and more agitated than before. By the 4th night, you already embraced the restlessness sure to come when the vibration of your phone changes everything.
Directly on the home screen was a text from an unknown number. There was no name, but you had a feeling who it was based on the message.
“Keep the front door unlocked for me.”
A/N I wrote this during hurricane francine when my power went out, I think she gave me superpowers. Idk I'll start flying tmr!!
P2 here
#cod x reader#call of duty#simon ghost riley x reader#ghost x you#simon ghost riley#simon riley#simon ghost x reader#simon ghost riley x you#simon riley x reader#sunshine sunni#call of duty smut
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💀 Making Your Villain Make Sense (Without Making Them Right™)
("because if I see one more war criminal with a sad diary entry get a redemption arc, I’m gonna throw my laptop.")
Here’s the thing: your villain doesn’t need to be redeemable. But they do need to make sense.
And I mean sense beyond "they’re evil and they monologue about it." Or “they have a tragic past, so now they do murder <3.” Or “they were right all along, the hero just couldn’t see it 🥺.”
Let’s fix that.
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🧠 STEP ONE: BUILD A LOGIC SYSTEM THAT ISN’T OURS Your villain shouldn’t just be wrong, they should have their own internal system that works for them. Morally flawed? Absolutely. But coherent.
Ask yourself:
What do they value more than anything? (Power? Order? Loyalty? Vengeance?)
What do they believe about the world, and how did they get there?
What fear drives them? What future do they think they’re trying to prevent?
The villain doesn’t need to know they’re wrong. But you should.
Make their logic airtight. even if it’s awful. Give them cause and effect.
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👿 STEP TWO: STOP GIVING THEM THE BETTER IDEOLOGY Listen. I love a “morally gray” moment as much as anyone. But if your villain is making all the good points and the hero’s just like “no because that’s mean,” your arc is upside down.
If your villain is critiquing injustice, oppression, or inequality, make sure their methods are the problem, not their entire worldview.
✖︎ WRONG: Villain: “The ruling class is corrupt.” Hero: “That’s not nice.”
✔︎ RIGHT: Villain: “The ruling class is corrupt, so I’m burning the city and everyone in it.” Hero: “So you’re just… committing genocide now?”
Your villain can touch a real issue. Just don’t let them be the only one talking about it, or solving it with horror movie logic.
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🔪 STEP THREE: GIVE THEM POWER THAT COSTS THEM The best villains lose things too. They’re not just untouchable horror dolls in sexy coats. They make bad choices and pay for them. That’s where the drama lives.
Examples:
They isolate themselves.
They sacrifice people they love.
They get what they want, and it destroys them.
They know they’re the monster, and choose it anyway.
If your villain can kill a dozen people and feel nothing, that’s not scary. That’s boring. Let them bleed. Let them regret it. Let them double down anyway.
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🧱 STEP FOUR: MAKE THEM PART OF THE WORLD, NOT OUTSIDE IT Villains shouldn’t feel like they were patched in from another genre. They should be part of the world’s logic, culture, class system, history. They should reflect something about the setting.
Villains that slap:
The advisor who upheld the regime until they decided they deserved to rule.
The noble who’s using war to reclaim stolen legacy.
The ex-hero who thinks the system can’t be saved, only reset.
The priest who truly believes the gods demand blood.
They’re not just evil, they’re a product of the same world the hero is trying to save.
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👁 STEP FIVE: SHOW US THEIR SELF-JUSTIFICATION You don’t need a tragic backstory™. But you do need to show us why they think they’re right. Not just with exposition, through action.
Let us watch them:
Protect someone.
Choose their goal over safety.
Justify the unjustifiable to a character who loves them.
Refuse to change, even when given a chance.
A villain who looks into the mirror and goes “Yes. I’m correct.” is 1000x scarier than one who sobs into a journal and says “I’m so broken 🥺.”
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🧨 BONUS ROUND: DON’T MAKE THEM A HATRED MEGAPHONE Especially if you’re writing marginalized characters: don’t let your villain become a mouthpiece for slurs, abuse, or extremism just to make them “evil enough.” That’s lazy. And harmful.
You don’t need real-world hate speech to build a dark character. You need power, consequence, and intent.
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TL;DR: Good villains don’t need to be right. They need to be real. Not a vibe. Not a sad boy in a trench coat. Not a trauma monologue and then a sword fight. They need logic. They need cost. They need to scare you because you get them, and still want them to lose.
Make them dangerous. Not relatable. Make them whole. Not wholesome. Make them make sense.
—rin t. // thewriteadviceforwriters // villain critic. final boss consultant. licensed chaos goblin
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Eight has a lot of facets, but I'm still fascinated by his role as the shepherd to Jadus' flock--or the iteration of him where he accidentally becomes cult leader for the remnants of Jadus' followers after the war with Zakuul. In a meta context, he sees himself as the person necessary to test and guide all servants of Jadus in an effort to gather them all in one place and create a united understanding of the will of their master, though he initially is reluctant to even associate with Jadus' other underlings. Even as a retired 'Hand', he makes it his life's mission to interpret what Jadus left behind, becoming a sort of paranormal investigator for the life and works of this mysterious sith lord, as well as de facto leader of his followers who lacked guidance after Jadus' disappearance into seclusion.
One could call him the missing link to Jadus himself.
#do you ever inherit your boss' mission to change the empire while he haunts your narrative#do you also end up inheriting everything he ever owned with not even a footnote on what to make of it#do you spend your life braving the darkness of his mysteries to make use of it for the betterment of mankind#are you determined to face unimaginable terrors and questions to use the power of someone long gone and change a galaxy that has forgotten#both you and him#are you prepared to question why he left you behind#swtor#ooc#i'm just restating what i said about the bride of jadus#but his role is so important. in a way he does inherit his authority (what remains of it) to make lasting change#but not in the way he imagined#ALSO CRYPTIC INTERACTIONS WITH OTHER HANDS#when jadus leaves you high and dry and the mysterious other servant you didn't know about asks if you wanna solve jadus mysteries together#he's his lorekeeper the shepherd to his flock the caretaker of his life#he patiently waits for his return--even if that never comes#whatever. whatever#it's just. he's willing to lead others by the hand if they share something. but he's incapable of that without that connection#to this greater mystery that they all call jadus#or maybe. it's because he knows naught else in the absence of 'fear'
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LAVENDER'S BLUE
summary: You weren’t supposed to be seen. But one night, one dance, and one stolen look from a boy you didn’t know was a prince changes everything. Now the kingdom is looking for you—and you have to decide if you’re brave enough to be found.
pairing: prince charming! gojo saturo x cinderella! male reader
content warnings: 18+, romance, fluff, angst, smut (oral + p in a), bottom male reader, signs of abuse, reader has chronic back pain, rats.
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There’s a quiet to the attic that doesn’t exist anywhere else in the house.
It settles after midnight, when the girls are done with their games and their laughter has thinned to silence. When your stepfather’s footsteps stop echoing through the halls. When the fire burns low and the wine is gone, and there’s no one left to perform cruelty for.
It’s only then that the house exhales—and you can breathe.
You sit on the floorboards beside the bucket you haven’t emptied yet. The rag in your hands is damp, skin-roughening with soot. It’s not a real task, not something that anyone told you to do. You just needed something to keep your hands busy. Something that gives shape to the hours between darkness and dawn.
Your fingers are raw. Your knees ache. There’s ash on your sleeves and a splinter in your thumb, but you don’t mind. The attic is cold, yes, but it’s yours. Or at least—it's the one place no one else bothers to climb. That counts for something.
You glance toward the slanted window tucked beneath the roofline. The sky is silver. Cloudless. The moon stares back at you like it knows something you don’t.
You lower your eyes before it can say anything out loud.
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There are mice in the attic. They keep their distance.
You’ve never named them—not out loud—but they come and go often enough that you’ve started to recognise them. One of them is missing a patch of fur behind the ear. One always carries crumbs bigger than its body. One skitters in tight circles before settling, like it needs to outrun its own shadow.
You think they must be cold too. Winter came early this year, and the insulation in the upper floors is barely more than memory. The girls have fireplaces and velvet robes. You have a blanket that smells like dust and the long sleeves of your mother’s old shirt, which you’re not supposed to wear but do anyway, under your tunic. Hidden. Just for warmth.
Sometimes, the mice come closer when you hum under your breath. You pretend it’s a coincidence.
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The house used to be warm. You remember it that way—brief flashes of your mother’s hands kneading dough in the kitchen, her voice humming off-key while she watered the herb pots by the windows. Back then, the floors didn’t creak like they were grieving, and sunlight used to touch the corners of the room without shame.
Now, it’s Geto’s house. Not in name, maybe, but in power. His daughters move through the rooms like they were born from silk and contempt. They call you by your name when they need something scrubbed, but otherwise, you’re “him.” Or worse.
You used to try to win them over. You tried for a long time.
And then you stopped.
Now you keep your head down and your back straight. You work quickly, quietly. You sleep with your door locked. You speak only when spoken to, and not even always then.
There is safety in silence.
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The announcement comes over burnt toast and tea that tastes like bark.
You’re not meant to sit at the table, but Mimiko was too distracted by her own reflection this morning to complain, and Geto likes to pretend he doesn’t see you unless he’s scolding you. You’ve learned to drift along the edges of the room—quiet, invisible, but still useful.
“There’s to be a royal ball,” Geto says, flipping the parchment open with a lazy flick of his fingers. “Every eligible noble and commoner invited. Apparently, the prince is looking to marry.”
You don’t react. You butter the toast without looking up.
Nanako lets out a delighted gasp. “A royal ball! Father, we’ll go, won’t we? We’ll need gowns. Jewels. A carriage—”
��Slow down, sweetheart,” Geto replies, folding the parchment again. “There’ll be time.”
“He shouldn’t go,” Mimiko chimes in suddenly, her voice sickly sweet. “He’ll be there. Can you imagine?” She turns to you with a sharp smile. “You, in the presence of royalty? You’d embarrass the kingdom.”
There’s a pause. Just long enough for the moment to sting.
You don’t look at her. You nod, eyes fixed on your plate. You’ve become good at that—at swallowing down every little hurt before it blooms.
“That’s settled then,” Geto says, as if he were the one being mocked. “He stays home.”
You don’t ask who’ll clean the house before they leave. You already know.
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That night, you find yourself standing at the attic window again, forehead pressed to the glass.
It’s a habit you picked up as a child—watching the moonlight slip across the world while you imagined someone, anyone, looking back.
You used to tell yourself that one day, someone would. That someone would see you and know you. Not as a servant. Not as an afterthought. But as a person with a name, and a voice, and a heart that beats just as loudly as anyone else’s.
You don’t really believe that anymore.
But you watch the moon anyway.
Just in case.
The morning after the announcement, the house becomes unbearable.
There are fabric samples strewn across every chair. Shoeboxes lining the hallway. Perfumed letters arriving by raven—twice, even thrice a day. Mimiko and Nanako move through the rooms like glittering tornadoes, screeching over colour palettes and necklines, screaming at seamstresses who pretend not to flinch.
You scrub the floors while they argue about lace.
They barely notice you anymore. You’re just the shape that keeps the house polished. A pair of hands. A name they speak only when something’s spilt.
You try not to mind.
You’ve had practice.
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Geto brings in a mirror the size of a door and installs it in the dining room. “For fittings,” he says, waving off the servants as if he weren’t one once himself.
He stands behind his daughters as they twirl and pout, appraising them like fine art he expects someone else to purchase. He corrects posture. Adjusts wrists. Tells Mimiko she’s standing like a peasant. Tells Nanako she’s gaining weight.
You fold linens in the corner and try not to breathe too loudly.
He never looks at you. But you feel his disapproval anyway. It clings to your skin like ash.
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The day of the ball arrives like frost.
You wake before the sun, dress in silence, and sweep the staircases before anyone else opens their doors. There’s a rhythm to it now—scrub, rinse, repeat. The ache in your spine is familiar and comforting in its own small way. Pain, at least, is consistent.
By noon, the house smells like citrus oil and powdered sugar. The dresses are hung. The carriage is polished. Everything is perfect.
Except for you.
You stand by the front hall with the box of hairpins still in your hands as Geto makes his final inspection.
He nods once, satisfied. Then turns to you.
“You’ll stay here,” he says flatly. “Don’t open the windows. Don’t leave the house. And for heaven’s sake, stay out of sight.”
You nod. Of course.
The carriage pulls away.
And just like that—you’re alone again.
⋆。°✩
You don’t cry.
You’re not a child anymore. You don’t believe in being rescued, and you don’t believe in magic. This world is a hard, cold thing, and there’s no use wishing it weren’t.
Still.
You wander through the empty rooms with the kind of quiet you imagine the dead must carry. Your hands drag across polished bannisters, past doorknobs and glass and velvet cushions that were never meant for you.
In the sitting room, a single slice of cake sits abandoned on a tray.
You don’t touch it.
Instead, you climb the stairs. Past the bedrooms. Past the locked study. All the way up to the top. To the attic. To the place you belong.
And when you close the door behind you, the weight settles over your shoulders like it always does—familiar and heavy.
But tonight, it feels just a little bit heavier.
Maybe because you let yourself imagine it.
Just for a moment.
⋆。°✩
The sound comes just before nightfall.
A knocking—no, not quite. More like a sharp pop, a crack of air and wind and something older than both. It echoes, muffled, through the floorboards beneath your feet.
You freeze.
It happens again. Then silence.
You step cautiously toward the window, half expecting thunder, or maybe fireworks from the palace.
But the sky is clear. The world is still.
And the only thing staring back at you is the moon.
⋆。°✩
The sound doesn’t come again.
You wait for it. Still, as the dust motes floated in the dying light. Ears strained. Eyes fixed on the floor, as if the silence might shift again, rupture again, give you some kind of sign.
But there’s nothing.
Just your own breath. Just the wind outside, curling soft fingers against the attic window. Just the ache in your knees, the sting in your wrists. The familiar weight of another evening with nowhere to go.
You stand there for a long time.
You think—maybe you imagined it.
Maybe that’s just what happens, when hope slips through the cracks of your ribs and you don’t catch it in time.
You move to sit down.
That’s when the second knock comes.
Not from below. Not from outside. But from within the attic.
From behind the wall.
You freeze.
Not a ghost. You don’t believe in those.
Not a thief. What kind of thief breaks into the attic?
There’s a creaking, low and almost…exhausted. Like the wood itself is trying to speak. Like something ancient is being disturbed, pulled awake by the wrong hands.
And then—
A sigh.
You swear you hear a sigh.
Soft. Dry. Slightly annoyed.
“Alright,” comes a voice. Flat. Unimpressed. “That’s enough dramatics. Move.”
You backpedal so fast you knock over the bucket.
The rag hits the floor with a slap. Water spills into the cracks between the boards. You don’t even look at it. You’re too busy staring at the corner of the attic that had definitely been empty before.
It isn’t empty now.
There’s a woman.
Or—at least you think she’s a woman. Her robes are a little too long and mismatched, and there’s a cigarette tucked between her fingers despite the fact that the chimney doesn’t reach this far. Her boots are muddy. Her expression is somewhere between world-weary and mildly inconvenienced.
She looks like she’s been late to every appointment she’s ever had and hasn’t felt guilty about a single one.
And she’s standing in your attic like she owns it.
You open your mouth to speak.
She beats you to it.
“Don’t scream,” she says, not unkindly. “You’ll scare the mice.”
You don’t scream.
You don’t move either.
Which is probably for the best, because she’s already walking toward you like this is normal. Like you’re the one intruding.
“I was aiming for the cellar,” she mutters. “But nooo, the magic said ‘aim for the heart of the house,’ and look where that got me. Dust in my lungs and you looking like you’ve seen a ghost.”
You finally manage to find your voice. Sort of.
“Who—”
“Shoko,” she says, waving a hand as if that answers anything. “Let’s skip the dramatic introductions, yeah? I’m on a deadline.”
You stare.
She exhales through her nose, then gives you the same look someone might give a plant that’s taking too long to grow.
“You’re him,” she says, lighting the cigarette with a flick of her fingers. No flint. No match. Just…fire, like it was waiting for her.
You don’t answer.
“Don’t do that,” she says. “Don’t look at me like you’ve never seen someone make a dramatic entrance before. I thought all you attic-dwelling waifs lived for theatrics.”
You shake your head slowly. “I don’t know who you are.”
Shoko tilts her head.
“Well, no,” she says. “Not yet.”
⋆。°✩
“You’ve got the look,” she says, nudging a cobweb out of the way with the back of her hand. “The quiet sort. Watches windows. Hums to keep from screaming.”
You’re still not speaking.
She sits down without asking. Cross-legged right on the attic floor like she wasn’t conjured into existence five seconds ago. Her cigarette smoke spirals toward the beams and settles around her like a crown of ash.
“I know what this is,” you finally say, voice quiet. “You’re a dream.”
Shoko snorts. “God, I wish.”
You don’t answer. The bucket of water seeps closer to your heel, a cold bloom against the wood. You stare at it. At her.
She doesn’t blink.
“I’m not here to hurt you,” she says, softer now. Not gentle, but closer. Like she’s trying. “I’m here to help.”
You shift your weight. Not quite toward her. Not quite away.
“Why?”
She flicks ash from the tip of her cigarette. It disappears before it hits the ground.
“Because you deserve it.”
You blink.
She goes on. “I’m not saying that in the philosophical, vague-fairy-tale sense. I mean it in the plain, unromantic, real-world way. You’ve done the work. You’ve survived. You’ve kept your heart from going sour even when it would’ve been easier to let it rot.”
You laugh. It’s small and brittle.
“I don’t think anyone would call me kind.”
“I didn’t say kind,” she says. “I said whole. You still have a piece of yourself that no one’s broken. That’s more than most.”
She says it so casually that it takes you a second to understand she meant it as a compliment.
You don’t know what to do with that.
You sit, slowly. She watches, but doesn’t comment.
The floor creaks beneath you. The attic is very still.
She speaks again. “Do you want to leave?”
It’s such a simple question.
Do you want to leave?
You stare at her. Your tongue feels thick.
“I can’t.”
She shrugs. “Didn’t ask if you could.”
You swallow.
“I want—” you start, then stop. “I don’t know what I want.”
“Sure you do,” she says, ashing the cigarette onto nothing. “You’ve just been taught not to say it.”
Your hands twist in your lap. She waits.
You say it like it hurts.
“I want to go. Just once. I want to be in a room where no one looks at me like I’m something to step over. I want to be wanted, just for a night. I want to know what it feels like to be seen.”
Shoko nods.
You stare at her. “That’s stupid, isn’t it?”
“No,” she says. “That’s a wish.”
⋆。°✩
The air shifts.
It’s subtle—but you feel it. Like the attic exhales again, but this time with purpose. Something loosens in the walls, in the dark, in the shadows that have been your only company for years.
Shoko stands.
She snuffs out her cigarette on her palm. No mark. No burn.
When she speaks again, her voice is something older.
Not louder. Not deeper. But ancient. Measured. Like the moment you speak it aloud, it’ll echo.
“Then let’s give you your night.”
⋆。°✩
She doesn’t wave a wand.
There’s no burst of glitter, no chorus, no sudden wind that tosses your hair back and makes your heart race. Nothing theatrical. Nothing pretty.
Instead, Shoko simply raises one hand—palm open—and exhales.
And the attic breathes with her.
The shadows bend first. Not away from the light, but toward it, curling like they’re waking up from a long sleep. The corners of the room soften, then blur, then ripple like heat above flame. Your breath catches in your throat.
There’s a sound, like thread pulling from cloth. And then—
Light. Dim at first. Then rising, warm and heavy like honey poured slow over your skin.
You don’t flinch.
You can’t.
It wraps around you. Not tight. Not painful. But thorough. Like it’s measuring. Weighing. Choosing.
Your shirt dissolves at the cuffs. Not burns—dissolves, the fabric unspooling into the air like mist. You lift your hands, startled, and they don’t feel like your hands anymore.
Shoko hums. “You’re lucky. Some people resist it. You—you’re letting it in.”
You blink at her, mouth dry. “Letting what in?”
She looks at you then, really looks, and says:
“Yourself.”
⋆。°✩
The clothes build themselves, stitch by stitch.
It starts at your collarbones—warmth, pressure, then silk. Deep charcoal, almost black, but edged in silver so fine it could be moonlight. It fits perfectly, even before it finishes forming. Like it knew the shape of you before you did.
The sleeves wrap next—long, smooth, elegant. A flash of something translucent near the cuffs. Not ruffles, but something more fluid, like smoke in fabric form.
A jacket follows. Trimmed with silver thread, small accents that catch the dying light from the attic window. The kind of detail no mirror would ever see, but someone who was looking at you—really looking—might.
Your boots reform around your feet. Soft. Sleek. Practical enough to run in, but elegant enough to be remembered.
You don’t know how to breathe.
Shoko watches.
The final piece is a brooch—small, just over your heart. A pin in the shape of a crescent moon. Not garish. Not royal. Just… honest.
“I don’t understand,” you murmur, voice catching.
She doesn’t smile, but her voice is kind when she answers. “You don’t have to. Just wear it like you do.”
⋆。°✩
The light fades.
The attic returns.
But you don’t.
You’re still you, but taller somehow. Straighter. Shoulders set. Like the weight hasn’t disappeared—but you’ve finally grown strong enough to carry it.
Your hands shake.
You press them against your chest. The fabric beneath your fingertips is real.
“I’m not supposed to be there,” you whisper.
Shoko flicks her cigarette back into her fingers and lights it with a snap.
“You’re supposed to be wherever you want to be,” she replies. “And tonight? You’re going.”
⋆。°✩
You turn toward the attic stairs.
“Wait,” she says, and you freeze.
She tosses something into your hands.
Shoes.
Polished leather. Silver-buckled. Sleek, precise. The kind of shoes made for palace floors, not soot-stained attics. You run your thumbs over them. They’re real. Solid. One is slightly warmer than the other, like it’s holding onto something the world hasn’t seen yet.
“Enchanted?” you ask softly.
Shoko exhales smoke through her nose. “One of them.”
You blink. “Just one?”
She shrugs. “You only need one to be remembered.”
⋆。°✩
The carriage waits at the edge of the estate.
It wasn’t there before. You would’ve heard it. Seen it. But now it sits beneath the moonlight like it’s always belonged—quiet, waiting, wheels perfectly clean despite the muddy road.
You don’t ask questions.
Shoko didn’t explain where it came from, and you didn’t ask.
You step down from the attic, cross the now-silent halls in a suit that doesn’t touch the floor when you move. The house doesn’t know you anymore. The wallpaper doesn’t sneer. The stairs don’t groan in protest. Even the silence has changed—it watches you now, instead of swallowing you whole.
You don’t look back.
Not at the staircase. Not at Geto’s study. Not at the kitchen where you used to stand barefoot and bleeding. That life still lives here, but you’ve stepped out of its skin.
For one night.
The coachman doesn’t speak. He tips his hat. The door opens. You climb in.
And the wheels turn toward the palace.
It’s farther than you thought.
You’ve seen it only from a distance—sharp spires against the horizon, gold-glass windows catching the sun like a promise. But up close, it’s something else entirely. Too large. Too luminous. The kind of place that exists outside time.
You step out into torchlight and laughter.
Music filters through marble arches. Strings and woodwinds. A swell of something grand, something old. People in silks and satin flow up the staircase like water—gloved hands, high collars, laughter polished and practised.
You shouldn’t be here.
But you are.
And no one stops you.
⋆。°✩
The ballroom doors are wide open.
No guards. No fanfare. Just an invitation in the shape of light.
You cross the threshold on steady legs.
The floor is mirrored marble. Chandeliers drip crystal firelight. The ceiling stretches into a painted sky—cherubs and constellations you don’t recognise.
No one looks at you.
And somehow, that’s worse than the mocking would’ve been.
You drift along the edges at first. One step. Then another. A glass in your hand that you didn’t ask for. A compliment tossed over someone’s shoulder, not meant for you but close enough to sting.
And then—
He enters.
⋆。°✩
You don’t see his face at first.
Just the way the room bends.
People part. Eyes turn. Laughter softens into interest. Not fear. Not awe. Just something deeper. Like gravity. Like inevitability.
And then he steps forward, and you understand.
White hair, sharp-cut and careless. A smile that looks carved into something ancient and shining. His coat is midnight blue, collar open just enough to be casual, cuffs rolled as if he’s already done dancing and plans to do it again.
There are jewels on half the people here. Gold on everyone else.
But he doesn’t need either.
He is the light in the room.
You don’t know his name.
You don’t even realise he’s looking at you until it’s too late to look away.
⋆。°✩
You try to look away first.
That’s your mistake.
Because now he knows.
You’re not sure how you know he knows—but you do. It's in the tilt of his head. The slight quirk at the corner of his mouth. Like your gaze didn’t just find him, but called him.
And he’s answering.
He moves through the crowd like it was always meant to part for him. Not fast. Not eager. Just easy. Certain. As if he’s done this a hundred times before and always ends up here.
At you.
Your throat is dry. Your hand tightens around the glass you never drank from.
He stops in front of you.
Up close, he’s worse. Or better. You can’t decide.
His eyes are bright—too bright. The kind of blue people write songs about and then spend the rest of their lives trying to forget. His hair is a mess of silver and moonlight, and his smile is almost too much. Like he knows it is, and uses it anyway.
He glances down at your untouched drink.
Then back up at you.
“Not your thing?” he asks, voice low, amused. Not mocking. Not yet.
You manage a reply. “Wasn’t thirsty.”
“Lucky me,” he says. “Neither was I.”
He reaches out. Takes the glass from your hand. Places it on a passing tray without looking.
Then he holds his hand out to you.
Just like that.
As if you’ve already said yes.
As if you’ve always said yes.
“Dance with me.”
Not a question. Not quite a command. Just an expectation. A possibility.
You stare at his hand. At the long fingers. The pale wrist. The soft flash of a silver cufflink shaped like a star.
“I don’t know how,” you say quietly.
He leans in, just slightly. Just enough to make your breath stutter.
“That’s alright,” he says. “I do.”
⋆。°✩
The music isn’t loud.
It doesn’t need to be.
He walks you to the centre of the room like it’s normal. Like every person isn’t watching. Like the marble floor doesn’t ache under your feet, trying to whisper, this isn’t for you.
But he holds your hand like it is.
And when you move—when your feet remember how to follow, when your body remembers joy—he doesn’t laugh. He doesn’t lead you like you’re fragile. He lets you catch up. Lets you breathe.
And when you do—
You start to smile.
Not wide. Not bright. Just a little. Just enough.
But he sees it.
His smile answers yours.
And the world keeps spinning.
⋆。°✩
The music fades into something slower.
Your chest is still rising too fast, but his hand is steady at your back. He hasn’t let go. Not once.
Every step, every turn, he watches you like there’s no one else in the room. Like this isn’t a palace. Like this isn’t a dance among royals. Like you’re not somewhere you shouldn’t be.
Like you’re exactly where you’re meant to be.
“Still nervous?” he asks, voice low, just under the violin swell.
You glance up. His smile is soft now. Tilted. Familiar in a way it shouldn’t be.
“I didn’t know it would be this easy,” you say.
He raises a brow. “Dancing?”
“Being seen.”
He doesn't laugh. Doesn't look away. Instead, he slows you to a stop, right there in the middle of the floor.
His hand slips from your waist to your wrist.
“Come with me,” he says.
⋆。°✩
He leads you out through the back hall, past open doors and gilded arches, until the palace swallows its own noise. The music fades behind columns. The warmth of the crowd falls away.
You step into a quiet corridor, and then—
A garden.
Not the one guests passed through. This is smaller. Older. Half-forgotten. Wild vines along the stone. A cracked marble bench. The scent of lavender and something sweeter underneath—like sugar left in the sun.
It’s moonlit and hidden and yours.
You inhale, and it fills your lungs like a prayer.
“Better?” he asks.
You nod.
He lets go of your wrist but stays close. Too close. You feel his breath near your temple. He’s taller than you’d realised on the dance floor.
“Do you bring all your dance partners here?” you ask, not meaning to sound like anything—but it comes out softer than expected. Curious.
His smile quirks, lazy and real. “Only the ones I want to keep a little longer.”
Your heart kicks once. Stupid thing.
“I’m not exactly... worth remembering.”
He looks at you then, full and unguarded.
“Funny,” he murmurs, “I was just thinking the opposite.”
You don’t know what to say to that.
So you don’t say anything.
His gaze drops to your mouth. Brief. Barely there.
But your breath stutters anyway.
You want to close the space between you.
He’s already leaning in.
His voice is barely a whisper now.
“What’s your name?”
You hesitate. You’d almost forgotten that you hadn’t given it.
“I—”
DING.
The first chime hits like a stone to the chest.
DONG.
You flinch.
He pulls back, startled.
DING.
“No,” you whisper.
The air shifts. Your jacket tightens. Something in the fabric shudders like it’s remembering itself.
You take a step back.
“I’m sorry.”
“Wait—” he starts, reaching for you.
DONG.
“I have to go,” you say, already turning.
“Wait! At least tell me who—”
DING.
You’re gone.
The night is breaking, and the magic is pulling you with it.
You run.
Not elegantly. Not the way you danced.
This is a stumble-sprint, half-flight down the corridor, heart pounding against your ribs like it’s trying to get back to him. The marble floors blur. Gold columns, oil paintings, half-turned faces in distant rooms—none of it matters now. Only the ache in your chest and the way the air grows heavier with every step.
The magic is unravelling.
You feel it in your sleeves first. The seams loosen. The silver edging at your cuffs begins to smoke and vanish, the way dew fades from a blade of grass. You press your hands to your chest like you can hold it all together—but the fabric keeps melting under your fingers.
The music is gone. The laughter behind you is too far to matter. All that exists is the echo of your boots—no, just one boot now—against the floor.
You don't remember when it happened.
Just that you turned a corner too sharp. That your foot slipped. That something caught for a second and then gave way.
You look down.
Your right foot is bare.
The enchanted shoe is gone.
You double back.
It’s lying on the stairs.
You don’t go back for it.
You can't.
DING.
The ninth chime.
The gold embroidery at your hem vanishes mid-step. The jacket fades, thread by thread, until all you’re left with is the thin, patched tunic underneath—too short now. Yours, but not yours anymore. The magic never fully disguised your body. It just made the weight feel lighter.
You grab the stair railing as the garden doors disappear behind you.
The tenth chime echoes off the stone.
You’re almost at the exit.
You think you hear your name.
Not your real name. Not the one Geto calls you with disdain. But yours. The one only someone who sees you might say.
But it’s too late.
You hit the gravel outside barefoot, panting, lungs burning with cold air and regret.
The eleventh chime splits the sky.
You don’t look back.
⋆。°✩
Somewhere behind you, he stands at the top of the staircase. His gloves are in his pocket. His coat is unbuttoned. He’s not looking at the crowd.
He’s looking at the stairs.
And the single shoe left waiting.
⋆。°✩
The twelfth and final chime rings out.
Midnight has come.
And you're already disappearing into the dark.
You wake before the sun.
You always do, but today it feels different.
Not because your body hurts—though it does. Not because the air is cold—though it bites.
But because something inside you is too quiet.
Like your chest has been scrubbed hollow.
The attic doesn’t look any different.
The boards still creak when you shift your weight. The frost still kisses the corners of the glass. The mice still rustle softly in the wall like they don’t know anything has changed.
But it has.
You sit up slowly, fingers curled in the edge of the blanket that isn’t warm enough. Your knees are sore. Your palms sting. The magic’s gone, and it didn’t leave anything for you to hold except—
Your breath catches.
You look down.
There it is.
Nestled at the foot of your bed.
One shoe.
Not both.
Just the right one.
Silver-buckled. Unscuffed. A quiet gleam to the leather that doesn’t belong to this world.
The matching pair had vanished with the rest of the suit. But this one stayed.
Of course it did.
You don’t touch it.
Not yet.
You just stare.
Your chest tightens slowly, like the ache has to rebuild itself from the edges in.
You replay the night in pieces.
The ballroom. The music. The boy with the moonlight grin and the storm in his eyes. The garden. His hand on your back. His voice, soft and certain, asking for your name like he’d keep it safe.
You wonder if he’s looking for you.
You wonder if he’s still at the top of those stairs.
You wonder if he’ll know you now, in patched sleeves and soot-stained soles.
If he’d want to.
You press the heel of your hand into your chest, hard.
Just to feel something.
⋆。°✩
Far from the attic, in a palace where the candles never burn low, a king lies dying.
Not with drama. Not with blood or fury or breathless speeches. Just… slowly.
Quietly.
Gojo sits beside him.
He’s not dressed for grief. Still in the same half-wrinkled clothes from the night before—collar askew, hair a mess, the ghost of the ballroom clinging to his shoulders.
He hasn’t slept. Hasn’t moved since the garden emptied and the last guest was sent away.
He hasn’t spoken.
Not until now.
“I met someone,” he says softly.
The king doesn’t open his eyes, but his mouth twitches. Barely there.
“A noble?” he rasps, voice like dry paper.
Gojo almost laughs. “Not even close.”
The king hums. A tiny sound. “Thank god.”
That earns a real smile. Faint. Brief.
Gojo leans forward, fingers curled tight over the blanket. “I didn’t get his name. Didn’t even ask. He ran. Lost a shoe.”
The king’s chest rises slowly. “Romantic.”
“Frustrating,” Gojo says. “He was real. Not… shiny. Not faked. I think he looked right through me and still stayed.”
The king doesn’t speak for a long time.
Then—
“Then go,” he says, hoarse but sure. “Go find the one who saw you.”
Gojo’s throat closes.
The king’s eyes stay shut.
“You’ve carried this crown too long,” he murmurs. “Go be loved, Satoru. Don’t let this place kill that part of you.”
There’s silence.
Then Gojo bows his head.
“I will.”
⋆。°✩
The king dies two days later.
The mourning bells toll across the city. The gates are draped in black. The court dons solemn silks and speaks in hushed tones.
Gojo buries his father quietly.
No fanfare. No grand declarations. Just a hand pressed to the coffin and a whisper no one hears.
He returns to the throne room with quiet thunder.
No coronation. No applause. Just a man in mourning with the weight of a kingdom on his shoulders and something softer clenched between his hands.
A single shoe.
Silver-buckled. Clean as memory. The only piece of the night that didn’t vanish.
The court hushes when he steps to the dais.
He speaks without ceremony.
“I’m not here to celebrate a title,” he says. “I’m here to honour a promise.”
A ripple of confusion passes through the crowd.
Gojo lifts the shoe for all to see.
“This,” he says, voice steady, “was left behind by the person I danced with at the royal ball.”
Murmurs rise. Names, questions, whispers like wind.
Gojo’s next words cut straight through.
“I don’t know their name. Or where they came from. But I know how I felt.”
Silence now. Even the courtiers lean forward.
He breathes in. Then:
“Find them.”
The prince’s men arrive two days later.
They come in pairs—one to carry the shoe, one to carry the threat of a sword.
Some houses greet them with fanfare. Others slam the door. But in every room, they kneel before the hopeful, the desperate, the delusional, and ask them to try it on.
None of them fit.
None of them feel right.
⋆。°✩
Toji doesn’t really want to be here.
He’s already threatened to eat the shoe twice. Nanami pretends not to hear him.
“You’re not putting it in your mouth,” Nanami says flatly as they stand in front of a bakery.
“I wasn’t gonna put it in,” Toji replies. “Just, you know. Scare the kid a little.”
“No.”
“They’ve got sugar tarts in there.”
“We’re here for the shoe.”
“I can multitask.”
Nanami sighs and knocks.
⋆。°✩
Three houses later:
“This is a waste of time,” Toji mutters.
“It’s a royal command,” Nanami answers, like that means anything.
They’re standing in front of a weeping blacksmith.
“I swore I saw the mystery person,” the blacksmith says, tears in his beard. “They were in my dream. Had wings. Glowed.”
Nanami pinches the bridge of his nose.
Toji offers him a handkerchief. “We’ll send word if we find them, yeah?”
The blacksmith sobs louder.
Toji pats him on the shoulder.
“You tried, champ.”
⋆。°✩
Back at the estate, the air has changed.
You don't notice at first. You're doing laundry. Small, quiet motions. Wrists in soap, eyes on the window.
But when you climb back up to the attic, the door is open.
That’s not right.
You never leave it open.
You step inside.
Geto is waiting.
He’s holding something in his hand.
It takes you a moment to register it. To understand what you’re looking at. To realise it’s yours.
The other shoe.
The one the magic didn’t claim.
Geto doesn’t look angry.
Worse.
He looks resigned.
“I knew,” he says, voice low. “The night you came home. I knew it was you.”
You don’t speak.
There’s something brittle in your chest. Like glass.
Geto turns the shoe over in his hand. “It was supposed to be Mimiko or Nanako. Anyone else. Someone who could give this family something back. But you—”
He shakes his head.
“I married your mother for love, you know.”
You flinch.
“I was a servant. Just like you. She didn’t care. She saw me. She chose me. And then she died. And I got stuck. In this house. With bills, and mouths, and nothing to show for it but my hands and my daughters.”
He looks at you then, sharp and quiet.
“You think I hate you,” he says. “I don’t.”
You want to speak. You don’t know how.
“I envy you,” he finishes.
Then he drops the shoe.
And before you can move—before you can breathe—he steps on it.
It doesn’t break.
Of course it doesn’t.
The magic’s long gone.
So he picks it up instead.
And throws it out the window.
You hear it hit the gravel outside.
And then—
Click.
The door locks behind you.
Geto’s footsteps fade down the stairs.
And you’re alone again.
Trapped. Silenced.
But not invisible anymore.
⋆。°✩
You don’t move right away.
You hear Geto’s footsteps fade, one by one, until the house swallows them whole. Until the only sound left is the wind against the glass, and the beat of your pulse behind your eyes.
The lock clicks again in your mind. Sharp. Final.
And then—
Nothing.
Just quiet.
You sit.
Not gently. Not with grace.
You drop straight to the floor, legs folded awkwardly, palms flat on the cold wood. The air smells like old wood and soap. Like sorrow dried into the beams.
Your hands curl into the sleeves of your shirt. Not to hide. Just to feel something.
The window glows with late morning sun. Too bright to pretend it’s still night. Too soft to call this anything but cruel.
You swallow.
You whisper to no one, “It wasn’t supposed to matter.”
The words hang there.
And then—
A scritch.
Then another.
Soft and quick, like tiny feet against the baseboard.
You blink down.
Yuji, the one with the torn ear, darts into view. He stops near your feet. Sits up on his haunches like he’s checking on you.
You offer him your palm.
He noses it once. Then skitters away to the corner where Megumi and Nobara have already gathered.
There’s a scrap of ribbon there. Frayed. Half chewed.
And a single wooden spool.
You don’t know how they found it. Or why they’re bringing it to you.
But they do.
You exhale.
“I’m not making a new shoe,” you say quietly.
They freeze.
You soften. “...Thank you, though.”
Yuji does a little hop. You can almost hear him say you’re not done.
You lean back against the wall.
You look at the door.
The lock is still in place.
The window is still too small.
Your limbs are still tired.
But something in you is standing up.
You’ve never asked to be found before.
But now— Now you know what it felt like to be seen.
And you’re not letting that disappear without a fight.
Bang bang bang.
Not a gentle knock.
Not the kind nobles use.
The door shakes in its frame.
Mimiko shrieks from somewhere down the hall, “Father—!”
“Coming,” Geto calls, voice too smooth, too fast.
He brushes dust from his sleeves and opens the door with a smile that doesn't quite reach his eyes.
Nanami doesn't smile back.
Toji doesn’t look like he’s ever smiled at all.
The taller one—Toji, in dark military trim and boots that leave real dirt on the clean floor—looks over Geto like he’s furniture. Nanami, perfectly pressed and sharply polite, holds a velvet-lined box in his hands.
Inside it, nestled like a relic, sits the shoe.
The room tightens.
“We’re here on royal command,” Nanami says, calm as a cut. “Every household within the capital must comply.”
Geto’s smile doesn’t falter. But his fingers twitch at his sides.
“Of course,” he says. “My daughters will be thrilled.”
⋆。°✩
The twins are anything but.
They stumble into the drawing room in matching silks, half-dressed and sweating.
Mimiko tries to charm. Nanako tries to lie. Both try on the shoe.
The shoe does not fit either of them.
Not Mimiko, who tried to stuff her foot in sideways, biting her lip like pain might be mistaken for grace.
Not Nanako, who screamed at the guards and insisted it was her shoe—until Nanami calmly pointed out it would have to be her right shoe, and she’d shoved her left foot in.
Both of them are red-faced now. Geto looks pale.
Nanami closes the velvet box with finality.
“That’s all,” Geto says quickly, stepping between them and the door. “Thank you for your time, but as you can see—”
“We appreciate your cooperation,” Nanami says, already half-turned. “We’ll be on our way—”
And then— CRASH.
Not subtle.
Not small.
Wood shatters. Something heavy hits the floor above. Then a thud. A clang. Another loud bang, like someone’s trying to tear a room apart.
All three men freeze.
Geto doesn’t blink.
“Old house,” he says lightly. “It groans.”
Nanami narrows his eyes.
Toji’s already turning.
“It came from upstairs,” he says.
“No need,” Geto says quickly. “We told you, it’s just—”
“Storage,” Toji finishes, stepping forward.
And then—
A fourth voice speaks, smooth as silk:
“Open it.”
The knights turn sharply.
So does Geto.
Because one of the guards—the one who had been silent this entire time, helmet shadowing his face, standing too still in the corner—steps forward.
And removes his helmet.
White hair falls loose.
Eyes like the end of a sky.
It’s him.
The prince.
No coat. No crown. Just a low voice and a gaze that could slit a throat with kindness.
“Check the room,” Gojo says.
Toji doesn’t hesitate.
He moves toward the stairs.
And Geto?
Geto stops breathing.
⋆。°✩
Meanwhile, upstairs—
You’ve already broken a chair.
The window’s too high, and the door won’t give, but fury moves faster than fear.
You threw the table against the wall. You shattered a glass jar. The room is in chaos.
Not because you thought someone would hear you.
But because if you’re going to be locked away again—this time, the walls will remember you were here.
And downstairs, they just did.
⋆。°✩
The door gives way with a shudder and a kick.
Toji steps inside the attic like he’s seen a thousand rooms like this—and hates every one of them. He doesn’t speak at first. Just scans the broken chair, the shards of glass, the boy standing in the middle of it all like a storm passed through him and didn’t finish the job.
You square your shoulders, fists tight.
“I’m not going quietly,” you say.
Toji raises a brow.
“You’re not going anywhere,” he says. “Not until you try on the shoe.”
⋆。°✩
You’re still stunned when you’re led down the stairs.
The house feels different now—seen, somehow. You don’t flinch when Geto glares. You don’t look at the twins when they hiss your name like it’s a curse.
Because all you see is him.
Gojo.
Not in a dream. Not behind a mask.
Just him.
And he’s looking at you like you invented music.
⋆。°✩
“I didn’t know,” you say softly.
His smile curves at the edges. “Good.”
You blink. “What?”
“I wanted to be seen as me, not as—” He waves a hand. “Royal disaster. Golden boy. Walking headline.”
“You’re still ridiculous,” you mutter.
“Mm,” he says, “but you danced with me anyway.”
⋆。°✩
Nanami brings the shoe.
It still gleams like it remembers the night better than you do.
You kneel.
Your fingers tremble.
You fit your foot inside.
It slides in like it never belonged anywhere else.
A quiet settles over the room.
Nanami exhales, almost like relief.
Toji nods once.
The twins make some sound between a gasp and a wail.
And Gojo?
He takes two steps forward.
Then drops to one knee.
No theatrics. No ceremony.
Just him.
And you.
And the weight of everything you both carried here.
“I don’t know your name,” he says. “But I’d like to learn it every day.”
You swallow.
His hand is warm.
“Will you marry me?”
You stare at him.
Then, slowly, like something new is blooming in your chest—
You smile.
And take his hand.
The palace feels warmer now.
Not because of the sun. Or the gilded windows. Or the three-tiered cake that someone dropped during the reception and tried to blame on the reindeer.
But because of him.
Gojo stands beside you on the balcony, arm loose around your waist, his thumb brushing idle circles against your side like he still can’t believe you’re real.
You’re both still in partial wedding attire—him with his jacket tossed over a chair somewhere, you barefoot, crown lopsided, shirt collar unbuttoned and clinging just a little to your throat. You should probably be inside. The court is probably looking for you.
But the garden below is quiet.
And the air tastes like late summer and the end of something you never thought would happen.
⋆。°✩
“What happened to them?” you ask, leaning into him just enough to be smug about it.
He hums. “Geto’s under investigation for falsifying noble status. Pretty sure he’s banned from the capital for life. Last I heard, he’s trying to sell spiritual healing potions out of a cart in the countryside.”
You snort. “And the twins?”
“Assigned to community service. Fifteen years of it.”
You blink. “What do they do?”
“Paint fences. Clean royal kennels. Muck out stables.”
You try to look sympathetic.
You fail.
⋆。°✩
The sky is peach-gold now.
You lean back against the railing, one hand braced behind you, and Gojo’s eyes trace the line of your neck like he’s memorising it.
“What?” you ask, smirking a little.
“You’re too pretty for this world,” he says easily. “I might have to exile you just to stop fights.”
You roll your eyes. “You’re not exiling me. You married me.”
He steps in closer.
“I did, didn’t I?”
His hand settles just under your jaw, thumb brushing your cheek. His smile turns softer.
Hungrier.
“Wanna kiss your husband?”
You grin. “Maybe.”
He doesn’t wait for permission.
⋆。°✩
“You’re staring,” he murmurs, voice like velvet warmed in sunlight.
You don’t answer. Just let your fingers trail down the line of his collarbone, slow and curious, feeling the heat beneath his skin. You’re still a little dazed from it all—the ceremony, the kiss, the way he looked at you like you were the only person in the kingdom.
Maybe the world.
Gojo watches you with a softness that doesn’t match the grin tugging at his lips.
“Still thinking about saying yes?” he teases, tilting his head.
You hum. “I’m thinking I want to kiss you again.”
“Be my guest.”
You lean in. He meets you halfway.
The kiss starts gentle—lazy, even. But there’s something under it now. Something hot and restless curling between your ribs. Your fingers move to his jaw, then to the back of his neck, dragging him just a little closer. He obliges with a pleased sound, deepening the kiss, mouth parting just enough to catch your breath between his lips.
He tastes like sugared wine and strawberries, and you swear you could drown in him.
By the time you break apart, you’re breathing harder than you expected. Your eyes meet, close enough to feel the words before you say them.
“I want you,” you whisper.
It comes out raw. Honest.
Gojo stills. Just for a moment.
Then—
“Yeah?” His voice is lower now. Rougher around the edges. “You sure?”
You nod.
“Then come here.”
⋆。°✩
He lifts you before you realize he’s moving. Hands strong, steady, one at your back, the other beneath your thighs. You yelp softly, laugh against his throat, and he huffs out a breathless chuckle that turns into something deeper.
The doors to your chambers are already cracked open. He kicks them wider.
The room beyond is quiet. Candlelit. Fresh linens, tossed shoes, and half a glass of wine still left untouched on the bedside table. You don’t see any of it.
Just him.
He sets you down gently, reverent in a way that makes your chest ache.
You sit on the edge of the bed as he leans in, hands braced on either side of your thighs, lips ghosting over your cheek, then your jaw.
“Tell me what you want,” he says, voice low and warm.
You reach up. Thread your fingers into his hair.
“Kiss me like you did that night,” you say. “And don’t stop.”
He grins against your mouth. “Gladly.”
And he does.
⋆。°✩
The world falls away the second his lips meet yours again.
There’s no crowd here. No music. No kingdom watching. Just the sound of his breath and yours, the rustle of fabric as fingers drag slowly down your back, and the warm press of his palms against your skin like he’s memorising every inch of you.
You pull him closer. He goes willingly.
The kiss deepens. His mouth is hot and sure, moving with a rhythm that makes you dizzy. His tongue brushes yours, and you gasp into him—your fingers clutching the back of his shirt, your legs parting slightly as he slots himself between them.
He presses you gently back onto the bed.
The sheets shift beneath you—soft, crisp, faintly perfumed—and his weight follows, settling against you with a slowness that feels like worship.
His hand cradles your face as he kisses you again, slower now. Lingering. Like he has all the time in the world.
“Still sure?” he asks, voice hoarse at the edges, lips brushing your cheek.
You nod, breath caught in your throat. “I want you.”
Gojo exhales like he’s been waiting to hear that his whole life.
“Okay,” he whispers, “I’ve got you.”
⋆。°✩
He doesn’t rush.
He undresses you carefully, easing your clothes from your body piece by piece, always watching, always touching, like he’s unwrapping something sacred. His hands trail down your arms, your ribs, your hips—every inch of your skin kissed, touched, praised.
“You’re beautiful,” he murmurs, not like a compliment, but like a fact.
His own clothes fall away soon after, and when he kneels above you, bare in the candlelight, you forget how to breathe.
He’s strong. Slender. Scars across his stomach, down his hip—each one traced gently beneath your fingers. His eyes darken when you touch him, a low sound humming from his chest as you explore him with quiet wonder.
He kisses your chest, your stomach, the inside of your thigh. Each press of his mouth is tender, reverent. You shiver when his lips ghost lower—when he parts your legs with one slow sweep of his hand and settles between them like he was always meant to be there.
When his tongue touches you, your fingers curl in the sheets.
He’s slow. Gentle. Languid.
Learning you. Reading every twitch of your hips, every gasp, every whispered plea. He hums when you moan, the sound low and satisfied.
You arch when he wraps his arms under your thighs and pulls you closer.
“Let me take care of you,” he whispers, voice rough and thick with want.
And he does.
With his mouth, his fingers, his voice—coaxing you open, unravelling you gently, turning heat into warmth into fire.
By the time you come undone, you’re panting, legs trembling, his name spilling from your lips like a prayer.
He doesn’t leave you. Doesn’t pull away. Just presses slow kisses to your skin and climbs up to meet your mouth again, breath catching as he feels you cling to him.
You reach for him. Trace the line of his jaw.
“Take me,” you whisper.
And he does.
⋆。°✩
He enters you slowly, carefully, stopping when you tense, kissing your throat until your body melts into his again. His hand finds yours against the pillow, lacing your fingers together as he presses deeper.
It’s intense. Full. Your breath stutters, and his does too.
“You okay?” he murmurs.
You nod.
He starts to move, and it’s overwhelming.
His weight on you, his breath on your neck, the way your bodies move together—every thrust angled with care, every sound he makes pressed against your ear like a secret. He moans when your hips rise to meet him. Groans when you say his name like you mean it.
He doesn’t look away. Watches you fall apart underneath him. Watches your lashes flutter, your mouth part, your breath hitch.
“Fuck, you feel incredible,” he says, voice wrecked.
You pull him down, kiss him hard, gasping against his lips as heat blooms low and deep in your core.
He speeds up—just enough.
The sound of skin on skin, the headboard creaking gently, the rhythm of his hips, your hands in his hair—it all builds into something slow and bright and utterly consuming.
You fall apart first, back arching, thighs clenching around his waist.
He follows with a gasp, pulling out just in time, his hand stroking you through it as he spills onto your stomach with a trembling groan.
⋆。°✩
After, he’s quiet.
He wipes you down gently, kisses your chest, your temple, your knuckles.
Then he pulls you into his arms, your head tucked beneath his chin, his thumb stroking slow circles into your spine.
You’re half-asleep when he whispers, “I’m never letting you go.”
You smile.
“You better not.”
Later, as the sun dips below the rooftops, you’re sprawled together on the balcony, limbs tangled, cheeks flushed, breath finally slowing.
He presses his forehead to yours.
You close your eyes.
The world is quiet again.
Until—
Scurry scurry.
You open one eye.
Yuji. Then Megumi. Then Nobara.
The mice dash across the stone railing, tails twitching, feet fast, all three heading for the figure standing just beyond the edge of the light.
Shoko.
Still in her boots. Still in her long coat. Still impossibly cool.
She holds out one palm.
The mice leap into it without hesitation.
She glances at you and Gojo, sprawled out and glowing like kings in love.
“Cute,” she says.
You sit up. “You stayed?”
She lights a cigarette with a flick of her fingers.
“Nah,” she says. “I just came to collect my assistants.”
Gojo squints. “Assistants?”
“They picked you,” Shoko says, looking directly at you.
You blink.
She exhales a thin ribbon of smoke into the sky.
“My job’s done.”
And then— She vanishes.
Just like that.
⋆。°✩
You sit there for a moment.
Gojo’s hand finds yours.
The stars come out.
And this time—
You don’t wish on any of them.
You already have everything you asked for.
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Principles and Laws of Magic for Fantasy Writers
Fundamental Laws
1. Law of Conservation of Magic- Magic cannot be created or destroyed, only transformed.
3. Law of Equivalent Exchange- To gain something, an equal value must be given.
5. Law of Magical Exhaustion- Using magic drains the user’s energy or life force.
Interaction and Interference
4. Law of Magical Interference- Magic can interfere with other magical effects.
6. Law of Magical Contamination- Magic can have unintended side effects.
8. Law of Magical Inertia- Magical effects continue until stopped by an equal or greater force.
Resonance and Conditions
7. Law of Magical Resonance- Magic resonates with certain materials, places, or times.
9. Law of Magical Secrecy- Magic must be kept secret from the non-magical world.
11. Law of Magical Hierarchy- Different types of magic have different levels of power and difficulty.
Balance and Consequences
10. Law of Magical Balance- Every positive magical effect has a negative consequence.
12. Law of Magical Limitation- Magic has limits and cannot solve every problem.
14. Law of Magical Rebound- Misused magic can backfire on the user.
Special Conditions
13. Law of Magical Conduits- Certain objects or beings can channel magic more effectively.
15. Law of Magical Cycles- Magic may be stronger or weaker depending on cycles (e.g., lunar phases).
17. Law of Magical Awareness- Some beings are more attuned to magic and can sense its presence.
Ethical and Moral Laws
16. Law of Magical Ethics- Magic should be used responsibly and ethically.
18. Law of Magical Consent- Magic should not be used on others without their consent.
20. Law of Magical Oaths- Magical promises or oaths are binding and have severe consequences if broken.
Advanced and Rare Laws
19. Law of Magical Evolution- Magic can evolve and change over time.
20. Law of Magical Singularities- Unique, one-of-a-kind magical phenomena exist and are unpredictable.
Unique and Imaginative Magical Laws
- Law of Temporal Magic- Magic can manipulate time, but with severe consequences. Altering the past can create paradoxes, and using time magic ages the caster rapidly.
- Law of Emotional Resonance- Magic is amplified or diminished by the caster’s emotions. Strong emotions like love or anger can make spells more powerful but harder to control.
- Law of Elemental Harmony- Magic is tied to natural elements (fire, water, earth, air). Using one element excessively can disrupt the balance and cause natural disasters.
- Law of Dream Magic- Magic can be accessed through dreams. Dreamwalkers can enter others’ dreams, but they risk getting trapped in the dream world.
- Law of Ancestral Magic- Magic is inherited through bloodlines. The strength and type of magic depend on the caster’s ancestry, and ancient family feuds can influence magical abilities.
- Law of Symbiotic Magic- Magic requires a symbiotic relationship with magical creatures. The caster and creature share power, but harming one affects the other.
- Law of Forgotten Magic- Ancient spells and rituals are lost to time. Discovering and using forgotten magic can yield great power but also unknown dangers.
- Law of Magical Echoes- Spells leave behind echoes that can be sensed or traced. Powerful spells create stronger echoes that linger longer.
- Law of Arcane Geometry- Magic follows geometric patterns. Spells must be cast within specific shapes or alignments to work correctly.
- Law of Celestial Magic- Magic is influenced by celestial bodies. Spells are stronger during certain astronomical events like eclipses or planetary alignments.
- Law of Sentient Magic- Magic has a will of its own. It can choose to aid or hinder the caster based on its own mysterious motives.
- Law of Shadow Magic- Magic can manipulate shadows and darkness. Shadowcasters can travel through shadows but are vulnerable to light.
- Law of Sympathetic Magic- Magic works through connections. A spell cast on a representation of a person (like a doll or portrait) affects the actual person.
- Law of Magical Artifacts- Certain objects hold immense magical power. These artifacts can only be used by those deemed worthy or who possess specific traits.
- Law of Arcane Paradoxes- Some spells create paradoxes that defy logic. These paradoxes can have unpredictable and often dangerous outcomes.
- Law of Elemental Fusion- Combining different elemental magics creates new, hybrid spells with unique properties and effects.
- Law of Ethereal Magic- Magic can interact with the spirit world. Ethereal mages can communicate with spirits, but prolonged contact can blur the line between life and death.
- Law of Arcane Symbiosis- Magic can bond with technology, creating magical machines or enchanted devices with extraordinary capabilities.
- Law of Dimensional Magic- Magic can open portals to other dimensions. Dimensional travelers can explore alternate realities but risk getting lost or encountering hostile beings.
- Law of Arcane Sacrifice- Powerful spells require a sacrifice, such as a cherished memory, a personal item, or even a part of the caster’s soul.
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The Roaring Knight encounter at the end of Chapter 3 is a masterclass at showing you that the REAL protagonist of Deltarune isn't Kris - it's Susie.
This doesn't really make much sense at first glance - you can't even really FIGHT the thing on equal footing without the Shadow Mantle, and to even get that Kris has to go through a harrowing gauntlet and fight a whole OTHER secret boss that doesn't even use the battle mechanics we've grown accustomed to. Kris Suffers to get that item, the one thing that can let them stand up to the Knight's merciless assaults. Hell, the game won't even let you retry if you lose until you have the Mantle in your possession. You would therefore assume that the Mantle belongs to Kris, and that they are the ones who should wear it.
And yet. Even when you don't have this item, who stands up to defy it? Susie. Who stops it from doing... whatever it was trying to do to Toriel, TWICE? Susie. And who gives chase across the boundary between light and dark, across the entirety of hometown, to stop it from abducting Undyne? Why, it's Susie. Her actions are those of a hero standing up to a terrible villain of unknowable power, and she does it without a shred of hesitation, even faced with the very real prospect of being killed.
And if that were it, it'd be kind of boring. But that's not it at all, because the reinforcement of this idea continues into the fight itself. Because if you can keep Susie alive for five turns, she starts monologuing against the boss, telling it how much it sucks and that she'll always have her friends behind her.
The Knight is presented to us as unknowable, invincible, unstoppable. Regular attacks bounce off of its absurdly high HP, it cannot be Checked like a normal enemy, attempts to reason with it fall on deaf ears. And yet, what's the one spell that can meaningfully hurt the Knight, to the point of temporarily disrupting its form? Susie's Rude Buster.
And then, when you throw yourself at the Knight again and again, trying to figure out its weakness, trying to outlast its brutal onslaught, it hits you - the Shadow Mantle does NOTHING for Kris in this fight, but it does EVERYTHING for Susie. Susie's the one doing all the damage. Susie's high HP perfectly compliments the shadow mantle's protection against the Knight's more absurd attacks. Ralsei has no way to meaningfully contribute to the fight at all, and while Kris can use Hold Breath to give the SOUL a boost, their utility begins and ends there. The most that either of them can really do is to act as TP and healing bots for Susie, and to equip weak armours that have beneficial effects, such as the TwinRibbon, Silver Watch, Blue Ribbon, TensionBow and Lodestone - the effects of these items persist regardless of whether the character wearing them is DOWNed or not, and, you guessed it, are equipped not to help them survive, but to allow them to support Susie even when incapacitated.
Then you start seeing it in other areas. Who is it that facilitates change in the other characters - Ralsei, Noelle, Berdly? Susie does, each and every time. She effortlessly upends their own myopic views of the world, defying them to change and be better, without even really realising that's what she's doing - is it any wonder that EVERYONE in the main cast seems to have a thing for her? She's magnetic in the way that heroes are, not despite her brashness and short temper but BECAUSE of them - because she cuts so effortlessly through the FICTIONS that other characters cling to, the stories they tell themselves about who they are, what they can do, and how they ought to be. Susie shatters those preconceptions and offers an alternative - live how you want to live, make the choices that you want to make, and let no-one else ever tell you who you are.
Susie is the hero of Deltarune, and the Roaring Knight's fight encapsulates why perfectly, without ever once drawing attention to the fact. It's sheer genius on Toby's part and I salute the skill with which it conveys those ideas in such an organic way.
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It's interesting to think that, like... The Dark Sanctuary Dark World in Chapter 4 is the first Dark World we've seen that has no real connection to the theme of 'abandonment'.
Like, Card Kingdom is based on an unused classroom filled with abandoned toys. The entire plotline there revolves around King's anger and resentment at being abandoned by the Lightners and his desire to take revenge.
The computer room that became Cyber World is usually very frequently used, but.... because the Internet is down it's not at the moment. And Queen is driven by the anxiety of being abandoned if this internet shutdown continues, synthesized through her ego in a very "what would the Lightners do without me?" way.
And TV Land is the heaviest on this theme. With Tenna being driven by the grief of falling into disuse due to both technological advancements and the Dreemurr-Holiday Family Unit slow dissolution and the fear that this will get worse and he will be thrown out.
But then in the Dark Sanctuary... The Church is often used by the people of Hometown, this doesn't seem like it's going to change anytime soon and we see no Darkner be anxious about, like, the canceled Choir practice or anything like that. The closest thing we have to a 'leader' in that Dark World is Gerson/the Hammer of Justice, who is clearly a precious and well-loved Monster-Equivalent-of-an-Urn. If anything, his main worry is about him not being there for his Lightner son!
And, like, I said the Hammer of Justice is the closest thing we have to the 'Dark World Leader' slot in the formula seen in the previous three worlds, but that's also not quite the case.... cause he's also the Shadow Crystal Bearer of the same world. If the Hammer is like the Jevil or Spamton of this world, than it doesn't really have a King/Queen/Tenna for itself?
I remember when Chapter 2 came out, I already noticed this 'Abandonment' Pattern and I wondered whatever a Dark World created from objects that are not neglected or abandoned would just be far too.... content to actually have an adventure in it. Like, there would be no one to fight cause all the Darkners would just be chill and happy they're fulfilling their purposes.
And I also wondered if the Dark is, like, attracted to objects which were abandoned or neglected, gives them bigger importance or power in the Dark World. Hence a 'TV Land" instead of a general "Dreemurr House Land", the TV is the most abandoned thing there and so it is granted more focus.
And on that same topic I wondered about the fact Kris deliberately turned on the TV before opening that Dark Fountain. Like they were intentionally trying to aim for a TV Land Dark World.
Obviously the first idea, that non-abandoned Darkners would all just be benign NPCs has been disproved by the Dark Sanctuary, which has it's fair share of enemies to battle. But I think the idea that the Dark gives extra power and importance to things that have been Abandonment might have some merit. Not just with the Dreemurrs' living room being ruled and controlled by their disused old TV but also with the fact there isn't a clearly equivalent to Tenna (or Queen or King) in Dark Sanctuary.
And again, it makes me think of Kris' reasons for turning on the TV... Was it because their plans is to deliberately invoke the prophecy as much as possible and a TV Guy being slashed by the Knight is mentioned so they had to make a TV Guy?
Could they intuit that the Darkner that would be created from the Television would probably be desperate for attention and obsessed with Toriel and thus easier for the Knight to manipulate.... and also maybe that the Abandonment it feels will make it stronger?
(Notable perhaps that they also slightly opened the house's front door before turning on the TV and making a Fountain. In light of the events of Chapter 3, it seems like it was Kris laying a trap to pull Undyne to the Dark World so that the Knight could kidnap her)
Have Kris and/or the Knight have been deliberately seeking out abandoned and disused places that will therefore have stronger 'boss' Darkners that are easier to manipulate towards the Knight's goals?
And if that was the case, why did they stop with the Dark Sanctuary?
Did they just kinda... ran out of obviously abandoned places/things around Hometown?
Was it simply a matter of following the prophecy?
Was it a desperate attempt to re-capture Toriel via the choir practice?
Was the Knight just desperate to open a new Dark Fountain... somewhere and went with the Church as their first opportunity?
Was that pattern I noticed just a coincidence and doesn't actually mean anything?
A lot of things to think about...
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chan + fem!reader • warning! slow burn sensual smut. use of aphrodisiac. soft dom!chan. oral(f receiving). dry humping. light kink (breeding kink implied). • 4,6k • m.list
Teaser ⟩ a candle lit during a power outage filled the room with a soft vanilla scent—completely unaware of the aphrodisiac hidden within. as the night grew warmer, so did chan’s need, his hands wandering with a desperate hunger he couldn’t deny.

the sound of rain tapping against the window pulled your attention away from your phone. It was pouring, like the sky was dumping buckets, and yet chan was still locked away in his studio. you didn’t want to go to bed without him, so you decided to wait—but his work was taking longer than expected.
a flash of lightning suddenly lit up the entire room, followed by a loud clap of thunder that echoed through the walls. you decided to check on him one last time, but as soon as your feet slid off the edge of the bed, darkness swallowed the room whole.
the power had gone out.
the house, already quiet, grew even more still, but the silence didn’t last long. footsteps made their way to your door, slow and steady, and moments later, chan stepped into the room—with the flashlight on his phone lighting his path.
despite how tired he looked, his lips curled into a soft smile the second he saw you. “I almost thought you cut the power just to stop me from working,” he teased lightly, stepping closer. he leaned down and pressed a gentle kiss to your forehead—and somehow, the simple warmth of his lips against your skin made the heaviness in your chest loosen for a moment.
“I guess it’s finally time to use those candles we bought,” chan said, his voice suddenly excited. you let out a quiet laugh—he always had a thing for scented candles, always talked about how those sweet, hazy scents helped him relax during stressful work nights.
you followed after him as he left the room, his flashlight guiding you to the kitchen. he rummaged through one of the drawers for a while—until he finally pulled out a few candles, smiling softly as he found the ones he’d been looking for.
lifting one up, he brought it closer to his nose, inhaling the familiar scent before handing it to you.
he watched you closely as you leaned in toward it. “like it?”
a soft vanilla aroma spread around you, not too strong, but enough to gently tickle your nose, and make your head feel just a little hazy. “mhm...yeah,” you nodded, meeting his eyes, “It’s already warming me up somehow.”
after lighting the second candle, chan joined you on the bed, the soft glow and warm scent wrapping around you like a blanket. you felt a deep sense of calm settle in, the room quiet except for the rain tapping gently against the windows.
a comfortable silence lingered for a while—
until you felt his hand resting over yours.
“you’re cold,” he said softly, pulling you closer to his chest. he guided your hand over his heart, fingers intertwining as he pressed a kiss to the top of your head.
In that moment, you both quietly thanked the power outage. as if the universe had turned everything off just to make room for this.
“your skin... it’s so soft.” his voice came out barely above a whisper. his thumb continued to caress the back of your hand in slow, almost reverent circles. but something shifted—like the gentle touch wasn't enough anymore.
his fingers traveled upward, brushing past your wrist with featherlight strokes, gliding along your arm with deliberate slowness. when he reached your shoulder, he paused for a moment—then changed direction, sliding down along your side until his hand slipped beneath your shirt.
the sudden contrast of his warm palm on your bare waist made you inhale sharply, your breath hitching in your throat. the scent of vanilla that once felt comforting now wrapped around your senses more densely, almost dizzying.
you blinked, realizing the drowsiness from earlier had completely dissolved.
and It wasn’t just you.
beneath your hand, you felt his chest rise and fall—uneven, shaky, like he was trying to suppress something. your eyes met his, and in an instant, his gaze dropped to your lips. “something...” he muttered, voice hoarse, thick with tension. “It’s burning inside me.”
a tremor rippled through him as he exhaled—
not from fear, but restraint. like he was fighting the instinct to pull you closer, to drown in whatever was growing between you.
you weren’t any different from him. the heat pooling between your legs was almost dizzying, making it hard to keep your body still. your senses felt heightened—like every breath, every touch, was amplified and humming under your skin.
chan noticed the way your body tensed beneath him, and without a word, he gently laid you back against the mattress, sliding on top of you with careful precision. his hands braced on either side of your head, framing your face in the flickering glow of candlelight. the shadows danced across his features, but it was his eyes that truly pulled you in.
“do you feel it too?” his voice was low, gravelly, as if each word scraped against the edge of restraint. his gaze was locked on yours, but there was a tremble in his eyes—not his hands, not his breath—just his eyes. he looked torn. like he was fighting something inside him—a need, an ache, that had started small but was now unbearable.
something was crawling under his skin, not just lust, but something deeper, something possessive… addictive. the scent, the warmth of you, the way you looked at him—it was undoing him slowly.
his fingertips hovered near your cheek but didn’t quite touch. the space between you buzzed with tension, thick and electric. It felt like…if you reached for him, just once—he’d give in entirely. but for now, he was holding on by a thread.
waiting.
needing your permission to fall apart.
you didn’t answer. there was a burning lump in your throat, like your body was reacting faster than your words ever could. so you simply nodded—just the slightest movement. but it was enough for him.
chan’s breath hitched, his chest rising in one deep inhale as he closed his eyes. something shifted. he moved slowly, his hand sliding down to your wrist. even that soft touch made your whole body flinch, from the sheer sensitivity that had taken over you. everything felt amplified. It was like every nerve was tuned to him.
he wrapped his fingers around your wrist, not harshly, but firm—like he needed to keep you grounded, like he was afraid you'd slip away if he let go.
then, he leaned in. you felt his breath ghost across your neck, hot and slow—and your own breath stuttered in your chest.
“my heart’s racing,"
he whispered, voice nearly cracking under the weight of it. his eyes were shut, his lips barely grazing your skin as he breathed you in. “I feel like I’m touching you for the first time…”
the brush of his nose against your neck made your thighs press together, a quiet plea your body whispered before your voice could.
“chan…” his name slipped out, soft and broken—barely a breath. but even that was enough to draw a low, guttural sound from deep in his throat. you heard the muttered curse under his breath, thick with restraint.
he lifted his head. his eyes met yours—blazing, dark, desperate.
and there it was.
a single bead of sweat rolling down his temple, catching the flicker of candlelight as it fell. but you knew. that heat wasn’t from the room. It was from him. from whatever it was coursing through his veins, setting him on fire.
he leaned in closer, one hand planted firmly beside your head, the other still wrapped around your wrist like a lifeline.
“I can’t—” his voice cracked, low and wrecked. “I can’t hold back much longer.”
just after those last words left his lips, chan leaned in and captured your mouth with his. the kiss was messy—rushed, almost desperate. he moved like he was chasing something he couldn’t quite reach, each press of his lips followed by a shallow breath, only to dive back in like it still wasn’t enough. his hands didn’t move much, but his mouth said everything; hungry, breathless, wanting.
when the kiss finally broke with a soft, wet sound, his lips didn’t stop. they traveled down to your chin, then dipped lower to your neck. you felt him there—teeth grazing the skin, a delicate bite that sent a wave through your body. his breath was scalding hot against your throat, so vivid it made your pulse thrum louder. you closed your eyes, letting yourself melt into him completely, silently offering your body up to be explored. and he did—like he’d waited too long for this, like he wasn’t just touching your skin, but claiming every inch of it with reverence and quiet hunger.
his hands were restless, moving with a clear intention. before you knew it, they slipped under your shirt. the moment his fingers brushed over your already stiffened nipples, a low, satisfied sound escaped his lips.
he pulled back for a second, just enough to create distance, though the pressure below was already starting to ache. his hand found yours, guiding it slowly down—right to where he was hardest.
"can you feel that?" he whispered, voice barely audible yet full of desire. the second your palm cupped the heat of his arousal, he shut his eyes, exhaling a shaky breath that trembled between control and need. you nodded silently in response. "good," he murmured, lips curling just slightly. "now come here."
within seconds, you were straddling his lap, the heat of your body settling right over his aching length. the thin layers of clothing between you did nothing to dull the friction—if anything, it made everything worse. chan’s hands gripped your hips firmly, fingers digging in just enough to make you gasp. he pulled you against him, grinding you down with a desperation he could barely contain. a guttural sound rumbled from his throat, low and raw. "f-fuck—" he choked out, his voice ragged.
the pleasure shot through him like lightning, overwhelming and fast and almost too much. the way your weight pressed down on him, how your heat aligned perfectly with his swollen arousal—it was driving him insane. for a second, he thought he might actually come undone right there, just from the pressure, from the way you fit against him like that.
every breath he took was heavy, laced with need. his head dropped against your shoulder as he muttered, “fuck, why does this feel so... intense?" for a moment, he seemed lost—like he couldn’t quite place what was happening to him—but the hunger in his eyes said it all. he didn’t want to stop. not now. not ever.
he wasn’t the only one who didn’t want to stop. every time your clit brushed against his hardness, a sharp pulse throbbed deep inside you, demanding more. you couldn’t hold back, your hips began to move slowly, tentatively at first, then with growing confidence.
chan clenched his jaw, fingers digging harder into your hips as if trying to anchor you down. your name slipped from his lips, not as a plea but almost like a reprimand—like you were doing something you shouldn’t, and he was supposed to warn you.
"If you keep going—" he warned, voice low and strained, "I’m gonna... come right here, in my pants."
gross, chan thought, a flash of embarrassment prickling through him at the idea of coming just from the friction—without a single finger inside his pants. but his body didn’t care.
It was too warm. too damn hot.
every piece of fabric on him suddenly felt heavier, like a suffocating weight pressing down, making it impossible to think clearly.
chan’s pre-cum seeped slowly through the fabric, warm and slick, pooling in places that made it impossible to think straight. his breath was shallow, unsteady as a bead of sweat traced a slow path from the curve of his neck down to his collarbone. he inhaled deeply, trying to steady himself, but his mind was already consumed.
his hands slid from your hips up to your shirt without hesitation, gripping and pulling it up. you raised your arms to help, your bare skin coming into view, heart pounding against his gaze.
a shaky breath escaped him as his eyes locked onto your chest. unable to resist, he took you beneath him again, his gaze never leaving your breasts. fingers toyed with the edge of your shorts, exploring with deliberate intent while his lips descended to your skin.
he licked your nipples slowly, tasting, teasing, then bit gently—soft enough to make you shiver but sharp enough to mark the moment. every sound you made, every subtle reaction of your body, was etched into his memory, fueling his hunger all the more.
his lips traveled downward, tracing a slow path to your stomach. he glanced up at you, eyes dark and intense, before murmuring a gentle command, “lift your hips, baby.”
you obeyed without hesitation, helping him pull your shorts and underwear down together. his hands reached your inner thighs, urging you to part them just for him.
a deep sigh escaped him as his eyes took in the glistening wetness, illuminated softly by the flickering candlelight. you caught the subtle swallow he tried to hide, the raw hunger barely contained beneath his calm exterior.
then he leaned down, fingers sliding out slowly from your slit to feel just how wet you were. his two thumbs gently parted your lips. he didn't care how messy or soaked you were. he wanted more. a slow drip of spit slid down, warm and deliberate, and at the touch of his breath, your hips jerked involuntarily.
chan bent to the spot where his saliva had landed, dragging his tongue over you in a slow, hungry lick from bottom to top. a satisfied sound rumbled deep in his throat as a subtle vibration pulsed through your pussy, sending shivers that echoed deep inside you.
his tongue lingered around your entrance, circling it with slow, deliberate motions, tasting you like something forbidden and sacred. then, as if the need consumed him whole, he buried his face deeper between your thighs, like he wanted to disappear inside you.
your moans came out louder, less controlled. your chest rose and fell rapidly, the heat overwhelming, his mouth relentless. there was a rhythm to his tongue, steady and calculated, but maddening—perfectly torturous.
when he finally pulled back for just a moment, you saw it—the glistening shine on his lips, your wetness coating him like proof of his obsession. he looked wrecked. chest heaving, pupils blown wide. and then, in a rough growl that came from deep in his throat, he muttered, completely undone "you're dripping… fuck, you're soaking my face."
and still, his fingers dug into your thighs like he never wanted to let go, like your taste was the only thing keeping him grounded.
"come on my face, yeah?" he asked in a single, ragged breath, his voice cracked open with desperation. his eyes —those eyes— never left yours, dark and heavy with hunger, dragging every last bit of restraint out of you. something stirred deep inside you at the way he looked at you like you were the only thing he’d ever crave. everything already felt too much, too warm, too intense...and his gaze made it impossible to hold on.
and despite asking, he didn’t wait for an answer.
he dove back in. tongue relentless, lips messy, completely lost in the taste of you. your hands found his hair, fingers curling, hips moving without thought. the pressure in your core tightened, unbearable, unbearable, until—
your breath shattered.
It hit all at once, like a wave crashing through you, body seizing as you cried out, a broken moan torn from your throat. he didn’t move an inch, didn’t ease up, not even as you came. Instead, he groaned into you, deeper than before, letting your release coat his face. you could feel how soaked he was, how wet everything had become —his mouth, his chin, the noises he made— obscene, low, needy.
when he finally pulled back, his chest was heaving, lips swollen and glistening, jaw tight like he was barely holding it together. he looked up at you like he’d just been baptized, completely wrecked. “you’re so beautiful when you fall apart for me.”
he whispered—his voice low, reverent. the corners of your lips lifted ever so slightly at the praise, a breath of calm wrapping around you both, if only for a heartbeat.
but then you felt it—his bulge, twitching and throbbing beneath the strained fabric of his pants, pressed firm against your thigh. that quiet moment shattered in the heat pooling between you.
a soft grunt left his lips, and he pressed his forehead to yours, breath hot and uneven. “I can’t—fuck, I can’t keep these on,” he muttered, almost to himself. desperation dripped from his voice.
he pulled back just enough to shove his pants down with shaky hands, underwear following fast, revealing just how painfully hard he was. his cock sprang free, flushed, veined, the tip glistening from how worked up he’d been just from pleasuring you.
“I need to be inside you,” he growled, voice tight and raw. “I’ve waited long enough…”
he lined himself up, the tip of his cock brushing against your entrance—hot, leaking, throbbing with the kind of need that made his breath catch. his eyes fluttered closed for a second, fighting the urge to just sink in all at once.
but he didn’t. he couldn’t. not when you were looking up at him like that. not when every shaky breath of yours curled around his ribs like a soft plea.
“I’m gonna go slow, okay?” he whispered, voice thin and trembling. “wanna feel every inch of you…”
one hand gripped your thigh, anchoring himself, while the other gently caressed your cheek—his thumb brushing over your lips like he was grounding himself through touch.
and then, so slowly it made your breath hitch, he pushed in. just the tip.
a low moan spilled from his mouth, half-choked, needy and raw. “fuck—so warm… you’re gonna ruin me already” he murmured, barely above a whisper, like the words weren’t even meant to be heard.
he paused, panting softly as he tried not to lose himself right then and there. his fingers dug into your skin as he pressed in a little deeper, inch by inch, reverent, almost shaking. he whispered again, like it still hadn’t fully hit him. “feels too good…”
his hips trembled, not from movement, but from restraint. every time he sank deeper, it was followed by a quiet, desperate sound—something between a sigh and a moan—like your body was unraveling him second by second.
chan stayed still inside you for a moment, not daring to move. his fingers gently caressed the softness of your hips, forehead resting against yours, breaths tangled in the warm space between. chest to chest, skin slick with sweat, the silence around you was only filled by your shared, shaky exhales.
the candle’s flickering light danced lazily across the walls, casting golden shadows that curled and slid along chan’s back. every time the flame wavered, the glow would shift, revealing the tension in his shoulders, the way his muscles strained from holding back.
you had just come undone from his mouth—your body still trembling, overly sensitive. so when he slid into you, slow and deliberate, the stretch was overwhelming. your eyes fluttered shut, lips parted with a breathless gasp. the fullness was too much. too intimate. too good.
he noticed.
"too much?" he whispered, his voice strained, as if he was barely holding himself together. “fuck. you’re so tight, I can feel everything…”
his own sensitivity showed all over his face. his brows were furrowed, lower lip caught between his teeth. he’d been waiting—aching—for this, and now that he was finally inside, every second was electric. but he still didn’t move. his hands just roamed over you softly, and he leaned into your neck, breathing you in.
“just… let me stay here for a second,” he mumbled, voice hoarse. “I can’t move yet, I’ll fucking lose it.”
your chest was rising and falling quickly, body still buzzing with leftover waves. the pressure between you both was intense—almost unbearable in the best way. his breath grazed your skin as he clung to the moment, buried in you, not even fully inside yet, but already trembling from the closeness.
and then—the candle flickered again, the flame making a soft crackling sound just as chan began to move. carefully. gently. but with something trembling beneath the surface, something desperate.
he pulled out slowly, barely halfway, just to ease back in again, deeper this time. the stretch burned just right, your walls fluttering around him, still soaked and pulsing from before. you gasped, hands gripping his arms, fingertips sinking into the muscle like you needed something to hold onto before you lost yourself again.
“c-chan,” you whimpered, voice shaking. “too deep…”
he froze instantly, chest heaving against yours, clearly affected by the sound of your voice—by the way you said his name. his hand found your jaw, tilting your face to look at him.
“tell me if it’s too much,” he whispered, breath warm against your lips. “I’ll stop—fuck, I’ll stop if you need.”
but you didn’t want him to stop. not even close. you shook your head, a soft breathless, “don’t,” escaping your lips.
that was all he needed.
he rolled his hips again, still slow, but firmer now. every thrust was calculated, intentional. he wasn’t slamming into you. no. he was feeling everything. memorizing everything. letting himself get drunk off the tight heat around him, the way you clenched every time he pushed a little deeper. the candlelight flickered again, briefly illuminating his flushed face, the raw emotion in his eyes.
“oh my god..” you breathed out, arching your back, your body moving to meet his rhythm without even thinking. he groaned softly, lips ghosting over your collarbone. “you feel so fucking good… fuck, baby, you're perfect—just like that, yeah?”
his thrusts grew slightly faster, a little deeper with every push. you felt everything. the wetness. the fullness. the way he pulled out almost completely before sliding back in with a soft, desperate sound caught in his throat.
“please,” you whispered, voice cracking. he looked up, eyes wild and glassy, breath caught. “what do you need, sweetheart?” he asked, barely able to speak through how much he was holding back.
“you. just—don’t stop.” and he didn’t. his rhythm built slowly, pressure curling deep inside you with every thrust. he reached places that made your toes curl, your eyes roll back. each movement was rougher, needier. controlled at first—but clearly unraveling.
“you’re taking me so well,” he murmured into your skin. “so fuckin' tight around me… it’s driving me insane.” you moaned his name again, and it nearly broke him.
your body trembled beneath him, every thrust pushing you closer to that dizzying edge. your nails dragged down his back, leaving faint red trails he wouldn’t mind seeing the next morning. “chan— fuck— I’m gonna—”
“I know, baby,” he gasped, voice cracking as he tried to keep his pace steady—but it was slipping. “I feel you. you're so close… I can feel it.” his hips snapped forward harder now, rhythm reckless, losing any restraint he had left. the slap of skin meeting skin echoed louder, messier, more desperate. his breath stuttered against your neck as he muttered broken praises—"so good," "so tight," "my pretty baby taking it all"—like a prayer on repeat.
“you’re squeezing me—fuck, just like that—don’t stop, please don’t stop—” his voice cracked on the last word, and his hand slid down between your bodies, fingers finding your clit. “let go for me, sweetheart. wanna feel you come on me again. need it.”
your legs wrapped tighter around his waist instinctively, pulling him impossibly close as your climax finally crashed over you—sharp, electric, overwhelming. you cried out his name like it was the only word you knew, body spasming beneath him, and he nearly collapsed from the way you pulsed around him.
“shit—fuck—” he groaned, losing rhythm entirely as you clenched down, milking every last bit of control out of him. he buried his face in your neck, breath hot and ragged, hips stuttering.
“where do you want it, baby?” he rasped, voice barely holding together, needy and frantic. “tell me. please."
his rhythm turned frantic, deeper, rougher, chasing the edge with all the restraint of a man starved. your body was still trembling from your orgasm, oversensitive, twitching with every thrust—and he could feel it. feel how you clenched around him, how your walls fluttered, inviting him in deeper, tighter.
“shit—baby—” he hissed, voice cracking into a moan. “you’re gonna make me—fuck—”
he barely managed to lift his head, his gaze locking with yours, pupils blown wide, lips parted and trembling. “wanna come inside,” he breathed. “let me… wanna fill you up. need to—fuck, I need to.”
you nodded, barely coherent, breath catching. “yes, please… inside, chan.”
that was it. he let out a raw, guttural sound—somewhere between a sob and a growl—as he sank deep and stilled, buried to the hilt. his body tensed above you, head dropping to your shoulder as his hips twitched through the release. warmth flooded into you as he came, wave after wave, chanting your name like a lifeline.
“you’re mine,” he whispered, breath shaky. “fuck.. I’m so deep in you… you take it so well. you’re meant for me.”
you could feel every throb, every pulse of him inside, and it only made you cling tighter. the air was thick with the sound of your breaths, your heartbeats syncing, bodies tangled, still trembling from the intensity.
after a moment, he raised his head, kissed your temple with a soft hum. “you okay, baby?” he whispered, voice hoarse and full of warmth.
and god, despite the sweat, the mess, the ruined sheets—everything felt perfect.
the air felt heavier now—not from lust, but from the silence that came with release. the rhythm had slowed, and so had time. your skin buzzed with the aftermath, oversensitive, warm, kissed all over with sweat and love. chan collapsed beside you with a soft groan, still catching his breath, hand reaching for yours instantly, fingers locking like it was instinct.
neither of you spoke for a few seconds. just… breath. the kind that came from letting go too much and feeling too much.
he nuzzled into your shoulder, hair damp, his voice barely a whisper. "you okay? was that… too much?" you shook your head softly, too blissed out to form words. so instead, you turned, tucked your nose under his chin, and let out a hum—content, safe, full.
“I can’t believe we actually—” he started, then cut himself off with a sheepish laugh. you felt it rumble in his chest before he said, “I think I literally begged you to come on my face. that—uh. that happened.”
you burst into a breathy laugh, your body jolting slightly from the sudden movement. “yeah, you were kind of…” you paused, pretending to think, “feral.”
chan groaned and covered his face. “nooo, don’t remind me. that damn candle or whatever was in that incense—pure evil.” you looked over. the candle on the desk flickered innocently, as if it hadn't just witnessed the filthiest hour of your lives.
“It’s still going,” you teased, “should we be scared?”
“we should file a restraining order.” he deadpanned.
but then, he got quiet again. and his hand came up to trace slow circles on your side, his voice barely a breath. “but seriously… you’re so beautiful when you fall apart for me.” the words hit different now. no lust behind them. just warmth.
and for the first time since it all started, your eyes met in the dim candlelight—no tension, no rush. just two people wrapped up in each other, sweaty, tired, and impossibly soft.

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THE BAT'S WIFE ( Bruce wayne! )

summary: Some members of the league are still surprised by the way the Dark Knight's wife looks.
pairing: Bruce wayne x wife!reader
part two.
open request - Bruce masterlist
Given Bruce Wayne's past likes, everyone would know that in the future he would have a more than wonderful wife, not just anyone could occupy such an important place, and so it was.
You became the only woman capable of accompanying him in his life without losing your light, giving him the happiness he hadn't had in years. They had chosen each other time and again to walk side by side for the rest of their lives.
Bruce Wayne's wife was by no means an average woman. You had a beauty that was hard to describe in words, because it wasn't merely physical; you were magnetic. Whether you were in a room full of ambassadors or on a covert field operative, there was always something about you that made one's eyes linger. A lethal blend of grace, intelligence, and poise.
You didn't possess metahuman abilities, but that didn't diminish your influence. Your ability to read a situation, anticipate, intervene discreetly, and know when to stay back made you a natural ally, even for a team full of gods and soldiers.
Your relationship with Bruce had been solidified for a while, but he remained reserved and overprotective of you. The League had seen you on several occasions. At gala events, diplomatic meetings, or even at League IT meetings, contributing your work from a more administrative perspective, always alongside Bruce. Always elegant, calm, almost untouchable, but this was one of the few times you showed up at the Watchtower without your husband by your side.
For the first time, you stepped into the Watchtower without your husband or any of your children by your side.
You walked with your head held high, a folder under your arm, your heels clicking firmly on the metal floor. Each step you took had the same precision with which you used to handle high level negotiations at Wayne Enterprises or assist Bruce in matters that went beyond Gotham.
The League common room wasn't a solemn place at that moment. Barry, Hal, and Oliver were talking animatedly about who among them had completed the most missions in the last month. Diana sat reading, with that imperturbable stillness. Arthur was nowhere to be seen, and Clark, who was always the first to greet you, was also nowhere to be seen.
The conversation was interrupted as soon as you walked through the door.
Hal was the first to notice. His laughter died in midair, frozen mid air by his astonishment at finding you there. Completely flawless. Your bearing was subtle yet striking, with that gaze of yours that, though gentle and even innocent at first glance, carried with it a quiet confidence that didn't need to be imposed. It was natural. Inevitable.
Oliver looked down from his cup as if he'd sensed a change in the pressure in the air. Your presence alone disrupted the rhythm, but he was observant, and he simply studied the reactions of the others.
Barry turned his head with his trademark reflex and froze completely. He blinked once, swallowed, and put down the donut he was holding halfway.
Diana, on the other hand, wasn't startled. She barely raised her eyes from the book she was reading and smiled a friendly smile as she greeted you. She had always had a lot of respect for you; you were a powerful figure, a woman accustomed to walking among men who thought themselves superior and letting them know, without a word, that they weren't.
You had the grace of someone younger, with a restrained energy that contrasted with the severity of the man you shared your life with. Not because of a lack of maturity, but because of that innate brilliance you possessed; and when everyone had the chance to see you together, they understood why the bat cared so much for you.
“Wow…” Hal whispered, not realizing he had said it out loud.
You were dressed in a fitted black jacket, a white silk blouse that elegantly caressed your figure, and high boots that enhanced the natural firmness of your gait. Your hair was pulled back with perfect carelessness. A soft shine on your lips, and that barely perceptible perfume that, unintentionally, lingered.
Barry was the first to find his voice. "Is everything okay?" he asked awkwardly, as if unsure why he was talking. "I mean, uh, can I help you with something?"
You stopped a few steps away from them, and with the folder under your arm, you smiled at them politely.
"I'm looking for J'onn. I brought the reports he asked me for on the satellite infrastructure," you reply casually, as if you didn't notice the weight of their gaze on you. As if you didn't know you'd left them speechless.
"he's in hallway three, communications room," Hal said quickly, rising from his seat. "I can walk you there, if you like."
"Thank you," you said politely, without altering your tone. "But it's not necessary. I already know how to get there. I just wanted to stop by and say hello first." Before you left, you gave them a friendly, naturally charming smile.
Hal followed you with his eyes when you turned around, with that slow, elegant gesture that came naturally to you, And Barry…
Barry had run out of air.
Oliver watched the scene with an amused eyebrow raised. He didn't say anything, but the smile that spread across his lips spoke volumes.
The footsteps of your boots faded into the distance, but the effect of your presence still lingered like a thick perfume, impossible to ignore. For a moment, no one in the common room spoke. It was as if everyone was digesting what had just happened… and no one knew how.
Hal was the first to break the silence. "My God," he exhaled, sinking back into his seat. "How does Bruce manage to concentrate on anything with that woman in the same room?"
Oliver gave a short laugh, shaking his head. "Who tells you he does? Maybe he can't concentrate at all, and all these years we've had him on a pedestal of self control just because we didn't see it when she was around."
Barry, still somewhat dazed, kept looking down the hallway you'd left, as if he expected to see you reappear at any moment.
"I say this with all due respect" Hal added, pointing down the hall as if he could still see you, "if she weren't married to him, I'd make my move in a heartbeat."
The comment hung in the air. No one responded immediately. Oliver snorted through his teeth, as if unwilling to interfere, and Barry barely looked away, uncomfortable but not contradicting him. For a moment, all that could be heard was the distant hum of the ventilation system… until the silence became too heavy. As if something had suddenly occupied it.
No one heard him coming, it was almost impossible to do so.
No one heard him coming, it was almost impossible to do so.
"Who would you make your move with, Hal?"
The voice was deep, raspy, and flat. But each word cut like a freshly sharpened blade.
Batman.
They all turned at once. Bruce was standing a few feet away from them, his hands clasped in front of his chest, his face completely expressionless. He had arrived as silently as a thought.
Hal swallowed. “Bruce… I…”
"What are you talking about? "
The question fell like a rock in the center of a tense surface. Without raising his voice, without changing his expression. Just a simple question.
And at that moment the men at the table were able to breathe an internal sigh of relief. Batman wasn't going to kill them; he hadn't heard anything. And when they were about to answer to save their own life.
Diana got there first, looking up from the book she'd been holding the whole time. She gently closed the cover, raised an eyebrow with absolute calm, and fixed her eyes on the millionaire. "They're talking about how hot your wife is"
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