#writing type things

[wingedknightrose]

The Color of My Writing tag

Tagged by @lucien-lachance

No-pressure tagging @beevean @simonsquest @rosebleue

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My result was...

...I can live with that, yeah

[urfriendlywriter]

How to write smut ?

(@urfriendlywriter | req by @rbsstuff @yourlocalmerchgirl anyone under the appropriate age, please proceed with caution :') hope this helps guys! )

writing smut depends on each person's writing style but i think there's something so gut-wrenchingly beautiful about smut when it's not very graphic and vivid. like., would this turn on a reader more?

"he kissed her, pulling her body closer to him."

or this?

"His lips felt so familiar it hurt her heart. His breathing had become more strained; his muscles tensed. She let herself sink into his embrace as his hands flattened against her spine. He drew her closer."

(Before proceeding further, these are all "in my opinion" what I think would make it better. Apply parts of the advice you like and neglect the aspects you do not agree with it. Once again I'm not saying you have to follow a certain type of style to write smut! Creative freedom exists for a reason!)

One may like either the top or the bottom one better, but it totally depends on your writing to make it work. Neither is bad, but the second example is more flattering, talking literally. (Here is me an year after writing this post, i think, either is amazing, depending on the context. the type of book you're writing, your writing style and preferences!)

express one's sensory feelings, and the readers will automatically know what's happening.

writing, "her walls clenched against him, her breath hitching with his every thrust" is better than writing, "she was about to cum".

(edit: once again, hi, it's me. Either is amazing depending on ur writing style. Everything at the end is about taste.)

here are some vocabulary you can introduce in your writing:

whimpered, whispered, breathed lightly, stuttered, groaned, grunted, yearned, whined, ached, clenched, coaxed, cried out, heaved, hissed

shivering, shuddering, curling up against one's body, squirming, squirting, touching, teasing, taunting, guiding, kneeling, begging, pining, pinching, grinding,

swallowing, panting, sucking in a sharp breath, thrusting, moving gently, gripped, biting, quivering,

nibbling, tugging, pressing, licking, flicking, sucking, panting, gritting, exhaling in short breaths,

wet kisses, brushing soft kisses across their body (yk where), licking, sucking, teasing, tracing, tickling, bucking hips, forcing one on their knees

holding hips, guiding the one on top, moving aimlessly, mindlessly, sounds they make turn insanely beautiful, sinful to listen to

some adverbs to use: desperately, hurriedly, knowingly, teasingly, tauntingly, aimlessly, shamelessly, breathlessly, passionately, delicately, hungrily

he sighed with pleasure

her skin flushed

he shuddered when her body moved against his

he planted kisses along her jawline

her lips turned red, messy, kissed and flushed.

his hands were on his hair, pulling him.

light touches traveled down his back

words were coiled at his throat, coming out as broken sobs, wanting more

he arched his back, his breath quivering

her legs parted, sinking into the other's body, encircling around their waist.

+ mention the position, how they're being moved around---are they face down, kneeling, or standing, or on top or on bottom--it's really helpful to give a clear picture.

+ use lustful talk, slow seduction, teasing touches, erratic breathing, give the readers all while also giving them nothing. make them yearn but DO NOT PROLONG IT.

sources to refer to for more:

gesture that gets me on my knees !!

(more to comeee, check out my hot or kisses prompts on my master list!)

[illustraice]

someone save alphonse elric and may chang from a very long suffering year

[smolwriter]

"I'm going to write!"

*goes off to watch youtube and read fanfics instead*

[shizunitis]

hm. luo binghe betraying shen qingqiu before he could throw him into the abyss, so that there's no reason shen qingqiu would kill himself for his sake later on. feigning his hate for shen qingqiu, thinking that his ravenous and unsightly love was the reason shen qingqiu felt so guilty as to sacrifice his life for binghe’s. bingqiu ending up on opposite sides and shen qingqiu being the one seeking answers while luo binghe drives him away. do you see where i’m going with this. because i’m not sure i do

[strawberryyyenthusiast]

Diabetic Steve who is at a Dairy Queen with Robin after he went with her to an all girl punk band that’s she’s been wanting to see for years. Steve had been feeling weird all day but he didn’t want to bail at the last second because he knew that Robin would just cancel everything to take care of Steve.

(Steve would do the same for her).

Steve plops down into a booth while Robin goes to order them food. He pulls out his pod and winces when he sees his glucose level.

64 and going down. Not a good sign.

Just to be sure he pricks his finger and holy shit, he’s actually at 43. It’s at that moment, when Steve is wiping his finger with the alcohol wipe, that his phone decides to loudly beep to alert him that, “hey you’re crashing pretty hard and fast— take care of it soon!!”

Steve is rifling through his bag while Robin is already trying to rush their orders.

“Shit,” Steve mumbles to himself. “I’m out of fucking juice.”

His hands start to shake and Robin begins to freak out. Steve is always so in control of his diabetes, she’s never seen him like this. So, Robin does what any other person would do and grabs the largest blizzard she has ever seen on the online orders tray and runs over to her best friend.

“Here! Have this, I’m going to try to get you some apple juice!”

Steve just nods his head and slowly spoons some of it into his mouth.

“This tastes like shit, by the way.”

“You’re welcome, dingus. Now shut up and eat.”

The worker behind the counter comes over and starts talking to Robin after she sits in front of Steve. Steve can’t really make anything out right now since he’s trying to focus on making his hands work. But, he thinks he hears the mention of calling 911 and an ambulance.

Time passes a little slower after that. Steve somehow manages to get down enough of the ice cream that he is slowly rising again.

57 after he pricked. Thank god.

It’s at that moment that Eddie Munson, lead singer of Corroded Coffin, walks in. He went to his best friend’s, Chrissy’s, show and needed a pick-me-up after helping her lug all of her equipment back into their vehicle.

He goes over to the online orders tray and it’s empty. He doesn’t really mind waiting. He walks over to the counter and sees that the worker is extremely frantic as she sorts some shit out.

“Hey,” he starts, his fingers tapping the fake granite counter top. “Just checking, I’m here to pick up an order for Edmundo and it’s not on the tray. Do you know when it will be ready?” He flashes an awkward smile and the worker just points to the table behind him.

“We’re working on it. Your nightmare of a blizzard was needed for something else. Give us five minutes.”

Eddie nods and slowly turned around, where he sees the most gorgeous man eating his blizzard. Reluctantly, he might add. The man has on a light pink t-shirt and brown corduroy pants, thick lensed glasses sliding down his nose. The woman across from him was clad in funky colors and had a dirty blonde bob. She was talking extremely fast and gesturing with her hands a bunch.

Chrissy would love her.

He walked over and tapped the man on the shoulder.

“How’s my blizzard?”

He slowly looks up and Eddie is met with honey brown eyes and beauty marks for days. A straight nose and an angular jawline. Jesus Christ.

The woman looks like she’s about to say something, but the guy beats her to it. “It tastes like if a unicorn threw up in my mouth, but it prevented me from passing out. So… thanks.” He smiles. “I’m Steve.”

Eddie needs to become Steve’s husband immediately.

“And I’m in love.” He pauses and then sees the look of glee on Steve’s face. “EDDIE. My name is Eddie.”

“It’s nice to meet you Eddie. Are you free tomorrow?”

[pinespinespinespinespines]

"They say he just appeared in the park tonight out of nowhere"

When Ford arrives in alternate Euclidea and sees alternate Bill for the first time 😳 part of my A Better Bill au (from this post)

silly billy under the cut

[adamsrcnan]

the trojans thinking blue is jean's favourite colour because of how many clothes he has in blue and so they all team together to buy him a bunch of stuff in blue (bc he still doesn't have enough clothes) and laila or cat are like "why all the blue?" so derek chimes in and is like "figured lil bro's favourite colour is blue" while gesturing to jean's very blue and very low cut blue shirt (have i mentioned it's blue???). jeremy is already sticking his head around jean's shoulder to get a look at the blue hoodie jean's holding in his hands and he's like "hey mine too" at the SAME time cat says "jean's favourite colour is brown" & then it's just an awkward pause where jean is burning a hole into the soft blue hoodie he just unwrapped and jeremy is burning a hole into the side of jean's face and everyone is looking around putting two and two together....

[citrenecult]

Drew the Lamb, Narinder, and the Follower Bishops.

Some close ups.

[wingedknightrose]

WIP Weekend/Whenever

Tagged by @lucien-lachance way back on Wednesday lol. sorry for being late Ari!

No-pressure tagging @lucien-lachance and @simonsquest and anyone else that would like to share things :D

Still writing Petru's terrible awful no good very bad day

Marie Belmont had been murdered. And every sign Petru could find pointed to her going willingly. Who could have done that? Who would have done that? Certainly no one was loved by all, but to resort to murder? And why did she not even try to stop it? Petru lifted his gaze and glared at the little shard of mirror that hung over the crib. If it was magic in nature, it did nothing to indicate such, the glimmery little bastard. What had the damnable thing shown her? Why hadn’t she told him? He would have helped. He fought wargs and cave trolls on the regular, for God’s sake, few were the men that could match him. Had some manner of sorcery been involved? But even then, with the Elders here, they should have been able to counter the magics of any man that threatened them if given warning - and they had been given enough warning to take Trevor away! So…why? The last thing Marie had said to him - she’d thanked him for being there for her. It had sounded like a final farewell even at the time. She’d said in her own words that she treasured him as a dear friend. So why hadn’t she told him anything? Had she been trying to protect him, too?

[slayerdurge]

the thing that drives me absolutely crazy though is that gortash is presented as this commanding dominating tyrant and yet it's consistently shown that the thing he appreciates about durge (or tav for that matter) is when they're not willing to submit to him & when they are strong enough to either stand against him or to stand with him & when they are his equal.

an insane thing for someone like him to want. you'd think he'd want to rule alone and yet the insight checks all show that he actually prefers to share so long as there's someone around worth sharing with.

"Half a smile shows he is teasing you. He doesn't think for one moment you'd fully submit to him. Nor should a spawn as formidable as you."

[smolwriter]

when i realize i have to write the scenes in order to get to the scenes i want to write

[strawberryyyenthusiast]

Eddie wakes up in the middle of the night to find that Steve’s side of the bed is empty. In his disgruntled state, he grabs his phone and starts recording a TikTok because he’s a freak. It goes a little something like this:

*eddie padding his way to the kitchen*

*the camera flips from Eddie’s face to Steve in the kitchen sitting at the counter*

Eddie: baby, what are you doing?

Steve, hunched over the counter with half a burger in his mouth: what are you doing up?

*eddie puts the phone down but leaves it recording*

Eddie: low blood sugar?

Steve: yeah. Doordashed a burger from the diner down the road. Want a bite?

*eddie opens his mouth, practically unhinging his jaw*

The video continues for five minutes and is just the two of them eating. Eddie checks Steve’s levels while he stands behind Steve, arms around his waist, swaying them from side to side.

[tylidae]

A I L U R A N T H R O P Y 1 0 1

[caffeine-and-computers]

being a writer is spelling disembowelment correctly on the first try but somehow always screwing up definitliely

[inocennt]

you said i was freeloading...