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i wanna take a walk with him, watch the sunset, go to a convenience store to get some snacks, maybe order a pizza, and like watch a movie or listen to his records or smth ⋆౨ৎ˚⟡˖ ࣪🤍🍒🌄💋🍕🥺

before dale lived with ruth, i see him living in a trailer

tell me this isn’t giving 70s!dale

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being an empath is the worst thing ever like tell me why I feel bad for pennywise when he said no one wants to be his friend in it: chapter two even though I know he is evil and bad

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Im going to sleep good night everybody! Have this time shipping with me and him talking in my native language

(Its 12 am on a week day)

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saw this room at an estate sale and just wanted to nap here so bad

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i love him ੈ♡˳🥺

i'm glad he's such a weirdo that nothing would rlly weird him out, like it's comforting in a way

what are some things that if you did them, it would weird dale out, and how would he react to being weirded out?

like if u actually licked up his gelatinous tear, then apologized for letting the intrusive thoughts win 😭

dale has a whole facade and is only weird when he manipulates people or has some sort of outburst which we know, thanks for the obvious crimson! :)

i think he’d be oddly turned on if you licked his tears, probably have a raised brow but nonetheless, there’s an obvious bulge in his long johns now! aside from that, i really can’t think of anything that would weird dale out, he’s a weirdo too! i think he’d pick on you though!

“you’re such a silly little angel, aren’t you? always causing me trouble!” and he lets out a nasally giggle, pre usual.

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i believe in unicorns ⋆˙⟡

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Dialogue Tags Aren’t the Problem, Your Dialogue Rhythm Is

friendly reminder that the word “said” did not kill your scene.

you don’t need to replace every line of dialogue with “he rasped” or “she intoned” or “they gasped breathlessly” (please no). your dialogue is not dying because of your tags. it’s dying because the rhythm is off.

👀 let me explain:

✨ what is dialogue rhythm?

it’s the flow of speech between characters. the beats. the pacing. the way words bounce, interrupt, cut off, trail, clash. it’s less about the words themselves and more about the energy they carry.

dialogue rhythm is what makes two people arguing feel like a boxing match, or a confession feel like a car crash. it’s how you keep tension in the room. if your rhythm sucks, no amount of fancy tags is gonna save you.

🔪 signs your dialogue rhythm is off:

every character is speaking in full, polished sentences like it’s a staged play

nobody ever interrupts, stammers, hesitates, or doubles back

the emotional pace stays flat, even in high-stakes scenes

all the action beats are “he nodded” “she smiled” “they looked at her” over and over

you read it out loud and it feels like a middle school skit

👂 here’s how to fix it:

Read your dialogue out loud. Like, actually out loud. if it sounds robotic, it is robotic. listen for places where people would realistically pause, ramble, get cut off, or trail off. insert those beats. add the mess.

Use white space and formatting to control speed. short lines = fast pace. long blocks = slow burn. a line break right before someone says something unhinged? elite move. example: “You really think I’d betray you?” Pause. “You already did.”

Cut 30% of your dialogue. if you can remove the line and nothing breaks, it was filler. chop chop. more silence = more tension. not every reply needs a full answer.

Let action interrupt speech. don’t wait for the character to finish talking before you show what they’re doing. intercut body language or physical actions mid-line. it mimics how people actually talk. like this: “Don’t touch that—” she lunged forward, grabbing his wrist. “—you don’t know what it is.”

Stop overexplaining with tags. you don’t need to say “she shouted angrily” if the line is literally “GET OUT.” trust the line. if the dialogue’s strong, “said” works just fine. if the dialogue’s weak, “murmured” won’t save it.

🛑 but what about dialogue tags?

use them! but treat them like punctuation, not prose. the goal is clarity, not ✨flair✨. you want the reader to know who’s speaking without noticing the machinery.

“Said” is invisible. “Snarled” is a spice. Use spices sparingly.

better yet: mix tags with beats to keep rhythm tight. example:

BAD: “I hate you,” he said angrily. “I hate you,” she snapped back.

BETTER: “I hate you,” he said, jaw clenched. She didn’t even blink. “Good. Then we’re even.”

💡 TL;DR: your scene doesn’t need fancy tags. it needs movement. conflict. silence. interruptions. character-specific tone. you fix that by fixing the rhythm, not the verbs.

go back to your WIP, open your messiest conversation scene, and test it. read it aloud. break it up. cut what drags. add one beat of silence. give someone a half-finished sentence and a reason to storm out.

watch how fast it starts to breathe.

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Hello! Would you be okay with writing either fluff or nsfw (your choice ofc) headcanons for bill skårsgards pennywise? If not, thats okay too! Love your work!!

Pennywise headcanons

• He's a rather peculiar partner, and you'll realize that very quickly. Although, who in their right mind would date an extraterrestrial being in the guise of a clown? (me and you)

• Pennywise is actually quite vulnerable. At times, his behavior resembles that of a young child, as he genuinely feels lonely on Earth without beings like him. Although it's hidden behind his bravado and venomous words, he truly is lonely.

• He can be gentle. Very gentle, of course, within the limits of his being. Pennywise doesn't kill you, which is really significant. But he loves hugs. He likes to shrink just enough to fit in your arms, and he really loves being a little spoon. Your hugs, the gentle warmth of your touch, and the steady beat of your heart remind him of what home is. It's a similar feeling to the endless flow from which he came. It's as if he's still in this vast, loving universe, but now he has his own, more precious universe. You.

• He cares. Over time, he learns to understand your feelings. Although his empathy is still far from perfect, after all, he is not a human, he already knows how you behave when you are bad and good. And he has his own ways to cheer you up and make you feel better. He can turn into your favorite character (for a while, he will be jealous) or do something cute. For example, tie a balloon for you in a huge bouquet. And the balloon won't pop until you want it to. Or it can turn into a cute animal to make you feel good.

• Over time, Pennywise became disgusted with your fear. He likes your laughter, your sweet smile, and the blush on your cheeks. Now, your fear makes him feel empty and lost. He tries to alleviate your pain or fear immediately to receive a dose of comfort and tranquility from you.

• The scent of your tranquility calms you. Therefore, during his hibernation, he enjoys cuddling up to you and resting. He feels loved and needed.

• Pennywise has transformed this old house into a more respectable one for you. From the outside, the house still looks gloomy and abandoned, but inside it's warm and comfortable. Pennywise has used his magic, as well as your favorite colors, carpets, lighting, and more, to create a truly pleasant nest for you.

• Speaking of a nest, you're a potential partner to him. Yes, you're from different species, but that doesn't bother him in the slightest. Pennywise is trying to take care of you, bring you food (it used to be children, but now it's something more edible), and do everything he can to make you accept him in this form. He is an extraterrestrial being capable of self-fertilization, and yet he wants to raise his offspring with you. He wants his baby to experience the same beautiful emotions that he has with you.

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> If you like this I'll do more, luv!!

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REMEMBER:

✨ A woman doesn’t have to have a vagina.

✨ A man doesn’t have to have a penis.

✨ A body part ≠ a gender identity.

✨ Trans women are just as women as cisgender women.

✨ Trans men are just as men as cisgender men.

✨ Not all nonbinary people look androgynous. And no they don't owe you androgynous.

✨ Not all genderfluid people "switch" day by day. There is no rules of being genderfluid.

✨ Not all agender people want to be invisible. Being agender has nothing to do with being visible.

✨ Not all intersex people want to be "explained." They have nothing to explain, they are normal people with their own identities.

✨ Not all trans people want surgery. It's all their own choice.

✨ Not all queer folks want your approval.

✨️Personality or style/appearance has nothing to do with gender.

✨️Every person deserves to be called with the pronouns they prefer no matter what.

✨️Not all genderqueer/transgender/nonbinary people experience dysphoria. Not experiencing dysphoria is as valid as experiencing dysphoria.

✨️Not all asexual people feel no love.

✨️Asexual people don't have to be aromantic.

✨️Aromantic people don't have to be asexual.

✨️Xenogenders and neopronouns are concepts created by people (many of whom are neurodivergent) who are trying to understand gender in their own unique way, and they are perfectly valid.

AND MOST IMPORTANTLY:

✨️Existing as a person is valid and valuable enough. People don't have to label themselves or put themselves into boxes. There is no "gender rules/labeling rules", labels are meant to make people comfortable. Not to put people into boxes.

IF I SKIPPED AN IMPORTANT FACT, MY APOLOGIES. I WILL ADD THAT FACT IF YOU DM ME OR COMMENT!

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i—😳 omg i'm feral for him ❤️‍🔥🫦 you wrote the tentacles very well

pennywise taking your virginity but he uses tentacles, then gives you lots of aftercare? ⋆. 𐙚 ˚🩸🍒😳🫦

/// This one made me nervous because for the life of me I have no idea how to write tentacle porn- But I gave it a shot! //

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The cold goo of the tentacle numbed the pain somehow, leaving behind internal hickeys with the suction portion of the tendril. You were held down by others of the same size, and you could swear that you saw the thing inside your stomach.

Pennywise was gentle at first, almost too gentle- but in his words: "The joy of losing your innocence is taking it slow... For now." And it quickly went from smooth sailing to a storm at sea.

The tentacle went wild with a will of its own, no longer giving you ease but instead slight discomfort at its size. It pushed deeper and deeper into your bleeding cunt, latching a suction cup onto your cervix and milking it for everything it had. You moaned and cried, yet Pennywise seemed to find joy in your distress.

"Aw, lookie here- Your pretty little face is all shiny with tears.." He whispered, taking his strangely long tongue and licking the liquid away. Your orgasm soon followed, and as you laid there, too tired to move, Pennywise climbed in between your legs, gently spreading them apart and licking away the discarded blood with his tongue. "You did so good, sweet one... So good for me." His hands gently massaged the area above your womb, easing the pain a bit.

He finally laid down beside you, covering you in kisses.

// I hope you liked it! Sorry it took so long! //

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i love the writer's psychosis part tehe ⋆. 𐙚 ˚♡🤭 it's v well written. the way you describe overlord!dale feels like i'm in the same room as him, which makes me giggly and squirrelly and shy in the best way. i also love the relationships between him and the other characters, especially charlie and angel dust lol 🪽💋ੈ♡˳

sometimes i think about dale if he were an overlord in hazbin hotel

Overlord Longlegs

They call him Overlord Kobble.

But most just say Longlegs.

The name slinks off the sinners' tongues like cigarette smoke... fearful, reverent, a little aroused.

He doesn't walk into a room. He seeps into it. All smiles. All Satan loves the freaks, darling.

He hums hymns in reverse and compliments your lipstick while carving sigils in your table.

"You boys and girls and babies in between" he says, voice syrup-sweet, "you make me feel like Sunday."

He likes Hell. Adores it.

He says it reminds him of home, minus the hypocrisy.

"Ain't no preacher here gonna scold me for dancing with the devil when I am the damn music!"

Charlie's wary of him, but simultaneously finds him really pretty. Alastor finds him interesting.

Angel? Angel lives for the drama.

"Dale, baby, where'd you get that suit?" he purrs.

"This old thing?" Dale twirls, long limbs elegant, snake-like. "Dead man wore it to my funeral. I didn't return the favor."

Hell is loud and sinful and gay and cruel.

He drinks it like sacrament.

"Paint me a pretty Hell" he says, licking blood off a martini glass. "Make it sparkle. Make it scream."

And they do.

Because Longlegs is watching.

And Hell's never looked more divine.

Hi! That was a writer's psychosis you just witnessed above the cut/ jk. How did I not think about Dale in Hazbin Hotel before?? It fits him so smoothly! You're a genius, love!

Let's take things from a less chaotic perspective now:

Dale is absolutely Overlord material and not just for his kill count. Overlords in HH are defined by their influence/fear factor, a unique power, and their "boss" personality that commands without leaving room for argument.

Dale checks all three, in his own unique way.

Even in Longlegs, he has a hypnotic quality.

Dale's velvety voice makes your very soul shudder. He does't just speak. He infects you with words.

Ritual Magic? It's canon.

Another thing I just came up with?

He thinks he made pacts with the Devil (through his rituals, murders, his blood, and finally his death) but plot twist!!!

He was never talking to Lucifer.

He was speaking to some other, forgotten, banished Prince of Hell, sealed away and desperate for a vessel.

So Dale's magick comes from something even older, something Lucifer doesn't control.

Why? Because I say so and it's okay that it's not biblically accurate.

His Demon manifestation?

His body isn't fully solid. He can slip between cracks, contort unnaturally, disappear through reflective surfaces.

No one can corner him.

No one knows where he ends and the real world begins.

He definitely keeps the pale, total white aesthetic post-mortem as well.

Some backstory integration in Hazbin canon 'cause I'm having too much fun:

Dale: "You're not the voice I heard."

Lucifer: chuckles nervously with his 7 foot wingspan and stupid coffee mug that says "Hell's Greatest Dad"

"You... did all that thinking I sent you?"

Dale just smiles. "You didn't?"

Lucifer never even noticed him.

He was too busy building a rubber duck war machine and spiraling in depression over his divorce and his daughter's rehab efforts.

Dale's "master"?

That other ancient demon impersonating Lucifer, tricking Dale with fake sigils and divine visions back on Earth.

Dale did horrible things thinking it was righteous work. He doesn't even regret it.

Charlie?

She tries to welcome him to the Hotel and he's like "bless your gay little heart".

She wants him rehabilitated. He likes her. Too much. Calls her "doll face" or "little lamb".

I mean, in the beginning he was in awe, meeting Satan's daughter was a highlight for him, but after he gained power as an Overlord, the tables turned.

She sees hope. He sees a vessel.

Alastor?

Begrudging mutual respect... with deep unease.

Alastor is too aware of Dale's powers. So sinister and dark if used in their full capacity.

Dale might even admire Al, but he's no follower. Like... A Jazz Demon? Nah.

Vox and Val:

They think he's old-school creepy.

He thinks they're new money sinners with tacky aesthetics.

Still, he enjoys a little showbiz glamour.

Angel Dust:

Genuinely likes him. Flirts for fun. Dale plays along with terrifying, sadistic affection.

"You'd look just darling with your fur peeled back."

Angel is flabbergasted, but Dale wouldn't hurt him, unless the spider demon wanted him to.

They go out together in full drag more than once.

Lucifer (again):

Does not know how to handle him.

He didn't make this guy!

He can't control him. He's low-key afraid of what gave Dale his powers. But too proud to admit it.

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so excited to read this eeee

sometimes i think about dale if he were an overlord in hazbin hotel

Overlord Longlegs

They call him Overlord Kobble.

But most just say Longlegs.

The name slinks off the sinners' tongues like cigarette smoke... fearful, reverent, a little aroused.

He doesn't walk into a room. He seeps into it. All smiles. All Satan loves the freaks, darling.

He hums hymns in reverse and compliments your lipstick while carving sigils in your table.

"You boys and girls and babies in between" he says, voice syrup-sweet, "you make me feel like Sunday."

He likes Hell. Adores it.

He says it reminds him of home, minus the hypocrisy.

"Ain't no preacher here gonna scold me for dancing with the devil when I am the damn music!"

Charlie's wary of him, but simultaneously finds him really pretty. Alastor finds him interesting.

Angel? Angel lives for the drama.

"Dale, baby, where'd you get that suit?" he purrs.

"This old thing?" Dale twirls, long limbs elegant, snake-like. "Dead man wore it to my funeral. I didn't return the favor."

Hell is loud and sinful and gay and cruel.

He drinks it like sacrament.

"Paint me a pretty Hell" he says, licking blood off a martini glass. "Make it sparkle. Make it scream."

And they do.

Because Longlegs is watching.

And Hell's never looked more divine.

Hi! That was a writer's psychosis you just witnessed above the cut/ jk. How did I not think about Dale in Hazbin Hotel before?? It fits him so smoothly! You're a genius, love!

Let's take things from a less chaotic perspective now:

Dale is absolutely Overlord material and not just for his kill count. Overlords in HH are defined by their influence/fear factor, a unique power, and their "boss" personality that commands without leaving room for argument.

Dale checks all three, in his own unique way.

Even in Longlegs, he has a hypnotic quality.

Dale's velvety voice makes your very soul shudder. He does't just speak. He infects you with words.

Ritual Magic? It's canon.

Another thing I just came up with?

He thinks he made pacts with the Devil (through his rituals, murders, his blood, and finally his death) but plot twist!!!

He was never talking to Lucifer.

He was speaking to some other, forgotten, banished Prince of Hell, sealed away and desperate for a vessel.

So Dale's magick comes from something even older, something Lucifer doesn't control.

Why? Because I say so and it's okay that it's not biblically accurate.

His Demon manifestation?

His body isn't fully solid. He can slip between cracks, contort unnaturally, disappear through reflective surfaces.

No one can corner him.

No one knows where he ends and the real world begins.

He definitely keeps the pale, total white aesthetic post-mortem as well.

Some backstory integration in Hazbin canon 'cause I'm having too much fun:

Dale: "You're not the voice I heard."

Lucifer: chuckles nervously with his 7 foot wingspan and stupid coffee mug that says "Hell's Greatest Dad"

"You... did all that thinking I sent you?"

Dale just smiles. "You didn't?"

Lucifer never even noticed him.

He was too busy building a rubber duck war machine and spiraling in depression over his divorce and his daughter's rehab efforts.

Dale's "master"?

That other ancient demon impersonating Lucifer, tricking Dale with fake sigils and divine visions back on Earth.

Dale did horrible things thinking it was righteous work. He doesn't even regret it.

Charlie?

She tries to welcome him to the Hotel and he's like "bless your gay little heart".

She wants him rehabilitated. He likes her. Too much. Calls her "doll face" or "little lamb".

I mean, in the beginning he was in awe, meeting Satan's daughter was a highlight for him, but after he gained power as an Overlord, the tables turned.

She sees hope. He sees a vessel.

Alastor?

Begrudging mutual respect... with deep unease.

Alastor is too aware of Dale's powers. So sinister and dark if used in their full capacity.

Dale might even admire Al, but he's no follower. Like... A Jazz Demon? Nah.

Vox and Val:

They think he's old-school creepy.

He thinks they're new money sinners with tacky aesthetics.

Still, he enjoys a little showbiz glamour.

Angel Dust:

Genuinely likes him. Flirts for fun. Dale plays along with terrifying, sadistic affection.

"You'd look just darling with your fur peeled back."

Angel is flabbergasted, but Dale wouldn't hurt him, unless the spider demon wanted him to.

They go out together in full drag more than once.

Lucifer (again):

Does not know how to handle him.

He didn't make this guy!

He can't control him. He's low-key afraid of what gave Dale his powers. But too proud to admit it.

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“Ancient souls in modern bodies” prompts

☽ “Do you believe in reincarnation?” - “No.” - “Then why do I remember your face from a thousand years ago?”

☽ touching their hand and seeing flashes of lives you’ve never lived, castles, swords, deserts, stars. and always them.

☽ “You always find me. No matter the century.”

☽ seeing a photo in a museum of someone who looks exactly like you. and they’re standing next to someone who looks like them. and the plaque says: Unknown Lovers, 1882

☽ kissing for the first time and the earth hums under your feet. the air shifts. the world remembers.

☽  “I don’t know your name, but I know your soul.”

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