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is your twitter gone?

NO ITS BACK NOW IM SORRY

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Don’t look for happiness in the same place you lost it.

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oh my god

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Is it weird that I like the smell of my cat?? He has such a comforting smell. Smells like home or something

NO ME TOO ANON!!!! she just always smells like a cat. how she do that

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10 ways to hit your readers in the gut

One of the strongest bonds that link us to our favorite stories is the emotional tie, or books that sink a fist right into our guts. When you finished a book where you couldn’t let go of after the last page, chances are, the author successfully punched you in the spleen. If you’ve ever wondered how to do just that, here are some of my favorite methods:

Make your reader root for your main character(s). Make your character stretch out their arm toward their goal, as far as they can to reach, until their fingertips barely brush it. Make your character want something so much that your reader wants it, too.

When your character trips and stumbles and stops to question themselves, the readers will hold their breath.

Push your character to their very limit, and then a little further.

When your character hits the bottom, they should scrape themselves back together and get back up. Give readers a reason to believe in your character.

If your character is challenging your plot, your plot should challenge your character.

Leave a trail of intrigue, of questions, of “what if?” and “what next?”

If a character loses something (a battle, an important memento, part of themselves), they must eventually gain something in equal exchange, whether for good or bad.

Raise the stakes. Then raise them higher.

Don’t feel pressured to kill a character (especially simply to generate emotional appeal). A character death should serve the plot, not the shock factor. Like anything else in your story, only do it if it must be done and there’s no other way around it.

What’s the worst that can happen? Make it happen. Just make sure that the reader never loses hope.

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1 of 7 — 花様年華 on stage: epilogue, japan edition ©

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i hope ur feeling well and have/are having a good day!! ily 💘

AW THIS IS SO SWEET!!!!!! thank u anon :-) i hope ur having a good day too!!!!!

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hs yearbook award themes

↳ 2. cutest couple ▶ ongniel

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Adult World (Jungkook smut)

Description: You reveal to your friends that no one except yourself has ever made you cum. Jin in particular finds this interesting and dares you and Jungkook to go to the sex shop down the street and purchase a sex toy, for your own benefit of course.

Pairings: You x Jungkook, You x Taehyung, Jungkook x Taehyung (you know how truth and dare goes)

Basically: Taehyung is a cocky lil shit who features quite a lot. Jin is a mean lil shit and Jungkook is a very helpful lil shit ;)

Genre: Smut, Angst, Fluff (so much smut, like damn this was hot to write)

This fic includes: A brief boy on boy scene, swearing, alcohol, sex toys, explicit smut

Word count: 6k

“You’ve got to be kidding!” Jin practically howls with laughter, doubling over himself and nearly falling off the couch with laughter. You’re about to tell him off but Jungkook beats you to it.

“Shut up. It’s not that big of a deal.”

Jin sits up straight, looking down at Jungkook, who sits next to you on the floor, opposite Jin. He wipes the tears from his eyes, his laughter finally dying down. “Hey, don’t you think you should talk to me with a bit more respect?” He prods teasingly, but Jungkook doesn’t seem in the mood, his previous lighthearted spirit vanishing upon Jin’s insensitive comment.

Jungkook’s tone is excitingly stern, but not rude, “Yeah, I’ll show more respect when you show more respect to Y/N.”

You laugh, “Don’t worry about me, Jungkook. I don’t think I can take Jin very seriously, not when I highly doubt he’d even know how to make me or any other girl cum.”

The circle of friends in Taehyung and Jungkook’s apartment erupt into comical ‘oohs’ and ‘ahhs’.

“You got damn burned!” Jimin says, leaning over the bottles in the center of your various seated positions to high five you.

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I’m asking you for writing advice because you’re awesome. So I’m sort of writing a fic that’s hate to love, only they kinda always liked each other under the hate [sounds really cliches :((], but I’m halfway through and it’s only 2500 words. Do you think that’s too short??? How would I make it longer when I’ve exhausted all my ideas other than the climax and falling action??

UR AWESOME TOO!!!!! omg can i read it. thats okay if u dont wanna share tho so ill try to help the best i can!!!!! i think theres nothing wrong with short chapters. some writers just CANT write long chapters. thats just their style and how they write. for me, i cant write short chapters because i always have a lot happening in one that dividing it up would throw off the pacing. if u get what u want across in 5k words or less, that is perfectly okay!!!!! u dont want it to drag on and u also wanna keep the lengths of ur chapters consistent? i think thats also very important. my chapters range from 16k-22k so thats usually the average. they started off shorter but got longer w each new part. its okay to have them a few thousand words longer but i wouldnt recommend having a 20k chapter when all ur chapters before that has been 5k. ur audience is used to 5k so 20k would be a LOT. but if u want to make them longer, and just a few thousand words longer, then DETAIL is the best way to accomplish that.

for example, when i write my fics there isnt a lot of detail in the first draft and the chapter IS shorter because of it. but i go back and add in small details, especially in dialogue tags. what are they doing while they’re talking? are they moving their hands? where are they? why are they there? and then theres also inner monologues where characters just kinda think to themselves. i think thats important as well bc it lets the reader know what theyre thinking!!!!! i dont know if u already do this but both of these are a GREAT way to lengthen ur chapters

another way is simply to add another scene or two. think about what u want to happen in the chapter. can u throw anything else in there that would further the plot? again i would be careful with this because u dont wanna lengthen ur chapter just to make it longer. i dont think to myself “ok this chapter is going to be 20k words” it just happens bc theres so much going on!!!!!! so i think first tell urself its okay to have shorter chapters and theres nothing wrong with cliches. its harmful to never wanna write cliches just in fear of being cliche. cliches are cliche BECAUSE people love cliches so much and want to read them!!!!!!!

one last thing i wanna say is: if u have no idea what u want to happen in ur chapters except for much later on. a good brainstorming session w a friend is always good to do!!!!! approach them like “hey can i tell u about sum ideas” and theyre like “no” and then u say “okay great so–” LMAO but really talking to someone REALLY pulls ideas out of u that u never have. or even take a walk and listen to music. or write down any ideas u get in the shower or before u go to sleep at night. u have ideas u just dont know it yet!!!!!! im always open for u to brainstorm if u dont feel comfortable telling anyone else about ur ideas. i love hearing about other fics!!!!! i really do!!!!!!!! so dont feel discouraged to do that

sorry for the long response but i hope this helped u!!!!!!!!!

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i swear it takes seconds to break over a decade of trust. im so hurt

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#HAPPYJIMINDAY

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i just had a friend over 9 years turn on me and tried pinning me as the bad guy when all I did was ask to rekindle our friendship bc every time I wanted to talk to them they would turn me down, made excuses that its bc they were tired and had a lot of shit on their mind.. but I was never important enough to come first... I want to be angry and I want her to hurt the way she hurt me.. I thought of you since you've recently come out of a bad relationship. how did you move on? how did you do it?

nine years. wow. and thats what makes it hard anon. obviously i can only get one side of the story but i think whats most important is surrounding urself with people that DO care!!!!!!! i know that i would be so sad and so desperate to go back to her if i was alone. but im not. im surrounded by people who love and care about me. who were happy to hear that i made the decision to let her go for myself. and i think anon the best way u can hurt her without hurting urself is to be happy without her. dont focus on the memories or the good times u had with her because its so easy to get sad when u do that. just be happy u had them but know ur moving on and making those memories w other ppl now

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ever feel like everything you write is shitty? cause i do :(

i do anon!!!!! i do all the time!!!!! :-(