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TPOT 18: the monkey's paw

be careful what you wish for

ok before i do the actual review let me just go over changes i made since the last tier list

UPDATES

i have moved tpot 8 down to D tier,, i just feel like people are too out of character and it's just not really fun to watch especiallly since it's just kind of a lame challenge

ok enough dilly dally shilly shallying, let's get into this review

THE REVIEW

i don't really know what to say other than,, this just feels like a poor man's tpot 15,, but with less stakes, or cakes

the plot is just: go through everyone's memories to see who took lollipop's credit card.. ok

this plot already feels kinda iffy since,, this doesnt feel like a necessary plot for an episode,, especially since it doesnt do a great job at developing more characters

in fact, the arc resolution for match and bubble was so underwhelming it's almost insulting.. like,, you're telling me that the last time these two have ever spoke to each other was when they argued and bubble was like "i just want you to be understanding,, i woint a friend who cares,, not just another poirson like pencil" but now bubble is just casually ignoring that like "yoy're ok matchy!!" somehow going back on the things she did in bfb 11?? or any of the development she had in post split??

the bit lollipop was doing with gelatin and flower could've been funny if they actually did anything with it,, but it just all happened offscreen and was completely ignored afterwards,,

also i kinda forgot how i just dont care about most of the tpot characters,, especially,, them

they really decided to just do nothing with them until the end where they force-ended the challenge,, and then after the episode was over, lollipop goes into their memory to find out what happened to my goat balloony, just to find out that balloony was sent to space

also this was my problem with post split but a lot of the characters' personalities just dont have much interesting personalities to warrant my interest

this episode was not my cup of tea,, it was kiiiinda mid

5/10

here are my votes!!

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ralsei eating lard

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These charecters do not belong to me, only the art work does

Estos personajes no me pertenecen, solo me pertenece la obra

Sam & Max - Steve Purcell

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thanks for editing the post! :)

- last ask anon

yes!! you’re welcome!! and while i’m at it i think i should make it clear that the rewrite is NOT meant to “be better” than the original episode

it’s only made to show how i would do it differently in my own writing style

i wouldn’t really appreciate it much if anyone did say my rewrite was better because i’m a 20 year old rewriting an object show that was, at the time, was written by like 16 or something year olds

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hey no offense but werent they children when they made bfdia 1, of course its gonna be horribly written because 12-10 year olds made it

i'd agree with this if they didnt have much better writing at the end of season 1 and most other pre-hiatus episodes

altho i will edit the post to be less harsh

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CURRENTLY IN THE WORKS: BFDIA 1 REWRITTEN

im not the biggest fan of bfdia's first episode, i feel like it suffers from its weird writing decisions to a point where it's one of my least favorite episodes of the whole show, here are some of the reasons why

way too much filler, especially with the "favorite screens" scene (i'm sorry but it just feels like a powerpoint presentation it doesnt even have the impressive animation excuse unlike the opening chase scene)

some scenes really dont have much explanation (it took until bfb 22 to explain why firey wasnt in the beginning of bfdia 1)

donut was, and this is a problem with bfdia as a whole if i'm honest, set up for elimination by making him a shitty golf ball clone and not the voice of reason we know him as today

so my way of remedying this, is to just rewrite the whole thing from the ground up, as a fancomic

if you don't like my take on the episode that's fine, this is just how i would do it differently

also i will be using my own personal designs for the characters to make it more,, personal ah god damn it im not good at revealing stuff, whatever here are some previews:

the style will not be consistent but i will try to make the eyes and mouths resemble bfdia

it's gonna be very fun writing this!! i hope you enjoy it as much as i do :>

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hmm i should really review these the more i think about it

it would give me more to talk about

OBECT SHOW RATINGS

anything rated 8/10 and above are shows i’d recommend for people who are new to the object show community

please note that this is not an objective list (which no list should be because art is subjective lol) and al ratings are my own personal opinion

BATTLE FOR DREAM ISLAND: 8/10

INANIMATE INSANITY: 9/10

ONE*: 8/10

NIGHTLY MANOR: 10/10

BURGER BRAWL: 3/10

OBJECT CRINGE: 7/10

DAILY OBJECT SHOW: 6/10

A IS FOR: 7/10

ITS TIME FOR THE: 8/10

BURNER: 9/10

BEAN'S SHOW: 8/10

ANIMATIC BATTLE: 9/10

I WANT IN: 8/10

SHOWVEMBER: 8/10

LOVE OF THE S*N: 10/10

PAPER PUPPETS TAKE 2: 9/10

OBJECT TERROR: don’t watch this

OBJECT KERFUFFLE: 7/10

TFMOS: 7/10

OBSOLETE BATTLE SHOW: 7/10

VILLAGE OF OBJECTS: 5/10

OBJECT LOCKDOWN: 6/10

OBJECT INVASION (2024): 9/10

feel free to give me more shows to rate!! i will be sure to add it to the list after watching it, assuming i haven’t seen it already

yall didn’t believe me when i said my next post won’t be a tier list i bet the doubters feel so stupid,, HA!!

* i wouldn’t recommend this to a newbie because there are things you have to understand about normal object shows to get what the point is in here

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public service announcement

please don’t just say “hi” in my asks especially anonymously

i quite like responding to asks but i need something to actually respond to that’s not just “hi” give me something to work with

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peter the horse is hwre

more like the horses

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TPOT 17

before i get into the review let's go over the tier list changes - moved ep13 down to high A tier to keep a more pleasant looking list, subject to move back up - moved ep7 down to high B tier, same reasons but i think it'll stay there - moved ep11 down to c tier bc i dont think it's very good lol

oh boy the wait for this episode sure was worth it, i have so many things to talk about

first of all, just like last time, two is not hosting because they are still bedridden,, oops

but instead of four and x hosting, we have bottle hosting, and holy shit she is so bad but to the point where it's hilarious, i love her hehe

cake at stake ceremony thoughts:

PENCIL AND GOLF BALL ARE SAFE YES!!!

winner and donut are safe too :>

yellow face got out and lost his limbs,, it kinda sucks bc he was getting very good at that point

oh,, that means pillow is out too.. damb

ok it's challenge time

the aTWOsment park has made a comeback, and every team is temporarily disbanded into 4 groups, each member from different teams, and they all have to last the longest from each attraction

this is a very good challenge idea because of how it basically forces new interactions between different characters, which tpot has been needing for a LONG TIME!!!!!! good job, sam and niall, you did a good

donut got his arms back hehe!! so cool!! and he didnt even need the help of one!!

also yeah it's an odd numbered episode sooo,, one lore is present as per usual

that's basically all i have to say, i really liked this episode, it was amazing!!

this is the part where i would highlight which team was the most entertaining, but since they were split up for this challenge, i'm gonna judge which groups i liked the most

eating competition fourse riding haunted house ferris wheel

8/10 episode!! it was super good!!

my votes:

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updated the tier list because lol

BFDI character tier list

this might be a bit controversial tbh but im just being honest

next post wont be another tier list i promise

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413

this guy was going to be in gbs but then i was like "no more homestuck"

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WHO ELSE VOTED NO :sob:

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hj is crazy 😭😭😭

LEAVE MY GOATS ALONE

PIN WAS ELIMINATED IN TPOT 16 AND IMMEDIATELY AFTER WE LOSE NICKEL IN BFDIA 18

if golf ball is eliminated in tpot 17 and book in bfdia 19 im gonna riot

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LEAVE MY GOATS ALONE

PIN WAS ELIMINATED IN TPOT 16 AND IMMEDIATELY AFTER WE LOSE NICKEL IN BFDIA 18

if golf ball is eliminated in tpot 17 and book in bfdia 19 im gonna riot