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Smut Review Request - E 02 (on Wattpad) https://www.wattpad.com/1446453207-smut-review-request-e-02?utm_source=web&utm_medium=tumblr&utm_content=share_reading&wp_uname=KAZUMI_57  A series of short excerpts from a WIP, which is based on the typical cultivation fantasy tropes. Therefore, some of the terms used might not make much sense. The parts published here will mostly contain the smut LOL. I've never written smut before and just wanted to know if what I'm writing here is something readable. Looking for constructive criticism and reviews of the writing style. Thanks.