#Commissar of Beacon au
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patriot2525 · 4 months ago
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Commissar Arc, A loyal servant of the God Emperor.
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patriot2525 · 5 months ago
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A thought occurs to me based on Cinder's description of what she saw when she looked closer at Commissar Arc. What do Librarians see? Which leads me to think about Black Templars intimating Librarians from other chapters into not acknowledging what they see. Exempt for Grey Knights who get to freely discuss amongst themselves that have seen the Emperor.
A few years ago at the random rebelling Imperial world
The sounds of fears fighting and loud explosions were heard all over the battlefield, The Heretics Screened in agony as they were burned alive or gunned down by the loyalists.
This Imperial world has not only rebelled against the Emperor, but has also strayed away from his holy light by worshiping Chaos, this fact alone has earned the attention of the Inquisition of the Ordo Hereticus, who coincidentally were accompanied by the Black Templar Space Marine chapter.
But they were not the only ones who have come to this world, as two other space marines chapters have come to this world as well. The Ultramarines and Salamanders chapters have answered the please of the suffering people.
So With the combined might of the 3 space marine chapters and Inquisition, as well Valhallan guards regiment that was Sent to Help the local PDF to Put down the Rebellion. This resulted in a fast and Swift victory for the Imperium and to THE GOD EMPEROR.
So The only thing that the imperials are needed to do, is to get rid of the corpses of the heretics. A very simple and easy task, that promised to be uneventful. But despite this, an event did occur during the cleanup.
An event that included a Ultramarine librarian that is curious about a particular blonde Commissar, with the librarian discovering something that he never expected to witness in his life.
location: The Destroyed Chaos Cultist trenches
At the destroy the trenches line that was once held by the cultist, guardsman and the local PDF Force were in the middle of gathering the cultist corpses into massive piles. As well as getting the necessary preparations for the burning of the corpses.
As the Guardsmans and the PDFs were doing their task, two different Space Marines were passing through them. The two Space Marines were not identical to each other, as they were from different chapters.
The first one was a Ultramarine librarian with the Ultramarine blue Space Marine armour being clad in ropes and also has a special psychic helmet that was attached to the back of his head.
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While the second one was a Salamanders Sergeant, with his iconic green black Space Marine armour.
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As the two Space Marines were passing through, each Guardsmans and PDF soldiers made sure to bow down before the walking Emperor's angels with the utmost respect.
But as the two Space Marines that were passing through the mortals, they didn't glancing or paying attention to the mortals. The reason for the two of the Empress angels ignoring the bowing mortals, which was not a sign of disrespect.
As the reason for this was quite simple, it was mainly because the two Space Marines were currently too busy looking for a particular someone. That particular someone caught the eye of the librarian, which was the main reason why the two of the Emperor's angels did not pay attention to the mortals.
So as the two Marines continued passing through the destroyed cultist trenches, with both of them encountering guardsmen who were busy gathering the cultist dead bodies or burning the pile of corpses. The two space marines approached a large open area in a trench that was the result of a precise hit of artillery fire.
The two Space Marines have finally stopped at their tracks, as it appears they arrived at the right place. The Salamander Sergeant turned his head to look at his librarian friend, who had his gaze completely fixated on someone else.
"Is this him?" 
The librarian silently nodded his head at the question from his salamander companion, as he continued to stare at what appears to be a blonde haired Commissar giving orders to the guardsman.
This Commissar that the librarian was watching appears to be very young, possibly in his very early 20s. but despite the Commissar youthful appearance, his face was already marked by scars of many battles. especially by his augmented right eye that hinted on it, not to mention his very stoic and cold expression on his face. Giving a clear picture that the Commissar already faced many battles, as well as many horrors that the galaxy has to give.
The salamander sergeant turned his gaze switched from the librarian to the young Commissar, looking at the young man with curiosity.
"If you don't mind me asking brother, but what so special about this young man?"
The Salamander Sergeant questioned his Ultramarine friend, who still continued staring silently at the young Commissar. The librarian didn’t say a word, instead simply closed his eyes and began remembering the event that made him so much curious about the young Commissar.
Flashback: A few days earlier
BOOM
"FOR THE EMPEROR!"
"DEATH TO THE CORPE-WOESHIPERS!"
"BURN THE HERETICS!"
"GLORY TO CHAOS!"
The loud sounds of artillery shells exploding and the shouting of the guardsman and the cultist alike were hard all over the battlefield, as the both sides were ruthlessly killing and butchering each other without showing any kind of mercy.
The entirety of the battlefield was filled with the symphony of destruction and death, as the loyalist and the heretics were mowd each other.
The librarian was observe the going battle, he held his staff tightly in his hand. Prepared for the upcoming assault, that he and his brothers will unleashed upon the heretics.
"Brother, our squad is ready for the assault. We will begin the assault on your mark."
The librarian turned his head towards his battle brothers, each of them were fully geared and ready to unleash the Emperor’s fury upon the traitors.
"then let us not waste time, my brothers. FOR THE EMPEROR!"
"FOR THE EMPEROR!"
The Ultramarines emerge from the trenches and begin charge forward towards the traitors, the heretical cultist desperately throw everything they got on the ultramarine.
But their pathetic attempts of slaying the Emperor’s angels, were nothing but a complete failure. As the Ultramarines weapons cut through the traitors so easily, that they left a massive trail of cultus corpses behind them.
The morale of the Heretics was completely decimated by the Emperor’s Angels, as the pathetic traitors begin running for their lives, as they so desperately tried to escape the Emperor’s divine judgement upon them.
"Look brother, the traitors trying to escape."
Exclaimed one of the Ultramarines, who was to guning down the retreating heretics. the librarian saw that his battle brother was correct, the traitors were trying to escape.
"then let us finish with those traitors, brothers"
The Librarian Unleashed his psychic powers upon the cultist, making a shot work of them. It what seems that their victory was close, as the Ultramarines were near trenches of the cultis.
But the Librarian still held his guard up, as there is not knowing what the archenemy is planning.
"My Lord, we came to assist you and your squad ."
The Librarian turned his head to see, that behind them were approaching a squad of guardsman and the local PDF.
"Very well guardsman, you and your man may assist us"
"Yes my lord, MAN! WITH ME."
The Ultramarines alongside the guardsmen and the PDF, has entered the cultist trenches. The combined forces immediately begin to clear out the entirety trench lines of the heretical cultist, they made sure to take no prisoners.
The Librarian alongside his brothers and the guardsman lieutenant were now standing in the cleared out trench, while the body of their enemies were laying on the ground lifelessly.
but despite what it seems to be their victory, the librarian had an unpleasant feeling, as if an imminent danger is coming for them. Before the Liberian could say anything, the ground beneath them burst open, that throws all to them to the sides.
The Librarian had landed painfully on one of the wall of the trange line, before he could have from the ground, a large beast emerge from the hole in the ground.
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A Beast of nurgle, a demonic abomination created in a Gardens of the plague God. The Beast's multiple eyes landed on the librarian, The beast open it’s disgusting mouth and roared, as it spilled diseases and plagues from its mouth.
The librarian rose to his feet, collecting his stuff tightly in his hands as he concentrate his psychic powers to face the Demon beast. The nurgle beast roared and begin charging towards, librarian unleashed psychic lightning on to the beast. but the demonic beast body shrugged it off, and continued its charge.
As the beast was closer to the librarian, it used one of its paw to throw librarian to the side. librarian falls painfully down to the ground, while his armour was dented with large claw marks and the disgusting sports of the nurgle’s beast.
The Beast of nurgle roared once again, as if it was celebrating its upcoming victory over the librarian. librarian struggle to lift himself up, only managing to lift up his head to see the demonic beast was charging at him once again.
The librarian known that this might be his end, and if it means that he will be sent to the Emperor, so be it. But he will make sure to take this foul creature with him. As librarian gathered all of his psychic might to unleash upon the Demon, the beast rored once again, as it increased speed.
As both the demon and the librarian were preparing to unleash their final blow at one another,
Bang! Bang!
two bolter rounds interrupted them, as it hit the back of the Demons head. the demon turned it’s the head to the source of the shots, while the librarian gaze was also fixated on the source of the shots. Which revealed to what it seems to be a young blonde Commissar standing above the trenches, from what the librarian could made of from his space marine vision.
"FACE ME DEMON! FOR I AM YOUR DOOM"
The Commissar proclaimed before continuing shooting at the demonic beast, the beast roared angrily, as its attention was fully on the Commissar, forgetting about the injured librarian.
The nurgle beast begin it's mad charge towards the Commissar, while spewing it’s disgusting spas and corruption everywhere. the young Commissar was unfazed by the Beast, he simply close his eyes and begin whispering a prayer to the emperor.
This made the Beast even more Angry as the beast increased it speed. The Commissar's body begin to be surrounded by a bright golden aura, as it chain Barley. When the Commissar finally opened his eye, that now was shining a bright golden glow.
As the Beast was near feet form the glowing Commissar, the Commissar simply pointed his boltpistol at the Demon, before saying those sacred words.
"IN THE NAME OF THE GOD-EMPEROR! BURN!."
The Commissar pulled the trigger, And shot the creature straight to his chest. As the demon was hit it begin howling and scratching in pain, as it’s inside begin glowing a golden glow, before it exploded in a bite light of gold fire.
The Injured librarian who was still laying down on the ground, and who witness all of these events, what complete speechless. he He felt as the warp spawn was not banished toits cursed realm, but instead it was completely destroyed, all by this mortal.
The Injured librarian tried to stand up on his feet, but his injuries was too much for his body, his mind was slowly drifting to unconsciousness. The last thing he saw and heard was the Commissar talking to the guardsman who survived the attack from the Nagel beast.
"Guardsman! The lieutenant and the half of you will accompany me in the cleansing the remaining force of the headaches, while the rest of you will wait here and protect the Emperor’s angel until his squad will come and pick him up. Am I clear?"
"SIR, YES SIR"
"Good. Now Man with me, FOR THE EMPEROR!"
"FOR THE EMPEROR!"
As the Commissar and a group of Guardsmen begin searching for the heretics, the injured Liberian consciousness begin to fail him, as he felt into slumber, as his eyes became heavy, before fully closing them, as his Vision had being engulfed in darkness.
Flashback End: Back at The Destroyed Chaos Cultist trenches
The librarian opened his eyes, with his gaze upon the young Commissar. while beside him was still his salamander friend, still waiting for an answer from him.
“You shall find out soon enough, my friend”
With that said, the librarian has begin approaching the Commissar, who immediately noticed his approach. Without wasting a second, the young Commissar put his fist to his chest and his sword to the ground, before bowing down before the Emperor angels.
"My Lord!"
"At ease Commissar, I wish only to ask you question. about something that concerns me very much."
"Whatever it is my Lord, I am at your service."
The Commissar stood up straight, waiting for orders from one the emperor's angels. The librarian nodded his head at the Commissar's answer, before he raised his hand.
"Good, then let us not waste any time. I wish to enter your mind, so I asked of you to not fear."
"Yes my lord"
The Commissar took off his head from his head and then press it to his chest, while he lowered his head and closed his eyes. the librarian puts his head on top of the Commissar and begin entering his mind, as he closed his eyes.
location: The Commissar mind.
When the librarian opened his eyes he was immediately met with complete darkness at first. But he began to concentrate even more flashes of memories begin flowing around him, with each memory showing the Commissar’s past.
But the librarian did not care for them, as he continued searching in the Commissar’s mind. As he continued to concentrate, he saw a small glimpse of light.
The librarian immediately begin searching for the source of the light, with him gathering all the psychic power he can to find it.
'Where is it?'
"I AM HERE"
The librarian turned his head to the source of the Voice, before his eyes met a bright shining golden light. The librarian tried to shield his eyes from the blinding light, but his curiosity forced him to look at source of the light.
And once he did, he was complete speechless.
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Before the librarian was a giant of a man in a golden shining armor, in the right hand of the golden giant was a flaming sword, while on the left hand was sharp power clause.
The librarian could not believe at what he was witnessing before his eyes, as he never dreamt or think of meeting. Before him was none other than the Emperor of mankind, the ruler of humanity.
Despite the librarian never saw or know how the Emperor looks like, but there’s no doubt in it, as the librarian was truly sure that before him was none other than the master of mankind, the Emperor of men.
'M-my Lord'
the librarian Tried to reach out to the Emperor, but before he even could took a step, Visage of the Emperor disappeared from him, as something pushed him out of the Commissar’s mind, back to reality.
'NO!'
location: reality
The librarian opened his eyes, the first thing he felt that he was laying on the ground, while feeling a sting of pain in the back of his head.
"WHAT IS THE MEANIG OF THIS!"
The librarian Look up to see his friend glaring at someone, as he turned his gaze to see at who his friend was glaring at.
To which the librarian received his answer, by three black Templars and one inquisitor. With two black Templars aiming their Boltguns at them, while The third black Templars was holding the unconscious body of young Commissar, while the inquisitor was checking him out, before turning his head and laying his gaze upon the librarian and the salamander.
"The meaning is simple, your friend tried to search something that is forbidden. So salamander this is not of your concern."
The Inquisitor then switch his gaze towards the librarian, who finally stood up on his feet.
"As for you ultramarine, I suggest you to forget whatever you saw in there, if you do not wish to see the repercussions that will happen upon your chapter."
As the inquisitor finished talking, One of the black temples stepped in.
"if you value the lives of you and your brothers, do not dare ever touched this mortal with your witchery, sorcerer!"
the black templar threatened librarian, but Inquisitive immediately put a stop to this.
"That's enough. We leaving, now!"
"YES LORD INQUISITOR!"
The Black Templars said in unison, as they begin walking away alongside Inquisitor, while one of them still held the unconscious Commissar.
The Salamanders Sergeant look at his librarian friend.
"Are you right brother?"
"Yes… Yes I am."
"What did you saw there?"
The librarian turned his gaze from his friend, to the inquisitive and the black tempers walking away with the young Commissar with them.
"I Saw... hope"
THE END
A/N: Finally, it's family finished. to be honest, it became too much longer than I planned from before, but at least I completed. And before they know New Year’s eve. Anyway, I’m sorry it took me so long to finish it, I cannot give any good excuse for my lack of working at this except for the work that I have to do, but anyway, I’m sorry it took very long to finish it. This is something they were planning to put on in the Commissar of beacon story in the future, but for now I do hope you will enjoy this. Merry Christmas, happy Hanukkah and a happy New Year for all my dear Raiders, as your support and encouragement always gave me the motivation and the energy to continue making those post and stories for you to enjoy. As usual please comment and send ask for me and if anyone wants to give me some constructive criticism, I’ll be welcome to hear them out. So now goodbye and have a great night.
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howlingday · 3 months ago
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Commissar Arc, A loyal servant of the God Emperor.
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