#Hedo

[silverwoodwork]

"The Red Ribbon is your family now."

[destroyer-of-monsters]

G-Fest Special 2

Godzilla vs Hedorah

[m-0-ths]

Dragon ball DnD au! incredibly self-indulgent, I love smashing my main fixations together.

anyway, of course I had to start with my blorbo <3

[timothyyork]

Dr. Hedo & Oreos

[yashika1984]

"He was a true Superhero" Piccolo and Hedo

[extrakerestrial]

Piccolo & I are Butch4Butch lesbians btw & our son is Hedo(this is not including Gohan ofc)

[cosmicsynthetics]

Doodle From DBSSH Day

I was looking through my notebook scans and found this cute doodle from the day I went to see Dragon Ball Super: Super Hero. It looked worth sharing. Got lucky bc my nearby theater was showing it a day early at the time. <3

[ask-matcha]

🌸: he’s a simple man 

[imperfectercell]

DBZ Baby Girl Round 2: Dr Hedo v Jeice

[silverwoodwork]

Android 21 offers some "critique" for the new Red Ribbon regarding Cell Max, much to Hedo's dismay

[secretsofdbz]

DBS Spoilers for the upcoming chapter! Goten and Trunks stuff

You can find the translated drafts here:

The bad:

Trunks doesn't know about computers (HOW?!)

Goten and Trunks going to the same school (unlikely; also they're over a year apart)

Not having replicated Gohan's watch already (and asking/TRUSTING Pilaf?!)

180 about the super hero look being lame (from Trunks in the Buu Saga, from Goten in DBS)

The good:

Fusion dance ref (tho this makes DBSSH sting even more)

Nimbus ref

Goten and Trunks are probably those who stopped the Zombie Androids and hence, caused Hedo to go to jail

Is this the Clean God?

[sweetescapeartist]

What are y'all's thoughts about DBS chapter 96? It was okay to me. But there is some good and "bad."

(Didn't post this when I made it either. Think I got lazy or forgetful with this one.)

BAD:

When Orange Piccolo punches Gamma 2. The start up was weak & it looked like it lacked impact. Art was fine, but the flow of motion was... It left a lot to be desired.

The panel where Pan kicks Carmine is just bad. It was taken straight from the film so the posing isn't bad. What's bad is that it cuts off the top half of Pan's head. Paneling could've been better. Get rid of panel 5 from page 16 and move panel 1 from page 17 to page 16. That would make it look better.

The joke about Gohan not being able to see could've been shortened. First he couldn't tell who Goten & Trunks were. That's fine. Chuck it up to Gohan not seeing them for a while and couldn't recognize them without his glasses. But with Krillin... Can't Gohan just recognize Krillin's voice? It ain't like Krillin's changed. Then Gohan drops the senzu because he can't see. The joke was a bit overemphasized & stretched out. Either get rid of the instance with Goten & Trunks or the one with Krillin. The film had Gohan search for his glasses and then drop a senzu. That's it. But that's just my personal opinion. Others may feel it was the right amount of jokes & wasn't over emphasized at all.

The Gammas vs Cell Max felt a bit stiff (art wise) with the combat. I would suggest more motion blur instead of speed lines. The speed lines don't always work to convey movement for every pose. It has to be the right angle and such.

Trunks is missing teeth...

GOOD:

Hedo chasing Magenta in the carts was a neat alteration. But Hedo still doesn't feel like a guy who was somewhat manipulated like he was in the film. Hedo in the manga was a little terrorist. He attacked a school, attempted murder on kids other than super powered ones like Goten & Trunks, damaged property, & body snatching.

Magenta telling Hedo to wait when he's taking off his suit was funny to me.

Cell Max was drawn really well & detailed in that close up when the giant creature shouts. Idk why ppl were trying to say Toriyama did that. Toyotaro's thing is to do a lot of detail on a few panels.

Piccolo's angry face when Gohan dropped the senzu was funny. Now I do wonder if Toriyama had his hand in that panel.

The Saiyamen X part at the end... Its whatever. I don't mind it. I just didn't like the prequel story about the Saiyamen X. The next chapter will likely have my attention more than this one did. Goten & Trunks fighting Cell Max before they fuse is kinda interesting. IF they fuse in the manga (they do). Or they may get the fusion right (they don't). The Gammas & the others fighting should be interesting too. I bet the chapter will end right before Gohan transforms into his Beast mode or right after (I was wrong, Toyo stretches the story a bit more).

However... I suspect Krillin drop-kicking Cell Max won't happen in the manga (I was right). Toyo might make Krillin the comic relief instead of Gotenks. So that means taking positive scenes away from Krillin & giving it to another character (scenes were taken away). But he will likely have the scene where he saves 18 with a Kienzan still (yup). Worst case scenario, Toyo will make the Kienzan break when it hits Cell Max to reference an inaccurate filler scene in DBZ. (Didn't happen thankfully. But what happened was subpar compared to the film)

[m-0-ths]

obsessed with that gyaru dog....

[flakytartart]

quick Hedo

[onereallygoodlambonastick]

another thing. hey. bitch of the apolitic neutered atmosphere. the japanese (real) walked so the rest of the chinese could run. this is our reparations. do keep up